(EDIT: THIS STORY IS BEING REVISED AND RE-SUBMITTED)

Equestria is a world full of life, adventure, and friendship. Twilight Sparkle is a resident of this world, experiencing all the joys of an successful Equestrian lifestyle. However, one day, a pony of a fallen world brings himself into this to view, to reveal a horrible, horrible truth that shapes both his mind and hers as well.

Rated Teen for light swearing and grim themes.

This is my first fan-fiction, please identify any problems within, keep criticism clean please.