Human of a Pony
Chapter 10: A Kick leads to a Fall
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Part 10
Woo-Eee! 10 Chapters already! Here's 10! Enjoy. (Still running out of ideas, So chapter might be a little stupid, But whatevs)
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Thunder and Twilight had slept together the whole night. Thunder was sleeping behind her, Twilight was in front, And Thunder was still inside her. Christ...
The fire had gone out long ago during the night. It was 11:34 a.m. when Twilight awoke. She awoke feeling pleasure, Considering Thunder was still deep inside her.
Her eyes were a little bit open because of the light that was shining down on the couple. She looked behind her to see Thunder still sleeping. She spoke quietly not to annoy him. "Thunder...Wake up..."
Thunder slowly woke up to the sound of her voice. "Hey, Twi. Had a good sleep?"
She smiled at him. "Uh huh. I had great time last night."
He leaned to her and kissed her. Her eyes closed and she moaned. After the kiss, Thunder slowly pulled out of her.
She opened her eyes, And could see all around her now. What she saw was the most embarassing thing to happen. "Uh...Oh..."
Thunder couldn't see well from the light. "What?"
Then he could see clearly. He looked around. He had the same reaction. "Oh, shit..."
The embarassing sight was...The other girls, And Spike were here, And they were watching them. Twilight's face reddened with humiliation. Thunder chuckled nervously.
"Hehe...Hey, girls. Hey, Spike." Thunder could only say that to them.
Rainbow Dash had a disappointed and angry look. "Thunder...Are you the one spreading lies?"
"Wait, What?"
"Are you the one who said that I had sex with you?"
"What? NO! It was Dumb-Bell!"
Rarity spoke up. "Oh, Really? I thought an Earth Pony like you would be more loyal."
"Hey, I am loyal! And, I'm not lying! Dumb-Bell told Fluttershy that I had sex with Dash! And that got out to the public!"
Rainbow Dash was angry now. "Yeah, And we also know that you had a dream about Eating out Fluttershy, And her sucking you, You perverted freak."
"You see? I knew, That if Fluttershy found out about the dream, This would be the result! It would continue and go on and on and on, Until everyone found out!"
Fluttershy knew That Dumb-Bell had told other colts about the dream and lies. So did the other girls, Including Spike, But except for Twilight.
Thunder began walking to the cliff. "Why can't ponies just fucking forget about it, And STAY OUT OF WHAT HAPPENS IN MY LIFE!"
The girls jumped back a little as he yelled. Thunder looked down at the ground. He sighed. "What am I doing...? This is nothing like my father said to me."
Rainbow Dash was confused for a second. "Your...Father?"
"Yes, My father. I spoke to him yesterday."
"How?" Pinkie was confused the most.
Thunder was silent for a few moments. He then spoke up.
"I died last night."
Rainbow started laughing. "Oh, Haha, Very funny, Thunder."
Twilight decided to speak up. "He's not kidding."
"In the morning, Yesterday, After knowing that Fluttershy hated my guts after finding out, I decided that if I were to end my pain, She would be happy."
Rarity spoke up. "You were...Going to kill yourself?"
He looked up at Rarity. "Yes...To me, It would be the only way of making her happy."
He looked back at the cliff and closed his eyes, Remembering yesterday.
"I left my home, And headed here to the cliff. I was ready to jump. I was thinking that nopony would ever miss me. I spread my arms out, Then all of a sudden, I heard Twilight behind me. She used her magic and threw me back from the cliff. I fractured my skull, Which sent blood leaking out. I died within a minute."
Thunder tried to retrack everything that happened yesterday.
"I woke up in heaven, And met my father for the first time in 10 years. It was the happiest moment of my "Afterlife." You know, Because I was dead. He told me that love doesn't end after the first female, Or mare. He also said that if I wanted to win Fluttershy's heart again, I could."
Thunder smiled. "He zapped me with a bolt of light, And I woke up about 12 hours later. I saw Twilight crying near a fire. I checked if she was okay. I received the biggest hug of all. She then told me that she also was in love with me, And that she did some...Forgive me Twilight..."
"You can tell them."
Rainbow Dash turned to Thunder. "Tell us what?"
Thunder looked at the other girls. "Twilight did some...Necrosexual things with me when I was dead."
Applejack was a little disgusted. "Well, That ain' right."
Twilight bowed her head in shame. "I know. I felt like such a Necroslut when doing it."
Thunder didn't want her to feel bad. "You're not a Necroslut."
Applejack said, "Whoa, Whoa, Whoa, Wait just a darn secon' here. We're completely off topic here! Thunder, Don't you love Fluttergal? Or Twilight?"
Fluttershy looked at him with a funny looking grin. "Yeah, Thunder. Don't you love me?"
Twilight looked at him. "Thunder?"
Thunder was in deep thought. Did he love Twilight or Fluttershy? If he loved Twilight, Fluttershy would still hate him and start telling other ponies about his dream. If he Loved Fluttershy, Twilight would be heartbroken, And might not talk to him anymore.
Think, Thunder, Think! He thought to himself.
Finally, He got an answer.
Applejack got impatient. "Well?"
He replied to her. "I love Both."
Rainbow Dash looked at him funny. "Oh, Really?"
Thunder continued. "Yes. Fluttershy was the first girl, Or mare in this case, That I helped with her shyness. Twilight, She's loved me for so long, And I gave her the love that she wanted. Wait...Lemme rephrase that."
Rainbow Dash just kept looking at him. "Don't. Well, If you really love both, Then kiss Fluttershy, And then kiss Twilight."
"Okay, Then."
He started trotting towards Fluttershy. He was about to place his lips on hers, When she got mad. "Get away from me!"
She kicked him hard, Which sent him flying a few feet. He slid on the ground, And ended up on the edge of the cliff.
Thunder groaned in pain, And then heard a cracking sound, He looked up, And saw that the ground around him was cracking. "Shit!"
Twilight couldn't hear the sounds. "What's wrong?" She started trotting towards him.
"Step back! This thing's about to break. Rainbow, Help me."
Rainbow thought he was kidding. "why?"
Thunder looked at her seriously. "If I even move one inch, This thing will fall."
Rainbow still thought he was joking around. She flew down to the ground. "No."
Thunder moved a hoof. "Rainbow Dash, Plea..." His hoof touching the ground was enough to send the chunk of rock where Thunder was standing breaking up, And falling off of the side of the cliff, Down to the ocean.
Thunder fell and started sliding towards the edge of the slope where the rock he stood on stood seconds ago. Twilight was in complete fear. Actually, All of the girls were. "THUNDER!" Was all Twilight yelled. She bolted towards the cliff edge.
Before he fell entirely off the cliff, He managed to grab onto the edge. He grunted trying to hold himself up. Twilight managed to reach him.
"Thunder! Grab my hoof!"
Thunder managed to lift his right hoof up to her. He grabbed it.
Fluttershy also reached him. "Thunder! Take my hoof, Too!"
He reached his left Hoof to her. Twilight was holding his right hoof, And Fluttershy was holding his left hoof.
Twilight was struggling to hold him. "Don't worry, Thunder! We got you!"
Fluttershy yelled to the other girls.
"Girls, Help us!" Fluttershy's eyes were filled with fear. The other girls headed to the edge, And supported Twilight And Fluttershy.
Soon, The Two girls started to feel their hoofs slip from Thunder's.
Thunder was struggling to hold on with them. "I...I can't hold on much longer!"
Fluttershy was now scared. "We're not going to let you go!"
Thunder tried as hard as he could to hold on. He grunted and struggled. "I...I'm slipping!"
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Then, Instantly, Thunder's grip on the other girls was broken. Thunder began to feel himself fall.
Twilight and Fluttershy screamed. "NOOOO! THUNDERRR!"
Thunder could hear their voices echo. He could then see someone jump over the edge. No...Fly over the edge. Then he saw someone else. It was Rainbow Dash, And Fluttershy.
They started flying as fast as they could towards him, But the weird thing: Thunder was falling faster than they were flying.
Rainbow and Fluttershy tried to pick up speed, But they were so tired from floating before, That they couldn't go any faster.
Soon, Thunder felt a painful thud. Then...It was silent. Thunder had hit the cold ground above the water.
Fluttershy yelled at the top of her lungs.
"THUNDERRRRRRRRRR!" She flew faster than Rainbow Dash and reached him in about a second or two. She looked upon Thunder's body, Broken and bloody. She was too late. He was gone. She failed to save the Colt who brought joy to her life during the past 3 days of living in Equestria.
She closed her eyes and began to cry. She was too late...Or so she thought.
She started to hear breathing sounds. She looked at Thunder. He was still breathing. Her eyes widened.
She saw his eyes slowly open. She spoke to him. "Thunder?"
Thunder couldn't speak well. He was in too much pain. All he could say was...
"Hospital."
Then, Thunder went unconscious. Rainbow managed to reach Fluttershy. She looked at her.
"Fluttershy?"
Fluttershy looked back at Rainbow. "He's still alive."
"What?"
"We need to get him to the hospital now!"
They carefully picked him up, And flew back up. They started flying back to Ponyville, To save him before it was too late.
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Oh, No. Thunder's been hurt, And Fluttershy cares now? Kewl. Next chapter will be up soon. Later. Oh, Also, When I was making the part where Rainbow and Fluttershy were flying towards Thunder, I accidentally replaced Rainbow's name with Twilight. hehehe...bye.
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