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[Inspired by Aurora Dimment for the first two Chapters, and TheMyth for the last two.] To Err is Equine. That is a truth for all ponies, but no more so than Celestia. What happens to Twilight when the mask of perfection is removed?
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[Inspired by Aurora Dimment for the first two Chapters, and TheMyth for the last two.] To Err is Equine. That is a truth for all ponies, but no more so than Celestia. What happens to Twilight when the mask of perfection is removed? This fic explores the darkerside of Celestia's past. Her mistakes and failures and how it shapes her future, and the lives around her.

cover art: Vk.me website

Pre-reader: TheMyth

Inspirations: Aurora Dimmet for chapters 1 and 2. TheMyth for the idea doing this story, the last two chapters and making a She Said No done right. Which is a third inspiration for the story, and gets massive a shout out in chapter 4. Since the let down of it's second chapter is what got this whole fic rolling [no offense meant].

Aside:[/u] This fic was 40% Inspiration and 60% me pushing myself as an author. Seriously one of the most hardest pieces I had to write on an emotional level, and was in parts physically painful to write. I hope I did this fic justice, any thoughts, comments, or critiques of this piece are welcome.

Everyone
Incomplete
Tragedy
Sad
Dark

7,833 words: Estimated 32 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

4 Chapters:

  1. Before the Fall [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 31st, 2014
    2,824
  2. Failure [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 31st, 2014
    1,643
  3. Rejection [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 8th, 2014
    2,483
  4. Cycle (Un)Broken? [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Sep 8th, 2014
    883
Published Sep 1st, 2014
Last Update Sep 8th, 2014

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