It’s time like this that I look back to when I made my account on Fimfic. And wish I could go back to that.

Either way, we’re back. With another story that I didn’t read AND it’s from Bronystories. I swear, he must think I’m actually good at this riffing stuff. Either way, he requested that I riff another one of his stories so I decided to give it a shot.

This story is called Taming of the Screw and is actually going though a rewrite. BS told me that the first chapter had been rewritten already, so that’s what we’re tackling today.

And as always, I haven’t read the story. That always ends well.

I bring to you, Taming of the Screw. Oh boy.

        twow: I think I might have just outdone myself here.

        Fluttershy: Does...that sniper shoot electricity now??!

        twow: Not only that, you can switch between fire, electricity, and corrosion at will.

        Derpy: twow, what is the POINT?!

        twow: Well, I was gonna give this one to Fallen, and create another one for Flutters.

        Fluttershy: Oh, thank you.

        twow: It’s not a problem.

        Derpy: Speaking of guns, did you ever finish up my muffin cannon?

        twow: No, I had to create another bass cannon for Vinyl. She kinda destroyed hers.

        Fluttershy: I don’t want to know how.

        Pinkie: (from TV) And you still need to make me my oven gun T!

        Derpy: Wha...

        twow: It’s a portable oven. I swear, you ponies and your weapons...

        (The lab doors slam shut and lock)

twow: ...will never compare to Pinkie and her pranks. What are you hitting us with now Pinkie?

Pinkie: It’s from your favorite author T!

twow: Regidar?

Pinkie: Don’t lie T! It’s from Bronystories!

twow: OH JOY.

Fluttershy: Can I leave now?

twow: You’ve never been here for one of his stories. How are you already breaking?

Fluttershy: Rarity...

        Derpy: Oh right. Did she really look like a pincushion?

        twow: BAD MEMORY.

        Pinkie: This one’s called “Taming of the Screw!”

        Derpy: Usually I’d say that doesn’t sound bad...

        twow: But then you stop, think about the last two times you said that, and move on.

        Fluttershy: Umm, maybe this won’t be bad?

        twow: Flutters, I love ya, but you might have just fucked us all.

        *BUZZ*

        All: We’ve got story sign!

It was nighttime at Ponyville General, after regular hospital hours.

        twow: As opposed to it having regular hours at night.

        Derpy: It was probably midnight.

 Allthe patients were asleep.

        twow: I think that space got lost in translation.

 Well, all except for one. An ominous howl rang out through the night. Inside the hospital, two ponies walked down a sterile corridor.

        Fluttershy: Are they keeping dogs in the hospital?

        twow: Something tells me that question is gonna suck if it’s answered.

Two night guards were on patrol. A stocky, muscle-bound earth pony was on the left. His mane was a short, sandy-blond-color. He had a light-brown coat and a white shirt with a name badge. It read "Straight Lace: Hospital Security."

        Derpy: “Not all signs are legit.”

        twow: “Object on this badge are closer than they appear.”

 A two-way radio was clipped to his shirt. Straight Lace also wore a belt that had several necessities he might need while on duty. The guard pony's cutie mark depicted a laced-up straight jacket with a red cross on top of it.

        twow: Maybe he works for Red Heart.

        Fluttershy: Like the nurse?

        twow: It’s something on Earth Flutters.

Beside him trotted another stallion. Unlike the steely-eyed Straight Lace, the earth pony on the right had a more apprehensive expression. The bangs of his brown mane hung down until they nearly brushed against his eyebrows.

        Derpy: “I really need to cut my hair...”

 His coat was a stone-gray color. He had the same uniform as Straight Lace, except for the belt. The other guard pony's name was Shocker. His cutie mark depicted a metal headset, with sparks of electricity emanating from it.

        twow: Well, that was a shock. (smacked by Derpy)

As the guards walked down the hall, the howling got louder. The two ponies stopped outside a white door with a tiny glass window. On the door was a card with the name of the patient and their ailment. For this pony the card simply read 'Name: Screw Loose. Treated for: Dementia.'

Fluttershy: Because a pony with the name “Screw Loose” is going to be in control of her mind.

        twow: Shouldn’t that sign say “Diagnosed” with Dementia?

Straight Lace scoffed as he read the words 'treated for.' the guard knew that even on her good days Screw Loose was as crazy as Discord.

        Derpy: Then what are her BAD days like?!

 There was no cure for this pony. As far as Straight Lace was concerned, this patient was good for only one thing. Sex.

        All: ...

        twow: This is gonna be one of those stories...

Taking out his key ring, the brown stallion unlocked the cell door. As the two guards stepped inside, Shocker scanned the room. Before tonight, he had only walked by this cell in passing. What met Shocker's eyes was a room with padded, rubber walls. The floor was rubber.

        Derpy: As opposed to wood?

        twow: I thought it was tile.

 Aside from the small window at the door, the only other view was a narrow window on the back wall  in the top right corner. A full moon was visible from outside illuminating the pony in the corner.

        Fluttershy: Something tells me that Luna’s not doing her job...

        twow: Sure she is. These ponies aren’t asleep.

Below the window was Screw Loose. A sky-blue earth pony with an unkempt white mane. She had been the source of the howlings at night. The deluded mare was under the impression that she was a dog. Here cutie mark was an image of a screw.

        twow: “Here cutie mark! Here!”

        Fluttershy: “There’s a good mark!”

Being a danger to herself and others, extreme safety precautions were enacted. After biting an orderly during an escape attempt, Screw Loose was fitted with a grated metal mask to prevent further attacks.

        Derpy: But...she just wanted the doggy treats.

        twow: I ate them all. Tasted like bacon.

To stop her from removing the mask, the blue mare was placed in a straight jacket. As a pony, this made moving around quite inconvenient. Fortunately for Screw Loose, she didn't get out that much anyway.

        Fluttershy: I doubted that anyway.

        Derpy: Especially if she thinks she’s a dog.

        twow: That must suck for her. Dogs want to run and be free.

The mare's hind legs were standing straight. Her fore-hooves were tied tight around her chest, which forced her head to lay against the ground. Her position made her look more like a slide at a playground, rather than a pony.

        twow: Don’t let her touch your kids.

When the two guards walked in on Screw Loose, the smell made them wrinkle their noses. The mare had her butt up against the wall. She was panting heavily as she rubbed her privates vigorously against the rubber wall. Her feminine odors permeated the room.

        Derpy: Oh, we’re gonna have a great time with this.

        Fluttershy: LET ME OUT!!!

"Hey girl," Straight Lace said, beaming at her. Screw Loose hadn't acknowledged the presence of the guards yet. She was too engrossed in the wall, Her pussy rubbed against its rubber surface faster and faster, while her tongue lolled in her mouth and her eyes darted about the room, unfocused.

        twow: She’s pulling a Derpy. (smacked by Derpy)

"I'm telling you, Shocks," Straight Lace said, "She may be crazy, but she's a great lay. I'm convinced that the reason why her cutie mark is a screw is because her special talent is screwing."

        Fluttershy: There is so many things wrong with that sentence.

        twow: You mean besides the pun?

        Derpy: He has a point though. What else could that mark MEAN?

"I don't think this is right," Shocker said, taking a step away from the mare.

        All: It’s NOT!

"Don't tell me you're chickening out now," Straight Lace said, sternly, "It's like I told you. We're doing her a favor. She thinks she's a bitch in heat. She acts like one, so we'll treat her like one."

"But she thinks she's a dog." Shocker said, "Isn't this borderline bestiality?"

        twow: Maybe? Flutt-

        Fluttershy: YES!!!

        twow: Oh boy.

"You don't know how bad she's craving a firm stallion cock shoved up her snatch." Straight Lace said, his mouth watering.

        twow: Egh.

        Derpy: How do YOU know she wants it?!

When the door closed, it look a minute to register in Screw Loose's mind. The mare's eyes darted around, wildly. When she finally noticed the guards, she made a series of barks and wagged her tail.

        twow: “Give me my fucking bacon treats!”

The blue pony moved her wet pussy lips away from the padded wall. She started pushing herself forward on the ground towards the guards. Her protective face mask was collecting loose hairs and dust as her face scooted across the ground.

        Fluttershy: That can’t feel good at ALL.

She stood there facing them, her tail wagging rapidly. She raised her tail higher in order to make her privates more accessible.

        twow: Well Derpy, that answered your question.

        Derpy: Can I PLEASE eviscerate the author? Please?!

"She has a difficult time turning in place." Straight Lace said, chuckling, "We'd better meet her half way." Straight Lace sat down in front of Screw Loose. The stallion spit on his member and began to stroke it. Screw Loose stared at the cock, then started to pant.

Fluttershy: Dogs don’t usually do that at the sight of a penis.

twow: ...

Derpy: twow, are you alright? 

"We can take her together." the brown stallion said, "Go ahead and get her ass nice and loose."

Shocker walked around and stared at the blue mare's backside. It was hard to see anything with her constant tail wagging. The gray stallion finally had to bring a hoof down on her butt to hold her tail in place.

        twow: “Spank dat ass!”

        Fluttershy: He seems fine now.

        Derpy: I don’t know...

Shocker stared at her vagina. It was wet and twitching with anticipation. He was turned off by the fact that Screw Loose was quite dirty. It didn't look like anypony had bathed her in weeks.

Her pussy lips were red and puffy, most likely caused from the repeated rubbing against the rubber walls.

        twow: Wouldn’t that leave a rash?!

        Derpy: That, and hurt something awful.

Above her vagina was Screw Loose's asshole. Shocker almost threw up in his mouth.

Trace amounts of shit clung to the area around her butthole. Wiping herself was not one of Screw Loose's concerns. Shocker became indignant.

        twow: Ya know, I’m sure that you have to TAKE CARE OF YOUR FUCKING PATIENTS!!!

Fluttershy: I take that back. He’s not okay.        

Derpy: I don’t know if I’m gonna enjoy it if TWOW breaks. He knows how to use half the weapons in here.

"Filthy bitch," he thought, "The only reason you have conditions as nice as these is because of hard working ponies like me."

        All: THAT NICE?!

        twow: Is this motherfucker off his meds?!

"I'm not getting my tongue near there," Shocker said, "I'm not in to scat."

"C'mon," Straight Lace said, jokingly. "All she eats is hospital food and guard semen. How bad could it be?"

        Derpy: And she’s still alive how?

        Fluttershy: Well, she could survive off that. It’s not healthy at all...

"Alright smart ass, why don't you give her the rimjob?" Shocker shot back.

"Don't get your panties in a bunch," Straight Lace said as he opened a compartment on his belt, "I come prepared."

The guard pony handed Shocker a moistened napkin.

        Derpy: Should have used a moist towelette.

"Wipe her down with that." Straight Lace said, "Get her asshole as wet as you can."

Shocker placed the napkin on his hoof and began to scrub the dried shit off Screw Loose's ass. She growled and wiggled her hips in protest as the napkin tugged at her coat. After a while though, she stopped resisting. Using the napkin, Shocker rubbed the tip of his hoof in tight circles around her asshole.

        twow: Truly an image I wanted in my mind.

While that was going on, Straight Lace teased the mare by holding his cock in front of her. The mare whimpered and stuck her tongue through her mask, trying to touch his member.

        Fluttershy: EW!

        twow: Why does she want it so...oh....oh no.

 The guard pony gladly obliged, moving his cock close enough for her to lick at his tip with her tongue. Screw Loose lapped up the precum as it leaked out of Straight Lace's dick.

After discarding the shit-stained napkin, Shocker paused to admire his handiwork.

        Derpy: “All clean. Mr. Clean.”

"I'm sure her taint's so clean you could eat off it," Straight Lace said, sardonically, "Are you good to go? I'm ready to bust a nut in this crazy bitch."

        twow: STOP THE STORY NOW!!

        Fluttershy: EEP!

        Derpy: Oh dear...

        Derpy: twow? What’s wrong?

        twow: This fucking story! I know what happened! I know what they did!

        Fluttershy: What did they do?

        twow: She thinks she’s a dog, right? Do dogs usually spaz at the sight of a dick?

        Fluttershy: No...

        twow: Right. And remember how natural this seems to Straight Lace?

        Derpy: Yeah.

twow: He’s done this before, oh yeah. But the sick part? He’s raped her to the point where it’s all she wants.

        Derpy: Oh...

twow: I have a serious problem with rape, for reasons I’d rather not share right now. But this...this hurts.

        Fluttershy: It’s because even SHE doesn’t know how bad it is.

twow: Right. Screw Loose’s mindset can barely comprehend rational thought. Now add the part of constantly being raped.

Derpy: Her mind is mostly thinking about sex and being a dog.

twow: And I HATE IT.

Pinkie: (from TV) I’m sorry T!

twow: Not your fault.

Derpy: But twow, this is good for you.

twow: How?

Fluttershy: Because now that you’re angry, you can tear this apart. Like you helped me.

twow: I can’t...

Fluttershy: Yes you can. Please twow.

twow: Every time I read these, my memories come back and they HURT.

Derpy: That’s why you got us. And I know that you can do it.

Fluttershy: We riffed “Momma Fluttershy” together. All three of us.

twow: Well, Fallen WAS there...

(Derpy and Fluttershy hug twow)

twow: Thanks guys. I...I think I’m ready. Let’s tear this a new asshole.

Derpy: That’s the spirit!

*BUZZ*

All: We’ve got story sign!

Straight Lace lifted Screw Loose's head from up off the floor.

        twow: “Everybody do the dinosaur!”

He pulled her closer and rested her head on his left shoulder.

"Hey, Shocker," Straight Lace said, as the other stallion started to stand up, "Do yourself a favor and rub your dick along her pussy before you stick it in her ass. You can never be too wet."

        Fluttershy: Unless you’re drowning.

Taking his friend's advice, Shocker mounted Screw Loose and rubbed his erect cock along her pussy lips. Screw Loose barked and let out a low growl of pleasure.

"Shut her up!" Shocker said, panicking, "Do you want somepony to come in here and find us with her?"

        Derpy: Doesn’t she bark all the time?

        twow: As far as we know. I don’t THINK they need to be too worried.

"I've never been caught yet." Straight Lace said very casually, "She thinks she's a dog. Ponies expect her to bark all night for no reason."

        twow: Eh. Guess I was right.

        Fluttershy: And I wish you weren’t.

"Oh," Shocker said, smiling. His stallionhood having been made sufficiently slick, the guard moved his dick away from her pussy lips.

Now that both stallion's cocks were lubed up, they were ready to begin the three-way.

        All: BLUH.

Straight Lace leaned forward and placed his hooves on Screw Loose's flanks. He pulled her close, then lowered her slowly. He took his time as he pushed his cock into her sopping hole.

        twow: “Just taking his SWEET TIME!”

        Derpy: “Get on with it!”

Screw loose panted. Her heart was beating fast. Her tongue lolled in hr mouth as drool dripped onto the front of her straight jacket. Straight Lace pushed Screw Loose down as far as she could go, until the mare bottomed out, sitting on his lap.

        Fluttershy: He wasn’t that big then.

        twow: DAMN Flutters.

"Oh yeah," Straight Lace said, a feeling of pride and accomplishment swept over him as he stared at the blue snatch that had taken his whole length. "Balls deep and hella tight. It's your turn, Shocks."

        Derpy: This’ll be quite the shock. (smacked by the wall)

Shocker had watched as the blue mare was slowly impaled on Straight Lace's member. It made him rock hard. Straight Lace lay on his back and lowered Screw Loose down onto his chest. Shocker now had a perfect view of his target.

        twow: “Fire the arrow.”

As he approached her blue asshole, Shocker lined up his cock. He spit on the tip for good measure. Pressing against her butt, Shocker met with fierce resistance. He could tell this hole would not be as wet and welcoming as the one Straight Lace had entered.

        Derpy: Maybe because it DOESN’T GO THERE.

        twow: Every fucking story I try to understand the concept of anal.

        Fluttershy: Have you ever?

        twow: NOPE.

Screw Loose was enjoying the sensation of another pony inside her, and happily flexed her vaginal muscles. Her accordion-like walls gripped and squeezed the cock inside her, tighter and tighter. Once she felt something poking at her back door however, she started to growl and clenched her teeth.

        Derpy: “That door’s locked for a reason!”

        twow: “And the front door’s broken!”

"Straight Lace, I don't know if she likes this." Shocker said nervously.

"She's insane." Straight Lace said, "She doesn't know what she wants. You're gonna' have to show her."

Fluttershy: No, I’m pretty sure she doesn’t want it. Growling is a sign of DO NOT WANT.

Looking down at the stubborn sphincter, Shocker pushed again using his fore-hooves to propel himself forward.

The gray stallion watched as his cock head disappeared into Screw Loose's tight ass.

        twow: “Batten the hatches, we’re going in hot!”

The blue mare began to bark wildly. She thrashed her hips and rocked side to side, attempting to expel the anal intruder.

Neither of the stallions found the rocking motions unpleasant. On the contrary, they both found them extremely stimulating.

        Derpy: That’s usually how sex works.

        Fluttershy: Better than that OTHER story.

        twow: This is not a conversation I wanna have with two mares.

To prevent himself from losing the progress he'd already made

        twow: He hit the Save Block

, Shocker held the mare's butt with both hooves. He grabbed her white tail in his teeth to stop it from flailing wildly. Then for good measure he gave it a tug, pulling several hairs out. Screw Loose let out a yelp.

"That's it," Straight Lace said, "Show the bitch who's boss."

        Fluttershy: WATCH YOUR MOUTH.

        twow: Something tells me I better watch my swearing...

To make things easier for his friend, Straight Lace knew he needed to stop the mare from thrashing. Wrapping his hooves around Screw Loose's back, Straight Lace pulled her close and pressed her against his chest. He could feel her heart beating rapidly. There was something soothing about the sound.

        Derpy: Wait, the heartbeat?

        twow: Oh yeah. My little sister would nap on my chest, ear right at my heart.

        Fluttershy: Awwww.

Screw Loose tried to move, but Straight Lace's muscular arms prevented her from sitting up. Her eyes darted around the room. She let out a whimper. As he held her tightly, Straight Lace beamed. Restraining ponies was his special talent, after all.

        Fluttershy: I don’t see that being useful outside of the hospital.

"Stupid bitch," Shocker said as he spat her tail out of his mouth.

Screw Loose panted heavily as Shocker pushed himself even deeper into her anus. This pain caused her to bark louder. When he pulled his cock back, Shocker saw blood trickle out of Screw Loose's ass. Remembering that nopony would check on the noise, Shocker thrust back in a little more. A thin line of blood slid down the mare's blue thighs as the stallion pressed further and further into her wounded anal canal.

        All: (wince)

        Derpy: He’s hurting her!

        twow: All he cares about is getting off. Like he gives a fuck about Screw.

Screw Loose let out a yelp followed by several whimpers. She strained her rectal muscles, in a vain attempt to dislodge the searing shaft. Her cries of anguished pain fell on deaf ears. All the mare's efforts succeeded only in further pleasuring Shocker.

"I think I'm ready to go," Shocker said, "thanks for being patient with me."

        Fluttershy: YOU ARE NOT WELCOME.

        twow: BURN IN HELL.

        Derpy: I...I’m gonna go eat a muffin...

"I can't complain," Straight Lace said with a bemused smile, "This horny bitch has been grippin' my cock like a vice the whole time."

Now that the two stallions were sufficiently deep into their respective holes, the screwing of Screw Loose could now commence.

        twow: Wait, they didn’t start?!

        Derpy: They are now.

        twow: Fuuuuuuuuuu-

Shocker lay on Screw Loose's back; the mare was sandwiched between two guard ponies. When Shocker pulled his dick back, Screw Loose's asshole kept such a tight grip on it that her sphincter clung on, stretching out slightly. This was only for a brief time, as Screw Loose's asshole was forced to retreat back in when Shocker rammed his cock deeper.

        twow: It’s like Tug-of-War.

        Fluttershy: But with two horrible stallions and an insane mare.

The sensation of being filled by two stallions at once was a new sensation for Screw Loose. She tried to process these new sensations and emotions, but her brain was inadequate for the task.

If the anal penetration was still painful to Screw Loose, she no longer showed it. The mare just kept panting, interspersed with a "yip!" whenever one of her holes was thrust into.

        twow: Earning those dog treats. (smacked by Fluttershy)

Straight Lace had to admit that he found her constant drooling all over his face a little off-putting.

"My face is wetter than the winner of a dyke-eating contest," he said.

        Derpy: Would have been content never knowing that.

Not content to just lie on the ground, Straight Lace began to thrust up. Screw Loose barked constantly now.

"Oooh, puppy likes that," the brown stallion said, "I think she's about to cum." Straight Lace pounded harder and faster. He could feel his own orgasm building. He wanted to try and come with Screw Loose.

         Fluttershy: Wait, can he even do that?

        Derpy: Sure! It just takes extreme...

        twow: TIMING!

"I've bottomed out," Shocker said, excitedly, "Screw Loose's name is misleading, because she's the tightest screw I've ever had! Her ass won't stop jerking my cock!"

        Fluttershy: Maybe she’ll JERK IT OFF.

        twow: Flutters...hold on to your brain.

Screw Loose was becoming more of a participant in the proceedings. She rubbed her clit fiercely against Straight Lace's crotch. He returned in kind by using his hulking member to explore every facet of her love tunnel.

        twow: Personally, I prefer the love tunnel at the amusement park.

        Derpy: That was fun, wasn’t it?

        Fluttershy: You rode a in a tunnel of love with Derpy?

        twow: (blushing) It was a mistake...

Screw Loose now seemed determined to prevent Shocker from ever leaving her blue ass. Whenever the stallion would start to pull out, the blue mare pushed her butt backwards; enveloping the cock even deeper. The base of her tail slapped repeatedly against his stomach.

        twow: Lose some fucking weight!

"This is the first time I've ever taken a mare in the butt." Shocker confessed.

"All your previous experiences were with stallions, huh?" Straight Lace asked, slyly.

"Shut up," Shocker said, unamused.

        twow: Burn?

        Fluttershy: With fire?

        Derpy: There isn’t enough fire in Tartarus...

The two guard ponies pistoned in and out of Screw Loose. All three were on the verge of orgasm, but Screw Loose made it first. Her slobber got all over Straight Lace's face. She ground her hips, milking the cock inside her for all it was worth.

        Derpy: Ain’t gonna put that in a milkshake.

        twow: Ah! Derpy! What the hell?!

Screw Loose let out a howl. When she came, she broke free from Straight Lace's grip, who up until that point had kept her pressed against his chest. Her feminine juices flowed free, coating Straight Lace's already slick dick.

Fluttershy: I just realized something. We haven’t seen any allitera-(mouth is covered by twow and Derpy)

        twow: If you don’t mention it, it won’t pop up!

The strength of her orgasm caused Screw Loose to sit up. When she did so, the back of her head connected forcefully with Shocker; hitting him square in the nose.

"Ow!" Shocker cried out, his eyes watering in pain, "Son of a bitch!"

        Derpy: I hope that hurt!

        Fluttershy: Bleed out and die!

        twow: Damn you two!

The force of the hit caused Shocker and Screw Loose to fall backwards. The blue mare managed to keep a tight grip on the cock buried in her ass the whole time. When the two ponies fell back, Straight Lace became disconnected from the group. His cock separated from the mare with a wet pop. When this happened, more of her juices spilled onto the rubber floor.

        twow: “Cleanup on aisle Crazy!”

        Derpy: “Bring a mop and some paper towels!”

Straight Lace didn't care about being by himself now, since he was on the verge of cumming. Scooting closer to Screw Loose, Straight Lace gave his stallionhood a few swift jerks. He felt his balls tighten as they sent semen shooting through his spasming shaft.

        twow: About TIME.

He came all over Screw Loose's face, in her mane, on her nose, in her mouth, on her metal mask. The last few squirts landed on her straight jacket. Screw Loose was completely oblivious to her facial. Her tongue lapped at what fell in her mouth, but that was pure instinct.

        Fluttershy: Oh, that’s nasty.

Derpy: Well, if she’s been acting like a dog, she probably drinks water like that. Makes sense.

twow: It’s horrible though.

Her unfocused eyes lolled in her head, as she was still in the throws of her orgasm. Panting heavily, Straight Lace watched the mare in front of him bounced up and down on his friend's horsepole. Straight Lace was in a euphoric high as he basked in his own orgasm.

"Good doggy," Straight Lace said, breathlessly.

        twow: “Here’s your bacon.”

The only pony left to cum was Shocker.

        Fluttershy: Wow, that’s a shock. Agh! I’m doing it now!

 Blood trickled down his nose. Screw Loose wobbled atop his stallionhood as he relentlessly thrust up into her bleeding asshole. Shocker seemed intent on causing her butt as much pain as possible for what she did to his face.

        Derpy: Because that makes sense.

        twow: Only in context.

Shocker's plan was in vain, as Screw Loose was long past the point of caring about the burning sensation in her ass. She drooled and panted as feelings of bliss surged through her sweat-stained body.

As the brown stallion approached his friend, he laughed when he saw Shocker's bloody nose.

        twow: Because when your friend is bleeding, laugh at him.

        Fluttershy: Do this two care about ANYTHING?!

        Derpy: Sex.

        twow: Blunt.

"She really gave it to you good." Straight Lace said, trying to suppress his mirth, and failing, "Maybe you should be like her and wear a mask during sex. Specifically, a catchers' mask."

Not even pausing to stop his thrusting, Shocker raised his right hoof and flipped the pony equivalent of a middle finger to the other guard.

        twow: I would bloody PAY to see how the hell that works.

Shocker could tell he was getting close.He placed his fore-hooves on either side of Screw Loose's flanks to help keep her balanced.

"I'm gonna' cum in her ass!" Shocker shouted.

        twow: As opposed to cumming in her eye?

        Derpy: Or her nose?

        Fluttershy: Is her tooth an option?

 He kept arching his back, sending the mare bouncing higher and higher, only for her to land back down on his lap. The total length of Shocker's member was repeatedly shoved up her ass. As he thrust is one last time, Shocker's balls contracted, and he came.

        All: FINALLY!

"Eeaaugh!" Shocker screamed as he shot his seed deep within the insane mare's bowels. Screw Loose's rectum clenched tightly around the cock, milking it of all its seed.

        twow: “Gonna grow me some trees with this shit.”

The sensation of being filled in the ass was too much for Screw Loose to contain. Her legs were spread wide, hanging loosely, as the blue mare started to pee. Her urine landed with a light pattering sound upon the rubber floor.

        Derpy: Do they even let her go the the bathroom?!

        twow: Yup. You just saw where.

 The two stallions stared, mesmerized at the stream.

        Fluttershy: “It’s so beautiful...”

        twow: It’s a rainbow gone so wrong.

 As she emptied her bladder the stream became thinner; its arc, shorter.

Shocker kept his dick inside while she was relieving herself and only pulled it out when he felt sure she was done.

The two ponies surveyed the mess in the room.

        Derpy: Not even a Hoover can fix this.

Screw Loose lay on her side, panting heavily. She was exhausted. In front of her was a puddle of her own piss. Next to that was a small pool of her femme jizz. The mare's drool had landed all over the floor. The crumpled, shit-stained napkin lay in the corner.

twow: Remember that last part girls, it’ll be on the test. 

DNA evidence of the two stallions was also littered around the room. Straight Lace had his jizz in Screw Loose's hair, mask and straight jacket. There were drops of Shocker's blood, and a few drops of Screw Loose's blood when he first tore into her asshole.

        Derpy: Well...

        Fluttershy: No trial will be needed.

        twow: Just as long as I can use my dagger.

As the guards looked at Screw Loose, she just kept staring at the wall. A mixture of blood and Shocker's jizz slowly started seeping out of her butt. Screw Loose let out a quick cough, before she resumed panting.

"Should we clean up or..." Shocker asked, his voice trailing off.

        twow: “Just leave it?”

"Nah, leave it," Straight Lace said, "Whatever she doesn't lick up, the orderlies will clean in the morning. They never question anything they find in here."

        twow: Fuck my LIFE.

        Derpy: Your timing twow. It never stops making me laugh.

The guards made their way to the door. Straight Lace had done this so many times, it had become routine. He walked out the door, without a second glance or a word to Screw Loose. As Shocker was leaving, he turned to look at the mare. He gave a sort of half smile.

Fluttershy: “I know where you sleep at night.” 

"Good night," Shocker said, gently. The cell door locked behind him as he joined his friend in the hall and together they continued their rounds.

        Derpy: Wait, GENTLY?! AFTER RAPE?

        twow: Well, it was kinda consensual...

Screw Loose lay there in a state of bliss, the light from the full moon slowly moving across her cell. When she got a little more energy back, she tried to lick off all the jizz that had stuck to her mask, before finally falling asleep.

        Fluttershy: I would give her such the hug.

        Derpy: Space/tine sword?

        twow: And that is our ticket to LEAVE.

        twow: Alright you two, thoughts?

        Derpy: That...was awful.

        Fluttershy: How dare they take advantage over a poor mare like that?!

twow: Because they’re sick. Granted the second guy at the end seemed to care, that’s still overshadowed by the fact that he still raped her.

        Derpy: Not to mention the horrible care Screw Loose had.

        Fluttershy: (takes deep breath)

        Pinkie: (from TV) You three did great! Then again, you always do!

        twow: Not without losing brain cells and breaking.

        Pinkie: Right. T..

        twow: It’s fine Pinkie.

Fluttershy: Be careful when you’re picking stories Pinkie. I don’t want to see twow really mad again.

        Pinkie: I’ve seen it. Not fun.

        Derpy: So have I.

        (The lab doors unlock and open.)

        Pinkie: You’re all free to go now.

        twow: Let me guess...until next time.

        Pinkie: Yup! And you might get another story from our favorite author!

        twow: Do you secretly hate me Pinkie Pie?

        Pinkie: Nope! You’re just WAY too much fun to prank! See you next time!

        (Pinkie pushes the button, and the TV turns off with a blip.)