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Human of a Pony

by I Am The Night

Chapter 9: The Magic of Love

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Human of a Pony

Part 9

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It had been 17 hours since Thunder left Fluttershy's house. It was 10:00 a.m. Thunder had slept on his sofa.

He slowly woke up, Looking around. He sighed to himself, Knowing the mare he loved so much no longer loved him.

But, A few questions ran through his mind...

"How did she know? Did someone tell her? Was she sneaking on me? Why does she think I...With Rainbow Dash?"

These questions were never going to be answered once Fluttershy told everyone. No one would answer him. It was only a matter of time.

He didn't want to live anymore. He didn't want to live with this horrible thing going around Equestria.

He was in deep thought for a few moments. He was thinking to himself.

"...It's the only way...When I'm gone...She'll be happy."

He had decided what he was going to do. He was going to end all of the pain and embarassment that was about to come. He...Was going to kill himself.

He looked at the picture of him and Fluttershy. Then, He looked at another picture with just Fluttershy on it. He held it in his hand. He then slowly put it towards his face, And kissed the picture.

A tear started coming down his face.

"Don't worry, Shy...You won't have to deal with me anymore...Goodbye."

He placed the picture on the desk next to the sofa. He slowly got up, And started walking towards the door. He looked back at the picture one last time, Before turning away to the exit.

He walked out, Pressed a few buttons on the control panel, And the door slid shut.

He looked around to find a spot where nopony would see him, Not that they were ever going to.

He then saw one cliff that pointed near the ocean. He saw in the Equestrian Archives that it was called "Fate's Edge." Legend has it that ponies who went there never returned.

"Perfect. That's the place..."

He started trotting slowly towards the distant cliff.


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Within a few minutes, He reached Fate's Edge. It was standing over 200 feet above the ocean. He slowly trotted towards the edge and looked over. He could see rocks at the bottom, With water all around them.

"If Fluttershy wants me dead...I'll answer her wish...

He stood on his hind legs, Basically, like a human. He then raised his Forelegs to the side, Feeling the cool air blowing against him.

He was almost ready to leap over the edge, But then...A faint, and familiar voice stopped him.

"NOOOOOOO!"

"Huh?"

Before Thunder could look back and see who it was, He was lifted off his feet, And sent about 20 feet from the edge. He hit the back of his head really hard, Which cracked his skull open, And sent blood soaking through his head. The pain was endless. Then, Soon, It all went black...

Soon, Thunder opened his eyes, And could only see whiteness around him.

"Oh...Man. I'm dead...I'm dead, I'm dead, I'm dead..."

Then a booming voice spoke out.

"YOU ARE NOT DEAD."

Thunder was startled.

"Who's there?"

He looked around, And could see nothing. Then, Out of nowhere, A man with a white robe appeared. The man chuckled.

"Hehehe...Sorry if I startled you, My son."

"Oh...It's alright."

Thunder looked at himself. He was in human form. He then took time to inspect the man.

"Are you...God?"

"Hahaha...No, My son. I am a friend of him, Though. You might not recognize me."

"No...I'm afraid I don't."

"I assumed you wouldn't. It's been so Long since we've last met."

Thunder was still baffled.

"How long?"

"Well...In my mind...It's been about...10 years..."

Thunder thought for a second. 10 years ago was the 9/11 attack. World Trade Center, Mom and Dad...Wait...He recognized the man now.

"...Dad?"

"...Yes. It's me, Son."

Thunder ran towards him as fast as he could, And hugged his father as tightly as he could. He started crying.

"Oh, God...I missed you so much..."

"I have Too, John."

"It's been so long since I've heard that name. Maybe 3 days."

"Yes. I've seen you in the land. How is it there?"

He let go of his father.

"Well...It was good...Everypony there is happy."

"I know. I've seen your journeys. I saw your kindness. I even saw you save that Yellow mare at that Air balloon show The other day."

John was glad his father was still watching over him.

"Where's Mom?"

"Well...She's at Poker."

John chuckled a bit. "Poker?"

"Uh huh."

John continued to chuckle, "Poker's her life...Even before 9/11."

"Anyway...I even saw your...Dream...That you had about that mare."

John instantly filled with humiliation. "Yeah...About that..."

"Son...You don't need to be ashamed. It's perfectly normal."

"Well, I guess...But...She doesn't think it's normal. She was right, Though. I am a sick freak. I was going to end it all, To make her happy again, Until somepony stopped me. Their voice sounded familiar...I can't remember."

John's father was trying to convince John that he had much to live for.

"Son...Don't you see? This is your chance to start over. This is your chance to do what you've always wanted to do. Live happily."

"But, Fluttershy was the one who was keeping me happy. Without her, I'm nothing."

"Son, There is more love out there in Equestria. If you search enough, You'll find another lucky mare. Love won't end after the first love. But, If she is who you truly desire, You can try to win her back."

"...Thank you, Dad."

"You still have many years ahead of you to find love, Son. Live every day to the fullest."

"I will."

He smiled at his father, Then he smiled back. Then, John had a question to ask.

"Dad...You said I'm not dead, Right?"

"Well, You are. But, God allowed me to bring you back to Equestria again."

"Oh. That's a relief. Oh, Before I go...Tell Mom I said "Hello."

"I will."

John's father raised his hands at John, And zapped electricity into him. Everything went black once more.


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As he began to slowly regain consiousness, He could see that It was dark. It must've been about 12 hours since he "Died." He looked at himself. He was once again a pony.

He looked around to see if he could see the Mare who stopped him from jumping. As he looked around, He could see a light about 20 feet from where he was.

Next to the fire, He could see a pony laying down. He didn't know who it was, But he could hear that it was a mare, Because she was...Crying.

He slowly got up and quietly trotted over to the fire to see who the mare was that was crying.

As he got closer, He could hear some words.

"Thunder...Why...It's my fault..."

The voice sounded familiar. He got a little bit closer, And saw that the mare was purple, And had a horn. He knew who it was. He whispered her name.

"Twilight?"

The crying purple mare slowly turned her head towards him. He definately knew it was her.

"T-Thunder?"

She instantly got up and started hugging him tightly. "I Thought you died! I Thought I'd never see you again!" She continued crying into his chest.

"It's okay, Twilight. Don't cry."

"Why? I killed you!" She continued crying.

"But I'm alive, Right?"

"But, How?"

"I met my father. We talked, And he brought me back with the power he borrowed from God."

Twilight was confused. "What's God?"

"God is the spirit everyone believes in. Why? Do you believe in another spirit?"

"I'm afraid not..."

"Oh."

"But, Do you know of Princess Celestia?"

"Princess...Celestia?"

Twilight continued.

"She's the one who brings up the sun in the day, And her sister, Princess Luna, Brings up the moon at night. I'm her favorite student in magic. I'm her star pupil."

Thunder grinned. "No wonder you're so famous and smart."

Twilight started to giggle and laugh. She smiled at him. she looked at his injuries. There were none.

"Listen, Twilight...There's somethin' I gotta tell you..."

"I know."

"Huh?"

He then started to panic in his mind. He was just going to face it anyway.

"Fluttershy told me. About you, And...Rainbow Dash."

"Look, Twilight, Nothing happened between me and Dash, Alright? I don't even know how she found out about my dream in the first place!"

"Well...I found out who."

"Who?"

"Dumb-Bell."

Thunder felt anger when she said that. Dumb-Bell, The biggest asshole in Ponyville told Fluttershy Thunder's dream, And even added lies?

"That bastard. I'm going to kill him."

Then, All of a sudden, Twilight grabbed him, And...Started kissing him.

Thunder's eyes widened in shock.

He carefully pushed her gently off him.

"Twilight! What're you doing?"

"Thunder...I have something to say."

"First, Tell me why you kissed me."

"That's what I'm going to tell you."

Thunder was embarassed for a second. "Oh."

She started to tell him what she was going to say.

"A few hours ago, I was looking at you when you were dead. You looked so peaceful, And handsome. I...I started to fall in love with you. I wanted you so badly, But...I realized...You had left this world..."

A tear came down her face. Thunder was looking at her.

"Then...An idea appeared in my head. It was vile, It was a gross thing to do, But...I looked around...I said to my self, "Nopony would find out, Ever..." So I started to stroke your...Member."

Thunder was shocked. His eyes widened. He had never known Twilight would be like this!

"You were still warm, And some blood was somehow still circulating. I don't know how. But...Your member then got hard. I...I started sucking it. Sucking it hard and dry. I knew what I was doing was wrong. I felt like such a Necroslut. But, I wanted to get the fantasy out of my head."

Thunder just was quiet. Still shocked.

"Soon, After sucking you for about a minute, Your body managed to release cum. It felt warm on my face. Then...I had another sick fantasy. I...I wanted to...ride you."

Thunder was still shocked. His eyes were very wide.

"I then held your member with my hoof. I then slowly got on top of your dead body. It was so wrong of me...I then was on top of you, Taking breaths. Then...I slid it in...But in my...plot."

She blushed. She continued.

"The pleasure. It was so exciting, But it was also so...Dead...I kept riding you hard...Trying to ride you to orgasm. I kept riding you faster and harder. Soon, After a few minutes, I came hard. I screamed at the top of my lungs. I could also feel your lifeless body releasing your cum into me... I took a minute to breathe."

Thunder was still being silent.

"After half a minute of breathing, I pulled myself out of you. It started to get dark, So I set up a fire. I then started to lay down, Not looking at your corpse."

Tears started coming down Twilight's face. She hugged him tightly.

"Oh, Thunder! I feel like such a Necrophiliac and a Slut! I'm sorry!" She cried into his chest.

he slowly lifted her head up with his hooves. He began talking very nicely.

"Twilight, It's okay. You don't need to be ashamed."

"Yes, I do! I lost my Virginity to a Corpse!" She continued to cry.

"Uhh, This may sound very stupid, But I thought you only lose your virginity if you put it in your...V-Card." He said it Embarassed.

She looked up at him. "So...I didn't lose my Virginity?"

"I don't think so. I still don't know much about losing your virginity, So I guess yes. You're still a virgin."

She was relieved. "Okay."

"Wait...Don't you have books on this stuff?"

"Yes, But I've never read them! I've been busy studying."

"I see. Hehe...I didn't think you cared this much about me."

"I've wanted you so badly."

"Well...You did have me before."

"But...You were dead. It's sick and disgusting doing it with the dead."

"Well, That's because they start decomposing. I hate to say this, But you were lucky when you did it."

"Why?"

"Well, During decomposition, Flies lay eggs in a decomposing body. If you found me dead about a month from now, And did it, You would probably end up getting larvae eggs inside of you."

"Eww..." Twilight started feeling sick.

Thunder probably shouldn't have told her that. "Are you okay?"

She felt a little better. "Yeah. I'm okay..."

She started looking into his eyes. They were glowing blue. He looked into her eyes. They glowed Purple, Just like her.

She then slowly moved towards him, And placed her lips on his. Thunder was a little shocked at first, But then he accepted the kiss. Their eyes both closed in a passionate kiss. Twilight began to moan.

Soon, They broke the kiss, And tried to get some air. Then, Twilight pushed Thunder to the ground. "Whoa!"

"Sorry," Twilight said. Thunder chuckled.

"Don't worry."

Twilight also fell to the ground slowly, Making her way towards Thunder's erection.

She then grabbed it, And placed it into her mouth. Thunder grunted for a second. He moaned when the head of his length made contact with the back of her throat.

Thunder soon felt his orgasm coming. "Ugh...Twilight...I'm gonna...I'm..." He couldn't hold it back anymore. He then released his warm cum into Twilight's mouth. Her eyes had widened, But then they closed halfway, And she moaned as the cum went into her throat.

She pulled his length out of her mouth, And swallowed all the cum that she could swallow. She tried to breathe. Thunder could see her coughing.

"Are you...Okay?"

She had trouble responding.

"Yeah...I'm...Okay."

She then got down on her stomach, With her hooves facing outward. She lifted her tail up to reveal her femslit. "Please...Put it in here."

He saw that she was desperate for this. "Okay, Twilight. Wait...What about pregnancy?"

She smiled. "Don't worry...I'm not in Season yet."

He smiled back. "Okay. I'll be gentle. I promise."

"I trust you, Thunder."

He continued to smile at her. Then, Slowly, He slid his still hard member inside her femslit, Receiving a small scream from Twilight. "Are you okay?"

"Yeah..." She was trying to breathe. He sure was big.

"Lemme...Just...Get used to...It." About a few seconds later, She felt comfortable.

"Okay. You can continue."

Slowly, Thunder started to thrust in and out of her. He received loud moans from her, Knowing she wanted more. "Please...More..."

He started to thrust faster into her. She started moaning loudly now, Almost screaming. She tried to silence her screams, But the pleasure was too good. Then, Her pillow that she brought with her. She grabbed it, And dug her face into it, Blocking her screams from being heard.

Thunder was grunting loudly, Thrusting fast into her. He could hear Twilight moaning his name. "Thunder...Thunder..!"

He got faster when he heard her. He felt his orgasm not too far. He felt a knot forming. This was going to be a big orgasm. He knew Twilight was reaching orgasm as well. Her screams were turned into screeches.

"Twi...I'm almost at the...point..."

Twilight had trouble of speaking.

"P-Please...C-Cum into M-Me..."

She continued to screech in pleasure.

"I..Want to feel..It inside me..."

Thunder was breathing heavily.

"Hang on...I've got...Another trick...For you..."

He had reached a free hoof down to her femslit as he kept thrusting, And had started to rub the bump on Twilight's femslit. He already knew what this was: He was rubbing her Clitoris. He saw her body jerking. "Oh, Thunder! That's...Ooh...!" She couldn't finish. The pleasure was too much for her to finish her sentence.

Twilight had always dreamed about doing this with Thunder. She pleasured herself many times in the past, But the Clitoris was the only place she never had touched, And There was Thunder, Thrusting into her, playing with it.

"It's...Too good, Thunder! TOO GOOD! I'm Gonna...I'm gonna-"

Twilight instantly felt pleasure as she orgasmed. She screamed as loud as she could.

"AAAAAHH!!"

She continued to scream and climax in ecstasy. Soon, After the orgasms ended, Twilight was panting heavily. Thunder was also.

"You...Can pull out...Now."

Thunder slowly pulled out his erection. He did it slowly to avoid hurting her. Soon, Thunder had pulled Twilight close to him gently, And wrapped his legs and arms around her.

Twilight smiled at him. "I love you, Thunder."

"I love you, Too, Twilight."

They pulled each other into another passionate kiss. They felt the inside of each other's mouths. Soon, Their lips parted. Thunder gently rubbed her shoulder, Which made her moan.

Twilight was getting tired and decided to get some rest. But...Before she fell asleep, She felt something enter her Femslit deeply. She gasped and moaned loudly. It was Thunder. She noticed he was getting another erection, And that he entered her by accident.

She looked at him. He looked back at her. "Uhh...Sorry." He reached down to grab his length to pull out, But then he felt Twilight's hoof hold his. She stared at him with romantic eyes.

"No...Please...Leave it in for the night. I want to sleep with you inside of me."

Thunder couldn't really believe what he was hearing, But he loved the feeling of her walls around him. He smiled. He then placed his hooves and legs around her, And got closer to her, So he would be deeper inside of her. He had never seen Twilight like this before, But he loved it.

Before Twilight went to sleep, Thunder whispered a question to her.

"Hey, Twi?"

"Yeah?"

"What about...Fluttershy? Won't she be furious at you and me?"

She kissed him again.

"Don't worry. She'll be okay. Trust me."

"Okay...Sweet Dreams, Twilight...I love you."

"I love you, Too, Thunder."

They kissed each other again, but longer this time. After their lips parted, Thunder kept his arms and legs around her to keep her warm during the night, And Twilight laid as close as possible to him. She smiled as he held her.

They then drifted off to sleep, With him still inside her.
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Well, It isn't very Thunder and Fluttershy-ish right now, But It might. Will Thunder get her back? Will he leave Twilight? Will he stay with Twilight? Why the hell am I asking you these questions?

See you in the next chapter.

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