The story of a young ex-hitcolt by the name of Crimson Rays, better known as the Crimson Shadow. He wishes to retire, despite his age, to a quiet town in which to run away from his past remorse. Since he's been run out of so many towns, he's stumbled onto a fairly segregated town, completely ignorant of his reputation. Will he make new friends on this wild new ride, or be run out of this town like the ones before it?
*Amazing cover art done by this awesome guy! Go read his fics: Dragon Of The Eclipse and Elder Scrolls: Equestria*
- This will be a fairly gory fic, contain swearing, and contain violence. You've been warned. Also, for most of the fight scenes, the ponies will be on their hind-legs, just telling you to save some confusion.
- There will be shipping in this story..... sorry.
- Tell what I need to improve, your opinions are all welcome!
- All criticism will be appreciated as long as it comes out as respectful.
- No, Crimson is not a self insert.
- Please inform me when I make a spelling or grammar related error and I'll do the best that I can to fix it!
- If it comes off as nerdy at times, I apologize. It'll probably come off as cheesy too, for which I again apologize!
- Many ideas were given to me personally by Super Big Mac. So show him love and check out some of his stuff, even if you hate this fic's guts like I do!~
Enjoy~
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Chapter One: Beginning Anew (rewrite) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Two: Approaching Storm [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Three: Loosely Bound [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Four: A Shocking Reunion [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Five: Deck and Covert Missions [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Six: Calling Card [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Seven: Season Of Decay [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Eight: G1I<H3D 0U7 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Nine: A Toast To All Comrades! [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Ten: The Shadow's Past [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Eleven: Professionals and Confessionals [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Twelve: The Webs We Weave [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Thirteen: Suds and Duds [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Fourteen: Minus Amina [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Fifteen: Beats of the Heart [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Sixteen: (De)Magnetized [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Seventeen: Cold Cut (Part One) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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Chapter Seventeen: Cold Cut (Part Two) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
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