Mlp:The jealous sisters

Disclaimer: I do not own mlp(my little pony) or some of the character in this story

Writers notes:This is my frist story i have written ever so do not shout at me if it is a little bad just give me some helpful advice about how to improve.

chapter 1: their frist meeting

Intro: This story takes place when the royal sisters of equestria mainly luna is older at the age in alicorn years to human years is 18 and the main six except for twilight has died and she is still depressed about it and she is 16 years old in A=H and the rest of the character are around the same age.

"Hay luna... what are doing?"Celestia says walking into Luna's room with Luna in a meditating sitting positon"Ah..." Luna says awkwardly "are you looking it to that humans dreams again are?" asking even thou she knew she was right."Ah...yes." answering knowing she can not hiding anything from Celestia. "why are you so fixated on that boy whats his name um... tom or...Thomas?" "uh his name is Thomas and i... don't why he just seems... interesting." "do you er ...like him ...like that or something?"Celestia asks wanting to know why she is so interested in Thomas. Luna blushes a little and shrugs, Celestia jaw drops at her answer not knowing what to say seeing this Luna tries make out she was kidding "only kidding it was a joke."but fails miserably"you really like him don't you."not knowing what to she tries to leave but Celestia stops and asks again wanting to know for shore Luna gives in knowing she can not hide it from her "ye...yes i do i... Think i ...lo...love him but he only knows me in his dreams what do i do please help me sis?"she starts to cry not knowing what to do with her love for Thomas "have you asked him about it yet?" "no i don't have the guts to ask him... but he has been trying bring it up in conversation i switch the topic very quickly when he does he accept me trying to change the topic and continue the conversation " "seems like he want to know how you feel about him next time just answer his question o.k." "fine o.k i will i promise"

Next time she talks to me telepathically they start by talking about each others days then I brings it up again"I want an answer to this please Luna and do not switch the conversation do ur you like me?" "ur i sorta... what do you mean?" "i mean like me ...no i can love a part of my mind like this" Luna cuts him off "I'm not part of your mind i kinda... hack into your mind " "what how,why?" "I kinda like you like that to that is why, how is I'm princess from a world call equestria and I'm an alicorn"Thomas's jaw drops "yooou ...you love me and your that Luna ah er" I pases out.

when I wake there is that girl from my dreams stand above me she then gestures to my closet I follow a bit confused by this as I walk Luna disappears in front of me making me a bit more confused and I start to run as a strang light follows me at great speed then another light appears just in front of me .

I starts running faster to get to the other light as I do another world starts to appear in front of me then intense pain fills my body and then I pass out once more .As I wake I see Luna, in her true form a black pony with one long black horn coming from her head, a black translucent flowing mane for hair and same looking tail and a mark on hip like the night sky with a crescent moon in the middle of it after viewing her entire form I look at her face she seems to doing the same as i was but i did not know why she was that was until I look at my self and find I'm a black and white pony the color spit down the middle of my body in a straight line my mane and tail were yellow and white on the white side and red and black on the black side my mark was on my hip was spit down the middle like my body was with white with half a white cloud on it and black with a red crystal star on it after I was finished looking at my self i got up and asked Luna "why I look like this?"

She simply said "I don't know why you look like that but my sister may know why shall we go see her?" "sure anything to find out why I look like this"

That is how our story starts what does all this mean for me? will Celestia know why I look like this? All these question will be answered in the next few chapter hopefully.

Disclaimer:I don't own my little pony or some of the characters in this fan fiction

Chapter 2 the changes and old friendship different look part 1

This story starts where last left off with our main chapter Thomas going to Luna's sister to find out why he is split colored with white on one side and black on the other will our hero find out why he is like this or not ether way lets continue the story.

Me and Luna have arrived at the royal castle in Canterlot, where her and her sister live and rule over equestria from. Two pony guards in golden armor with wings are outside the door and at frist they see me they raise their spears ready to attack me then they seem shocked to see me. I was a bite faster than Luna even though it was my frist flight because the closer I got to the castle the more powerful I felt like something in that castle was powering my entire body like a battery but the further I got from Luna I got weaker so I went at the same pase as Luna but it felt weird going at that pase i felt like I needed to go faster than that it was strange. Any way it was not until the guards saw me and Luna were traveling together that they lowered their spears, one guard flew up to me and Luna, one to guide us to the castle and two to get a good look at me making me feel weird about my self but I guess a split colored alicorn is a bite weird, then the guard whispered something to Luna and she blushes then whispered something to him I think it was about me but I do not know for sure.

After we are lead into the castle we walk though a lote of corridors to a room with two chairs one with a crescent moon behind it and one with a sun behind it. the sun chair had another alicorn in it she was white like the white half of body she seemed shocked by my appearance like I was when I first found out about it then Luna ran to the other alicorn and said

"Big sister help please it's him he is strangely colored and look at his cutty mark!"that must be that thing on my hip, I realize that everyone in the room is looking at me in a strange way, the other alicorn walked closer to me and again I feel my power grow it must have something to do with Luna and her sister, while I was thinking Luna's sister walked ever closer to me till she was right in front of me any closer and we would have hit our heads together. It was kinda creepy how she looked over me then suddenly I feel my skin crawl and my body felt weird like it was changing then Luna's sister jaw dropped like she had seen a ghost then I look at my self and my fur has changed I now have bite more black fur then white and my cutty mark has changed as well it is now a bite more black and more crystal star then yellow and white cloud, then suddenly I start back to my normal split color when the rest of the room see me mainly when Luna sees me then I feel a sudden burst of power and my horn glows a faint red and blue and a ray shots out of it and hits the ground and crystal grows from where it hit it was a strange color and fear seemed to emanate from it and it grow and grow as my ray kept hitting it,I could not move and then I stoped shooting the ray then collapsed and passed out on the flour.

Chapter 3

Disclaimer i don't own the my little pony or some of the characters in this story

Hi sorry i have not updated in a while its because i wanted to improve vocab for this story also I need help with chapter names so can you please suggest some in the reviews and i will also be adding a new character this chapter I hope you like him and the person who it is based on is OK with how i have protrade him as a pony he is based off a friend of mine.

This chapter start after our hero wakes after he passed out last chapter so here is:

Chapter 3 the changes and old friendship different look part 2

When I woke I was in a crystal dome made of the crystal I had grown before I heard some voices out side of the dome a loud voice and two weaker voices. I walked over to the edge of the dome and side of the dome opened like a door then I walked out and saw the size of the crystal I had grown ,it just fit in the room then I heard two deep voices shout.

"halt" I turn to the direction of the voices from and there was two guards running at me with angry faces they seem to be mad at me for growing the crystal I then run to the huge crystal and like the dome it opens in front of me and when I ran in the door closes after me then I see why they were so mad I had surrounded the princesses in the crystal traping them in it they both saw me started to back against the wall the their horns glowing and then I stopped they both fired at me but a wall grow in front of me to protect me from the blast then fell back to the flour, all three of us looked shocked that this happened then they charged up another blast I quickly said

"NO NO NO NO ,don't shot I mean no harm, I don't know what I did or how I did it" I try to tell them Luna stoped charging and walkover to me and asked in an almost silent voice

"Do you really mean that" I answer in the same almost silent voice

"Honestly I don't know how or why this happened but it did so please don't be mad at me for it, I'm new to all this Luna, you should know that the most."

"I guess you are right about that and I...I trust you."

"What just like that you trust him, I know how you feel about him but really just like that?"

"yes I do because one he does not know how to control his magic so this could happen to him at any time and two he was extremely nice and good in his dimension"

"Wwwait what do you mean this could happen at any time, are you saying I'm unstable in this dimension or something."

"Well that seems to be true but we will work this out together." Luna placed her hoof over my hoof to encourage me to calm down.

"I..I..I can't stay here...I, don't want to take the chance of hurting anyone... especially not you Luna so I'm going to go back to my dimension, now how do I get back Luna?"

"I don't know how to get you back." Luna states with a few sweat beads on her head.

"I can tell when you are lying Luna so tell him how to get back to his world"

"But tia..."

"No buts he needs to go Luna!"

"But but..."

"Luna send him back!"

"FINE"as soon as she says this a portal opens " but I'm going with him" then she pulls me with her through the portal this time the transport though dimensions was instant. as before the world loaded around me when it was loaded Luna was holding my hand still pulling me then I realized I had hands again I ran to my mirror to check I was the same as when I left and I was except for my eyes one red and the other was gold. I stud there looking at my self for what felt like hours then Luna taped me on the shoulder to turn around and at frist she did do not see what was wrong until she saw my eyes. the only thing I could say is

"what, is wrong, with my eyes?!"

"again I don't know and there is no way I'm going back to my sister for help"

"OK fine but two question one why did you come with me and two how am i going to explain all this to my parents?"

"oh ya I kinda wanted to be with you...and you still live with your parent wow"

"ya well at lest i still have my parents"Suddenly i realized what I just said and instantly regretted it"oh...ya...I..I'm sorry luna I didn't mean it's just all this...I just got angry and lashed out at you the pony, human what ever i love and I'm very sorry"

"i get it your mad but what am i supposed to say to that...that was just over board and...and ...wait how do you know about my parents?"

"Nothing just a guessed honestly"I said as fast as humanly possible while a few sweat beads formed on my fore head.

"come on tell me how you know about me with out magic, I answered your questions" she said knowing I was hiding something and she was right if my mum had not called me just then i would be done for.

"that's my mum calling me got to go"before she can say another word I ran out of the room and down the stairs to my mum in the living room , she was still in her work cloths just laying on the coach,

"Thomas!"

"I'm here mum stop shouting"

"oh sorry I heard a loud thud up stairs from your room are you o.k?"

"I'm fine I just dropped my money box I need to start spending some of that so remind me to take some to town next time I go k"

"I guess but...wait I can hear something up stairs...it's coming from your room isn't it?"

"no it sounds like it is coming from your room maybe dads getting up I'll go check k"

I raced to say as I ran back to my room like grease lightning as I ran in and closed the door behind me I turned to see Luna was wearing a royal gown with her crescent moon on it also it looked as if it were hand sticked with great skill and feyness on her brow she war a crown made of some smooth dark crystal with a white crescent moon carved into it with no mistakes like it was made by the Gods them selves, as I looked at her my jaw dropped as if I was looking upon a Goddess of beauty her self.

At that moment I wanted to say something romantic but all that came out was"you...look..."

But then she interrupted me and said"I know it's not my best dress but it looks o.k right?"

"o.k...o.k,it looks gorgeous I have not seen a more beautiful dress in my life ,do you want to know something too, the only thing more gorgeous than that dress is the one wearing it, you"I replied in a romantic voice as I said the last part she started to blush

"OH STOP IT YOUR MAKING ME BLUSH!"she blurted as if she was talking into three megaphones in succession then she quickly covered her mouth and apologized for being so loud with two bright red blush marks on her checks.

We started laughing about it when it suddenly ochered to me that she had nocked over some of my stuff with her voice then I herd my mum walking up stair

Quickly I start talking to my self about a plan of action then it hit me"Luna can you teleport if so teleport to the place I'm thinking of o.k"

"I guess I can but are you shore you want me to?"

"yes quick!"

"o.k, your choose"

Then she held my hand and we were gone in a blink of an eye, we were suddenly going though space to our destination with what looked like shouting stars around us and in that instants we looked into each other eye and it felt like we were falling in love all over again and we sealed our love with a long, romantic kiss.

It must have been while we were kissing that we arrived at our destination a friend of mine's house and we were interrupted when we heard a voice say

"um who are...how are...THOMAS what in the world! one who are you kissing and two how did you get here!?"

I looked to wards the source of the questions and feel relief at the site of my best friend Brandon.

"dude if I told you, you would not believe me but then again knowing you you might"

"o.k that means it is highly unbelievable, come on tell me"

"o.k but remember i did just warp in kissing a beautiful girl"

"oh stop it you'll make me blush"Luna stated again

Then I told my story to my friend who at first was a bite skeptical then remembered i do not joke about this stuff well not especially this but love in general so he kept listening and by the end of the story his look was priceless, like a young child walking in on their parents doing it, yes that shocked but seemed most interested in Luna's sister she said that her sister name was princess Celestia and she and her controlled the kingdom of Equestria and the fact that they controlled the sun and moon.

Which i found very cool as i was dating a magnificent, powerful, beautiful princess with a heart of gold but i knew her darkest secret a secret that a would neve tell anyone who did not know already.

I hope you enjoyed this chapter and I how you review and tell me how i can improve my story please and may be some chapter names may help.

Chapter 4 the dark secret part 1

I will try to write more you guys and girls if i can get more reviews please but i while keep trying to improve my writing skills as much as i can and we a cross over in the future or is it the past or is it now? Any way lets start this chapter

After me and Luna were done explaining it came time for my friend Brandon to make a decision wether or not to come back to Luna's dimension with us but Luna did not know of my plan at that time so when Luna was distracted with something I asked Brandon

"do you want to go to her dimension with us?"

At frist he was hesitant but he answered

"o.k what do i do?"

"good, frist we need to convince Luna, so how do you suppose we go about this?"

"what?! You have not asked her"

"Asked me what Thomas"

"oh, um, what do you eat, or what do you like to eat?"

"oh i normally eat dandelion sandwiches, why?"

Then it suddenly sprung to my mind a plan to get to her universe or her dimension still it is not clear which one it was

"well we don't have them here so should we go back to get some food for you or some of your belongings from that world?"

With out food she would die of starvation so she had to go back and we would come with her

"well i guess i am quiet hungry so ya i guess, but what do you eat here in this world?"

"lotes of things, mainly meat but not fish, fish are gross but we do also eat fruit and veg like apples, pears and bananas well i hate pears but some people eat them so my species is an omnivore race, what about yours?"

She a few second to analyze what just said with a lot of ums and eh but then she answered me

"we are a herbivore race witch means..."

"oh so you don't eat meat or fish and only eat fruit and veg?"

She looked a bite stunned at how i butted in and said what she going to explain but quickly said

"yes that is right but how do you know so much about this stuff?"

"oh don't get him started, he will go on and on about it for literally ages, oh and since you did not ask, my name is Brandon so are you going to answer his question? are we going to go back to your world or not?"

She then thought about it and replied

"yes i think we must but not back to Canterlot somewhere else maybe..."

"what about Ponyville? I hear it is nice this time of year"I asked then I realized what i said but before I could change my sentence

"what did you just say?...and wait HOW did you know about my parents earlier, HOW do you know so much about me with out magic of any kind in your world? HOW!?"

She shouted but i had no way out but i was trying to think of what to say. There was only one thing I could tell her to keep her sain or to not completely kill me. The one thing i had kept from her... The truth. I just had to tell her so i did but to say it was awkward as hell was an understatement.

"o.k Luna i will tell you how i know or would you rather i show you" indicating to the computer in Brandon's room that he was sat at. She looked at me with a rather confused look on her face. Then slowly nodes her head still quiet confused. I reached over to a chair and dragged it closer to the computer as i to open the web browser. The box to write your search in appeared on the screen.

I stoped just about type in my little pony princess Luna.

"why did you stop? Continue what ever you were doing."

"o.k but only under one condition...what ever comes up know that i love you."

"o.k that means this something bad isn't it?well it could not be that bad"so with a grim facial expression i continued typing it in and pressed enter. Soon all manner of sites and images appeared some good and some not so good. Luna's face turned white as a ghost yet her cheeks instead turned a scarlet red as she saw some images which were of an explicit nature and started muttering something under her breath yet i still heard her

"h-h-how did you get these pictures?" as she turned her head to face me still blushing and still very pale. The worst thing is that i had to tell her how i did not have them the world did. This was going to awkward to say the lest but i could not stop now.

"Luna thing is that"my mind was racing with thoughts of how to brack it to her this made my speech quicken and i started to mumble "that...this entire dimension can see these images when ever they want from one of these boxes...or some box that are... smaller and more easy to be moved soooooooooo yyyyaaaaa thats a thing. Luna..." i start to notice her becoming a bit off balance. Then she start to fall and i screemed"LUNA NO!" luckily i kicked back on my chair ,which was thankfully a swivel chair with wheel feet, just in time to catch her mid fall so she was fine. Though i felt terrible that i did that to her but she had a right to know about it still...

"so now what Thomas we have a fainted princess of the night from another dimension in my bed room what will we do?"Brandon asked sarcastically.

There was a short pause then I answered a bite bewildered about how she had reacted and replied

"Brandon stop it we need to get her to...to...to...where do we take her to a doctor, a veterinarian or mythology maiger?"

"I have no idea but shes your girlfriend...fillyfriend, what ever i don't know, your the brains so think of something"

A bite angry about how he reacted to her passing out yelled at the top of my lungs

"SHUT UP!"

The only thing i heard after was Brandon muttering

"what the?"

And then a deafly silence ran though out the room...

To be continued.

Sorry it took so long to post this but I'm buried in school work so i don't know how long it will take to write the next chapter which will be the dark secret part 2. Hope you enjoyed:)

Chapter 5 dark secret part 2

I awoke to a ringing in my ears and luna still passed out in my hooves...'wait hooves again?' Was the first thing that happen came to my mind then it hit me 'how was i here again? luna was passed out in my arms so she couldn't of done it' then the last conservation i had with Brandon and that deathly silence afterwards hit me but i decided to find out where in equestria we were.

I almost didn't notice the white pegasus with a golden main laying on the ground next to us he was oddly familiar like i saw him before then i dawned on me it was Brandon but that wasn't just it about him then i saw it his cutty mark, it was what i presume the full white version of my cutty mark was

"but if that is one half then what about the other half"i looked at my cutty mark to see it was complete"its..its..its complete. Does this mean i'm finally stable"

"wa...what was that Thomas"i turned to see my best friend Brandon in his new form.

"looking golden dude"

"uh what do you mean?"he said while rubbing his eyes trying to focus.

"well look at you gold boy"i noticed his fur had a slit gold tint to it 'he kind of looked like he had rolled in butter' came to mind when i saw him.

"what are you...oh"he had a good look over himself and realized what i was talking about. he looked up from his new form to look at me jaw dropped. I leaned forwards, put my hoof under his chin and raise it up to shut his mouth before something when in there.I quickly remembered about luna and there was only one thing that came to mind 'she needs to get to a hospital quickly'.

Brandon looked at me and just shock his head, as if we had just had a long detailed conversation about what to do, then in a flash we were off carrying luna between us as we both caused a simultaneous sonic boom.

On the way we saw rainbow dash and then passed her as she was doing one of her sonic rainboom, some on looks were awe struck at which the speed we were traveling but there was only one problem stopping which was difficult to say the lest but somehow it came naturally to as if we were of one mind it had been that way the entire trip to Ponyville, though there was no time to waste thinking about it we had to act.

As we landed in front of Ponyville hospital Brandon let go of Luna panting while I carried her in, following quickly behind after catching his breath. The receptionist looked to be doing a word puzzle as we entered but quickly trotted over to see who i was carrying on my back as she noticed the limp form of Luna she gasped in shock. She hurried me with Luna still on my back to a private room with single hospital bed in it which I genitally placed Luna. I noted a wooden chair sat next to the bed and I collapsed into passing out.

As I awoke I saw a hole squad of batlike royal guards holding spears up to my head and chest some prodding me into the land of the living looking to my left i saw Luna was stable. my hoof felt warm as if being held and as i looked down at it i saw Luna holding it. I thought it was strang at first that she was holding it but as i went to lift my hoof away her vitals began to slip and as i held it close again as if on qu her vitals stabilized. Everyone let out a sigh in unison and the spears fell for a split second that was my chance to explain.

"I can't move from her side or you know what will happen" which came with a lot of "what why not" and then ever guard who said it instantly got a hit or a weak magic shot to the back of the head with a succession of "ows" and "ahs". I could see over the guards heads to see Brandon on his knees with Celestia stand next to him, i could swear i saw Celestia looking over Brandon lustfully but then i thought i saw Brandon doing the same thing but i think Brandon had a better view of her then she did of him.

Once the guard stood up again and put the spears to me again i simply made a dagger for each spear out of crystal and sliced the tip of each of the spears with pinpoint accuracy and then proceeded to drive the daggers down the length of the spears shattering them to peaces in the guards hands. At first they were in disbelief at my power and stepped back a few in fear but as they saw no continuation of my attack they were dumbfound. I simply looked at them and rolled my eyes but inside i was as dumbfound as they were to how i knew how to do that as i had never used magic purposefully before or the fact it was so precise and well made it even had my cutty mark engraved on the blade perfectly, the daggers still flouting in midair were comprized entirely of a red crystal which pulsed a soft glow of dark purple not unlike Luna's coat but i did not notice all that much as i did not need them any more so they dissipated in front of me into a red dust that flouted away in the gentil breeze that flowed through the room.

The princess appeared to have missed the entire thing as she was still looking over Brandon and so to was Brandon but when a guard final came to the conclusion that they could be like this for a while if not interrupted, he coughed which seemed to have woke her from her thoughts or some will say fantasy. As she noticed the broken splinters on the floor and stepped forwards in front of Brandon and i could swear i saw his eyes widen and cheeks flush as the princess moved her tail to one side. After giving him a glance over her shoulder i tried to tell what they were doing but the princess moved in front of my view of Brandon blocking my view of Brandon with her tail. I gave a sigh of annoyance as she began

"It has been three days since you left with Luna and now you come back..."

"THREE DAYS its been at lest 30 minutes to us what are you talking about and i was trying for those 30 minutes to get Luna back here. And what did you do to get her back, i get her back in 30 minutes it takes you three day how does that work out for you. Does it scream bad sister or what, good princess, bad sister so we know which is more important to you then don't we?"there was a short pause as she tried to make a viable excuse that she use but failed.

"...i...i was scared alright, i have never been to an other dimension o.k and i wanted to go but with out me either crops will not grow or they will burn so i was stuck o.k, i was scared what was i ment to do?"she stated angrily tears in her eyes as i gave a gentil laugh.

"there we go i finally i under stand how you truly fell, that you have to be mis perfect with her perfect kingdom, but now i see through your mask to see that you don't have a perfect kingdom because if you did then could have left it up to mis sparkle and some powerful unicorns to control the moon and sun how you wished them to or something like that but no you discide to act as if nothing is wrong like Luna has just been sleeping this entire time as if she did not go to an other dimension with some what of a stranger, and, and didn't even go and check if she was alright for three days. No no by the look on your face i can tell that i'm not hitting home let me swing a gain so it must your to weak to open a portal to another dimension, oh it is isn't it ha i was the last one to open a portal but two make it the first try no not even try to but by accident so how close am i oh did i hit a home run"all that escaped her mouth was a faint.

"home run"

As she ran off at break net speeds towards the exit crying but i saw this coming and prepared accordingly by adding a crystal walls on the other side of the door, windows and even the walls including the ceiling and floor she was traped with her feelings i could fell them growing inside her dreed, fear, longing for forgiveness for love for a love i felt it all like a tidal wave of emotional energy washing over me which i sent to the crystals on reflece which glowed a strange color of gray, more of a pinkie purply color like part of her mane. And in all the questions and arguing we did not notice that Luna was awake which must have been an unnerving situation to wake up to the stallion she loved and her only sister her only family like that. Me a methodical strategist and her normally came sister in tears. I guess that was my darkest secret that deep down i had a truly evil methodical mind that can make anyone bust into tears

Chapter 6 part of my soul

Authors note:

Lets carry on and again if anyone who reads this thinks i can improve my writing in some way shape or form please post it in a review or something (i do enjoy getting things like 'great chapter' 'i loved it' and stuff of the like as well so please post them in reviews if you want but if you don't it's o.k as well i guess but please review i need them for inspiration well 'need' is a strong word but ya i really like them so please post review)but do not i repeat do not post hate reviews like 'this is terrible' or 'you are gay' i have not got any at the point i am writing this so i hope it stays like that any way i hope you enjoy this chapter and way too long intro aside is should be a good chapter on the bad points of this relationship between Thomas and Luna.

We rejoin the story where we left off

Story:

As luna awoke i imagine she saw her dear sister in a mess on the floor crying her eyes out while her love simply looked at her with a slight smirk as if in some way victorious over her. Then I spoke with out thinking it my self i almost screamed.

"WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER!"clear rage in my voice. Everyone in the room was shocked by my sudden outburst which stopped celestia from her crying and even made me jump back in my seat then i said with out thinking again.

"did i just make him say that?" i started thinking how this is happening then it struck me what if i try to talk so i tried.

"hello, am i back in control of my mouth"and was i more than a little surprised who said it.

It was Luna. As we all looked at Luna and i spoke again

"hello testing one, two, three this is er"that was a thought what would i call myself here so i came up with the best name i could come up with on the spot "em, crystal...ehm, star, ya crystal star speaking out of Luna's mouth". It felt weird saying it and not only as it was coming out of Luna's mouth, it was like that name was the name i always had like it was a part of my very soul as if with out it i would not be me, or well not the same me anyway.

"What is going on here, why am i speaking out his mouth and him out of mine, this does not make any sense how is this happening and what did you do to my sister ,Celestia, hardly ever cries and even then it is for good reason, like hundreds of her subjects being slattered in front of eyes in the great war she weeps only barely in public, not just from you saying something to her so what did you DO?!" this was all to true but how would i , no how could i explain to Luna what i did if i did not know my self but Luna jumped to conclusion "did you use magic on her did you...you"she took a brief pause. Then yelled, a sound of pure anger and rage so powerful it smashed ever window in a 16 blocks area around the hospital and i was at the epicenter, my ears were bleeding and all i could hear was one phrase "YOU HERT HER!"

I lost consciousness not soon after the nurses rushed in to see what had happen and as soon as they saw me they became pale as i fainted. I only have blurry images of ponies rushing around me after that.

When i woke up i found 5 things in my room Brandon, some get well soon cards and balloons, handcuffs on my hoof and Luna. She must have been waiting for me to wake up but at the time with what i could remember i was freaking out. I tried to undo my cuffs with my magic but it felt like it was being blocked and i was too weak to try again so i decided to try to wake Brandon up but he was handcuffed to the chair by his left hoof so when i got him up he started to raise his right hoof but it had another pair of handcuffs on but it was attacked to something and what i thought was just the floor was in fact Celestia. So i quickly tried to tell Brandon to put his hoof down but the damage was already done. Celestia was getting up looking as if she had been up for days on end. The first thing i did was freak out and try to look like i was still asleep but i knew that was not going to work but i had to try. But before i could close my eyes completely i felt her gaze him me it was like two beams of sun light hitting my flesh they traced up my body to my head were they rested over my now closed eyes.

"open your eyes crystal star i know your awake."Celestia stated flatly. I opened my eyes slowly looking towards where Celestia was but when i open my eyes i saw Celestia looking at me our muzzles five inches from each other. I gave a gulp and my mouth felt dry i was thinking of a good sentence to break the silence with and luckily one came to mind.

"h-how long have i been out for?"I questioned looking to sound a bit groggy to make out i did not remember much at all which was not exactly false.

"you have been out for seventeen days in a coma, anything else?" she stated as flatly as before but with a ting of annoyance in her voice as well. I gingerly ask fearing she may send me to the moon for a thousand years for just speaking to her after everything that happened.

"Are you and everyo,eh everypony, ok after what happen?I mean you don't look to good."oh, how i wish i had not asked that question maybe "can i have some water?"or "what happen?" would have been better but then she went completely screamed at me with a voice a lot less loud but just as anger as Luna did out of my mouth

"NO, YOU CAUSE FITHY MILLION BITS WORTH OF DAMAGE IN ALL I HAD TO MAKE A PUBLIC ANNOUNCEMENT SAYING SORRY FOR WHAT ,YOU, HAD DONE AND THE WORST THING YOU DID WAS THAT YOU BUCKING MADE LUNA REGRET WHAT SHE DID AS SOON AS YOU FAINTED SHE WAS BY YOUR SIDE SAY SORRY, BUCKING SORRY FOR WHAT YOU MADE HER DO!"she seemed to calm and stop screaming and said"and your punishment is...LIFE ON THE BUCKING MOON!"she screamed as her calm exterior shattered while her horn was glowing gold and eyes white she cast the spell on me.

And puff, i was on the moon. When i frist arrived i noticed two thing, one there was no pony or creatures around and two there was a gigantic castle off a head of me as two words slipped out my mouth.

"oh buck"