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Mlp The jealous sisters

by killtheinvisibleman

Chapter 1

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Mlp:The jealous sisters

Disclaimer: I do not own mlp(my little pony) or some of the character in this story

Writers notes:This is my frist story i have written ever so do not shout at me if it is a little bad just give me some helpful advice about how to improve.

chapter 1: their frist meeting

Intro: This story takes place when the royal sisters of equestria mainly luna is older at the age in alicorn years to human years is 18 and the main six except for twilight has died and she is still depressed about it and she is 16 years old in A=H and the rest of the character are around the same age.

"Hay luna... what are doing?"Celestia says walking into Luna's room with Luna in a meditating sitting positon"Ah..." Luna says awkwardly "are you looking it to that humans dreams again are?" asking even thou she knew she was right."Ah...yes." answering knowing she can not hiding anything from Celestia. "why are you so fixated on that boy whats his name um... tom or...Thomas?" "uh his name is Thomas and i... don't why he just seems... interesting." "do you er ...like him ...like that or something?"Celestia asks wanting to know why she is so interested in Thomas. Luna blushes a little and shrugs, Celestia jaw drops at her answer not knowing what to say seeing this Luna tries make out she was kidding "only kidding it was a joke."but fails miserably"you really like him don't you."not knowing what to she tries to leave but Celestia stops and asks again wanting to know for shore Luna gives in knowing she can not hide it from her "ye...yes i do i... Think i ...lo...love him but he only knows me in his dreams what do i do please help me sis?"she starts to cry not knowing what to do with her love for Thomas "have you asked him about it yet?" "no i don't have the guts to ask him... but he has been trying bring it up in conversation i switch the topic very quickly when he does he accept me trying to change the topic and continue the conversation " "seems like he want to know how you feel about him next time just answer his question o.k." "fine o.k i will i promise"

Next time she talks to me telepathically they start by talking about each others days then I brings it up again"I want an answer to this please Luna and do not switch the conversation do ur you like me?" "ur i sorta... what do you mean?" "i mean like me ...no i can love a part of my mind like this" Luna cuts him off "I'm not part of your mind i kinda... hack into your mind " "what how,why?" "I kinda like you like that to that is why, how is I'm princess from a world call equestria and I'm an alicorn"Thomas's jaw drops "yooou ...you love me and your that Luna ah er" I pases out.

when I wake there is that girl from my dreams stand above me she then gestures to my closet I follow a bit confused by this as I walk Luna disappears in front of me making me a bit more confused and I start to run as a strang light follows me at great speed then another light appears just in front of me .

I starts running faster to get to the other light as I do another world starts to appear in front of me then intense pain fills my body and then I pass out once more .As I wake I see Luna, in her true form a black pony with one long black horn coming from her head, a black translucent flowing mane for hair and same looking tail and a mark on hip like the night sky with a crescent moon in the middle of it after viewing her entire form I look at her face she seems to doing the same as i was but i did not know why she was that was until I look at my self and find I'm a black and white pony the color spit down the middle of my body in a straight line my mane and tail were yellow and white on the white side and red and black on the black side my mark was on my hip was spit down the middle like my body was with white with half a white cloud on it and black with a red crystal star on it after I was finished looking at my self i got up and asked Luna "why I look like this?"

She simply said "I don't know why you look like that but my sister may know why shall we go see her?" "sure anything to find out why I look like this"

That is how our story starts what does all this mean for me? will Celestia know why I look like this? All these question will be answered in the next few chapter hopefully.

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