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An enduring friendship

by Neon the Baby Pegasus

Chapter 1: Pinkimena's defeat

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Please be informed that this fic is an alternate ending to the grim dark fic 'Cupcakes' by Sgt. Sprinkles. The first few paragraphs are entirely their work, to connect their content to my alternate ending. The entirety of that author's story can be found here. Though i’d really suggest staying as far away from it as you can,but it’s your call.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/14lgUY7yfbooT5IT6miNNbPqSY_qLA9aiVMjsEpszePk/edit?hl=en&pli=1

Also this was inspired by the Fanfiction. A Precious Rainbow by milesprower06
,So please if anyone reads this please let me know if too much of his/her fanfiction is leaking into mine i don’t want to be called an art thief anyway,let the story begin.

An enduring friendship.



Chapter 1
Pinkamena’s defeat


"Dash. Daaash. Wake up." Rainbow Dash managed to give her a modicum of weak acknowledgment.

Pinkie reached into the medicine bag and produced a large syringe.

"Alright, time for the last round."

Dash looked at the needle, and Pinkie took that as a question as to what it was.

"Something to take the pain away." she informed as she walked around to Dash's ruined back side. She stuck the needle into the lower part of her spine. Dash flinched.

Coming to the front again, she told her friend, "In a few minutes, you won't be able to feel anything below your ribcage. Then you'll be able to stay awake to watch the harvest."

Dash started to cry again.

"Pinkie." she trembled out.

"Yeah?"
"I want to go home." she openly sobbed.

"Yeah, I can see wanting to do that." the party pony replied. "Sometimes, I just wanna give up, say 'I'm done with this mess' and go to bed. But you know what? You can't shrug off your responsibilities. You got to pull yourself up and meet the challenges head on. That's the only way you're gonna get ahead in life."

Dash cried.

Minutes passed and the drug took affect. Dash was numb from her chest to her flanks. Aware of this, Pinkie approached with her scalpel.

Suddenly, the door to the room burst open, and Pinkie whipped around to face the intruder.

It was the all of the others. “Pinkie,what in Equestria are you doing!” Screamed Twilight Waking further into the basement. “You’d better put that scaple down now,before we have to do something we’ll regret!” Threaten Applejack following behind Twilight. “Oh really?” Laughed Pinkie looking at her other friends with a smile on her face. “I’m afraid i can’t do that sugarcube.” Continued Pinkie mocking Applejack’s voice at the nickname sugarcube. “You see Dashie’s number has come up. Yes it has,Yes it has” The pink pony said laughing and jumping up and down.

“Enough of this nonsense,Some pony grab her!” Scream Rarity charging at her friend one of the knives from the table being levitated by her horn. “Right!” Exclaimed Applejack also charging the pink earth pony spinning around to buck Pinkie in the face. “Oops missed me.” Taunted Pinkie laughing dodging and swinging the scaple at Rarity. Just missing her by centimeters. “Ugh!” Moaned out Pinkie a second later. Applejack’s and Rarity’s attack has distracted Pinkie just enough for Twilight to sneak into the fight,and catch Pinkie from behind. “Good but not good enough.” Sang Pinkie as she stabbed the scaple into Twilight’s flank cutting into the the meat,and tearing a piece off,and eating it once she had escaped Twilight reach. “Ooh Twilight you taste super duper yummy. You’re going to make some good cupcakes now that your number’s up as well.” Pinked Mumbled though the meat.

“There ain’t gonna be no more cupcakes after we’re though with you,you sicko! Snapped Applejack catching the earth pony from behind,and trying her up with some rope from one of the table,and knocking pinkie out cold with one last kick to her head. “Is she dead?” Whispered Fluttershy finally entering the room,and looking down at her friend’s limp body. I don’t think so.” Said Twilight feeling for Pinkie’s pulse. “Oh by Celestia! Rainbow what has she done to you.” wailed Rarity hugging the Pegasus’s broken body.

“Quickly we’ve got to get her to the hospital at once!” Ordered Twilight. Cutting the restrains off the the Pegasus,and lifting her body onto her back. Applejack with Pinkie’s. “Twi, You gonna be okay with that leg?” Asked Applejack as they headed out of Sugarcube corner. “I’ll be just fine.” Winced Twilight. “As long as we get to the hospital before i bleed out too much.”

Ponyville urgent care,five minutes later

“Oh sweet Celestia!” Screamed the secretary vomiting into the trash can next to the desk as the four ponies raced into the hospital. With the other two on their back. “Doctor!” She screamed. “ Oh by Equestria!”Gasped the doctor as he seen the sight. “Quickly get those three into the E.R Stat!” Ordered the doctor noticing that Twilight’s flank was bleeding heavily. “What happened?” Commanded the doctor of the three remaining pony in the waiting room. The girls began to explain.”

An hour later.

The doctor vomited again and again as the gruesome story began to sink in. “Cupcakes,Oh by sweet Celestia! Pinkie Pie has been turning ponies into cupcakes!” Screamed the doctor a fresh wave of vomiting hit him hard. “Well it seems like we have finally gotten our answer to the disappearances of the last few months.” Said Princess Luna shaking her head slowly. Who would have thought that Pinkie had that kind of evil in her.” Finished the younger of the two royal pony sisters wiping her eyes. Luna had been sent in place of her older sister to reply to the letter Applejack had sent the princess telling her that Twilight,Rainbow,and Pinkie were in the hospital,and that Pinkie and Rainbow may not survive.

“Yes,I mean she has always seem so sweet and innocent.” Cried Fluttershy collapsing to the floor and breaking down. “And now we might lose two of our friends!” Sobbed the yellow Pegasus.”Oh Fluttershy honey don’t worry. They’ve got Pinkie in a room,and Rainbow’s in the O.R.I’m sure everything gonna be alright.” Said Applejack hugging Fluttershy,and crying a bit herself. “I assure you dearest Fluttershy. We shall get to the bottom of this. We’ll get the answers from Pinkie.Then make sure she gets the help that she needs.” Said Luna also hugging the Pegasus. “Um, I hate to bother you Princess,but Pinkie Pie has woken up. Said one of the orderlies to the Princess. “Thank you,now then girls. Let us go get Twilight and get the answers we’re looking for.

As the orderly opened the door the sight shocked each pony. Pinkie had been put in a straightjacket and put into a padded cell,and now the pink earth pony was crying her eyes out trying to beat her self to death against the wall. Failing miserably. “Pinkie! Stop it!” Ordered Princess Luna grabbing Pinkie and holding her down. “Now explain yourself. What is the meaning of all these murders you’ve committed. Why have you been turning ponies into cupcakes. The pink pony turn to the princess and screamed. “I swear Luna! It was’nt me! It was Pinkamena! She broke out a few months back i’ve been trying to control her,but she’s been breaking out,and doing doing!” Pinkie suddenly broke into a fit of tears and finished her sentence. “All those things to every pony,and now she might have killed Dashie! Oh please sweet Celestia make it stop! I just want to die!” She then tried to break free of Luna’s hold,and continue her sad attempts at suicide.

“Pinkie stop it!” Screamed Applejack slapping Pinkie across the face. “What if Rainbow does’nt die. Then what will your death accomplish. You’re only letting Pinkamena win. Now fight her Pinkie. Fight!” Ordered Applejack hugging her friend “Come on every pony! Give Pinkie a hug! Let’s show her we’re her with her to help her fight though this darkness!” “Right!” Said the others hugging on to their friend with all there might. Suddenly a light shot out of Twilight’s horn,and the elements of harmony appeared around each of there necks. Applejack gasped. Looking at the necklace around Pinkie’s neck. “Laugher that’s it! Girls sing!” Ordered Applejack.

“What sing?” The others exclaimed. “Yes sing the song Pinkie sang to us when we we’re in the everfree forest and Nightmare Moon tried to scare us with the trees. It’ll help Pinkie break the hold on her mind i just know it.” Explained Applejack beginning to sing. Her element necklace beginning to glow. The other’s began to sing and as they did,their necklaces began to glow as well. “Pinkie began to break though at “You gotta stand up tall learn to face you fears.” and began to sing with the others,and as she did she began to rise. Her coat getting pinker and pinker. Her mane and tail beginning to regain it’s puffiness,and suddenly a “No!” Was heard,and Pinkie fell to the floor passed out. The elements had worked. Pinkamena was gone.

Two hours later. Pinkie’s new hospital room.

“Look i think she’s coming to.” Said Luna every pony gathered around Pinkie’s bed,but Rainbow who still had not come out of the Operating room. “Guys what’s happened? Asked Pinkie confused lying her head back into her pillows. Well Pinkie it kinda goes like this.” Said Twilight Explaining the past few hours of events as she knew them. “So Pinkamena is gone forever?” Said Pinkie smiling at the purple Unicorn. “Yes Pinkie,She’s gone just like Nightmare moon. Our alter egos will never haunt us,or harm any pony again.” Said Luna hugging Pinkie tightly as the pink pony became to openly sob.

“Thank Equestria it’s over,but what about Dashie? Is she going to be alright?” Every pony looked down. “About that Pinkie.” Sobbed Twilight. taking a breath in. “Rainbow Dash is going to live.” Said the doctor. Coming into the room. “However she’ll never been the same again. We were unable to save her wings. even if we were to sew them back onto the joints,she would’nt have any feeling in them they’d be useless.I’m sorry to say,but Rainbow dash will never fly again. Your other self did quite a number on your friend Miss Pie. I’m just glad that it was not you,and that both you and Rainbow are going to come out of this mess alive.” Pinkie bit down on her lower lip. Tears beginning to prick at her eyes. Would you like to go see her?

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