Author's Notes:

The following are deleted scenes from "Some Secrets are better left untold". Though these are from the most recently released chapters.

WHO CAN CUM THE MOST:

“Is that a challenge?” The competitive mare asked with the same look she always gave the cyan blue Pegasus when the two decided they were going to compete to see who was better at something.”

“Yeah!” Rainbow Dash replied with a competitive grin of her own.

“Fine! The mare who cums the most juice wins! Just try to be a good sport about it when I not only soak your face but half mah bed as well!” Applejack exclaimed just before she dove her face back into Rainbow Dash's treat which caused the cyan blue Pegasus to moan out.

“Ha-ha! And you make sure to come up for air when I not only soak you face, mane, and upper half of your body but rest of your body as well!” Rainbow Dash countered as she resumed her oral assault on Applejack's orange flower.

The game was on now between the two mares. Neither one willing to lose to the other but at the same time making sure to push the other to their respective orgasms.

Much too soon for Rainbow Dash's own comfort, the cyan blue Pegasus was the first to cum. Her orgasmic cry muffled only by Applejack's slit as her vaginal walls contracted and clamped around Applejack's tongue and moments later, her mare juices began to gush from within the mare and out of her soaking wet slit.

As true to her word, the mare's seemingly endless current of orgasmic fluids caused the farm pony to rip her face away and gasp for breath only for the cyan blue Pegasus to moan deeply into her slit as another wave of Rainbow Dash's orgasm rocked her body and caused more fluids to gush from the mare's slit and all over Applejack's body. She however failed to soak Applejack's entire body as she bragged though as the seemingly endless torrent of fluids came to an end.. A fact that caused the farm mare to grin deviously as she bit her lower lip, knowing her orgasm was mere seconds away. “H-hope you ready to lose Dashie cuz Ah'm cummin!” Applejack exclaimed just before she moaned out, threw her head back onto her pillow, and grabbed Rainbow Dash's hunches hard as she came.

Soon after both mares climaxes ended, Rainbow Dash readjusted her body so that she was facing her lover and wrapped her left arm around the mare. “So, who won?” she panted out as the two basks in their afterglow.

“Heh, well neiether of us managed to do what we bragged we could do. So lets just call it a tie.” Applejack replied and kissed Rainbow Dash deeply.

“I guess I'll take a tie as long as it's with you.” Rainbow Dash said softly after their passionate kiss had ended.
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The reason for this removal should be obvious. Upon consulting with my friend, they mentioned that this scene completely killed the romantic atmosphere the two mares had and after rereading it myself, I agreed.

THE INEXPERIENCED LESBIAN:

Rainbow Dash moaned out as she felt the farm mare's tongue slide back inside her wet slit but then an thought occurred to the mare as her lover continued to eat her out“H-Hey, I have an idea, let me turn around.” The Pegasus remarked to which Applejack released her hold on Rainbow Dash's haunches and allowed the mare to turn around.

“What did ya have in mind?” Applejack asked curiously as she watched the mare look over the mare as if she was trying to figure something out.

“Well, I heard about this one position between two mares a while back but I was well...” Rainbow Dash replied but trailed off.

“In denial?” Applejack quipped with a smirk.

“Yeah that. Anyways, the mares would like, rub their bodies together or something and its supposed to feel really good for both mares.”

“Oh! Yer talkin about scissorin.” Applejack remarked in realization of what the mare was attempting to describe after a few moments.

“You sure that's what it's called?” Rainbow Dash asked curiously.

“Pretty sure. Anyways, pipe down for a moment and let me tell ya what to do. Lay down on yer side and raise yer left hind leg up. I'll take care of the rest.” Applejack instructed wisely.

The cyan blue Pegasus did as she was told and watched as the farm pony opened her hind legs up, scooted down and gave a soft pleasured gasp as Applejack's slit pressed against hers. “The rest is simple really we just grind against each other but it'd feel a whole lot better if we had a toy.
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This scene once again took away from the romantic atmosphere which is why it was removed.

A FARM MARE'S BAD SENSE OF HUMOR:

“Rainbow...”

“Wh-What?”

“Yer face is already blue.”

This bad pun by the farm mare at least earned a small laugh out of the two which at least lightened the otherwise depressing atmosphere between the two.

“Th-That's not fair. You're not supposed to make me laugh.” Rainbow Dash replied with a weak smile as she wiped her nose with a hoof and sniffled loudly.

“What else was Ah supposed to do? Ya was sittin here sobbin into mah shoulder like somepony just died or somethin. Ya got an image to uphold ya know.” Applejack replied with a smirk.

“Just because I act cool all the time doesn't mean there aren't times when I wanna cry ya know?” Rainbow Dash replied as she wiped her eyes with one hoof and sniffled again.

“Ah know. Ah was just tryin to cheer ya up is all.” Applejack replied as she placed a hoof on the Pegasus's shoulder as she looked at her.

“Thanks A-J.”

“Don't mention it.”

Another silence ensued between the mares for a time as Rainbow Dash fully collected herself until she finally spoke. “I still wanna date you though.” She said with a smile.

Upon hearing this, the farm mare let out an aggravated groan. “Consarn it Rainbow. You just don't know when to give up do ya?” She remarked as she looked away from her friend and down to the blankets at her hind hooves.

“Not really.” Rainbow Dash quipped with a smirk.
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The following scene was deleted because I felt it would take away from the scene I am was writing. This scene is part a partial rewrite of scenes from this chapter. After having a friend look over it they mentioned that I should change a few things after consulting with them.