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Applejack's Cousin

Applejack's Cousin

by Metrosexual Autarch


Chapters


  • 1. The Great New
  • 2. A Day With Fluttershy
  • 3. Rainy Night
  • 4. A Kiss
  • 5. The Letter From the Princesses
  • 6. The road to Canterlot prt1
  • 7. The road to Canterlot prt2
  • 8. The road to Canterlot prt3
  • 9. The Road to Canterlot prt4
  • 10. Back to Ponyville
  • 11. Lupus Furorem
  • 12. Adieu, Jay, Adieu
  • 13. Sad Past
  • 14. Best Friends
  • 15. Ancient Fang
  • 1. The Great New

    K, not totally sure of doin' this...

    I may have uploaded weird stuff in the past but...

    this is goin' off my own limits...

    MLPFiM...

    weird though awesome...

    I'll do it waiting for people to critisize me...

    I'll do it waiting for flames...

    I'll do it 'cuz I like the show...

    I'LL DO IT BECAUSE I AM A BRONY!

    And, FYI, I have an OC for every, and I mean every, show I like!

    OC?

    He's here

    OC:

    Name: Jay "The Dashing Fire"

    Age: 19

    Colour:

    Fur: Red

    Mane and tail: Dark Red

    Mark: A golden flare

    Eyes: Blue

    Details: He wears black glasses, he's a counsin of Applejack and Big Mac'

    Note: if writen in "Italics" it's the tought of each character


    A normal day, at the "Sweet Apple Acres" farm, a honey haired mare with a hat over her head was walking to a little mailbox little knew it was in fron of her house. She was looking at the letters that arrived from very early in the morning.

    "Only two letters today?", she asked herself smiling "Okay, lemme see, letter from princesses Celestia and Luna? Sounds important, but... I'll read it later.", she said putting the letter over her hat, "Then we have a letter from- Oh my gosh!" she gasped and ran to the house

    Once in the house the mare began looking around trying to find a way to wake up her enormous family.

    "Aww... c'mon, there must be a way of waking them up... think... think... think!", the hatted mare thought to herself

    After a while of thinking she realized what to do, she grabbed a horn, a very big one to tell the truth and blew it, waking up everypony in the house and some from one or two of the houses around

    "What's up Applejack? Is there a fire?" Big Makintosh, Applejack's big brother, said walking slowly from his room to the hall

    "No, Mac, I have something to anounce! It's a letter from counsin Jay" the mare said putting the letter over a table

    When all the family was around, some of them sleeping over Big Mac's back, Applejack, the hatted mare cleared her throat and read the letter

    "Dear Family,

    How's it goin', I just sent this little letter to tell you guys that I'm gonna have vacations from my studies an I'll go to Ponyville soon,

    I'll stay for one or two moths and that's all, hope you're all doing great, prepare a room for me

    Signed: Jay"

    Right when Applejack finished reading everypony in the house was crazily moving things here and there to get the house ready for their counsin. The hours went through and some other ponies went to Applejack's house, to se how was she doing. Twilight Sparkle, a mare with a purple coat and a dark purple mane, who apparently guided the group, knocked the door

    "Weird" Twilight said "usually Applejack's at the door when I knock"

    Soon enough the named pony went running through the door carrying some stuff, and led them in with no words, all the family was very active

    "Uuuh... Applejack? what are you doing?" a yellow coated and pink maned pony named Fluttershy asked as a pillow fell over her head

    "I'm getting ready for my counsin's visit" the hatted mare said grabbing some stuff from a table

    "Who's is this counsin of yours?" a blue coated and rainbow maned pony named Rainbow Dash asked

    "His name's Jay" the mare said getting over a table and putting a photo of her counsin over it before running to a room and putting all the stuff she had been moving around there

    The girls took a look at the photo, in which they saw - What they tought - a very handsome pony, he had a red coat of fur, a red an yellow mane just as his tail, his shiny blue eyes, with black glasses that made them shine even more and his mark, a golden fire. When the hatted mare went to the table, she took a look at her friends. They were drooling at the sight of the stud

    "Wow..." all said in unisone

    "What? it's just my counsin" Applejack said grabbing the photo and putting it in her hat

    "Your counsin is so handsome" a white coated and purple maned mared named Rarity said with the typical "I fell in love" look on her face

    "Whatever you say, I don't know when is my counsin coming here and I need to be ready" Applejack said

    "Need our help?" Fluttershy asked with a kind smile on her face

    "Aaaaaaaaaahhhh... OK" Applejack said remembering her experience at the Applebuck Season

    After a very long while one of the ponies, the hyperactive, pink caoted and magenta maned mare, named Pinky Pie, took a look through a window and began screaming

    "AAAAH!, There's somepony coming through the way! And he looks very handsome!"

    "That tells me Jay's here" Applejack said with a big smile on her face

    The pony walked calmly to the door and knocked three times, right before hearing some thuds and hits from behind it. Inside the house, all the mares except for Fluttershy were fighting to be the one to open the door. Poor Fluttershy who didn't want to get in the fight carefully went to the door and oppened it just to see a slightly taller version of the stud in the picture

    "Hiya, I'm Jay", The stud said with a somewhat low pitched voice

    Little and very timid Fluttershy, who was both marvelled and scared, let out a high pitched but very low squeal. Meanwhile the rest of the ponies were still fighting not knowing that Fluttershy oppened the door

    "Hey, um... what is your name?" The red stud said loooking at her after noticing the other ponies were brawling and screaming

    "I'm... Flutter... Shy" the mare said lowly hiding her head from him

    "Uuuuuhhh... right, hope this doesn't bother you, but, I think you have a beautifull voice" The stud said entering the house

    Little Flutteshy could just stand where she was, astonished, a very handsome pony just told her her voice was beautifull and passed by her side

    "Hello nurse!" the stud said calling the attention of Applejack

    "Counsin!" She yelled before jumping to him and pouncing her beloved counsin "You haven't changed at all!"

    "Eeeeyup, I know" he said

    "Jay?" Big Mac' said walking in the room

    "Mac? is that you?" The stud said walking to his counsin and giving him some kind of weird counsin hoofshake

    "Eeeeyup, It's me" Big Mac said

    After a while of family meetings and more stuff the stud walked up to the onlyponies he needed to know, Applejack's friends

    "Uh, hi" The stud said noticing that he was cornered into a wall being surrounded by the friends of his counsin

    "Hi, I'm Twilight Sparkle and I'm very pleased to know you" the mare said getting near to his face

    "Aaaaand... you spit when you talk", the stud said walking back

    "Hello, I'm Rainbow Dash, and I know were gonna be good friends" The mare said getting even nearer

    "Aaaaand... you have kind of a wandering eye" the stud said triyng to escape once more

    "Hey, I'm Pinky Pie, It's good to know you, is it good to know me? uh, uh, uh?" the pink mare said jumping around him as she got closer

    "Look! It's me!" the stud said pointing to a wall making the mare turn around, giving him the chance to escape "Finally-" he tried to say but another mare got in front of him "AW COME ON!"

    "I'm Rarity, It's very nice to meet you darling" the white mare said

    "You're so freaking weird that I can't find any excuse to escape from you, so ta-ta" the stud said turning back finding the last one of them Fluttershy the onlyone she liked from the group

    "Um... hi" the mare said nervously

    "Hey, it's good to see somepony who doesn't goes flirty when she looks at me" Jay said smiling

    "I wanted to ask you something" Fluttershy said blushing

    "What is it? are you ill?" the stud said looking at his new friend worried

    "I just wanted to know if you could... come to my garden and... help me with the animals", the mare said blushing so hard she seemed she was gonna faint

    "Sure" the stud said turning back and going with Fluttershy

    "hey, Jay, put your bags in your room first" Applejack called him uselessly because he was to far away "nice, now I'll have to do it myself"


    Well, I think it's enough for one chapter see you later, Review please!

    2. A Day With Fluttershy

    Okay, recieved only one review, it gave me the hope to go on, the will to move on and the courage to keep my promise to do this!

    One little fact that I don't thing you care, and you possibly know, Applejack is the name of a very strong alcoholic drink, which, is obviously made out of apples, why do I know? translate that to spanish "Aguardiente de manzana". "Aguardiente", one of the strongest alcoholic drinks from Colombia, my natal country ^^


    At Fluttershy's little garden, the stallion was amazed just looking at the enormous quantity of little animals, specially rabbits, Fluttershy was leading him to a fallen tree, that was thicker than three apple-trees toghether

    "Here we are, I needed your help with this", the mare said stopping in front of the tree

    "You need my help moving this tree?", the stallion said looking at the tree

    "Uh, yeah is it to much trouble?", Fluttershy said looking at the horse

    "A little, I cant move it, but I can break it", Jay said knocking the tree times with his hoof

    "How?", the mare asked looking at him, he wasn't all muscle but sure he was strong

    "Just give me some space" the stallion said going some meters back and prepairing to attack the tree

    With no words Fluttershy took some steps back. just after she did that, Jay, ran at a mighty speed to the tree getting even faster with every step. He ran so fast that it looked as if he left a trail of fire behind him, Fluttershy turned around thinking he might hit his head, but then a loud crack was heard in all the place, and the tree was cut in half, with Jay at the opposite side of the garden rubbing his head and looking dizzy

    "That... Is why they call me... The Dashing Fire", he said before falling to the floor totally knocked out

    "Oh, my" Fluttershy said looking at him

    After a while of staring at Jay, Fluttershy freaked out, what about he was hurt or worse?, she decided to go to Sweet Apple Acres to get help from Applejack and Big Makintosh, who were already worried about Jay not comming home for lunch. A while later, they went where Jay was but he wasn't there

    "B-but I remember he killed over, right here" Fluttershy said looking around

    "Isn't that him?" Big Mac' said pointing to some bushes

    Indeed he was but he wasn't knocked out anymore. In fact he was helping some animals that had fallen of the tree he had cut in half some time ago. When Fluttershy saw his nobility she almost fainted, so strong yet so carefull, so wild yet so polite, she was madly in love with him

    "Hey, guys how much time have you been there?" Jay said after turning

    "Could you tell us why were you away for so much time?" Applejack yelled at her counsin looking at him furious

    "it's kind of a long story", Jay said "Fluttershy asked me to move the tree, I broke it instead, I fainted, I woke up, helped these little animals I saw in the branches and... guess it wasn't a long story after all"

    "She told you to do this?", Big Mac' said looking at Fluttershy

    "Didn't you hear me? she asked me to move the tree, but instead of that, I broke it" the red stallion remarked

    After a while of conversation Fluttershy offered them something to eat, as she made them loose lunch time. On her house some food was served on a little table that was just enough for the four of them.

    "Hey... um... Jay?" Fluttershy said blushing a bit

    "Wuzzit?" he said after finishing some berries

    "I just... wanted to... you know... thank you... for all" Fluttershy said with a hard blush on her face

    "No prob, I love to help", Jay said, "But please, next time I tell you I can break a tree that is thicker than three Apple-trees toghether, Stop me"

    "Okay..." Fluttershy said with a giggle

    Big Mac' and Applejack gasped at what they saw, it was almost impossible to make Fluttershy giggle like that, she was also staring at him, with the purest love on her eyes.

    "So, need anymore help?" Jay said getting up the table

    "Uuuumm... well... let me see... I need to feed my animals, then practice a little song with my birds and after that I think it's all" Fluttershy said looking through the window

    "Easy, Breezy", Jay said smiling, "Applejack, Mac'. tell granny I'll be away 'till late"

    "Kay, just take care" Mac' said walking slowly away

    "N' make sure Fluttershy tries nothing, with ya" Applejack smirked before running away

    "What in the hay did she mean?" Jay said puzzled

    "I... don't know... why don't we go and begin with the stuff I told you?" Fluttershy asked blushing

    "You stole the words from my mouth" Jay said

    Soon enough they were in the garden again. Fluttershy waited for Jay to be near enough with the big load of all kinds of animal fodder

    "How much animals do you have here?" Jay asked leaving some bags near the broken tree

    "A lot, I just need you to open the bags so the animals eat from them" Fluttershy said giving him a sharp stone

    Jay did what he thought obvious, he walked to each bag and with a violent move of his head he made a large cut on each bag spreading the fodder around

    "Well, all we have to do is wait" Fluttershy said sitting

    Jay did as she told and out of nowhere much animals, but over all rabbits, began coming and started devouring all the food there was, thing that surprised Jay who didn't know how hungry can a rabbit be, then one of the rabbits, Angel, Fluttershy's favourite, came and stared at him

    "Aww, hey little guy" Jay said getting a hoof near the little rabbit

    The rabbit looked at Fluttershy confused, it didn't know what was going on, neither what to do. Fluttershy just gave him a big smile, soothing it as if she had just said "There's nothing to worry about". With that little sign of trust the rabbit jumped over Jay's head with a smile on it's face.

    "I think he likes me" Jay said with a calm smile on his face

    "Yeah and also I-" Fluttershy tried to say before some raindrops fell over her

    "Seems it's gonna rain..." Jay said saddly "I can't go home like this, I'll get ill..."

    "You can stay in my home utill it stops raining" Fluttershy said blushing

    "Awesome idea" Jay said Lifting her over his back

    "What are you doing?" The mare said

    "Duuuh, I'm taking you home, can't leave a pretty lady like you in the rain" Jay said running back to Fluttershy's home

    After a while they both were at the house, both of them soaking wet and Fluttershy shivering, the rain ahd affected her too much.

    "Are you alright?" Jay said putting some blankets over her

    "Yeah" the mare said after a while

    "Too bad it's raining, I wanted to hear you singing" Jay said looking through the window

    "W-well I can sing here, I think I'm not ill" Fluttershy said blushing

    "Then begin" the stallion said sitting

    Fluttershy cleared her throat and looked at Jay's eyes, full of compasion and admiration, she felt brave, and anxious to begin singing, these were new feelings for her as she never sang near anypony. At first she began humming the first part of the music, it was a beautifull song, after a while she opened her mouth and began singing

    "My biggest dream is to be with you,

    And giving all my love to you,

    You will forget any pain and you'll smile again

    Putting on it all your feelings,

    Living your biggest dreams,

    You will forget any pain and you'll smile again"

    Fluttershy stopped and began to hum the music again, meanwhile Jay was looking at her totally astonished, he knew her voice was beautifull, but now that he heard it loud he felt his heart was stopping, the marvelous sound of her vocal cords vibrating one against the other was heavenly, he was in love with her, and not only for her voice, her eyes, those precious blue eyes, they made him smile, also her body, he wasn't perverted but he had to admit it, she was gorgeous and for the last her mane, her beautifull pink mane.

    "Woah... she's beautifull now that I notice, her eyes... her mane... but over all... her voice... she's perfect... to perfect for me..." He tought to himself before Fluttershy began singing again

    "Giving our love,

    Our tomorrow will be better!

    Giving our love,

    Any dream in your mind will become true!

    If you wish it then you're going to fly!

    You only have to try!

    Believe in yourself and move on!

    You can count on me, I'll always be at your side!

    If you wish it then you're going to shine!

    If you want to soar through the sky,

    And touching the stars!

    Love is... enough!"

    With that, Fluttershy was feeling glorious, she never had the courage to sing for somebody, she felt heaven on earth her soul was free, she didn't feel shy with Jay, she felt like going crazy and be totally different, but there was something that she cared more than that, did Jay like it?

    "D-did you like it?" she said blushing harshly

    "That was the most beautifull thing I've ever heard" Jay said "n' I've heard much


    Enough for nao, it was cool and all, hope you don't want to kill me, just Review on how much you liked/disliked this chap

    3. Rainy Night

    Four reviews, good ones, enough to go on, love the people who gave me those possitive reviews, they gave me the trust to keep going!


    "That was the most beautifull thing I've ever heard" Echoed in Fluttershy's mind

    Jay's eyes were lost in the horizon. His mind was focused on one only thing, Fluttershy, the most beautifull mare his eyes ever had the delight to see, her eyes like two sapphires, her coat, as the purest of golds, her mane, shining like a pink diamond that was just digged up and her voice, like a choir of angels singing with one only voice.

    "That's what you think?", Fluttershy said with her eyes shining

    "Yeah, you've got the most beautifull voice I ever heard" Jay said closing up to her

    Before Fluttershy could think of something to thank him, the cieling began leaking, she knew what was happening. The old roof, that was made mostly by wood and hay to fill in some blanks had sucumbed to the water and let some leaks over the house. She was used to that it happened on heavy storms, but this wasn't one, she was sure

    "There's no way the cieling is leaking, it's just a little rain" she said looking the cieling puzzled

    "Uuh... actually-" Jay tried to say before a masive thunder cracked near the house "It's one of the biggest storms I ever saw"

    Jay awaited for a response, nothing. He turned back and saw Fluttershy in a corner shivering in fear. She was looking down, afraid, almost as if that made her remember something terrible

    "Are you okay?", Jay said hugging her lightly

    "Y-yeah, I'm just... Astraphobic, it's normal" Fluttershy said calming down a little

    "Is there a way to make the leak stop from falling?" Jay said as some drops fell over his head

    "Well only if the rain stopped" Fluttershy said cleaning of the drops from his face

    The were both looking at each other, untill a lot of water fell over Flutershy, soaking her completely

    "Uh... let me help you with that leak" Jay said getting near her

    "Sure" Fluttershy said blushing harshly

    Jay moved Fluttershy from where she was, and moved to the corner, then he made a sign with his front hoof and Fluttershy moved to him, cuddling on his chest, then he lowered his head over Fluttershy's so the rain wouldn't fall over her and covered her with the blankets he gave her earlier

    "Is this better?" Jay said with a little blush on his face

    "Perfect" Fluttershy answered cuddling on him

    The night went on slowly, the two ponies were in pure calm, hugging each other feeling the heat on their souls, love burning their spirit in a way they both felt their hearts melting over each other. They were so connected, that they could even felt what the other one was thinking. They both had much to say, but it was such a nice feeling to be toghether like that, in that deep silence, why breaking that beautiful and complete silence. But something else broke that precious moment, a thunder.

    "AAH!" Fluttershy squealed hiding her head on Jay's chest

    There was another silence, Jay hugged Fluttershy trying to calm her down, it worked a little, though she was still shivering a bit. after a while, the rain stopped, but they didn't notice it, they were to focused to think about the rest of the world. Then Jay had a good idea

    "You know, this remembers me from the time I was little", he said putting his hoof around her

    "Realy?" Fluttershy said

    "Yeah, when I was terrified at night my mom sang a little song for me"

    "D-do you remember it?"

    "I really do, it was like a message for little ponies"

    "What was it about?"

    "About bravery and being a hero for the people you love" Jay said

    "Would you sing it?" Fluttershy asked blushing

    "Uuuuh... I don't know...", Jay said

    "Pretty please?", Fluttershy said looking at him with a cute look on her face

    "Okay" Jay said blushing a bit

    He began humming a slow melody, it was beautifull but then he began singing

    "It is easy to give in in just one second

    But you know that you must keep on

    You only have to believe!

    You can Achive

    Any goal, you must believe it!

    There's a little light

    And it'll guide us through the way

    We will take!

    Keep it on! You have to be strong

    And protect the ones you love!

    That way you'll be stronger

    Remeber that!

    In our eyes, the power shines!

    In our heart, our fear dies!

    Feeling the courage

    And a burning spirit

    We are gonna be brave

    Our heart is the key"

    Jay paused for a moment, Fluttershy was amazed by how his voice was perfectly fit to the tone of the song, and the lirycs, they were the most beautifull thing she ever heard. Soonly Jay began singing again, only he was doing it a little faster

    "There will be days when darkness covers your soul, you must never fear

    The pouring rain will give us new live, please open your heart

    Inside you, there is a magnificent fire

    And that little light

    That will guide us through the way

    We will take!

    You must run! Be faster than the wind

    You must fly! Higher than the sky!

    I only want to feel you near me,

    You are my guide!

    Let's hope our souls combine in one

    And our friends help us

    Feeling the courage

    And a burning spirit

    We are gonna be brave

    Our heart is the key"

    Yet another pause, Fluttershy was almost gonna faint, the melody was beautifull, the notes danced through her ears and touched her soul, she felt that she was in the place her heart belonged, the best feeling she ever had, Jay kept singing but now it was slower

    "Let's dream it! Tomorrow will be better

    We have, to love all our friends

    That way we'll be stronger

    Remeber that!

    Let's break, any blocking wall

    Let's not fear! let's defeat our foes

    With some Love and Friendship

    Hope and Spirit!

    We are gonna win"

    The song was over, Fluttershy had tears rolling down her cheeks

    "What's up, are you okay?" Jay asked worried

    "It is the most beautifull thing I ever heard" Flutteshy said hugging Jay tightly

    Meanwhile, at Sweet Apple Acres, Applejack was worried about her cousin. It was very late, and he hadn't come for dinner. Almost everypony in the house was sleeping, except for Big Makintosh, Appleboom (her little sister) and, of course, her

    "What about he is hurt!" Applejack repeated to herself

    "Sis, why don't we go to Fluttershy's house and see if she's there?", Mac' asked

    "I have a better idea, why don't we go to Fluttershy's house and see if she's there?", Applejack said ignoring Mac'

    "It's a good idea" Mac' said frowning


    Enough for nao, Review please, just tell me if you have any idea or anything, so I can add it ^^

    4. A Kiss

    Keeping on...

    this is turning out very well


    A while later the Apple sibblings were walking calmly to Fluttershy's house, with Applejack leading and Applebloom trying not to fall asleep over Big Makintosh's back

    "Hey, can you tell me something?" Applebloom said moving a bit and finind a spot to stand over Mac's jead

    "What is it sis?" Applejack said walking to Mac's side

    "Why are you so concerned about cousin Jay?" the filly said

    "Because, if you don't notice how stupid your question was, he's a part of our family" her sister replied

    "If that's true, why is this the only day I've seen him?" the filly said puzzled

    "Because he went to a far away city to study before you were born" Mac said

    "This is actually his first vacation in eight years" Applejack said gazing into the stars

    It was a beautifull night, not a cloud in the fully starred sky, and it wasn't much untill they arrived to Fluttershy's house, it was damaged because of the storm, but some of the lights were on, so obviously, Fluttershy was there. The door fell when they tried knocking so they entered the house and looked completely astonished how Fluttershy and Jay were calmly sleeping in the little corner. Jay was hugging Fluttershy, they were both sleeping under some white sheets, Fluttershy was smiling as she never did, almost as if she had the best day on her life, becuase it was, as for Jay he looked as if he was in total peace

    "Cousin?" Applejack said loudly

    "Huh?" Jay said not noticing he was still huging Fluttershy

    "What are you guys doing here?" Fluttershy asked

    "We wanted to know why didn't Jay come home to dinner" Applebloom said juping off mac's head

    As soon as Applebloom finished the last word, Jay and Fluttershy turned to each other, blushing so hard they looked like tomatoes

    "Uuuuhhh..." was the only thing Fluttershy could say in that moment

    They broke the hug, still blushing. Applebloom looked at them, she didn't get why they were so embarrased

    "Why are you blushing?" the filly asked Fluttershy

    "I... Uuuuh... think you're too young to understand" the mare said turning to Jay

    After a while of talking they could make Applejack understand they weren't doing anything wrong, they told her everything about the rain, the thunders and all so she would not missinterpret what they were saying

    "... and so that happened" Jay said looking at her

    "Nothing to worry about" Fluttershy said cleaning the kitchen a bit

    "That's good to hear" Big Makintosh said "It would've been awkward to go in here in that case"

    "Stop with that chat! there's a filly in here!" Applejack said

    After another while, The Apple sibs. and Jay were ready to leave, when suddenly some parts of the cieling fell near Fluttershy who, due to inmediate reflexes, jumped to get cover behind Jay

    "Uhhmmm... can I sleep in your home tonight?" Fluttershy asked

    "Of course you can, sugarcube" Applejack said

    A while later at Sweet Apple Acres, Applejack was trying to find a room for her friend but, there were all full with two or three ponies, and even the coaches were ocupied

    "Well, I don't know where are you going to sleep..." Applejack said looking down

    "Okay, I uh... guess I'll go" Fluttershy said turning out where another rain began

    "You can sleep with me" Jay said

    "Uh... are you okay with that?" Fluttershy said blushing, turning to Applejack

    "Sure, no prob" the hatted mare said pushing her friend into the room

    "Why are you blushing" Applebloom asked Fluttershy

    "It's uuuuhhh... that I'm kind of ill" Fluttershy did her best to hide her now growing blush

    "Okay, see you tomorrow" The filly said turning back and walking to her room

    Some time after Fluttershy was sitting in the bed trying to find a comfortable way to sleep in a stranger bed, but she couldn't any way she tried was very uncomfortable, as the matress was different from the one she used on her bed

    "Hey need some help?" Jay said sitting in the bed near her

    "I... I'm fine" Fluttershy muttered

    "No, you're not" Jay said "You have to sleep and you squirm like a fish out of the water"

    "Well... I... ah... Okay" Fluttershy said looking down

    Then they remembered, somethign they were doing little less than an hour before, that hug, that sacred moment for both of them, they couldn't even finish enjoying. They moved to a comfortable place in the bed and hugged each other, this time they felt as their hearts melt once more, but this time was different. They weren't just melting one over the other, they began to get cold, untill they joined, in one heart made of the most pure and unbreakable love

    "I love you" Slipped from Fluttershy's mouth

    Both of them looked at each other's eyes, and slowly got near, and near, untill their lips met in a burst of pasion and love running through their bodies. Even if not even a day passed since they met, they knew it was nothing bad, after all love has no barriers, no age, no distance. They broke the kiss looking at each other, deeply.

    "This is the best day of my life" They both said flling asleep


    Enough for nao, Review please, just tell me if you have any idea or anything, so I can add it ^^

    5. The Letter From the Princesses

    Very well

    nu chap!

    I just wanted to thank everyone who's gaveme good reviews, it's so awesome ( /)^3^(\ ) that someone apreciates my job


    In the morning, Applejack woke up and went to wake up her family. then before grabbing a horn she remembered something important. The letter from the princesses she recieved the last day.

    "Where's that letter?" she tought to herself

    After a while of thinking, she remembered it was inside her hat

    "I should stop putting things there" she said taking the letter

    It was a very fancy scroll with a golden ribbon. Applejack oppened the scroll and saw the writing.

    "Dear Applejack,

    We got a letter from your cousin,

    It would be nice to see him again

    Princesses Celestia and Luna"

    Applejack thought of it. It wasn't a bad idea, besides she could show her cousin all of her other friends on the way.

    "Let's get 'im up"

    Applejack went to the little room her cousin and Fluttershy were sharing. She slowly openned the door to see them both laying in the little bed, half asleep haf counsious kissing, just there frozen like statues, smiling

    "Jay?" Applejack said looking at both of them

    "Applejack!" both yelled

    "What in the world were you two doing?" - the hatted mare said

    "W-we..." both stuttered trying to find the correct words

    Before the could finish Applejack hugged them both

    "And why didn't you tell me?" she said

    "We..." Fluttershy began

    "You nothing girl, let's get the knew to our friends!" Applejack said taking both of them from the room to the city

    Jay and Flutteshy looked to each other while somehow Applejack was dragging them around to the library. Everypony (or at lease the mane cast) was there looking for some books when, Applejack arrived with Jay and Fluttershy. She was a little too pumped up so she didn't notice she knocked down Rarity when she opened the door

    "You girls" Applejack screamed

    "What is it?" Rarity said getting up

    "Guess what? Fluttershy and Jay..."

    "No way..." Rainbow Dash said

    "Yes Way!" Applejack said pointing at the her cousin and Fluttershy

    The couple were knocked down in the floor because of the violent movement that Applejack made them go through, but as soon as they were mentioned, they woke up. Suddenly fluttershy was surrounded by her friends who were jelously looking at her asking how did she manage to get Jay's attention that fast and easily.

    "I... don't know..." - Fluttershy said looking up - "What did you like the most about me Jay?"

    "I... It was your voice..." Jay said blushing a bit

    "HER VOICE?" Everypony screamed getting around him

    "Well... it's difficult to explain..."

    "Tell us!" Rainbow Dash demanded

    "Well, while in Uma Gakkuen - an academy at Ko-ba-ka the place I went to study - , I learned a trick, it has no name, but if you train your ear, in a specific way, you can know a person is"

    "So..." Rainbow pushed him to go on

    "when I heard her voice, I noticed her kindness, her love for all living creatures, her pureness and inocence that's why I love her"

    Fluttershy smiled and kissed Jay's cheek after hearing that, leading to a jealous groan from Rainbow who just looked away

    "any way... twi? is there a way to get Canterlot, pronto?" Applejack asked

    "Why?" Twi said tilting her head

    "Well. princesses wana see him, n' for that we got to go to Canterlot"

    "Well, it's not a bad idea" Jay said looking up "I should thank celestia personally"

    "Huh?" Pinkie said popping from under Fluttershy and looking him in the eye

    "She was the one who recomended me for Uma Gakkuen"

    A while of talking later, they all took separate ways for packing their stuff for the travel, because the rest of the group wanted to go with Jay to Canterlot and see how the princesses were doing. Before Applejack and Jay were leaving Big Mac stood in front of them blocking their way

    "And, where do you think you're going?" Mac said

    "To Canterlot" Jay said looking at him

    "Are you leaving me here to do all the work?"

    "of course not, wanna come with?" Applejack said

    "Who will take care of Applebloom?"

    "Zecora?" Applejack said

    After a while of arguing, they went to Zecora's home, Jay was looking down... thinking with a very serious look on his face. Applejack knocked the door and after a while Zecora came out, with her eyes closed. Suddenly Jay hugged Zecora pulling her to her home, surprising Big Mac, Applejack and Zecora

    "What is happening?" Zecora asked

    "It's me... aunt..." Jay muttered on her shoulder

    "Aunt..." Big Mac and AJ asked

    Zecora openned her eyes and saw Jay, hugging her tightly

    "Jay? is that you my boy?" Zecora asked without rhyming


    Enough.

    this is the end, Review please

    BTW: Ko-ba-ka: (子馬家) A Pony's home

    Uma Gakuen: (馬学園) horse academy

    6. The road to Canterlot prt1

    Very well

    nu chap!

    Thanks for keeping your reading on and giving good reviews!

    you guys Rock!

    just like Tom (a very bad pun indeed)


    "It's me... I've missed you..." Jay said looking at her

    "Why are you here?"

    "I had a little vacation... anywho, may I ask you a teeny tiny favour?" Jay asked blushing a bit

    "Of course, what is that you need?"

    "Can you take care of applebloom for a week or two?" Big Mac said

    "Why?"

    "We're goin' to Canterlot and... well she can't come with us, she's gotta go to school"

    "Well of course I'll take good care of her" Zecora said leading Applebloom in

    Before leving Applejack and Big Mac blocked his way looking them as if he was any other thing

    "Zecora is your aunt?" Applejack asked with a little hint of rage on her voice

    "Yeah, so what?" Jay said looking at them totally calm

    "Why didn't you tell us Zecora was our aunt?" Big Macintosh said

    "She's not your aunt"

    "then why...?" Applejack said

    "Well you see, she's my aunt but not your's... let me see... it's like... Zecora and my mother are sisters. then my father and your mother are siblings... my dad and mom met once and well time went through... and here I am" Jay explained

    "Okay..." Was the only thing Applajack and Big Mac could say

    After a while, they all were ready to go, everyone had a lot of stuff packed up in some bags, the onlyone who wasn't dealing with much stuff was Jay, who had a little backpack with him. It would've been a long journey going by ground and almost all of them wanted to go by air, but Jay and Fluttershy were thinking on going by ground, not that Fluttershy had any problem to go flying, but Jay was terribly acrophobic, so after a while of arguing (and a little game of rock-paper-scissors) they all decided to go walking

    "See, it's a good excercise and besides if we go flying we won't be able to look at all the beautyfull road to Canterlot" Jay said after a while in the road

    After a while of walking everyone (including Spike who was in following them becuse he didn't want to be alone) was tired except for Jay, it was cloudy and cold but Jay didn't care, he kept on moving, jsut as if he wanted too badly to get to Canterlot or the road was just to beautyfull to stop

    "Why don't we rest?" Twilight asked after a while

    Jay didn't answer, at first everyone thought he was gonna sharply say "NO" but suddenly a little drizzle started, followed by the sun coming out behind one cloud. Fluttershy walked up to Jay to see if he heard, but he stopped looking at the clouds, and (just like a little Colt) he ran as fast as he could. nopony except for Applejack and Big Macintosh got what was going on, Jay was running like crazy around them, (one could say even more than Pinkie Pie) and just as a little rainbow appeared near where the sun was he even began nieghing in joy

    "Uhhhh... AJ? what's happening to your cousin?" Twilight asked

    "It's something he enjoy's since he was a colt" Applejack said smiling

    "When the climate was like this he and his dad ran through the Orchard, a Father-Son game" Big Mac added

    "But he's never been so fired up" AJ added while he even jumped to a tree

    After a while, Fluttershy joined him, it seemed like fun so she tried it, it was very funny, it really was. the little drops falling over their faces, the wind blowing their hair and the beautifull rainbow moving with them in the sky, it was the most beautifull sight any of them was ever blessed to look at. Soon after everypony (Even Rarity) joined in, and felt how each moment the drizzle was more powerfull and after a while it became a very big storm

    "Brings me memories..." Jay muttered happily

    With the storm, there wasn't much they could do, so they decided to camp under some trees. it was a perfect place, there were so much trees the rain almost stopped falling, after a while they had all the tents ready, and were going to get in them to take some sleep when some leaves colapsed and soaked Rarity

    "Take cover" Twilight tought to herself

    As they all waited to protect if Rarity became a beast, they got a surprise. Rarity bursted to laughter, and went into her own tent. After a while everyone was on their tent, except for Spike, Rarity and Twilight. Spike had no idea of what to do. Should he sleep in rarity's tent, or twilight's? At Rarity's, he could be with the love of his life, and maybe (just maybe) he could tell her his feelings, but he was in the risk of her saying "no". At Twi's he would (as normaly) be ordered to clean up, send letters and boring stuff, but he would sleep with Twilight, which he considered as his own mother. After a while he decided, he asked Twi for permision to sleep with Rarity, Twi (after a while of arguing with him) said "Yes" and let Spike join Rarity, but it would be too long to tell it on this chapter so it's over for now


    Enough.

    I was focusing on some parts of Jay's childhood

    7. The road to Canterlot prt2

    Very well

    more nu chaps!

    Keeping on the history

    It's now time to focus on those minor pairs I was talking 'bout in the description.

    1: (favourite Non OC pair) Rarity and Spike!

    2: (so little people believe in this but I do) Twilight and Big Macintosh

    ...

    Those for now

    ...

    XD


    In the little tent, Rarity was getting into... the... Femenine Metrosexuality?... when Spike, entered shily looking down a bit. after a while, rarity gave Spike a little cushion and kept on making up, putting some stuff on herself and when that was done she went to her sleeping bag, she was ready to sleep when she noticed Spike, had nothing to sleep in, so, making honour of her element of harmony she said

    "Spike... wanna sleep in my bag?"

    Spike didn't know what to say, Rarity was smiling to him offering him to sleep in the same place at her, at the same time (spicy, eh?)

    "Uuuuhhh... Are you sure?" Spike said blushing terribly

    "Of course, I'm fine with it" Rarity said taking Spike and putting him on her sleeping bag

    She then sat inside the bag and looked at Spike, his eyes wide open almost all his face red, and totally still, he was too cute. not only that, she was noticing something, he was always helping her, he never said no to anything and he was always there for her. She felt her heart pounding fast and her eyes were widening, she never noticed before, but she loved Spike, and now they were together she could tell him

    "Spike...?" she said blushing a bit

    "What is it Rarity?"Spike said

    "Can I ask you a question?"

    "Uuuhh... sure"

    "Why are you always... helping me out?"

    "Oh... Well... I..." spike stuttered "It began the day I met you... I couldn't resist it, you're so perfect... I just wanted to make you happy... because... I... love... you" the little dragon said turning his head

    Spike closed his eyes, expecting to get thrown out of the tent by Rarity's magic, but instead, he felt something pressing over his lips. Slowly the dragon opened his eyes and looked at the thing that pressed his lips, it was Rarity. Spike followed the kiss and after a time they broke it

    "Rarity..." Spike said before breaking to tears on her shoulder

    None of them talked for the rest of the night, and just let the other sleep. Spike's heart was bursting in flames of love, he couldn't believe it, he was sleeping with the love of his life. as for Rarity, she found the love of her life, her "prince charming" and deep inside she felt a little embarrassed that she never noticed he was there all the time.

    At Twilight's tent, she was feeling alone, at that time she knew Spike told rarity what he felt and (deep inside) she knew Rarity felt the same way as Spike. Twi knew Spike would probably go to live with Rarity after that, in other words she would be alone in the library, working with no help no company no... Spike. She got out of the tent and looked up, all the stars were up, there was no cloud in the sky and the moon, it was full. Twi sighed and kept looking at the stars, not knowing she was in danger. At another tent Big Macintosh couldn't sleep, he was worried thinking.

    "What am I gonna do about my life?" he tought

    He was alone, his sisters, away all the day. His cousin was living a good life with Fluttershy. There wasn't much for him to do at the farm since AJ was getting stronger and faster at the job so she didn't need any help from him. it was depressing. He got out of the tent and gazed up thinking of life, when all of a sudden he heard a scream, it was Twilight Sparkle. She was screaming in terror because of a big Sidewinder Snake that sneaked up behind her, she had no time to react, so she stood still. The snake jumped to her, she waited for the bite, but it never happened, instead she saw, a red stallion standing in front of her with the deadly fangs of the snake penetrating through the skin over his ribs putting poison into him. next she saw, was how the stallion threw away the snake and collapsed to the ground twitching froom the pain.

    "Big McIntosh!" Twilight yelled waking everypony up

    "What is it twi?" AJ said getting out of her tent

    They all saw how Big Mac was twitching in an awfull pain that made Applejack cry, Mac was laying weakly in the ground feeling how the poison of the snake was running through his veins, he looked so waek and misserable one couldn't look at that horrible pain.

    "What happened to you?" Spike asked checking on him

    "Sidewinder... Bite... Twilight..." Was the ony thing he could answer before fainting

    After a while, Twi explained what happened and all. AJ cried over Mac's body, and kept like that for a while, then passed ten or fifteen minutes, Twi asked them to leave her and Mac alone, so she could heal him, it took a while to separe AJ from Mac but they managed to do it. When they were alone Twi used her magic to take out the poison out of Mac's body. After a while he was awake again so the both started talking

    "So... uh... Why were you gazing at the stars?" Mac said getting on his fours

    "I was... thinking of... Spike..." Twi muttered

    "oh... heh... well... thanks for your help"

    "You thanking me?" Twi said a little shocked "You saved me from that snake!"

    "Meh, I'd do it anytime" He said raising his hoof

    "Why did you save me anyway?" she said putting some bandages over his wound

    "oh... well... I heard you scream... and thought you could need help" he said blushing" Besides, I couldn't let that snake hurt the..."

    "the... what?"

    "The... most beautifull mare"

    "Me?" she asked totaly shocked "The most beautifull mare?"

    "Of course, you're so intelligent, beautifull, nice and all"

    With nothing more to say Twilight got near him and looked him in the eye, his was telling the truth, no way he was lying, it was imposible. She didn't know what to say, but there was no need to speak, because (Natural reflects or not) she got as near to him as possible and kissed him. both kept like that for some time untill Applejack entered the tent and looked at both of them.


    Enough.

    for now... review and tell me :D what should I do next :3

    8. The road to Canterlot prt3

    Very well

    more nu chaps!

    Keeping on the history

    Now about them keeping on the journey...


    Applejack couldn't believe it, it happened again, one of her best friends and her family, she was getting back, they soon wouldn't need her, beeing Big Mac with Twilight and Jay with Fluttershy there she would just be all alone. She turned around and went to the forest almost crying

    "what is wrong with her?" Big Mac asked Jay a while later

    "Dunno" he answered "I'll go and see if she's alright"

    After a while Jay found her, she was crying behind a little tree

    "Applejack?" Jay said sitting at her side

    "What?" she said with a hint of rage on her voice

    "Why are you so sad?"

    "I... I... I'm alone... You and my brother... you're gonna go..." She sobbed "And leave me and Applebloom alone"

    "I'm not gonna do that" he said hugging her "I wouldn't dare to leave you, you're my family"

    "But.. Fluttershy..." she said before breaking into tears again

    "Listen Applejack, I love Fluttershy more than anything in the world" He said letting her go "But I love you too, and I would never abandon my family"

    "You... mean it?"

    "I do" he said kissing her forehead "let's come back to the camp"

    Both walked back, Applejack was still crying a bit (not for sadness but a natural reaction of the body to cry even after a while of feeling better), they saw everypony there, waiting for them, just wanting to see if AJ was alright - bet you can guess what's next - she jumped over them and began the corniest (though cutest) hug ever seen in Equestria.

    They all were too sleepy to kepp on that hug so they splet up and went to their tents thinking they could rest a bit, but no. They heard a voice, all of them (except for Jay) recognized, "The great and powerfull Trixe"

    "Let's go" Jay said taking some steps in front of him

    If it wasn't more than obvious everypony got in front of him trying to stop him. he asked why, and they told him the story of what happened. How she humilliated them made fun of them and more. Jay didn't listen to them and went to see what was going on, Trixie was crying under a big tree, holding a sheet of paper that seemed like a little photo.

    "Uuuhh... hey?" Jay said putting a hoof on her shoulder "What's wrong with you?"

    The mare just looked at him and returned back to her weeping. She was remembering her family which she lost during a train crash near Fillydelphia. Jay grabbed her and took her to the camp. everypony was looking furiously at her and then Jay spoke up

    "I got a question for you" he said putting his hoof on her shoulder

    "What?" she asked turning her head away shamefully

    "Why did you do all that stuff?" he said sitting by her side

    "because... I... I wanted to be important..." she said sobbing

    "Why?"

    "I promised that to me... I... promised to myself making my mother proud"

    "Where is your mother?"

    As they kept on talking, the other ponies (n' little Spike) were looking at the psychological therapy Jay was forcing Trixie to take. He was breaking her mind into pieces, only to help her, with that he acnowleged all about her, from the accident to her family, friends and more, there was a boyfriend she had but they ended up because he was cheating on her, there was also a good friend of her's who died of a weird disease. in fact she had a miserable life, it was so miserable at that, it made everypony forgive her in a big group hug. when they splet up (which took some time because trixie wouldn't let Jay go) they all went to their tents.

    the next morning everypony was ready to leave and so they did. As they walked Fluttershy and Trixie stood up at Jay's sides girl-fighting for him a lot (And when I say "a lot" I mean A LOT)

    "help... me..." Jay said speaking in morse code

    After a really long while (in which Jay even became a weapon in their combat) Fluttershy won after putting Trixie's head in a bowl of tree sap (don't ask). After doing their best to clean Trixie's hair, they all kept going. they got to a little shrine in a forest so they rested for a while there. Jay walked away and began exploring.

    "So... why are you here?" Trixie asked Fluttershy

    "Oh, we're going to Canterlot" she answered

    "why exactly?"

    "well, duh" pinkie said lifting fluttershy on her back "we're gonna see princess celestia"

    "why are you walking?"

    "mah cousin's affraid o' heights" Applejack replied

    After a while Jay had come back, he told them to go with him to a little place he found. after at lease twenty minutes walking, they found what Jay had been looking for, a giant hot spring.

    "Woah... amazing" Rarity said

    "yeah, I know" Jay said jumping in "anyone wanna come in?"

    With no answer Fluttershy jumped and landed over Jay sinking down with him. Nopony could find a good reason to say no, so after a while all of them were inside the spring, calmly relaxing and letting the water calm them down, just breathe and feel everything around them was peace and tranquility. Rarity looked up and saw two ponies out of the water just standing there, she tried to get somepony's atention by splashing a bit, Jay turned his head and said

    "Frizzy? Blizzard? what are you guys doin' here?"


    Enough.

    for now... review and tell me :D what should I do next :3

    9. The Road to Canterlot prt4

    Very well

    nu chap!

    I wanna present you to some new characters:

    Eternal Blizzard and Frizzy

    Eternal Blizzard:

    Species: Pegasus

    coat: White

    mane: short, icy blue

    eyes: shining yellow

    notes: has a blue vest. he's taller than Big McIntosh

    cutie mark: a little whirlwind and some snow flakes

    Frizzy: and some snow flakes

    Species: earth pony

    coat: Green

    mane: spiky, green

    eyes: red

    cutie mark: a shining golden ring


    "Jay?" the green pony asked jumping in

    "eeyup" he answered "what are you guys doin' here?"

    "we wanted to go to canterlot"

    "on foot" the pegasus said flying up

    "be carefull" Jay and Frizzy asked moving back a bit

    "uh... why?" AJ asked

    Before Jay or Frizzy could answer the white pegasus flew down, just as Rainbow Dash would do, and blew a lot of water out of the spring soaking them all

    "Hey, dude" he said "where's that cousin Applejack you told us about?"

    "You're sitting over her head" Jay and Big Mac said

    The pegasus moved forward and permited a totaly infuriated Applejack to come out and begin choking him

    "WHY THE HAY DID YOU DO THAT?" she screamed

    "sorry I didn't see ya there"

    "didn't you feel me?"

    "Sorry, your mane is so soft I didn't even feel that I was sitting over ya"

    "You..." Applejack screamed again "you think so?"

    "Of course, what do you do to keep it that soft?"

    "Well, I don't really do anything" she answered blushing a bit "it's natural"

    "well you sure do a good job" he said touching her mane "it's so soft it makes me wanna sleep on it"

    After a while they became good friends, but let's not talk about that, after a while Jay presented the group, but when he was about to present Frizzy, Rainbow dash flew and glomped him

    "Frizz!"

    "Rainbow?" he asked hugging her "you're going to see the princesses too?"

    "more or less" she said getting him go

    After a very looooooong while of presenting, Jay had a very important question

    "why are you guys going to see the princess?"

    "she wanted to see us" Blizzard asked

    "she sent us a letter" Frizzy replied "telling us she and her sister wanted to see us"

    It was becoming night time, so they set up the camp, there was no problem, as the new guys had sleeping bags. it was a very long night, the wind wasn't blowing, there was no sound, and there was a very calm silence. At the next morning there was a calm breeze, that kind of breeze that makes you feel like going on and never stop.

    "This breeze..." Jay said measuring the direction of the wind "it's on the way to Cantrelot"

    "If we follow it's direction we will make it to Canterlot in no time" Big Mac said

    They began walking, it was a nice road, but as they kept going they found a bit of a problem the road forked but whether they went by one or the other, the wind was going through both of, and both of the ways were kind of dangerous so either way, they all had to go through some itty bitty little risks, nothing to worry about. they chose the right side, it seemed it was a bit shorter than the other one but the road was a bit difficult.

    "it's the same, we gotta get to canterlot, don't we?" Jay said

    At night they set up a little camp, the moon was full and rising while some clouds were around it, covering it a bit, leaving some light shining beetween them. nopony noticed what happened then, around the clouds a ring appeared.

    "OH, MY GOSH!" Jay said looking up "A MOON HALO!"

    Everypony looked the ring it was a beatifull sight. After a while Jay began talking

    "It's going to snow"

    They just ignored what Jay said and went to their tents, they all knew princess Luna made her biggest effort to make her moon as beautifull as she could and with that ring she was lucky enough to make everypony look at the moon. In Canterlot the princesses couldn't think of anything except that, they have seen much of those, but these one was one of the most (if not the most) beautifull they ever saw. Hours went through, and morning came behind the mountains slowly, revealing a snowy forest around the group


    Enough for this chap

    10. Back to Ponyville

    Very well

    nu chap!

    Just so you know, I'd maybe make an apart fanfic to this with the... M content so I don't have to make this and M story an keep it as family friendly as I can...

    Tell me whaddaya think


    When everypony was up they were already feeling the cold of the ice and the snow. they walked for a while, but almost ten minutes after begining only Jay, Blizzard and Frizzy could keep on their feet (they studied at the artic part of Ko-Ba-Ka). Jay and the other two built an improvised tumbrill, so they could keep on moving. Jay took some jackets out of his back pack and gave them to the ponies in the tumbril.

    "you feelin' better?" he asked putting a little blanket so they could keep warmth

    "I think so" Fluttershy said

    A while later they finaly made it, they were in Canterlot, not that the weather changed, but from there they could get to the castle so the princesses could give them a place to warm up. A while of walking and a lot of indications from twilight they got to the castle, it was more majestic surrounded by the silver coloured snow.

    "Let's go" Jay said taking Fluttershy on his back just like the day they met

    They all entered the castle where the princesses were playing a little card game waiting for them to arrive. when they managed to get to the room the princesses were Jay, Blizz and Frizzy rested in the ground tired and freezing because they hadn't much cover and the tumbril was pretty heavy. The days there passed slowly, they hadn't much to do. the princess told them they had to wait untill all the students of the Uma academy, because there was a little surprise for them. the days were getting longer and there was a lot of time to do stuff. After three days another group of ponies arrived, they were some earth ponies and a unicorn. the unicorn walked to them and went to say hi

    "Hi, mister Dashing Fire" he said lowering his head a bit

    "I told ya to tell me Jay" Jay said lowirng his head too

    "who is this?" Fluttershy said

    "He's Fire Tornado" Frizzy said

    "they were my tutors in when we were in school" the kid said

    After presenting themselves, the kid began following them, they got to the castle and the little "surprise" started, a little graduation party, the princesses made that "little" party to celebrate their graduation from the school and a little ceremony for the new students of the the academy. after a big (just no to say huge [for not saying enormous]) party they all were prepairing to go back to their home. they managed to convince Jay to go in a carriage back to ponyvile (not exactly convice him... they knocked him out and tied him to a seat)

    "I can't believe that you actually used a frying pan to knock Jay out" Fluttershy said looking at him

    After a while of flying Jay woke up screaming

    "YOU DON'T KNOW TEENAGE COLTS ON THE MAIL SISTEM VERY WELL!"

    It took a while to calm him down, because he was very freaked out about flying, but the rest of the journey was calm except for any scream Jay had the chance to scream about any little move the carriage had to do to get to Ponyville. They were in the town at last and right after Jay got untied he jumped of the carriage and began kissing the ground and thanking Celestia he finally was safe and sound touching the ground (i didn't want that to rhyme). after a long walk they felt they were being followed. they turned around, they were being followed by two ponies, Fire Tornado and Trixie, who hid in the carriage minutes before the journey began joined the group just to have some company. nopony cared about anything, days were calm. a week after their arrival to ponyville, Fluttershy began acting a bit different, She was less active and also she couldn't walk or fly fastly without getting a horrible headache.

    "I think you should go to Twilight's home" Jay told her after some days "I bet she knows what's wrong with you"

    With no doubt she went to the library to check how was Twilight doing and if she knew something about her problem. it was a cold afternoon but Fluttershy had no problem, she went right inside the library to see Twilight (No way!) reading an old book about "heating" magic to keep the library warm.

    "uhh... Twilight?" Fluttershy called from behind

    "Fluttershy?" Twilight said putting the book down "What do ya need?"

    Fluttershy proceeded to tell her all about what was happening to her. Twilight seemed to know what was happening, so after getting a huge book with the words "A-to-Z: an encyclopedia about you need to know". after flipping through the pages Twilight managed to find what she was looking for. she stopped her hoof over one of the descriptions of the words in the "P" section

    "Is everything okay?" Fluttershy said noticing Twilight's jaw dropped

    "A-are you sure you wanna know?" the purple pony asked

    "Of course, I don't what Jay to be worried" Fluttershy said trying to peek in the book

    "Okay" Twilight said "you're... P-pregnant"

    Fluttershy's eyes widdened as she stared at the encyclopedia. after a while of procesing that, she bursted into laugh and glee, she ran to twilight and hugged her then she went through the town hugging anypony in her way, and telling them she was pregnant (no wonder some freaked out when she screamed that out loud and ran to Sweet Apple Acres (where Jay was). They were all working on something at the orchard, so see ing Fluttershy screaming like a crazy hunter realy took them out of focus.

    "What's wrong?" Jay asked making his way through a pile of apples that were over him

    "You remember my little problem?" Fluttershy said hugging the pile of apples

    "Yeah" he said getting out of the pile

    "well it was nothing to be worried!"

    "it isn't?" Applejack said helping Applebloom with an apple that was stuck in her mouth

    "Then what was up with ya?" Big Macintosh said trying to kide some branches he broke when he fell

    "I'm pregnant" she said

    The words echoed around the orchard and produced a very long and uncomfortable silence, followed by Jay fainting in front of them all with a calm smile. nopony could say anythig as they all stared at Fluttershy


    Enough for this chap

    Just so you know

    I've been recieving reviews froma guy who say "get an editor"

    well just so you know I can't, this is a shared computer, with a 98% full memory, I have forbidden any download.

    beides, I like my mistakes, they help me not making any other in the future.

    I'd also say that grammar can suck my balls and Capitalizing too

    so dude, stop complaining on my writing or JUST DON'T READ!

    With that said: STFU! Have a good day sir!

    11. Lupus Furorem

    Very well

    nu chap!

    nothing to tell besides the meaning of "Lupus furorem" it means wolf fury in latin. it's a curse I invented while writing my fanfictions, this is the first one that has it here.

    with that said just read my new chapter


    Jay was half consious, he was still trying to process what Fluttershy told him. She was pregnant, to start that was very awkward, also he was working at the farm with his family, which took it from awkward to a total kick to the teeth. Fluttershy took her time to explin why she was pregnant, omiting the parts that Applebloom was too young to know. Jay woke up a bit dizzy but obviously happy

    "Well that was a bit sudden" Jay said smiling

    "Sorry... but... I guess I was just a bit exited..." Fluttershy said with a sheepish smile

    After a while they found theirselves at Sweet Apple Acres. Applejack was getting Fluttershy ready with some traditions of the Apple family while Jay was going through the same with big macintosh

    "You know I don't think we should be doing this right now" Jay Said to Big Mac

    "I know it's to early but the earlier we start the earlier we'll finish" the stallion said shoving a huge apple onto Jays mouth "Now eat that while Granny Smith finishes up with your tuxedo"

    "Didn't know we had to mary" Jay said

    "Me neither" Big Mac said "granny smith said you have to"

    After much time both Fluttershy and Jay were exausted due to everything they had to do. from eating all kinds of apple-based food, to doing all kinds other weird stuff. they got to Fluttershy's home and took a little rest, to then go to the town and buy some stuff.

    "Okay, what do we need?" Jay said

    Fluttershy gave him a little list and they both splet up. Jay checked his list, not much, if he did it quick he could've had enough time to go to the library and pick up some parenting books.

    "Lemme see..." he said pressing his glasses against his face "lucerne"

    he went to a little stand somewhere, it had pretty much everything on the list. it had a short line, cool enough. Jay went to the last place in the line when two other ponies got in his way

    "Hey!" Jay sreamed "I was here first!"

    "Yeah, too bad" one of them said

    "Hey, what's that?" the other said pointing behind him

    Jay turned around just to be pushed by one of them. he was getting a bit pissed off that those ponies were taking advantage of him. he just stood there, trying to contain his killing will, when two more ponies just pushed him off the line

    "WHAT THE BOAT IS WRONG WITH YOU!" Jay growled

    "We were here first" one of them said

    "Nu-uh!" Jay said trying to recover his spot "you weren't there! I've been here all the time!"

    "Of course we were, our friends were saving this spot for us" the other said pushing Jay back

    Jay was now wishing blood. if somepony else tried getting on him he would get furious. then when he was about to get to the end of the line after more that an hour of waiting he got pushed over by the other ponies. that took him out of the line, and for instance meant he had to do the line again.

    "OKAY! THAT WAS ENOUGH!" he said as his eyes became red

    "Oh! the big bad pony is gonna attack us!" one said laughing at him

    Jay then jumped to them and began destroying them with his hooves while screaming with wrath

    "THAT'S WHAT YOU GET FOR MESSING WITH ME!" he screamed once more

    The other ponies in the line ran away, Jay glared at the ponies he just beat up before he went to the little tent and grabbed a bit of everything he needed

    "oh sorry son" the sellspony said "I need those for tomorrow"

    "this seems to be a very old place..." Jay said gritting his teeth.

    "This belonged to my father" the pony said

    "it would be really painfull if it broke"

    "What do you mean?"

    "This" Jay said turning back and getting ready to kick

    "Oh no! wait" the sellspony said "you can have anything you need! i-it's free for you sir"

    Jay smiled triumphantly while getting away with the stuff he needed. next thing was some stuff from sugar cube corner

    "since when they sell chocolate and grapefruit pie here?" Jay growled looking at the list

    he made the line, this time there was no need to attack any other pony. but Jay was still mad, deep inside he knew he was doing wrong, he just couldn't help it. his wrath was uncontrolable. he was afraid, he didn't want to hurt anypony. he went to Fluttershy's worried about what he could do to her while he was like that.

    "Oh hi Jay!" Fluttershy said helping him out. "What's the matter? you seem worried"

    "I..." Jay said before breaking to tears on her shoulder as his eyes turned blue again "I'M SCARED!"

    "Of what?"

    "I... Hurt... two ponies..." he mumbled looking down "I didn't know what I was doing..."

    "Jay..."

    "I need help" he cried once more

    "With what?" Fluttershy said trying to soothe him

    Jay slowly and stuttering told her what he did, how he got those two ponies to near death, then he started to get crazy, he was talking to himself, then (recovering his conciousness a bit) yelled fluttershy to tie him up so he couldn't hurt anypony. Fluttershy looked at him worried, still she did what he told her to do. She didn't know what could happen to him if he had one of those mood changes again. Fluttershy went to Twilight's again, she was (just like her last visit) reading a dusty old book.

    "Twilight!" Fluttershy called

    "What is it Fluttershy?" Twilight said putting her book down

    "There's something wrong with Jay" fluttershy said taking a seat

    "what do ya mean?" Twilight asked

    Fluttershy walked out of the house dragging Jay with her. he was tied up, growling and snarling like a wild dog. not only that, his eyes were crimson red again, his cutiemark was gone and his voice was replaced by a wolf's howl. Twilight checked all of her books, it said nothing about what Jay was going through

    "I don't get it!" Twilight said frustrated under a huge pile of books "There's nothing that matches his symptons"

    Then they went to Zecora's home, being familiar with all sorts of stuff she'd maybe know what was happening to Jay. with any luck even a cure for his problem. they crossed the forest making sure to avoid the "Poison Joke" plants while moving Jay around. When they got to zecora's she was meditating.

    "zecora!" twilight yelled "we need your help!"

    "What is it?" Zecora asked turning around

    "Jay has gone crazy!" Fluttershy said pulling him in

    Being there just made Jay angrier, being tied and dragged around against his will made him explode when he was finally still. he tried to break the rope, but twilight was using her magic to prevent him from doing that.

    "I see" Zecora said sitting near him "he got cursed..."

    "curse?" Fluttershy yelled looking at Jay who was snarling even harder

    "this is a rare curse a pony will get after suffering an explosion of massive rage, in the presence of a unicorn" Zecora said "It's called wolf fury"

    "But why did he get that 'explosion of rage'" Fluttershy said trying to get near Jay "he's always so calm nice and peacefull"

    "he could tell you anything before going crazy?" Zecora asked putting a berry of some kind on Jay's mouth

    Fluttershy told her exactly what Jay told her, the little "fight" with the other ponies at the town. Jay hesitantly swalowed the berry, Suddenly he had changed again, he was normal, his eyes blue again. he shivered on the floor fearing that he would become a beast again.

    "What did you do?" Twilight asked looking at Jay again

    "This berry can keep him controled for some time, but still, he needs a cure" Zecora said untying Jay

    "You don't have it?" Fluttershy said helping Jay up

    "I'm sorry, I don't have it" she said "But I can make it"

    "How?" Jay asked screaming "I beg of you! I don't want to hurt anypony ever again"

    "I need some things that are imposible to find in ponyville" Zecora said

    "We'll need help finding that stuff" Twilight said

    "Indeed. we need to find it all before the second cycle starts"

    "The second cycle?" fluttershy said

    "This curse is represented by four cycles, in the first one... well you see what happens" Zecora said taking some stuff "the second cycle makes him stronger, he'll lose control... his soul will be pressed into his body, he will be a wolf"

    "We cant let that happen!" Jay said

    "The third cycle seals you into your mind, you will never be the one you were" she said putting the stuff on a bag "in the fourth cycle your metabolism can't take it anymore, it will do the biggest effort being that so your body collpases, you die"

    Both Fluttershy and Twilight gulped when the heard that. Jay felt his heart drop to the floor, he never felt so bad in his entire life. not only he was becoming a beast, he was also going in deadly danger and he could die before his child was even born. he was feeling so bad he'd even jumped off a cliff. Fluttershy and Twilight left so Zeecora could speak a bit with Jay.


    Enough for this chap

    tell me what can I do to make this better!

    12. Adieu, Jay, Adieu

    Very well

    nu chap doods!

    now get ready for this chapter it's gonna be kinda sad, so get a box of Kleenex (nah not really)


    Zecora was giving Jay a lot of helpfull tips, so he could know what to do if he became a "wolf" again. after much time, she just gave him a little box.

    "This box has something you will find usefull" she said hugging Jay "You have to wait untill the time comes"

    She and Jay got out of the house and went to ponyville, where they would meet the other ponies to start the seeking for the stuff they needed. it was basically a lot of gemstones that had magic effects.

    "Magic Gemstones?" Twilight said "like... uh... the stones in the elements of harmony?"

    "something like that" Zecora said

    "How is it that those stones even exist now?" Fluttershy asked "The elements of harmony are even older than princess celestia!"

    "Mines" Jay said

    "Mines?" Applejack asked

    "it's like fosiles, it's erosion... and a lot of stuff I still don't understand quite right" he whispered

    They all walked through the forest, none of them actually knew what to do, only Zecora seemed to have a clue. they were looking for a cave, a very big cave, full of rare gemstones, and in the deepest place of the cave, there would be an enormous diamond. the thought of that made Spike drool.

    "You should stop speaking about gems before spike's body dehidrates" Twilight giggled

    After thinking about it, all of them started laughing except for Jay, who took it more seriously. he was worried about the curse, about anything he could do. Suddenly he tripped with a rock and instinctively screamed in a spanish fashion. All of them thought for a second that Jay would explode and become a "wolf" again. instead, he just burst into laughter. everypony else just laughed with him or tried helping him up.

    "Ya gotta admit that's funny" Applejack said winking to him

    "I guess it was" Jay said trying to recover his seriousness "but, please... don't let me say that again"

    They kept walking trying to find the cave, none of them knew what it was like, so they explored any cave they could find (which to tell the truth were a bit too much). They had their souls in the floor, untill Jay tripped into another rock, falling into a cave. he shouted out a bit happy

    "hey guys! there's a lot of gemstones here!" he screamed

    They all entered the cave, it, indeed, had much gemstones, all of them were very beautifull, but none of them were usefull for Jay's problem. even with the light coming from outside the cave and the gems reflecting the light into it, as they started to trott inside it became darker and darker. twilight used her magic to light the cave a bit, there were a lot of different gemstones, but only one was the one they looked for.

    "Where the heck can a gemstone be?" Applejack said "It's like looking for a needle in haystack!"

    "Could it be that one there?" Spike said pointing to a giant gemstone shaped like a heart

    "it is" Zecora said

    "how could we miss that?" Rarity said

    Zecora reaching for the stone but it was just to tall, it was in the tip of an enormous diamond that seemed attached to the grounf very deeply.

    "How can we get it?" Zecora said

    "Diamooond..." Spike babbled

    "I think we could use spike's hunger advantageously" Jay said

    Jay cleverly spike's like for gems to cut the diamond tower so it would fall with the heart shaped stone. the stone fell just as jay predicted, right into one of Zecora's bags. what they weren't expecting, was the giant rock that fell from teh cieling.

    "We get to be like Daring Do!" Pinkie exclaimed

    "THIS IS NO TIME TO CELEBRATE!" all naged her

    All of them ran away (Indiana Jones style) from the cave, having the stone with them. after they escaped that rock (and seven omer that were even bigger than the last one) they got out of the cave, just to see it was already night. all got their tents set, and sat there gazing to the stars. When nopony was seeing Twilight took Fluttershy to the forest, so none could listen to them.

    "What is it Twilight?" Fluttershy asked

    "You see Fluttershy" Twilight said looking down "I think... we should get away from Jay"

    There were some bushes and trees near them hidden inside them, was Jay, hiding. he was hearing their conversation, he couldnt stand it but hearing what they were saying.

    "What do ya mean?" Fluttershy said frowning

    "That exactly!" Twilight said "his curse is putting us in danger, and the cure is ridiculously dificult to get!"

    "W-well... you have a point there" Fluttershy whispered "But..."

    "But what?"

    "Don't you understand?" Fluttershy said "I love him... and... think in the baby"

    "the baby?" Twilight asked puzzled "What about it?"

    "The baby will need a father" Fluttershy nagged her "what would happen if we Jay ever knows that?"

    Jay heard each word, but Fluttershy's last words. He had enough with what he heard, quickly he went back to the camp, crying. Trying to smile and remember that he could always start from zero. as he finished his letter he turned to Applejack and kissed her forehead. Applejack woke up and looked at him leave.

    "Cousin?" Applejack said "W-where are you goin'?"

    "You don't need to know it" Jay said turning around with a fake smile "I just wanna go..."

    "Where?"

    "Nowhere... I'll find a way myself..." he said truning around

    Applejack stood on his way, with some tears on her eyes. Jay tried to push her and make his way out, but she didn't want him to leave, not again. it was just a month (or so) since he came back, it was still to soon to even think about letting him go.

    "Please, leave it that way..." Jay said finally managing to get through his cousin "I'm going, that's all"

    "But Jay, won't you at least tell me why?" Applejack cried pulling his tail

    "Sorry. My decision is taken" Jay snapped coldly "Twilight is right. If I stay with you I'll only be a danger"

    "come on, Jay!" Applejack said crying even more "What are you saying?"

    "I have no more to say..." Jay said as a tear rolled down his eye

    While that was applening Fluttershy had come back to the camp she heard the whole conversation between Applejack and Jay. her eyes teared up a bit as she saw Jay turning around and walking into the forest

    "It's time for me to go, cousin" Jay whispered walking back "Thank you very much for everything"

    "Jay! I know you'll come back" Applejack yelled "I'll be waiting for ya!"

    Everypony woke up with applejack's yelling, they all went to the spot where she was standing looking at her cousin leave. Big mac walked to his sister, and layed his hoof on her shoulder, tears forming on his eyes too. a little reflection of Jay's hair shone through the forest. when it dissapeared both Applejack and Big Macintosh started crying bitterly.


    Enough for this chap

    13. Sad Past

    Very well

    nu chap doods!

    I'll center this chapter around Eternal Blizzard. you'll see why later on


    A sad air was flowing around the forest. Eternal Blizz looked up sadly, one of his best friends was gone. he lost something precious... again... his yellow eyes were locked to the moon. he was remembering his family. that took him to a terrible memory.

    "it happened ten years ago..." he thought to himself

    Blizz closed his eyes as he stared to the moon.

    Blizz' memories...

    It was an cold winter afternoon at Ko-Ba-ka, four pegasi walked thruogh a snowy path. the path leaded them to a mountain. they walked under a cliff.

    "woah!" a foal said "this looks amazing"

    "my little brother is right" a pony that seemed just a bit older than the other said "this is new!"

    "this is your first winter here" one that seemed father of the kids "its obvious you've never seen something like this"

    "theres much more to see" a mare who obviously was their mother "tomorrow we'll show you more"

    the family walked a for some minutes, still walking under the cliff. a little wind blew, and some snow fell from the edge of the cliff, none of them gave it much importance. it was a terrible mistake.

    "I have a bad feeling dad" the little one said

    "Don't worry son" the father snapped

    "Yeah, little bro!" the older kid snickered "were gonna be fine"

    The mother kept quiet, letting her family chat. the young pony tried to get over the feeling something was wrong. when they were about to get to the end. A loud noise surprised them, the youngest pony looked up. an avalanche was going down the cliff, the older ponies stretced their wings and flew away, but the little one who was very young, couldn't fly. his family flew down and pushed him away. the foal turned to them as they got burried under the snow.

    "NO!" the foal yelled running to where his family was

    he stretched his wings and flew to the place they fell. he searched for them under the snow for what seemed hours. the foal had a disapointed and brokenhearted look on his eyes. his family was gone, along with his heart and everything he had.

    End of Blizz' memories...

    Blizz' eyes shot open his breath became faster, he was sweating, and he was pale (or just a bit more since his coat is completely white). Applejack turned to him, she was worried. they hadn't been friends for much time but she had grown to like him a lot. she couldn't see a friend like him that way

    "Hey Blizz"

    "Huh?" Blizz mumbled noticing AJ "What's going on?"

    "Are you okay?"

    "I'm okay" he said with a fake smile on his face

    "You sure?" AJ asked sitting on his side

    "I..." Blizz muttered "I'm not"

    "What's wrong?" she asked laying her hoof on his shoulder

    Blizz, tried to hold back his tears, but he couldn't. he broke to tears on AJ's shoulder. she couldn't understand what was wrong with him, so she just patted his back trying to soothe him. after some minutes he moved away from her.

    "now you'll tell me what's worng with you?" AJ asked

    "I... just feel bad" he said catching his breath "I lost my family... and now my best friend..."

    "I know your best friend, my cousin... but... what do you mean 'your family'?" AJ asked

    Blizz slowly told her what he was remembering not long ago. Applejack looked at him again and hugged him once more. When Blizz was calm he looked at the moon, AJ knew he was sad, but he had a little simle on his face.

    "They're gone..." he muttered "But I guess it's meant to be..."

    "Meant to be?"

    "You know... I think that my life would be different" He said smiling to her "I think the big boss up there wanted a different destiny for me..."

    Applejack looked at him puzzled she didn't know what he meant, he was saying that beacuse his parents died he'd have a happier life. she got closer to him and sweetly asked

    "What do you mean?"

    "Well... I wouldn't know Jay, Frizzy or even Fire Tornado" he muttered "they're like brothers to me"

    "You had no friends?" AJ asked geting closer to him

    "I didn't have any of them..." he said "that's one of the things that make me think the accident was meant to happen"

    AJ looked up to the sky there were no clouds it was a beautiful sight. it was ver soothing, she turned around to the pony next to her. Taking a closer look to Blizz' eyes she noticed they had no 'shine' on them, it was like his soul had gone in the avalanche. he looked blankly to the stars. each of them made him remember his family and firends.

    "Ice Road..." He muttered to one of the stars "Big bro..."

    AJ turned to him with a lot of questions on her mind

    "Pink Diamond..." he turned to another star "Mother..."

    "Mother?" she said turning to the same star

    "Frosty Wind..." he said turning to one last star "Father"

    Applejack's eyes watered when Blizz finished his sentence and turned to the moon, he tried to look at one more pony on his life, that blessing he'd never forget, but there was none. his best friends were options but they simply weren't that much of what he was thinking. then he felt something, something warm, soft and delicate.

    "Huh?" he mumbled as he turned around

    it was Applejack, hugging him. for her it was sad to know that such a nice pony had such a terrible past. he had no family, his best friend was gone, and just as if he enjoyed it, he swallowed the pain and said that everything that he suffered was meant to be and that all what he went through would lead to more suffering. Blizz' suddenly felt the wound on his heart close a bit. a little 'shine' on his eyes appeared. he embraced her, he felt his heart healing, it was that blessing. that little piece of heaven he needed. he then rememberes what it was to have somepony like that. he turned to her, tbu instead of feeling happier he felt even worse than he ever felt when he was younger. he shoved all his suffering over another pony, who of all thing had already suffered much in one day

    "I'm sorry AJ..." He mumbled breaking the hug "I have to go"

    "Where are you going?" she said

    "I... I apreciate this" he said flashing her a smile "But my best friend needs me"

    "but he said..."

    "I know what he said he's always been a little bit too dramatic when it comes to sadness" blizz chuckled "he just needs a bit of tough love"

    "Can I go with ya?" she said walikg to him "I'm sure you could use some help"

    "Uh... sure" he answered with a tiny blush on his face "let's go, the sooner we leave the sooner we'll find 'im"


    Enough for this chap

    14. Best Friends

    Very well

    nu chap doods!

    and now, I will show Jay's past


    Jay did his best to climb a tree after he was far enough from the little camp

    "Twi is right..." he mubmled "I'm a nuisance..."

    he turned to the stars, trying to hold back his tears. a cold breeze blew, and the moon was shining pale. his world had crumbled before him. he turned to the ground and closed his eyes. one only tear rolled down his cheek and he couldn't help it but fall asleep.

    Jay's memories...

    there's large building, built near the the peak of a mountain, a famous school for ponies. in the grounds of the school a foal, who had a pair fo glasses hanging over his nose, who seemed to be at least nine years old, walked lonely.

    "I don't know why am I here" he mumbled to himself

    he was in that school for reasons he didnt understand. his family was having a very hard time economicaly, so they decided to send him north, with a part of his family that was more stable. the poor boy had no friends there, and he wasn't very fond to the family. at school he always spent his time alone, drawing and writing in the snow. one day a pegasus, who seemed a bit younger than him, ran up to him hiding

    "What are you doing?" the boy said

    "They wanna attack me!" the pegasus yelled pointing something behind them

    There was a pair of ponies, who seemed older than them. the pony was blocking them.

    "What are you doing there?" the older ones snapped "are you going to defend this freak"

    "What did he do to you?" the kid said

    "he just lurks around like an idiot" one of them reasured

    "Is that all?" the pony said "You wanna attack him because he's alone? that's stupid!"

    The pegasus looked at the older pony confused, he was trying to process what was happening. a pony who knew next to nothing about him was protecting him without caring what would happen to him

    "move aside, or else!" the other threatened

    the pony just stood there, hoping the others would just leave. not the case, they just attacked them both. both the bullies went away and left the two young foals there.

    "hey, you shouldn't have done that" the pegasus said "now you're hurt too"

    "hehe... I thought you'd need some help"

    "then... I think we should be friends" the pegasus said smiling "My name is Eternal Blizzard, pleasure"

    "Call me Jay" the pony said with a smile

    End of Jay's memories...

    Jay woke up, he was trying to keep calm but he couldn't hold his tears back. his memories haunted him, his mind forced him to remember his friends, how they met, and all they lived together

    "That day I met my best friend" he muttered remembering Blizz.

    he tried to sleep once more, but again the memories of his best friends invaded his dreams.

    memories again...

    Jay and Eternal Blizzard were running from the bullies again, they were escaping once more, not because they lurked around or stuff like that, they pranked the bullies. after running for ten minutes or so, they ended up running to a forest near the school. Jay and Blizz walked further and got lost in the forest.

    "dude... I think we're lost" Blizz said

    "yup..." Jay mumbled "and if we don't leave now... we're screwed"

    Both tried to split up and find a way out, just to find themselves a bunch of times before realizing they were walking in circles. after what seemed more than two hours, they found a foal, he seemed just a bit younger than Jay. the pony was sitting there, it seemed he was waiting for something to happen.

    "Hey" Jay called

    The pony raised his head a bit, and looked down again. Blizz tried to get closer but the pony pushed him away. Jay got closer, he was stronger stronger than Blizz, so when the tiny pony tried to push him (and failed) he decided to ignore them

    "What's up?" Jay said trying to look him in the eye

    The pony's red eyes blankly looked at a little piece of paper he was holding with his hooves. Jay took it and read. it was a letter from his mother.

    "what's it say?" Blizz asked pushing Jay a bit

    "ahem" jay cleared his throat. 'Dear Son,

    Your father and I have to go to canterlot,

    it's an important event

    don't worry, your sister will take care of you

    signed: Mom'"

    The pony sobbed a bit. then Jay sat near him and asked

    "What Happened buddy?"

    "My parents..." he muttered

    "What happened to your parents?" Blizz asked sitting on his other side

    "they..." the pony mumbled "they died while they stayed in canterlot"

    Jay and Blizz hugged him lightly

    "Why are you alone?" Jay said

    "Don't you have a sister?" Blizz asked readin the letter once more

    "She died... on an accident" the pony mumbled

    Blizz looked away, remembering what happened to his family, in the avalanche.

    "I did my research..." he said raising his voice a bit "the only thing I could find out was that the accidents were related to Prince Blueblood so the police let it that way"

    All of them cried a bit, then Jay got up

    "hey, you have a place to stay?" he asked

    "Nope..."

    "Wanna come with me?" Jay said offering his hoof

    "Uuuhhh... sure..." the pony said

    "What's your name?" Jay said helping him get up

    "I'm Frizzy" he said

    memories end...

    "AAAAH!" Jay screamed to himself "Stop remebering them! it's just more suffering for you..."

    he didn't try to sleep anymore, if he didn't sleep the memories wouldn't slap him in the face anymore. he looked to the sky trying to stop his mind from any thought and maybe find a way to sort it out then another memory came to his mind. he wasn't sad anymore, he was furious, or at least outside he was. inside he was fighting with his own mind, the part that was the wolf was trying to get out and controll him once more, the other was struggling to keep it in.

    "you won't have to suffer anymore" he heard "you'll be inside... forever... no more suffering..."

    Jay's mind tried to find a way to say no, but the wolf was another mind, it was smarter, he had an answer for anything Jay could say. finally Jay gave up on trying, he let the wolf take control over his mind. as soon as the wolf took control Jay's mind sealed him inside the wolf, letting him alone and his memory to himself.

    "this feels good" He thought "I don't have to suffer anymore... I don't have to be mad, or sad, I can float around my memories... forever..."

    his eyes looked around through his memories, they were floating around like tiny spheres of light. Jay's attention was dragged directly to one of the spheres, it had a tiny image of his school floating inside it, he touched it it and suddenly appeared in his school. he looked around, there were no ponies there. he kept on walking through the fields of the school until he arrived to a little cave inside the forest he met frizzy. he remembered, it was a special place for him and his friends. they didn't have much friends, but there they met one of the best. he heard some voices coming from outside the cave, he couldn't forget those voices. he perfectly remembered everything now.

    "now I understand how it works" he said to himself

    memories...

    Jay and his friends ran through the forest they were escaping the bullies yet again. another day another prank, they were used to running from the bulies, it had become their favourite game. after a while they ran into a tiny cave when they were sure the bullies grew tired of chasing them, they burst into laughter

    "You saw that?" Blizz said trying to surpress his laughter "that is how you shove a bucket full of crabs into a pony's head"

    "you saw when I threw that rock over Spade's head? classic joke" Jay said

    When frizzy was about to say what he did, they all heard something from deep in the cave. Jay leaded the search into the cave. after five minutes they found a bright red light that seemed as a unicorn's power.

    "Guys I think we should go back" frizzy said "I'm sure the break is almost over"

    "it's hardly been five minutes, and we still have a lot of time before the break is over" jay said

    they hid behind some rocks and saw a tiny unicorn, he seemed to be one or two years younger than them. the little unicorn was casting some spells, he didn't seem to be too much of an expert but he sure was good. he was tring what some of them recalled to be transformation spells. when Jay was sure there was no problem he walked towards the tiny pony. the unicorn turned to him and immediatley freaked out.

    "no, no, wait I'm just trying to..." Jay said

    before Jay could finish his sentence the unicorn attacked him with his magic and ran away. Jay opened his eyes and looked around himself, Blizz and Frizz' eyes were wide open and their mouths agape.

    "What is it?" Jay said

    "D-dude..." Frizz said "you... you're..."

    "what the heck is it?" Jay said

    "you're kinda..." Blizz said surpressing his laughter "Girly"

    Jay looked at himself, the jinx that the unicorn casted over him had turned him into a filly. at first he freaked out a bit, but then he thought of something else.

    "Guys" Jay said trying to put the lowest voice she could "we have to catch that unicorn and make him turn me back to normal"

    "Okay 'May'" Frizz said

    "May?" blizz asked turning to Frizz

    "Well it's kind of the same as her normal name" Frizz said "and it makes more sense than calling a girl 'Jay'"

    "well I guess you're right, let's get going" May said walking deeper into the cave

    When they were deeper into the cave, they heard something behind some rocks. May walked to the rocks, and saw something behind it. it was the unicorn, taking a look at him she noticed his coat was orange and his mane was yellow with some reddish tones. he sheepishly smiled at May, he knew his mistake.

    "You have to fix this" May said putting her hoof on the pony's shoulder

    "I don't know how" the unicorn said "It was an accident!"

    "ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME?" May screamed hiperventilating "HOW AM I GOING BACK TO THE SCHOOL!"

    "I think I could check my books" the pony said

    "Do it now!" the filly screamed

    "L-listen... my books are in the school" he said "I just come here to practise"

    "Let's get his books" Frizzy said turning around

    "I think I'll stay here" may said "I don't want anypony to see me until this kid turns me back to a colt"

    "hey! I have a Name!" the pony said punching May soflty

    "And what exactly is that name?" May asked before returning the punch

    "I'm Fire Tornado, miss" he said

    May smacked him again and laughed a bit. the other boys ran away to the school and gathered all the magic books they could find.

    "So, Fire Tornado" May said "why are you alone?"

    "I... don't like company"

    "Why? you're a handosme guy!" May said before covering her mouth "that jinx is seriously turning me into a girl"

    "Thanks for wat you said, but..." he said "I don't like being around other ponies..."

    "whatcha mean?" May saig putting her hoof around him

    "I'd better hang out with my family" the unicorn said using his magic to take a tiny phto out oh his mane

    in the photo there were two unicorns similar to him, a colt who Jay asumed was Fire and a foal that slept on the mother's back.

    "are they your family?" may asked looking at the baby pony

    "yeah... those are my parents" then he turned to the tiny pony "she's my sister..."

    "What happened?" SHe asked noticing fire was sadly looking down "you seem sad"

    "mom... just... abbandoned me in the forest" Fire said

    "woah..." she muttered turning around

    "and my father sent me here so he wouldn't have to see my face" he said

    "I..." May tried to say but she had nothing that could help the poor guy

    "And my sister... she..." Fire sobbed "she's in a coma..."

    May hugged the pony lightly, his life had been very hard (not more than Frizz or Blizz' life though). almost like a big sister or a mother, May put her hoof on Fire's shoulder, she smiled to him. before she could say anything, Blizz and Frizzy came back.

    "Hey guys we..." Blizz said

    "well well well well well well well" frizzy said "WHat do we have here?"

    "It's not what it looks like!" May yelled "just hand over the books!"

    After checking a ton of books they found a dusty book, it seemed very old, and the cover was almost completley ripped off, the cover of the book was written in japanese

    "It says... uh... Tenkuu no Shihaisha: adovansusupersugaido" (天空の支配者:アドヴァンススペルガイド) Jay read "It's... if my japanese is right, an old tome of 'Ruler of Heavens: Advanced Spell Guide' a book ninth grade magic class book"

    "What's a kid your age doing with a book for ninth graders?" Blizz asked

    "We checked your classroom, you're in first grade" Frizz said checking the book

    "I find stuff for first graders boring" the kid said "but they won't let me study advanced stuff untill I'm older"

    "enough chat!" May screamed impatiently "I need you to turn me back into a..."

    "Don't be impatient Ma'am" Fire interrupted smirking "I'm being careful! this book, is more than a hundred years old"

    After a while Fire found what he was looking for.

    "Chapter 18: Shape shifting spells" Fire muttered after turning the page once more "spell number 1897, Gender alterations"

    Fire read the spell for some time until he fully memorized it. he stood on all fours, and used his magic. a tiny flash of light blinbed them and all of a sudden May turned into Jay once more.

    "It's good to be me again" Jay said

    "Say... if you're bored of first grade stuff..." Blizz said "why don't we teach ya? we're in third grade, I guess we can help"

    Fire took a very respectfull tone and sat in fromt of them

    "you'll help me even when I turned your friend into a girl?" he said bowing his head "you're my masters from now on!"

    End of memories...

    Jay was in the room of the spheres again, he curled up in there, gathering all his memories around him, enjoying them one by one, not knowing what was happenning outside of his mind


    Enough for this chap

    15. Ancient Fang

    Hi, I'm the author and I bet a grape that once you were a baby

    oh another thing, sorry I didn't update in a long time D:

    I had some problems in school ¬¬

    Tenth Grade is bullsh*t

    and now I don't get enough time to write D:

    but I'll make sure I can write something on weekends, I swear I will!

    and now, *gets some momentum(?)* let's see what's up with AppleJack and Eternal Blizzard


    Applejack and Eternal Blizzard walked carefully through the forest, not knowing where Jay could be, just having in mind the goal to find him. the forest seemed to get deeper as they moved, and the awkward silence didn't help.

    "Y'know..." Blizz finaly said "I think were walking in circles"

    "Why do you think so..." Applejack asked looking around

    "I've seen my hoofprints in the floor around six times"

    both kept silent for a while trying to find another way they could follow. when they found a way (checked around eleven times by Blizz), and walked. the forest still seemed to get deeper with each step, but they started chatting, that helped them a bit.

    "so," Applejack said "why are you and my cousin such good friends?"

    "when we were on school he sorta, kinda saved my life from some guys" Blizz said

    "Kinda?"

    "he ended up getting punched as much as I did"

    both kept on chatting until they heard some steps behind them. not knowing what to do Blizz pushed Applejack to a bush and told her to keep silent. it was a young manticore. they remained silent until they were sure the manticore left, then applejack (blushing just a little bit) mumbled

    "Uh... Blizz"

    "what is it?" he mumbled still looking around

    "You're still lying on top of me"

    both looked into each other eyes and very slowly they splet up, and got out of the bush, as if nothing happened. they kept walking, trying to hear everything around them. there was a strange sound coming out of some bushes, Applejack became curious and checked the bushes. Blizz did the same, the sound became a little louder, it was muffled, but very clear, it was some kind of laughter.

    "let's check" Both said as they made their way into the bush

    the bushes were denser than they thought, but after a while the laughter became so clear, Applejack could recognize a maniacal tone in the voice. when they managed to get to the place, they saw something lurking in the shadows, none of them wanted to get closer.

    "what's that?" Applejack asked trying to look at the thing

    "Dunno... it seems..." Blizz mumbled taking a step

    then both heard a little "Crack" under them, blizz moved his hoof to see what caused the sound, it was a bone, the thing seemed to be a carnivore of some sort. the animal turned to them, it walked towards the bush they were hiding in, then all of a sudden it walked away.

    "whew, that thing didn't seem to notice us here" Applejack said "What do you think... Blizz? what's wrong?"

    Eternal Blizzard was paralized, it seemed like the animal had scared him. his mouth was agape and his eyes were open wide

    "What's wrong?" AJ repeated getting in front of him

    "The... animal... j-Jay" he stuttered

    "Relax, now tell me. What's wrong?"

    "I think the animal was..." He mumbled "Jay..."

    Both turned to the animal once more. it was lurking around catching any little rat that had the bad luck to find itself near him. Applejack took a look, the animal turned to them once more, Applejack then had a good angle to see the animal, it was Jay. he was very different, his skin was a darker tone than it always was, his eyes became similar to a cat's only they were both red. the animal got close once more. Applejack was ready to scream, but then she felt something pressing over her lips, Eternal Blizzard kissed her to shut her up. after some time Jay turned around when a tiny rat ran near them.

    "Are you crazy!" AJ said when Blizz stopped hissing her

    "tell me, what would've happened if 'Jay' heard you scream?" he said turning to Jay who was eating the rat

    "what do you mean?"

    "just think for a second, don't you think he could've done something to us if he found us?" he said sharply

    there was an awkward silence except for the sounds of Jay killing little animals and devouring them, after some time Eternal Blizzard turned towards AJ blushing a bit

    "did you like it?" he mumbled

    AJ blushed deeply turning almost as red as her big brother, she didn't even think about the kiss up to that moment, but now that he mentioned it, Blizz' kiss felt very good, even if his intention wasn't exactly to be romantic. even if it wasn't her first time, it felt really good, better than anytime she was ever kissed, or than she ever kissed anypony else.

    "you are a great kisser" she said turning around

    After a while 'Jay' sniffed a bit, then he turned towards where the other ponies were. AJ freaked out and turned to Blizz

    "He's going to the camp!" she said

    "Don't worry, I saw this comming" he said smirking "I told Frizzy and Zecora to get the resting stones"

    "You think about everything, right?" she said still staring at the path Jay took

    "Yep" Blizz added showing his teeth in a wide smile "I also told the unicorns to protect the camp with their magic"

    after a while Blizz helped Applejack to get over a tree and both of them followed Jay from above the only point he didn't seem to bother to look at. When they were close enough to the camp Jay looked at the unicorns who had their eyes closed focusing on keeping some kind of magic around them, he turned to each one of them. the last one he looked at was Fire Tornado, and suddenly he howled as a wolf and tried to run towards him, but the magic the unicorns used blocked him and made him bounce towards a tree.

    "They're safe for now" Blizz said when he saw Jay with his face against the tree

    "We just have to wait for Zecora and Frizzy" AJ said hugging Blizz

    both smiled as they tried to contain the urge of laugh because Jay hitting his head against the magic bubble. suddenly both's smile turned into a frown, Jay had slammed his head against the bubble, and it began to give in to Jay's strength. the bubble began to crack, and Jay started hitting harder, slowly cracking the wall even more as the unicorns' power began fading away.

    "oh no!" Blizz said "Frizzy and Zecora aren't back yet!"

    "how much time do you think the guys can keep the bubble up?" AJ asked gulping a bit

    "I'd say that they have around five minutes before the bubble bursts..."

    Time ran slowly, almost like everything was in slow motion... one hit, five minutes... another hit, four minutes... more hits, three... two... one... the bubble shattered and Jay was and right in the camp, destryong everything on his way, even ttacking the ones that once were his friends, Eternl Flizzar put Applejack on the floor and both ran towards them. when everything seemed to be lost, Frizzy, Zecora and, for some strange reason, Rainbow Dash came back with the heart stone they found earlier along with other four stones, they glowed slightly

    "put the stones around Jay!" Zecora yelled

    everypony, except for Fluttershy, had a stone, each stone shone magically and drew a purple pentagon around Jay. each of the stones shone with a different light that drew a star around Jay, Zecora and Fluttershy, who were the ones who were close. Eternal Blizzard, Frizzy and Fire Tornado stood there trying to think about what to do if Jay became crazy again. the star shone brighter and started closing around Jay, who was screaming in pain. the dark colours started to run from his body creating a black sphere over them.

    "hold him!" Zecora told Fluttershy when the dark colour left Jay's body

    Both Zecora and Fluttershy held Jay (who after the sphere came out of his body fainted) and dragged him away from the pentagon as the other ponies backed away aswell. the strange sphere started to shine, and for some reason the light around them, the moon's shine, the stars, everything. the only source of light was the strange sphere. after a minute the sphere stopped growing, it suddenly flashed sending waves of white light around them.

    "what is this?" Frizzy asked trying to cover his eyes

    before somepony could answer the light dissapeared, and, inside a crater, there was a pony. it was an alicorn, his coat was bone-white, his mane and tail, were short, black and grey, his eyes were red, his horn was broken, his eyes were those of a snake and blood injected, he was extremely thin and showed a maniacal smile on his face. with a voice cold as ice he began muttering something in Japanese...

    "これは古代の狼の魂です。悪魔の力はこのラメの惑星を破壊しようとしている!僕を恐れている!私はのために、古代の牙!" (how to pronounce it if you wanna know: Kore wa kodai no ookami no tamashiidesu. Akuma no chikara wa kono rame no wakusei o hakai shiyou to shite iru! Boku o osorete iru! Watakushiha no tame ni, kodai no kiba!) and then he burst into a maniacal laughter

    "What did he say?" Fire Tornado asked with his mouth agape

    "I think I know" Blizz said trying to remember the japanese he managed to remember from the lessons when he was at school "he said: 'this is the soul of the ancient wolf. the power of the devils will ravage this lame world! fear me! for I am, Ancient Fang!'... this is bad..."


    woah, woah, woah! you thought I was gonna write more? I think this is enough for a chapter (that I've been tryong to write for around a frekking week!)

    anyway! tell me did you like it?

    say everything in a review!

    and until next time, have an elusive psicological hug as big as the moon!

    bye bye!

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