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My Little Pony: Uncommon Connection

by Spitfire1994

Chapter 1: 1. Chapter 1: Just a dream

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Before anyone reads I'm letting you know that it's written in a combination of traditional paragraph form, which most of everyone is familiar with already, and script form. I'm not sure how reader's take to the script form but try and bare with me on it. It's kind of a requirement in my field so I have to use it as much as possible and fan work seems like a good place to start. I'm hoping with this style you will truly get involved with the story since in script form actors (or whoever) tend to truly get involved and become apart of the story themselves. So try your best to get into character, ok? Lol.

I wrote this a long time ago so it's rather short but it gets longer as the story goes on. I draw inspiration from my favorite PS2 games Kingdom Hearts and Kingdom Hearts II so you'll be seeing some references here and there, hopefully you smile if you see them because the game is just so good. I've also gotten writing inspiration from another author, SHONENJUMPBOY, he also made a My little Pony fic and I really liked it and I really recommend you check him out if you're interested in reading a good MlP story. I also got inspiration from him and I need to be sure to thank him one of these days.


In a small house in Philadelphia on a rainy day five teens sat in a room playing video games at the back of the house. There were three T.V's but only two of them were being used. One T.V was connected to an Xbox 360 and on the other the PlayStation3 was connected. Two boys were on the 360 and two others were on the PS3 and the last boy was sitting on the bed occupying his laptop. The two guys who were on the 360 were Marcus and Khalil and on the PS3 were Denvor and André. A name from Denvor was called "Babe". The boy on his laptop looked up to see who called him.

Babe: What's up?

Denvor: Are you alright?

Babe: Yeah. I'm cool, just checking facebook.

Denvor: You want to play BlazBlue with us?

André: Nah. I'm done.

André had said as he stood up stretching.

André: I'm going home.

Denvor: What time is it?

André (looking at his phone): 1:00AM

Khalil: It's that late already? Guess I'll go home too.

Babe: Hell. I'm getting tired myself. So Marcus, Denvor you're going to have to leave too.

Marcus: Fine.

Denvor: No problem.

The boys got up and were getting ready to leave. Denvor ejected the BlazBlue game from the PlayStation3 and placed the disc inside the Continuum Shift case. He placed the game inside his hoodies pocket which was just the right size for holding the case. After helping clean and straightening up the room André, Denvor, Khalil and Marcus headed for the front door, Babe walking behind them.

André: Hey Babe, can I get a Swiss roll?

Babe: Sure. Just get money and go to the store.

André: Never mind…

Babe let out a friendly laugh as they approached the front door. After giving their goodbyes for the day Babe closed the doors behind them and locked up. Now that he thought about it the day went by rather quickly. He went back to his room and turned off the two T.V's. He sat back on his bed and finished up the last few things he had to do on his laptop before closing it and placing it in his book bag. He turned off his room light and jumped back onto his bed. "Wow. I don't think I've ever been this tired" Babe said to himself lazily as he slowly drifted asleep. He didn't bother to change into his night clothes since he was way too tired.

"It seems like people ignore what they don't want to see even if it's another person in need. I can't help but wonder if all creatures are like this." A voice came into Babe's head. He began to wake up due to the mysterious voice. He opened his eyes and saw his clothes waving in the air. He slowly managed to turn around and what he saw made his eyes widen in horror. He was falling from the sky and heading down toward the Earth below.

Babe: AAAAAAAHHHH-Oh wait…this is just a dream. I've got nothing to worry abo-

Before he could finish his sentence he face planted into the Earthy soil. By some miracle he managed to rise up from the ground with dirt on his face. The only pain he felt was minor facial pain but he managed to shake it off.

Babe: Ouch. That was one hell of a drop. (Looking up at the sky) Strange I've never dreamt of falling before. Hm, well, there's no point in asking how I survived since it's all just a dream and what not. I wonder if I could go Super Babe and fly.

Babe smiled before standing on one leg while the other was held up nearly touching his chest. He was holding his fist up into the air while the other fist was by his side. He had the hero stance right but no flight. He quickly realized he lacked the ability to fly.

Babe: Ok, so I can't fly. I guess I'm walking in this dream...man that sucks. But where am I? It seems cartoony around here.

It didn't take long for his eyes to catch a glimpse of a town in the distance. He had set his sights on the nearby town and began jogging to his destination. After about a mile of jogging he finally reached the town. He didn't even notice he walked past a sign that said, "Welcome to Ponyville".

He continued to wander around until he discovered the town's square where, much to his surprise, there were candy colored…ponies. There were lots of them, ranging from size and color, some with horns and some with wings. After walking into the town square, Babe looked around trying to understand his "dream" completely.

The ponies in the town square were standing in shock and slight fear. They'd never seen anything like him before.

Babe (looking around): Wait…this can't be. There's only one way to make sure.

Babe looked around the square searching for something. He looked high and low for what he was searching for, and after a few more seconds of looking around, his eyes locked onto the sight of a light sapphire bluish-gray pony with a pale, light-yellowish mane. The pony was female by the looks of it, but her most distinctive trait was her yellow- walled eyes and wings.

Babe: This is…yes, this is it! I'M IN EQUESTRIA!

The sudden outburst caused all the ponies in the square to panic. They ran for shelter- back to their homes, or into nearby buildings and stores the owners were kind enough to let them into for protection. Babe looked in confusion, as he didn't understand why they were running. The entire square was cleared out, and no pony was in sight. He stood in the center of the town's square and took one more look around.

Babe: Where's everypony going? Bingo? Well, it doesn't matter I-oh damn, why do I suddenly feel so fatigue? I…I can't be waking up…

Babe collapsed to his knees and fell over on his front. He laid out on the ground.

Babe: I can't wake up yet…Uh…

His vision began to fade and he was barely keeping his eyes open. He tried to fight off his awakening, wanting to be in his Equestria dream world a little longer but it was pointless as his eyes closed and he laid on the ground.

To be continued


Short, I know. I swear it'll get longer XD. Reviews are nice, so if you feel like reviewing and letting me know what's wrong would be cool. It's not a requirement(of course) it'll just be helpful. Though I'm not sure how helpful since I already finished writing this story.

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