One From Another Planby Tomacesmith
Chapters
prolog/ chapter 1
it was cold, cold and dark, at the end of a battle, where the cagoules are counted, and the dead are returned to there family,
lots of lives were loss, this, was the fight for earth, this is where I was lost, but enough of that, your reading this journal to learn
why I never came back, now, I have written this in 3rd person, or should I say pony, I'm still trying to learn to vocabulary here,
any way, below, is the start, I hope you enjoy my story- Kyle B. Joyce
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Darkness was all he saw, the void was a dark place, the place that could drive the strongest of minds crazy, Kyle was taped
here with one more, the one the wanted to take over the plant Kyle called home, the planet, earth. all tho, this entrapment
was coming to an end soon, as a light broke threw the darkness under Kyle, and his body changed as he fell threw in, his
once human body started to change in to that of a pegasus pony, his vest changing to fit around his new body as he fell, his
pistol, shotgun, and rifle coming lose and becoming lost, leaving him with only his sword, power vest, and his visor. soon, the
feel ended as he fell from the sky, he had landed in the middle of the everfree forest, leaving a crater in his wake, he would
have did if not for a white unicorn seeing him fall and slowing his path, soon, the unicorn was on the scene, he had fished
Kyle out of the crater and looked him over. seeing he was hurt with a mild head injury he toke him to the closes medical
center, witch was ponyville medical center. Kyle was out for a few hours before finally waking up, his new blue coat covered
in rocks and twigs as well as his brown and red mane, just like his hair once was, it was always a mess, that's how he liked
after all "w-where am I?" were the first words that came out of Kyle's mouth, "hello, are you okay?" asked the white unicorn
that had brought Kyle in "I don't now, I'm I talking to a unicorn?" Kyle asked.
"Yes, you are, why?"
"then No, I'm going crazy"
"why is that?"
"because, unicorns aren't real, and why can't I feel my hands" Kyle said as he looked him self over and a shock to see that
he wasn't a human anymore while the unicorn grew a grin "say, where are you from?"
"I'm from, earth, the milky way galaxy"
"oh, your from Dimension 55"
"wha?"
"Dimension 55, one of the human Dimensions, Hi, my name's Tech"
"ummm, I'm Kyle"
Chapter 2
A few days later Kyle was released from the medical center and Tech was showing him around the industrial area of the town, where one of his friends lived "and here is the Tesla corp HQ" he said as the two came to a warehouse like building. "Really, looks more like a warehouse" Kyle said, he was confused by how all the ponies around acted and talked, Tech had even told him about all three types of ponies and what was different about each type. Like how a pegasus like him could fly, even tho he didn't know how, how and earth pony was in tune with the earth, and then how unicorns could use magic, like Tech. Of courses Kyle didn't believe that part, the earth pony thing was kinda believable, the pegasus pony thing was stretching it a little, but unicorns and magic, he had to see proof for that, which, he did see when Tech lifted him for a bit, witch freaked Kyle out. "Well, let's go in side" Tech said as he stared to walk into the warehouse looking building and Kyle Followed.
Inside it looked more like a workshop then a warehouse and at a work table, there was a dark red unicorn pony with an eye patch, he was lanky and bigger then most of the ponies Kyle had seen. As the unicorn was working on something of some kind Tech walked up to him. Kyle finally got a good look at the two unicorns, Tech was a white unicorn that wore a black vest and his cutie mark was that of a brain in an easel, and his friend, his cutie mark was that of wrench and screwdriver that were crossed, the red unicorn smiled when he saw Tech "Hello, Tech and..." He looked at Kyle, and walked over to him. "What's your name, friend?" he said. "My name is Kyle Joyce, yours?"
"Hello, Kyle! I am Tinker Tesla Toy, engineer, inventor, amateur adventurer, and owner of the Tesla Company, at your service." the red unicorn now know as Tinker said, now, Kyle didn't have a lot of proof, but his gut told him that he was an
adventure as well, and the sword on his back would give give him his little proof of that. soon as Kyle and Tinker were having
a nice conversation about what Tinker did in the Town. Kyle learned that he was once know as the mad scientist of ponyville, all tho, he wasn't sure if he was still called that. He also learned that he had a son named Platinum Band, he wasn't very old yet, still sleeping in a crib.
Soon, a black pony with out a horn or wings came into the room, and seeing as there was only one type left, Kyle though that was she was an earth pony. She had a black coat with red eyes, and she a band on each leg, the one on her fore legs were white and the ones on her hind legs were blue, and she didn't have a cutie mark. The mare walked into
the room and She'd run up and hug Tinker "You brought me a new test subject, how sweet of you" she said and then nuzzle him. Kyle looked at her "um, I don't know who you are, but I'm not here for a test" he said to the earth pony, looking a bit worried."oh, okay" the earth pony said before going to the basement of the workshop as Kyle watch "um, who was that?"
"That is Mira Strawberry, psychopath, mad scientist, murderer, and the love of my life." Tinker said before He bursts out in
laughter at the entirely true statement"Wha?"
A cry for help (not a chapter)
I need help, I'm not good at writing the chapters, but I am trying my best, I don't really know how to put my friends oc's into the storry very well and I'm scared I'm going to ruin them, and, I know no pony would want to do it for this bad story that I'm trying to make, but, I'm asking for two things, proof readers, and a story pic, please, if you would like to help, Pm me, I have an Idea for the pic, but I can't draw to save my life