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Applejack vs Manehattan

by iHateFridays

Chapter 8: 8. Chapter 8- The reveal

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Orange, now in Orange pegasus form flew back to the hotel. He was pretty sure the mane 5 would be arriving here, but you never know. Yes, and of course he felt guilty for tricking the pony who kissed him in a kid's show. As for our three protagonists, they were now in a secret location.


It was a jail cell made out of brass. It was very shiny. Brass chairs, tables and brass food. Yes. Brass food. The three were left in the box like room, deep underground. At least they weren't tied up anymore. But sadly, they were were split apart.

"Now this is where you will stay. Forever. Cliche evil laugh time. Mwahahahaha!" Said Big Daddy, as he locked the brass door. AJ was stared at the roof. She lost all hope now. The farm pony went over and sat in the brass bed, which was harder than Boulder. AJ cried on the inside as usual. She put her old farm hat over to the bedside table. At least she had one reminder. The farm pony shoved her face into the pillow and thought about depressing things. Because she could.


The 5 other ponies arrived at manehattan, feeling curiously excited.

"See, Rarity! Sending AJ here was a bad idea." Said the real Rainbow Dash to Rarity. The unicorn sighed.

"But it wasn't completely my idea, like I explained on the train." Said Rarity. The ponies did a boring walking scene to the city. When they got there, Rarity wanted to go to every clothes shop they passed. Sadly, they couldn't though because then this story would be really boring. They gazed at the towering buildings and all the other stuff.

"So, where is the hotel?" Asked Twilight. The ponies shrugged.

"Hey! An information center or whatever they're called! We could ask them!" Squealed Pinkie delightfully. A small station, covered in Manehattan tourist stuff was just up ahead. The ponies trotted over to it. A blue sparkly mare with a pink sparkly mane was standing in the booth.

"Hello. My name iz Zecorliette. Can I help you?" Asked the pony.

"Yes. We are looking for the Sparkly sugar daddy hotel." Said Rarity, pushing Twilight out of the way without noticing, because why not. The pony smiled.

"Ah! That iz where my little zizter workz! Her name is Zecoria. Here iz a map." Said Zecorliette. She gave the ponies a map.

"Thanks!" Said Twilight, glaring quickly at Rarity. The ponies followed the map. More boring travelling scenes. They finally arrived at the hotel. Everypony took a moment to admire this unrealistic location.

"Wow! It's just a pretty as I imagined." Said Rarity. The ponies entered inside and were stunned at the reception. They were suddenly greeted by a light tan stallion, with a puffy orange mane and a unicorn horn. He was holding diagrams.

"Hello! My name is Orange. Nice to meet you." Said Orange kindly.

"Nice to meet you too." Said Pinkie dreamily. She snorted in a giggly way.

"Well Orange, Could you lead us to Applejack?" Asked Twilight politely. Pinkie nodded.

"It's a long story, but to make it short, your enslaved farm pony friend is not here." Said Orange sadly. The mane 5 shivered. Dash pretended to look cool with it. Orange led the ponies up to his nice, pretty bedroom.

"Where is she then?" Asked Twilight. Orange used his magic, which was a familiar green colour as Twilight had seen before and he got out his diagrams.

"I am now going to tell you a story, so hold on tight. Luckily the readers have already read the story so this part is being cut out." Said Orange, as he told the story. Pinkie became overly fascinated. Dash fell asleep midway.

"So there. Now using these diagrams and magic powers we should be able to locate AJ." Said the tan pony. He had not told the ponies he was a changeling. "All I know is that she is somewhere underground."

Twilight observed his diagrams and she was quite surprised. Better than Dash's diagrams.

"We'll use a tracking spell to find AJ. Then we'll come back here. Sound good?" Said Twilight. The ponies nodded. But they were stopped by Big Daddy, who was at the door of the luxury bedroom.

"So, you plan to go after your enslaved friend? Mwahahaha. You'll never find her. Her prison is magic proof. Also, Orange is a changeling." Said Big Daddy wickedly. The ponies turned to Orange. Twilight jumped up.

"I knew it! His magic colour!" Said Twilight.

"You're a changeling?" Asked Fluttershy quietly. This shocked everypony since this was the first time Fluttershy had spoken in the whole story.

"But we banished the changelings!" Said Rainbow Dash.

"It's a long story. Besides, I'm not evil." Said Orange, turning into a changeling. Big Daddy laughed and shaked his butt.

"YOU'LL NEVER FIND YOUR FRIEND!" Laughed Big Daddy. Dash suddenly darted for the jelly-like pony and knocked him down.

"SHOW US WHERE AJ IS!" She yelled angrily. Big Daddy's assassin bodyguards pinned the blue pegasus to the ground. Rarity's horn lighted up and she shot a bolt at the bodyguards and knocked them down. She helped Dashie up. Fluttershy karate kicked a bodyguard to the ground. Twilight used her magic to freeze the rest of them. Pinkie flirted with Orange. The 4 ponies ganged up on Big Daddy.

"Where. Is. APPLEJACK!" Bellowed Dash, hovering in the sky. Big Daddy laughed.

"Do what you want. You ain't getting anything!" Said the hideous grey pony. Twilight's horn lighted up a fluro pink.

"If you don't tell us where AJ is, I'm afraid I'm going to have to use my magic on you." Said Twilight darkly. "And be honest, or else."

Big Daddy shivered back in fear. Orange and Pinkie in the corner were now doing some really inappropriate things. The large grey pony whimpered.

"Not going to say anything?" Said Twilight, her horn glowing brighter.

"NEVER!" Bellowed the Big Daddy, running out the door. Rarity lighted up her horn and she and Twilight chased after Big Daddy, followed by Dash. Fluttershy decided to stay in the room with the love birds.

"STOP!" Called Twilight, shooting a large pink bolt, leaving a burn mark on the staircase. Rarity kept shooting bolts and being over dramatic. Dash darted forward. Suddenly the ponies were abominated by a gang of assassins. Twilight had enough of this crap. Her horn glowed a bright pink.

"FREEZE!" Screamed the alicorn. Everything froze, except for Twilight. Even Dash and Rarity froze, which was kind of unfair. The alicorn stormed through the frozen rooms, consumed by her loyalty and anger. She found Big Daddy frozen.

"TELL. ME. NOW" Twilight snarled at him. Big Daddy sighed.

"Very well. She is underground in a secret chamber. The chamber is just under the reception desk. But when you come back to do something about here, things will be different. No, not my weight." Said Big Daddy, staring at a intern. Twilight smiled and everything unfroze. Yay.


That's chapter 8! This is getting so intense now! What will happen next? Will AJ survive? I think there is one more chapter coming, so be prepared for a stunner. Then I'm taking a break from writing for a bit. Anyways guys, remember to leave any suggestions or PM for a story idea!

~Ponystories

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