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Applejack vs Manehattan

by iHateFridays

Chapter 7: 7. Chapter 7- Cliche Chase scene

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AJ gasped dramatically. Big Daddy laughed.

"Nice gasp. But it won't be enough to take this hotel out." Said Big Daddy.

"Oh yes it will. We've got help coming tomorrow!" Said AJ. Big Daddy snorted.

"We'll deal with that. We've got a whole army here at Sugar Daddy's hotel." Said Big Daddy proudly.

"Well, my friends are the founders of the friendship castle and one is an alicorn!" Cried AJ, being dramatic once more. Big Daddy didn't say anything, he just smiled creepily.

"The whole reason you won is so we could get you to love my hotel. Then you would tell everypony you loved it. You're the element of Loyalty..uh I mean, Honesty. Also, your unicorn friend was apart of the plan." Said Big Daddy darkly, shaking his big tushy mush. AJ was shocked. But then the farm pony realised that Rarity must of been cliche tricked into the plan.

"Also, time for another plot twist. Orange was my spy." Said Big Daddy. AJ was even more stunned then before.

"But he's also a changeling. So maybe not all the stalking was intentional?" Asked AJ, her green eyes glowing. Big Daddy shrugged.

"I don't really know about changelings. Never went to Princess pretty pink's wedding." Said Big Daddy. The large pony shifted over to the farm pony and towered above her.

"What the heck are you doing?" Asked Applejack. The grey pony jiggled like jelly. Sort of like they sing on the shows about wobbly jelly...You know.

"Imitating you. Also, trapping you where you friends can't find you." Said Big flappy Daddy, reaching out to grab the orange farm pony. AJ dodged out the way.

"You'll never catch me alive! Or dead, since death is banned from this show." Called AJ, leaving the room in a hurried sprint.


As for Coco Pommel and Zecoria, the two mares were now torturing Orange by making him watch Equestria Girls. They were in Orange's room.

"Hey look! AJ's being chased! I love chase scenes." Said Coco, looking out the window. "Let's go watc- Uh.. I mean help her escape!" Said Coco. The two mares left the changeling tied up with the scene of Twilight meeting Rarity at full volume. They ran down the stairs and followed Big Daddy through the pretty reception. When the got out the door, Big Daddy saw them.

"You! Zecorlia! You work for me. Go and get that enslaved farm pony!" Bellowed the hotel owner, his booty jiggling like Kim Kardashian's. Zecor shook her pink pony head.

"Firzt, my name iz Zecoria. Zecond, I don't work for you anymore." Said the pink earth pony spitefully. Big Daddy growled. He called out his security and asked them to chase after the orange blonde maned earth pony. Zecoria and Coco caught a taxi to follow and watc- Uh.. I mean help AJ. They passed the many grand, grey buildings with occasional carriages of purple and gold passing by.

"Keep following thoze fat poniez! Keep thiz ztory interezting." Called Zecor. The taxi pony sighed, but Zecor gave him two gems, so he continued. They raced around a tight corner and finally managed to keep up with Big Daddy and his companions in their big black carriage with pink and gold sparkles. The hotel owner scowled when he saw the taxi carriage behind them.

"They're following us! This makes everything more cliche! SPEED UP!" Screamed Big Daddy in a harsh way. The carriage sped up. The taxi pony didn't need to be asked to sped up. He was getting in on the action and finally doing some exercise.


As for the farm pony, she had hidden underground in a sewage with a gang of turtles. The lid of the sewage exit was on the side of the road. AJ had her head slightly out, watching. She knew they'd be passing any second now. She turned her sewage covered head to the right because she heard a sound.

Then she saw Big Daddy's carriage. She hid back under. The carriage, thankfully passed overhead. So did a second one. AJ waited a few seconds. No more. The farm pony broke free and sighed of dear relief. The question was, where to next? Then in the sky, a familiar blue pegasus flew by.

"RAINBOW DASH!" Called Applejack really loudly, which was a huge mistake, as you will see in a minute. Dash looked down and flew to the earth pony. She smiled grimly and flew up again. The pegasus performed a weird symbol. A music note. When she came down again, AJ opened her mouth to question, but then she heard a screeching sound and Big Daddy's carriage came back, followed by a taxi.

"Mwahahahahahaha. Well done, my new changeling slave." Said Big Daddy Kardashian. AJ looked and no longer was Rainbow Dash, but a changeling. AJ groaned. She had been trolled. Big Daddy came down from his carriage, smiling.

"You're surrounded, AJ. Come with me now." Said Big Daddy, his tush high in the air. AJ gulped nosily, making quite a sound effect. Coco and Zecor jumped down from the taxi, which was behind Big Daddy's carriage. The mares walked around the big body guards surrounding AJ in a circle. They were at a dead end street part of the city. There was graffiti on the walls. The changeling in the corner looked kind of guilty. Zecor put her hoof on her pink sparkly forehead.

"Wait! Do not take her away! She dozen't dezerve thiz!" Cried Zecor, crying again. Coco nodded in agreement, her light blue mane swishing in the dark alley wind.

"How are you two going to stop us? You may have a plan of destroying my wonderful hotel, but we found out and we are going to in a cliche way stop you!" Laughed Big Daddy hideously. The changeling lifted it's hoof for a second, but then put it down. AJ looked at it. It glanced back. It was all so very touching. The guards closed in on the three ponies and tied them up. They picked the ponies up and loaded them in the carriage. Big Daddy laughed.

"Now you're trapped in there, you can do nothing. About your friends, we'll sort them out. Besides, we're taking you to a place where they'll never find you. Now I just need to contact that sexy pony in reception about our date." Big Daddy cooed. The other slaves cooed back. AJ sighed and looked at her companions.

"Well. We're screwed now. Nice knowing you guys." Said AJ to the two other ponies. The back of the carriage was covered in red velvet. It was quite roomy for a boot.

"I'll never forget you either." Said Coco. "I tried to help the community while I could."

"Thiz iz zo zad! I love you guyz!" Said Zecor sadly.

"Now, now. Let's not go overboard with the mushy stuff." Said AJ. And so the carriage moved on, into the dark dungeon or wherever they're going.


Orange, knew in his insect heart he would make things right. He now loved AJ more than the queen herself (Well, he loved anypony more than the queen) And he decided he would do a cliche rescue mission.

All he needed to know was, where and who where AJ's friends?


And that wraps up chapter 7! This is going so quick! This is getting exciting now, right? Will AJ escape? Will the cliche crap come true? We'll never know until the next chapter. Also, this is longest story so far on Fan Fiction. Of course, in the future I am planning to write a really long story, that's really long. I hope. Always remember to leave any suggestions in the reviews or PM me for a story request!

~Ponystories.

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