K, not totally sure of doin' this...

I may have uploaded weird stuff in the past but...

this is goin' off my own limits...

MLPFiM...

weird though awesome...

I'll do it waiting for people to critisize me...

I'll do it waiting for flames...

I'll do it 'cuz I like the show...

I'LL DO IT BECAUSE I AM A BRONY!

And, FYI, I have an OC for every, and I mean every, show I like!

OC?

He's here

OC:

Name: Jay "The Dashing Fire"

Age: 19

Colour:

Fur: Red

Mane and tail: Dark Red

Mark: A golden flare

Eyes: Blue

Details: He wears black glasses, he's a counsin of Applejack and Big Mac'

Note: if writen in "Italics" it's the tought of each character

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A normal day, at the "Sweet Apple Acres" farm, a honey haired mare with a hat over her head was walking to a little mailbox little knew it was in fron of her house. She was looking at the letters that arrived from very early in the morning.

"Only two letters today?", she asked herself smiling "Okay, lemme see, letter from princesses Celestia and Luna? Sounds important, but... I'll read it later.", she said putting the letter over her hat, "Then we have a letter from- Oh my gosh!" she gasped and ran to the house

Once in the house the mare began looking around trying to find a way to wake up her enormous family.

"Aww... c'mon, there must be a way of waking them up... think... think... think!", the hatted mare thought to herself

After a while of thinking she realized what to do, she grabbed a horn, a very big one to tell the truth and blew it, waking up everypony in the house and some from one or two of the houses around

"What's up Applejack? Is there a fire?" Big Makintosh, Applejack's big brother, said walking slowly from his room to the hall

"No, Mac, I have something to anounce! It's a letter from counsin Jay" the mare said putting the letter over a table

When all the family was around, some of them sleeping over Big Mac's back, Applejack, the hatted mare cleared her throat and read the letter

"Dear Family,

How's it goin', I just sent this little letter to tell you guys that I'm gonna have vacations from my studies an I'll go to Ponyville soon,

I'll stay for one or two moths and that's all, hope you're all doing great, prepare a room for me

Signed: Jay"

Right when Applejack finished reading everypony in the house was crazily moving things here and there to get the house ready for their counsin. The hours went through and some other ponies went to Applejack's house, to se how was she doing. Twilight Sparkle, a mare with a purple coat and a dark purple mane, who apparently guided the group, knocked the door

"Weird" Twilight said "usually Applejack's at the door when I knock"

Soon enough the named pony went running through the door carrying some stuff, and led them in with no words, all the family was very active

"Uuuh... Applejack? what are you doing?" a yellow coated and pink maned pony named Fluttershy asked as a pillow fell over her head

"I'm getting ready for my counsin's visit" the hatted mare said grabbing some stuff from a table

"Who's is this counsin of yours?" a blue coated and rainbow maned pony named Rainbow Dash asked

"His name's Jay" the mare said getting over a table and putting a photo of her counsin over it before running to a room and putting all the stuff she had been moving around there

The girls took a look at the photo, in which they saw - What they tought - a very handsome pony, he had a red coat of fur, a red an yellow mane just as his tail, his shiny blue eyes, with black glasses that made them shine even more and his mark, a golden fire. When the hatted mare went to the table, she took a look at her friends. They were drooling at the sight of the stud

"Wow..." all said in unisone

"What? it's just my counsin" Applejack said grabbing the photo and putting it in her hat

"Your counsin is so handsome" a white coated and purple maned mared named Rarity said with the typical "I fell in love" look on her face

"Whatever you say, I don't know when is my counsin coming here and I need to be ready" Applejack said

"Need our help?" Fluttershy asked with a kind smile on her face

"Aaaaaaaaaahhhh... OK" Applejack said remembering her experience at the Applebuck Season

After a very long while one of the ponies, the hyperactive, pink caoted and magenta maned mare, named Pinky Pie, took a look through a window and began screaming

"AAAAH!, There's somepony coming through the way! And he looks very handsome!"

"That tells me Jay's here" Applejack said with a big smile on her face

The pony walked calmly to the door and knocked three times, right before hearing some thuds and hits from behind it. Inside the house, all the mares except for Fluttershy were fighting to be the one to open the door. Poor Fluttershy who didn't want to get in the fight carefully went to the door and oppened it just to see a slightly taller version of the stud in the picture

"Hiya, I'm Jay", The stud said with a somewhat low pitched voice

Little and very timid Fluttershy, who was both marvelled and scared, let out a high pitched but very low squeal. Meanwhile the rest of the ponies were still fighting not knowing that Fluttershy oppened the door

"Hey, um... what is your name?" The red stud said loooking at her after noticing the other ponies were brawling and screaming

"I'm... Flutter... Shy" the mare said lowly hiding her head from him

"Uuuuuhhh... right, hope this doesn't bother you, but, I think you have a beautifull voice" The stud said entering the house

Little Flutteshy could just stand where she was, astonished, a very handsome pony just told her her voice was beautifull and passed by her side

"Hello nurse!" the stud said calling the attention of Applejack

"Counsin!" She yelled before jumping to him and pouncing her beloved counsin "You haven't changed at all!"

"Eeeeyup, I know" he said

"Jay?" Big Mac' said walking in the room

"Mac? is that you?" The stud said walking to his counsin and giving him some kind of weird counsin hoofshake

"Eeeeyup, It's me" Big Mac said

After a while of family meetings and more stuff the stud walked up to the onlyponies he needed to know, Applejack's friends

"Uh, hi" The stud said noticing that he was cornered into a wall being surrounded by the friends of his counsin

"Hi, I'm Twilight Sparkle and I'm very pleased to know you" the mare said getting near to his face

"Aaaaand... you spit when you talk", the stud said walking back

"Hello, I'm Rainbow Dash, and I know were gonna be good friends" The mare said getting even nearer

"Aaaaand... you have kind of a wandering eye" the stud said triyng to escape once more

"Hey, I'm Pinky Pie, It's good to know you, is it good to know me? uh, uh, uh?" the pink mare said jumping around him as she got closer

"Look! It's me!" the stud said pointing to a wall making the mare turn around, giving him the chance to escape "Finally-" he tried to say but another mare got in front of him "AW COME ON!"

"I'm Rarity, It's very nice to meet you darling" the white mare said

"You're so freaking weird that I can't find any excuse to escape from you, so ta-ta" the stud said turning back finding the last one of them Fluttershy the onlyone she liked from the group

"Um... hi" the mare said nervously

"Hey, it's good to see somepony who doesn't goes flirty when she looks at me" Jay said smiling

"I wanted to ask you something" Fluttershy said blushing

"What is it? are you ill?" the stud said looking at his new friend worried

"I just wanted to know if you could... come to my garden and... help me with the animals", the mare said blushing so hard she seemed she was gonna faint

"Sure" the stud said turning back and going with Fluttershy

"hey, Jay, put your bags in your room first" Applejack called him uselessly because he was to far away "nice, now I'll have to do it myself"

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Well, I think it's enough for one chapter see you later, Review please!