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This day should have been just perfect...

by Duragan
Story has been removed from Fimfiction.net
My first story here. Feed back and critisism welcome since I generally suck at writing. My personal take on an alternative ending to 'A Canterlot Wedding'.
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After the Changeling are successfully defeated, all seems to be well once more for all of Equestria. However, for the one pony who knew all along that there was trouble afoot, she feels that this was more than a failed attempt at an outside force attempting to take over the land, she feels this was an act of all out betrayal and broken promises by her friends, mentor and family. The wedding has now been called off, the wielders of Harmony are under scrutiny as is the Princess and Captain Armour is facing trial for his actions which led to the attack all the while a heart broken bride has to come to terms with the treatment of her favourite mare she once sat for long ago. Will this day be perfect for them after all?

Enjoy! =D

MLP;FIM (C) to Hasbro and Lauren Faust.

Story (C) to Duragan.

Everyone
Cancelled
Sad
Alternate Universe

7,520 words: Estimated 31 Minutes to read: [Cache]

2 Chapters:

  1. This day should have been just perfect... [Cache] Apr 4th, 2013
    4,101
  2. This day should have been just perfect, part 2 [Cache] May 22nd, 2013
    3,419
Published Mar 22nd, 2013
Last Update May 11th, 2013

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