I have decided to start the story over with a new intro, while most of what was here before is the same the into is new and the chapters have been combined. I will have a new chapter out soon as I have stumbled upon some free time latley.

Finally,
Color coding helps clarify who is speaking.
This is Blue Mist
This is Rainbow Dash
This is Twilight Sparkle
I'm Pinkie Pie Dammit Pinkie stop breaking the fourth wall!

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