The Portal to Equestria: Reloadedby Pikafrogbro
Chapters
Chapter 1
"He's gone..." The doctor said with a sigh.
"..." I said nothing.
"I'm sorry for your loss."
"Cut the crap." I spat.
"What?"
"You heard me, stupid human."
"Last time I checked you were a human too, Mr. Stauft." He said nonchalantly. "By the way, would you be in any way related to..."
"I am him."
"...HUH?" he yelled, obviously suprised.
"That's right my name is Drew Stauft."
"Then that means that..." He trailed off.
"Yes, I am the the element of darkness."
"..." he remained silent.
"Do you know who that is?" I asked as I pointed at the now deceased kid.
"No."
"That is my brother, the element of light." I said quickly.
"I am sorry, I know how you feel."
"NO YOU DON'T!" I yelled in anger. "We were brothers, yes, but we were much more than that. We were the elements of light and dark, yin and yang if you will. One without the other will cause disorder, with disorder comes chaos, and with chaos comes certain and utter destruction. So, you basically just destroyed your own planet by not saving one kid." I explained.
"Oh My God..." he whispered while he put his head in his hands.
I then just picked up my deceased brother and teleported away to my own home.
When I got home I decided that it would be best to build an impenetrable ball of darkness around me, because I knew what was about to come. God had always said that when an element dies, a world war will happen. He said that it would last for a while and end in the destruction of the planet. So, I will wait until this war is over, but for now I must meditate.
So, thats what happened I said as I finished meditating. Apparently my brother was sent to the my little pony: friendship is magic universe. That is where I must go then. I must be reunited with my little brother. Then I teleported away to equestria.
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Chapter 2
I ended up in what I could only assume was the Everfree forest. I looked around for a bit and finally found my way out. I then realized how far away Twilights house was from the edge of the forest.
"Oh screw this." I said to myself.
I was just about to teleport there, but then I remembered something.
"Wait, how will they react to their being a human here? More so, what will they think if I just teleport there?" I pondered. "Oh, screw it, I don't care." Then I teleported to Twilight's house.
I appeared inside of Twilight's house and looked around.
"Hmmm, okay, 6 ponies, a dragon, and Harrison, all with their mouths agape, check. So, I guess I'm in the right place!" I thought to myself.
"Ah finally!" Harrison said as he stood up.
"Hey Harrison, Sup."
"Not much, just hangin' out with my peeps." Harrison replied calmly.
"Cool, cool."
"By the way, what took you so long?" Harrison asked.
"You know how long God's stories are."
"Oh yeah, I kinda forgot." Harrison replied with a laugh.
"Excuse me if i'm butting in to your conversation, but WHO IS THIS GUY?" Twilight asked, sounding quite mad.
"This is my brother." Harrison replied.
"The names Drew Stauft, I'm the element of Darkness." I said, sounding more happy then I intended.
"Element of Darkness?!?! That sounds scary..." Fluttershy said.
"Naw I'm fine. Besides, if I ever get out of hand then my little brother over here will stop me."
"and how do ya plan he's gonna do that?" Applejack asked curiously.
"Well, he is the element of Light after all, so..."
All the ponies looked at Harrison and gave him a look that said "huh?"
"You didn't mention that did you?" I asked Harrison.
"Nope." he answered.
"Well, that doesn't matter. All that matters is that we are both back together, so there will now be harmony once again." I said.
"Hold up you two!" Rainbow yelled. "I don't believe that Mr. Show-up-out-of-nowhere is telling the truth. I guess that I believe Harrison being the element of light because he's so nice, but the element of darkness sounds so evil and you don't seem to fit that bill."
"Hey, you see that pencil right there?" I asked.
"Yep." Everyone replied.
I snapped my fingers and a small black hole appeared beside me. The pencil flew towards the black hole and then disappeared. I snapped my fingers again and the black hole disappeared as quickly as it came.
"Now, I believe you." Rainbow said after a few moments.
I looked over in the corner of the room and saw Fluttershy cowering in the corner. I started walking over to her, but Harrison stopped me and wordlessly walked over to Fluttershy. He sat down next to her and stroked her mane. She picked her head up and looked up at him, then put her head down on Harrison's lap and sighed happily, Harrison smiled.
"They look so cute together..." I commented.
"Yeah, they do." Rarity said.
"Hey guys I'm going to meditate."
With that, I plopped down on the floor and started to meditate.
"Well that works I guess..." Spike commented.
"Hey Drew, how are you?"
"I'm fine." I answered "Hey god, I've gotta ask you a question."
"Okay, shoot."
"Is it possible to turn Harrison and myself into ponies?"
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Chapter 3
"Why?" God asked curiously.
I gave him the are-you-f###ing-kidding-me look.
"Oh yeah, the all knowing thing, right."
"So is there a way to?"
"Nope."
"I kinda expected you to say that."
I thought for a moment. "So if there isn't a way to turn us into ponies, then what could he do?"
"Are you just going to stand there and think all day?" He asked impatiently.
"Give me a minute, I'm only human you know!"
"Well technically your not because of all the powers and stuff."
"THAT'S IT!" I exclaimed, while startling God in the process.
"What?" God asked quizzically.
"Can you get rid of our powers and make us regular humans?"
"Sure, but you must know that..."
I don't care what the consequences are, I just want my brother to be happy and getting rid of our powers is getting him one step closer to happiness." I explained as I cut him off.
"Alright I'll do it." God sighed.
"KThanx!" I said excitedly.
And then I woke up.
I started to stand up and saw Harrison.
"Hey Harrison guess wh-"
Then I fell over and blacked out from exhaustion.
I woke up and saw nobody standing over me and checking to see if I was okay. "Gee thanks for staying with me guys." I said sarcastically. I suddenly felt that I was laying on something soft and I mean REALLY soft. I turned over and saw that I was laying on a cloud. I got up and looked out the window, it was pitch black outside. I decided to get back in bed and suddenly realized something.
"Wait a minute, I'm in a house made out of clouds so.... That must mean I'm in Rainbow Dashes house!" I deduced.
"Wait, why in the HELL am I in Dash's house?" I said to myself.
Apparently I said that too loud, because I heard somepony say "Huh?"
I saw a figure sit up in the darkness and turn the bedside lamp on.
"Oh, it's just you Drew."
I was stunned beyond belief at that very moment.
"What's wrong?" Dash asked.
"Why were we sleeping in a bed together?"
"Oh, you passed out on Twilights floor and were out cold for quite a while. I was the only one that could have company over because my house is so big. So, I brought you here, tucked you into bed, and I fell asleep myself." Dash explained.
"So, that was all that happened, nothing else happened in this bed, right?"
"Nope, that's all that happened." Dash said.
"Ok, good." I said with a sigh of relief.
"What else could have hap-" She stopped herself in mid-sentence, a dark blush formed on her cheeks.
"You pervert!" Dash said as she threw a pillow at me.
I looked at her and she looked at me. I cracked the cheesiest smile I could muster and we both started laughing.
After we finished laughing I got back into bed.
"What are you doing?" Dash asked me.
"It's only 2:30 in the morning, I'm gonna go back to sleep." I responded as I laid my head back down on the cloud.
"Oh, alright"
"Night Dash."
"Night Drew." Dash said as she turned off the bedside lamp.
I rolled over onto my back and looked at the ceiling of clouds.
Suddenly, I felt a warm and furry object on my stomach.
It was Rainbow Dash.
I started to stroke her mane and she contently sighed.
"Good night Dashie, sweet dreams." I whispered.
I promptly fell asleep afterwards.
Chapter 4
I woke up the next morning and yawned.
"Oh man, it's morning already?" I said to nobody In particular.
"Oh well, I best get up and start moving. I don't want to sleep through my first full day as a normal human."
I got out of Dash's bed and stood on the cloud floor. It was harder than the bed.
"How is this harder then the bed? They are both made out of clouds, so shouldn't they both be soft and fluffy?" I wondered to myself.
"Speaking of which, how can I even stand on these?" I pondered my question for a bit.
"Twilight must have cast a spell on me." I deduced.
I decided to leave the matter of the feel of clouds un-answered, because frankly I didn't care anymore.
"I wonder where Dash is."
I looked around the room and in a few moments I had found a note on Dash's bedside table.
"Dear Drew,
I tried to get you up, but you wouldn't wake up. I promised Derpy that I would help her with her mail rounds today. Anyway, I'm going to be awhile, so just make yourself at home!
Love,
Dash"
"Well that answers that question."
I decided against going back to bed and instead shuffled over to the bedroom door.
I opened it and stumbled backwards in surprise.
"This is beautiful." I mused.
The room was very large and a certain glow about it. There was a coffee table and two couches surrounding it, one in front and one on the right. The couch in front of the coffee table was facing a medium sized flat screen T.V. sitting upon a table with two cabinets under it. A little bit to the left of the T.V. was a fireplace and there was another couch in front of it.
"I might as well see what things Dash has to watch." I thought to myself.
Upon looking closer at the two cabinets, I saw that they both had labels on them. The left cabinet's label said "DVD's and DVD Player" and the right cabinet's label said "Video Games and Consoles", I decided to look at the DVD's and opened the corresponding cabinet.
"Wow, this sure is a ton of DVD's." I mumbled to myself as I shuffled through the assorted bunch of DVD's.
I got to the back of the cabinet and found a lone DVD, it was the only one to have a blank case.
"I wonder what this could be." I thought to myself.
I opened the case and found proof of something that I had be wondering about ever since I got to Equestria.
"My Little Human: Friendship is Magic." I read the title of the DVD aloud to myself.
I thought about watching the DVD right then and there, but then I decided against it.
"I'm gonna watch this with the others." I said out loud.
I heard a grunt in agreement and immediately turned around to confront whatever was in the room with me. All I saw was a turtle laying on the couch.
"Oh, its just you Tank." I said with a sigh of relief.
I sat on the floor for a minute, then scooted over to the other cabinet. I laid the interesting DVD down on the floor and then opened the cabinet.
"Well, I'll be damned!" I muttered to myself.
Dash had a ton of game systems that I had back on earth. The only difference being the name of the consoles. Like instead of Dreamcast it was called Ponycast, instead of NES it was called PES, and so on.
I decided to try out "Sonic Adventure" on the Ponycast, luckily for me it was already hooked up to the tv. I looked around on the game system for a power button, I couldn't find one anywhere. I did manage to find what I assumed to be a headset type of thing. I saw that it had a power button on the side of it.
"Hmm, I wonder what this is for..." I thought aloud.
Then something finally clicked in my brain.
"Wait didn't we have something like this back on earth?" I thought hard to try and remember.
"Oh yea! It was a prototype thing that companies were working on to make it so people could control electronics with their mind!"
I put on the headset and pressed the power button.
"Welcome to your new Ponycast wireless controller. Please say "Connect to Ponycast" to start." The headset said in a robotic voice, it sounded like Dash's voice, but I just thought of that as a coincidence.
"Connect to Ponycast."
"Connection Successful. Would you like to power on the the console?"
"Yes."
"Booting up Ponycast."
The T.V. screen flashed and it automatically started up Sonic Adventure.
"How do I play the game?" I thought to myself.
"Think Start." the headset answered.
"Start" I thought.
The game actually reacted as if I had pushed the start button.
"This is gonna be sweet." I said aloud.
The rest of the game acted the same way that the start screen did, all I had to do was think the controls and the game complied to my thoughts.
"Just what do you think your doing with my stuff?"
I instantly stopped what I was doing and turned around to see who it was.
As soon as I laid my eyes upon who it was, I immediately froze in place.
It was Dash.
"Oh crap." I thought to myself.
"Oh Crap is not a correct command, please try something else." the headset replied.
Oh, how I still hate that headset.
THIS IS A QUESTION
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