Beauty Unicorn and the Demon Pony
Chapter 1: 1. Prologue: A Demon beginning
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In honor of the recent 3-D re-release of Beauty and the Beastin theaters, I will do a second fanmake of it, with My Little Pony characters in the role. I have been waiting a while to do this so let's begin.
Prologue: A Demon beginning
As our story begins, we see a forest with animals doing their natural thing and a deer drinking from the creek. But our focus right now is on a beautiful castle that is home of a prince...but let's the narrator explains, shall we?
As we see many portraits on the castle's outside, the narrator spoke, "A long time ago, in a faraway place of Equestria, there lived an Earth Pony prince."
We see an Earth Pony prince, looking selfish and vain on the first stain glass window.
"And while he had everything that his heart has desired, the prince himself was spoiled, selfish, unkind, and cares only for himself."
We now see another stain glass window that shows some sort of old female unicorn arriving at the castle, much to the prince's annoyance. We see her showing a beautiful red rose to the Earth Pony.
"Then, one winter's night, an old beggar female unicorn came to the castle, asking for shelter from the bitter cold with a single rose in return."
Of course, the Earth Pony prince frowns as he turns away the old unicorn, trying to dismiss her.
"Disgusted by her haggard appearance, the prince just sneer at the gift and turned the old woman away. Of course, she warns him not to be deceived by appearance as beauty can be found within."
As predicted, the selfish prince closes the door on her, dismissing the old female unicorn once more. That proves to be a mistake as we see her transform. The Earth pony looks stunned and horrified as he saw that she has transformed into a beautiful alicorn with a long mane named Princess Celestia.
"And when the prince dismissed her once more, the old female unicorn's ugliness disappears, revealing herself to be a beautiful magical alicorn named Princess Celestia. The prince tried to apologize but, alas, it was too late for she has seen that there was no love in his heart..."
And thus, we see Princess Celestia sternly tapping her horn onto the shameful boy. Two stained glass windows saw that the hooves become hideous and with claws to boot.
"As punishment for his action, Princess Celestia transformed the Earth Pony prince into a hideous Demon Pony, as well as placing a powerful spell on the castle, along with those who live there."
We now see the present as the castle is now darker and covered with dark clouds...of hatred and such. Inside a room of the place, the former Earth Pony prince, now a Demon Pony, growls as he slashes a picture of himself with his claws before turning away in shame and despair.
"Ashamed of how monstrous he has become as well as his selfish actions, the Demon Pony concealed himself in his own castle, using a magic mirror as his only window to the outside world that seems to have forgotten him."
We now see the mirror that glows a bit, along with a familiar rose inside a glass container. That flower is the same one that Princess Celestia offered and allow him to keep despite his rejection before...there is a way to break the spell on him but only through a certain way.
"The rose that Princess Celestia had offered was in fact an enchanted rose which would continue to bloom until the Demon Pony's 21st birthday."
We go to outside the castle with thunder and rain continuing onward.
"If the Demon Pony could ever learn to love another, and earn her love in return by the last petal fall...then the spell would be broken. If not, the Earth Pony would be doomed to remain a Demon Pony forever. As the years passed however, it appears that he has fallen into despair and lost all hope...for who could ever learn to love...a Demon Pony?'
Author's note
Wow, what a sad beginning; I betcha things would get better, right? In the next chapter, we meet the heroine, Twilight Sparkle, as she heads into Ponyville while a musical number is played. We also meet the arrogant Boris, who wants to marry her, as well as his goons Dum-Dum and Boxco, as well as Twilight's father Dusk Shine (I just found the name at a wikipedia site, not official yet). Read, review and suggest.
I already got the gang for this story so no suggestions (unless it's for minor characters and suggest) from anyone. And of course, I already decided on what the servants are transformed into.