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New world, New life (Rewrite)

by SonicBlitz18

Chapter 1: Prologue

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A red pickup truck was driving up one of the mountains in Texas towards a large cabin. It soon stops for a few moments and parks right next to the cabin. Two stepbrothers from Texas arrived at their summer cabin getting ready to go on about their days.

One of the doors on the car open up and a human with spiked up black hair and black eyes looked at the cabin and smelled the mountain air. He was wearing a pair of mountain boots with a short sleeve shirt and khaki shorts on his medium built frame. His name was James McCloud.

The second door on the truck opens up to reveal another human. He had short blonde and messy hair was blowing in the wind after stepping out of the car. He was wearing a pair of jeans with a blue shirt with a spiderman logo on it. His name was Scott Jones.

“Wooh, feels good to be out here again.” He said as he stretched his arms.

"About time. That car ride was like forever." Said Scott complaining.

"Hey come on man, get a grip. You know the reason I got you out here was so we have time away from the city." James added as he was going in the back an reaching for the cooler in the truck.

"Yea Yeah, I get it. I can at least stretch my legs now." Scott added popping a few of his joints.

"It's a good thing too. This cabin has a large mountain so it'll be good for exercise later." James pointed out.

"Well it's nothing like the city I'll tell ya that." Said Scott enthusiastically. “At least we won’t be dealing with school for the next few months.”

"You're lucky I brought our Xbox, and laptops up here." James said with a glare.

"Okay, my bad. I'm just weirded out by our cabin in the woods.”

"Okay one: this cabin isn't in the woods, it's in a rocky mountain with a forest around it, and two: why would you be weirded out? We always come out here every year."

“Yeah, with our parents.” Scott pointed out. “Plus, you know those stories of how people disappear here right?" James just looks at Scott and gives him an unamused look.

“Really Scott?” James adds, his arms crossing against his chest."Those stories are just rumors. Now are you ready for this summer vacation or what?"

"Yeah I'm ready. Just let me get my climbing gear out. I wanna go check out this mountain."

"Why so early?"

"Maybe find the best route for the climb when we get there." said Scott trying to come up with an excuse the get out of the cabin.

"Alright, just make sure to get back in 1 hours. I'll finish unpacking and get lunch started." James said as he unlocked the door of his cabin.

“Later bro.” Scott said as he grabs his climbing gear out of the back of the truck and takes off for the nearest clearing.

-Mountainside-

“What do you mean that this part is closed?” Scott asked in frustration as he was met with a few rescue workers who had some equipment in the back.

“I mean this area is closed. There was a cave in around this area and someone called for us, so we have no choice but to close off the area until we’re sure that we’ve rescued the civilians.” He added pointing to the area that was closed off. “I’m sorry for the inconvenience, but public safety comes first.”

“Allright.” Scott groaned, walking away from the sight as the workers continued looking for civilians. ‘Why did a rescue operation have to happen now?’ He thought to himself as he was on his way back to the cabin. Scott thought that bad luck was getting to him again since most of his life was pretty much like that even with his step brother James backing him up, but they did have a point. He was almost on the route towards the cabin, but out of the corner of his eye he noticed an area that wasn’t closed off.

“Wait, I never seen this part of the mountain before…” Scott thought to himself. To Scott this looked like a secluded area that was part of the mountain. What had him convinced was the setup and fresh pine trees near the cliffside. Scott smiles for a bit when he realizes the opportunity that’s in front of him. “Well, the rescue workers are working in that direction.” He said to himself as he climbed over the fence and sneaking in the area.

“I will see about going in this direction.” He points to the other path and starts heading through. Little does he know, there was a moss covered sign that said ‘do not enter’ right against the tree. Heading through the trail, Scott sees that the trail is getting narrow. The trees started to deform as he traveled through the trail. Almost life like, they almost emit a monstrous grin or look indicating that they are alive. The air felt thick, so thick that Scott had trouble breathing.

“I don’t think this was a good idea.” Scott thinks to himself. He lets out a small sigh and he starts to turn back. However, heading back seemed more of a trouble. Out of nowhere, a fog starts to form, covering the area around with a thick fog.

“Oh crap.” Scott thought. “I can’t see a damn thing.” Scott now feels regret for taking this path now. Looking over, he spots one of the mountains, a few feet from where he’s standing.”

“I think I can get a good view from up there.” Heading over, Scott sees a small path that leads up the little mountain. Traversing through the mountain, he has a few mishaps a few rocks slipping out of his grasp or slipping off a few rocks. Eventually, he manages to make it to the top. Looking around he sees a large cave a few blocks from the edge of the mountain, but he also sees a few bones at the entrance.

“Christ,” Scott said. “I don’t want to know who’s ribcage is that.” Scott shudders a bit since a pick clean ribcage sits in the middle of the cave. He looks around again, and sees a lot from being so high up. He soon makes out the Cabin in the distance and also the policeman on the other side where the trail starts.

“Wow, I really walked far.” Scott says as he was about to climb down. Sadly as he takes at least three steps, he suddenly slips and falls off the cliff he was standing on. “OH CRAP!!” He shouted as he was falling backwards. He was still falling and he lands on a mountain of fur.

“Wow, this furry mountain broke my fall…” He said to himself, but something suddenly clicks in his mind. “Wait, mountains don’t have fur.” Without realizing, he stays in the same place as he’s lifted up in the air. When he stands up, he suddenly hears a low growl below him. He looks down and sees a fully grown bear under him.

‘Oh crap!’ Scott thought to himself. “Um...n-nice bear…hehe…” The bear stands up, throwing Scott off his back and it roads at him. Scott gets up from where he was sitting and takes off for his life

“Fucking Hell!!” Scott shouted as the bear chased him for quite awhile. Eventually, Scott manages to lose it when he ran into a cave that he saw before. The bear loses interest and leaves.

“Christ, that was close.” Scott said, breathing a sigh of relief. ‘Okay lesson learned, never disturb a bear when it's asleep or else you'll be mauled by one.’ He knew that he was never going near a bear ever again. Scott waited for awhile and when he thought it was clear, he was about to leave. But that was when an rumbling in the distance. It suddenly grew louder and the entrance to the cave suddenly collapses, leaving Scott trapped.

“Aw, Jesus!” Scot groaned, rubbing his head in frustration. “Of all the times to get trapped in a cave, it had to be this time.” He pulls a flashlight from his pocket and looks around the cave. “I guess I gotta go through the cave to find my way out.” Scott walks forward through the cave and gets increasingly frustrated as each path he takes in the cave.

“Come on!” He groaned as he walked in another dead end. “How many dead ends can I find in this stupid cave?” He shouted as he hit a random wall in the cave. He groans, but tries to calm down as getting angry wasn't helping him. He suddenly hears a crack behind him. He turns around to see the wall cracking as the crack was moving along the wall.

“Crap!” He shouted as he looked as the crack was moving faster along the wall. Eventually it ends when one little crack is touching the wall and he starts freaking out. The crack eventually stops, and he lets out a relieving sigh, only for a few second before the crack worsens and the whole area starts to shake. Scott starts freaking out again, and everything around him starts to collapse. Soon a ould crash was heard and Scott braced himself for what was about to happen. The sounds suddenly stop. When Scott felt nothing, he opened his eyes to see a large hole in the wall.

“What the hell?” He said to himself as he walked forward into the hole. He suddenly slips and stumbles towards a pedestal. Inside the pedestal was a large crystal that was 1 meter long and 7 inches wide.

“Woah…” He thought to himself as he looked at the large crystal. “ I may just be the luckiest guy in the world.” He added as he took the crystal off the pedestal. “I gotta show this to James." There was another loud rumble and the pedestal suddenly disappeared into the ground. The rumbling got louder and one of the walls moved out of the way to reveal another path. There was light coming from the other end. He walks through the path and sees that he’s finally outside."Okay that was weird, but at least I'm finally outta that cave." Scott said placing the crystal in his back. It couldn’t fit because of how long it was, but he made do with what he could. Scott was walking through a part of the forest, and found himself back at the cabin.

“Guess my luck is finally turning around.” Scott said to himself as he walks up to the cabin.

-Cabin-

The sounds of grunts and blows landing on a punching bag were heard in the cabin. James had a pair of headphones in his ears and was listening to his favorite workout song whenever he trains and changed his clothes to wear he was wearing a sleeveless workout shirt with a pair of jeans as he was punching a punching bag. Behind him was a trophy case as well as a few awards he gained in martial arts tournaments. Being a third degree black belt in Karate, Taekwondo, Jeet Kune Do, Kendo, as well as Judo, he made a name for himself being the youngest student to earn his first black belt in his class.

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He was landing blow after blow towards the punching bag trying to keep his skills sharp that he didn’t notice that his brother walked in the room with his rare find.

“Dude, look what I found!” Scott shouted as he tried to get his brother’s attention. Scott then tries to get his brother’s attention by grabbing his shoulder, only for James to Roundhouse kick him sending Scott flying back into the wall, and holding his face in pain. James notices that hit Scott by mistake, so he stops the music on his MP3 and goes over to his brother.

“Sorry about that Scott.” James said as he helped his brother up

“Christ sake bro,” Scott groaned as he got up rubbing where James kicked him. “Any harder and you may end up landing me in the hospital. Or worst in a coma.”

“Sorry Scott, but you should know better than to bother me when I’m training. I’m always in the zone.” James remarked, pointing at his weight set and equipment.

“You were always more of a balanced fighter.” Scott added as he got up, dusting himself off. “A strong body always requires a strong mind. That’s what my stepdad always said.”

“So what’s got you so excited?” James said as he took a sip of his water. Scott then remembers the rock he found and gets his backpack.

“This is what’s got me worked up.” Scott says as he pulls the crystal he found out of his backpack. James was transfixed on the gem as the gem could be worth a lot of money.

“Scott how did you find this? This crystal looks like it could be worth a lot of money.” James added as he moves some of his things. “We find the right buyer, we can sell this for quite a handsome pay when we finish our mountain trip.”

“No kidding.” Scott said. “I got lost in the woods, chased by a bear, and trapped in a cave to get this thing.”

“Wait, what happened to you?” James asked in a concerned tone. Scott then explains what happened in their usual rock climbing trip as well as the incident in the woods and the bear he fell on, to nearly causing a cave in to find the crystal. “Wow, you had it bad.”

“Yeah, but it was worth it to get this.” Scott added holding the crystal in his hand.

“We might as well binge watch our favorite series.” James said as he walked over to his duffle bag and pulled out several DVD box sets with the DBZ logo on each of them.

“You brought all of those with you?” Scott asked with a blunt expression.

“Not my fault they never get old to me.” James said as he pulled the boxes out of his duffle bag and set them by the TV and DVD player. “So what saga you want to watch first?”

“True, also I want to start off with the Frieza Saga.” Scott said as he set the crystal on the table and have something to eat after the run he had today. James turns on the TV and inserts the DVD that started the Frieza saga and pushed play.

“You’re right about one thing,” Scott said as he pulled out a bag of chips from the snack bag. “This series never gets old since it’s so nostalgic.” As the two brothers are watching TV, they failed to notice the crystal glowing faintly behind them. After watching some episodes, James suddenly remembers something.

“There is one movie that recently came out that I wanted to see.” James said as he pulled out another video from the duffle bag. This time it was Goku clashing with a character they’ve never seen before. The title of the movie was Battle Of Gods.

“What is that?” Scott asked.

“It’s the movie I was talking about.” James added. “This came out 2015.”

“Think it’s any better than the last one?” Scott remarked. James knew what he was talking about and grimaced.

“Let’s hope it’s any better than that trainwreck that came out.” He remarked. “The guy who made that movie really screwed up the characters on that one.”

“It’s one of the reasons that the creator of Dragon Ball came out of retirement.” Scott added. “Let’s just hope that he can take the series back in the right direction.” The sounds of growling were heard and Scott clutches his stomach. “Guess the chips weren’t enough.”

“You want some hot dogs?” James asked.

“Sure, I’m hungry enough to eat a horse.” He added, and his brother James walks over to the stove in the Cabin. After a few minutes of preparation, they sat down and chow on their hotdogs. During the time as they watch their show, they hear a faint humming sound. Almost like a machine going off.

“The hells that noise?” James asked.

“It come from...behind us?” Scott said as he looked over his shoulder and saw the crystal starts glowing.

"Uh why is it glowing like that?" James said as they saw the crystal flashing a bright white, and hovering over them in mid-air.

"I don't know.” Scott added as he reached out to the crystal above him and touched it. The gem suddenly grew even brighter blinding both males. “Wait what's it- Gah!" That was all Scott could say as he and James were engulfed in a white light. The room suddenly dims down, but the brothers were gone.

-Soon-

A bright flash in a barnyard appears in the center. Few seconds after it dissipates, James ands Scott suddenly fall onto the floor. Scott hits the ground first as he fell on his back. James follows suit as he fell on top of Scott’s stomach making him groan in pain.

"Uugh. Did anyone catch the license plate on the truck that hit me?" Said James groaning. Her slowly gets off of Scott and he sees his brother in agony. “Sorry, Scott.” James looks down at Scott and notices his face turning pale. Scott looking like he was about to throw up, but it suddenly stops.

“Okay, I thought I was gonna- Blarg!!” Scott groaned as he pukes on the floor.

"Uungh... my insides are on fire." Scott groaned, wincing in pain. “Ungh, why does god hate me so much?” He followed up as he groans and stands up only to stumble back down. Scott of course begins to puke again. James was worried about his brother, but he noticed that they were no longer in the cabin. He notices what appeared to be some type of barn, with a few stables, bales of hay, some buckets and cows in the back, and a some watering cans.

"Scott, why are we in a barn?" James asked. He had to wait for Scott to stop his puking fit. After about ten seconds, he finally stopped puking and looks around the barn.

"I don't know dude." He added, but groans slightly as he tries to stand up. “I’m not even sure how the heck we even got here.” Scott added, popping a few joints in his back. James was about to say something else, but another bright flash appeared over their heads. The two humans look up to see that some of their things came with them started falling down. Both males dodges to the side as their suitcases, laptops, PlayStation 4, Xbox one, and cooler fell on the ground.

“What the hell’s going on?” James asked in confusion.

“Well at least some of our things came with us.” Scott joked but James wasn’t amused.

“Yeah, just make sure they’re not broken.” James asked. Scott looks the items around him and breathes a sigh of relief.

“Yeah, they're not broken.” Scott said as he gave a thumbs up. They were still wondering where they were, but they soon hear a group of female voices outside of where they were.

“What was that noise?” A sweet voice called out.

“Ah’m not sure.” A southern voice called out. “Ah think I have an intruder.

“Let’s go check it out then.” A rather brash voice called out.

“Hey, wait up!” Another voice called out. Both brothers soon hear the sound of footsteps going in their direction.

“Who were they?” Scott asked confused.

“Great…” James groaned as he face palmed his forehead. “Probably people that live here who’re gonna think that we broke in here.”

“Can’t we just explain our situation?” Scott suggested.

“And what are they gonna believe?” James added. “That two guys somehow teleported inside a barn/ Sure the media would love to know about that.”

“We can at least try dude.” Scott added.

“I doubt they’d be crazy enough to even believe us.” James added. “Then again, I’d prefer not spending my nights in an Insane Asylum.”

“Who are you two?” Said a female voice in the room that made both brothers stop arguing and freeze in place. Scott sweating a bit while James had to take a deep breath.

“Let me do the talking bro.” James said as he and his brother begin to turn around. “Look...I’m really sorry for…” James’s voice trailed off when he looked at the females. Scott was wondering why his brother stopped talking, and he turns around and his gaze was frozen. The group that walked in the barn was indeed female, but it was what they were that had them brothers tongue tied and utterly confused.

One was an ivory white with a horn sticking out of her head and a two toned mane tail that was a light purple and pink. She wore a light blue blouse and a pink shirt that was around her legs. Her eyes were a bright green and full of innocence.

The second mare was wearing a pair of blue overalls and a white t-shirt. She had a bright yellow coat with a bright red mane and tail. Her mane was tied in a ponytail that was held by a pink red bow. She had amber eyes that matched her southern nature.

The next mare had a bright orange coat with a beige purple mane and tail. She had a pair of wings on her back and was wearing a black sleeveless tank top with boy shorts. Her eyes like her mane were purple, but she had a look that wanted to fight someone.

That last one was what was interesting since she wasn't like the others. She had greens spikes on the top of her head as that ran all the way to hre reptilian tail. Her scales were a deep purple and had a green underbelly. Her eyes were also green She wore a bright yellow shirt with a pair of blue shorts. What had the guys amazed by her was the pair of E cup breasts that were attached to her since the shirt she was wearing appeared to be a few sizes too small..

“Um...what are you exactly?” The reptilian girl spoke again in a confused manner making the two humans snap out of their shock.

“Scott,” James says as he turns to his brother. “I don’t think were in Texas anymore.”

“You’re telling me.” Scott added. “Who’s the overgrown lizard?” The other girls gasp as the reptile girl flinched in response and her fists surl up. She gives off a loud humph and smoke suddenly comes from her nostrils, confusing the two males.

“What did you call me asshole?” She added with venom in her tone. “I didn’t hear that clearly. Say it again?”

“Um… overgrown lizard?” Scott repeated. That seemed to set the reptile girl off as her claws suddenly come out of her hands.

“Wrong answer asshole!” She shouted as she lunges at Scott. James freaks out and had to trip his brother to keep from getting his face caved in as her fist connects with a column of the barn and smashed it to pieces. The guys freak out with how strong she is, but it gets worse when she turns towards them with her cat slit eyes and staring at the two of them with seething race.

“Oh crap!” James added, as he grabbed Scott’s pant leg and takes off. Barb takes a deep breathe and a second later, from her mouth comes large green flames aimed at the two brothers. James had to think fast to dodge the flame and he jumps out the window. As James jumped out the window, Scott hits the back of his head on the window seal and they barely made it out when the flames shot out of the window.

“Oh that hurt…” Scott groaned, rubbing the back of his head. The guys had to duck as more flames come out of the window. “Also that lizard chick is crazy.”

“When do lizards breathe fucking fire?” James added in complete shock.

“Well instead of overgrown lizard what do you think she is?” Scott added.

“Well she’s tall full of scales, and breathes fire… What do you think she is?” James remarked.

“Um… and overgrown fire breathing reptile?” Scott added, making James smack him in the back of the head.

“An you wonder why she’s trying to kill us right now.” James remarked. “She’s a dragon dumbass, and I think what you said just now is what pissed her off.”

“Talking horses, and talking dragons. What’s next?” Scott added. “Giant talking cats?” Their questions were interrupted when a crash was soon heard from their right. The crash actually cent both humans flying mid air where they landed in a bale of hay. The resulting debris that went flying kick up some dust making the guys cough up smoke. From the dust come the dragon girl and she was pissed.

“Get over here asshole so I can claw your eyes and teeth out!” She shouted.

“CRAP!!” Both brothers shouted as they both get up and were now on the run from an angry dragon girl wanting to kill them. They had to roll to different sides when a fan of flames came at them like a flamethrower.

“Why did you have to call her a lizard Scott?” James asked as he ran towards his brother.

“Well I thought she was a lizard okay? “Scott added.

“You’ll be wearing an iron lung when I catch you asshole!” The dragon girl shouted.

“Less talking, more running!” James added as they ran towards a small town up ahead, with the dragon girl hot on their tail. As their figure get smaller, three girls emerge from the rubble of the hole in the barn.

“Wow, that guy was dumb.” Said the ivory horned mare.

“We better let our sisters know what's goin’ on before those two get hurt. Or until Barb turns them well done.” The yellow mares added.

“Then let’s get over to Ponyville.” The orange mare added as she jumped on a blue scooter and motioned her friends to get in the wagon behind it. When the two other girls get in, the orange mare takes off like a bullet into the small town.

Author's Notes:

Here it is folks. The remastered version of one of my stories. I have to get the feel back for this story as I needed to return to it's roots. Hope you all like the references to Dragon Ball. Credit to Wolfman93 for helping me get started again. This chapter is going to help me kick off the new year with this story fully remastered from the ground up.

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