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The Prayer Warriors: Ponies In Christ

by Ebony Maria Brown

Chapter 7: The Great Struggle

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Author's note/ as I write this, I have discovered than a horrible event has happened in our nation. I pray for those affected in the cinema shootout, especially the family that have to suffer the loss of their own loved ones. I have deeply saddened for what has happened to them, and I am disgraced at this sicking event. We should be embracing each other with love, not kill each other. No other words can describe what I feel at this moment. I am truly shocked. But alas, I must continue my story.

The Great Struggle

Fluttershy stood there on the hill overlooking Ponyville – a balloon in the distance floating towards the castle that Princess Ceslestia had hid herself in. Grey crowds covered much of the castle, stopping people from seeing that much of it. She had seen it before, but was not aware of its dark and oppressive image, staring down towards the town it beleaguered. It was warm summer's day – a slight cold breeze trailing of from behind the pony. She was not used to the warm weather, with being in Nepal and having to deal with snow and the cold. The summit was pretty cold; but since she was with her friend – Spike – staring down from one of the highest places in the world she did not care about the cold.

"I hope everyone here will be proud of what I have achieved," said Fluttershy nervously. She done such a brave thing – climbing that mountain – but she wondered if they would still treat her as if she was an outsider. It was not an easy task, and converting to Christianity was even harder. She had been an atheist for all her life, and to change her religious belief will be a struggle. Throughout history, Christians have been mocked, teased and ridiculed for what they believed in, including being sent to heaven early without any choose in matter – although they accepted it anyway; they really wanted to be with God for all eternity. She knew very well that Applejack and Rainbow Dash will not be accepting of her change in heart. At least she knew Twilight Sparkle and Spike will be one her side, to support her decision – despite how much ridicule they will get as well.

"They will accept, even if it means me making them do so," Spike was extremely supportive, like all friends should be. He was her favorite person at the moment. He had helped her a lot, and was supportive the entire time she attempted to climb the mountain. Sharing the experience was the best thing to happen to Fluttershy in her entire life, besides converting to Christianity – but since they are related she could count both events as the best overall. "Let us go see Twilight Sparkle first and tell her the good news – wow, I really love that pun."

"I do as well." Since Fluttershy had converted to Christianity, she started to understand many of the jokes they used to make. Before she was ignorant, not wanting to beware of the truth, but now that she had ben unblended, she could see the errors of her way. She decided that it was about time she fixed things, and to try and convert Applejack and Rainbow Dash. These two ponies were very nice to her before and were not supportive, but they at least should have chance at accepting redemption. And since she was a very patient, persistent and persevering pony, she would not give up until they saw the light. This was her mission. Once she had done that, she planned to take on Princess Celestia herself, and end her tyrant reign. It was a hard task, but Fluttershy knew that she could do it! She was a new pony… born again!

"Let us just hope that the ridicule won't be that bad," Spike coughed – Fluttershy knew what he meant. A lot of ponies are going to laugh her. But she made her choice and decided to continue with it – embrace it to its fullest value. If she went down as a martyr, then so be it.

As she entered the town, having a cross tried around her neck, many ponies that she used to know sneered as she walked passed them. A few of them even splatted out a few rude remarks such as "You're ready to suffer the same fate as your false God" and "We will truly feed your to the lions – they will sure love a good meal, especially a Christian one - Plenty of sodalist." These comments hurt Fluttershy, but she did best to ignore them. She came towards the house of Applejack and Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash was bent down, staring up at Applejack on their front porch. He was proposing to the other pony. They had been going out for some time, so it was obvious that they would get married eventually. But it was obvious that they were going to have an atheist marriage - which is an offensive towards God, who evented marriage in the first place. Fluttershy only hoped that they could see the light before they got married, so that they could have a proper wedding that is a Christian one.

"Will you marry me," he asked her. She blushed and smiled, before hugging Rambo Dash. If it was not an appalling, horrendous, atrocious, and abysmal sight, Fluttershy would have cried a tear in happiness. But she knew right away that she had to plan to turn them to the light.

"Yes I will," she said, accepting the marriage proposal. Rainbow Dash looked very happy. He really loved Applejack and she knew it. They stared at Fluttershy, realizing that she was wearing a cross. "And she is defiantly not accepted."

"I agree," said Rainbow Dash, who looked at Fluttershy all angrily. "Get away from my house before I call the Pony Police. I have Princess Celestia on my side. And since she is the law, it means I can do whatever I want."

"I will not do so," said Fluttershy, insolently.

"Then shall be it," said the sycophantic pony Applejack, as she rushed towards the phone. "I love it when us atheist win." She gave a smirk.

To be continued…

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