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A Touching Story

by BooM RaInB0w

Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Entrance

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~* Chapter 1: The Entrance *~

I kept reading up to the part where Rainbow finds out she's a cartoon character. I felt something churn a little in my stomach and my muscles tense up a bit. I was hooked I had to finish the story tonight. I was persistant and I kept reading the story. When Rainbow was reunited with her father and they forgave each other I felt happy, a joy in my stomach I smiled at that moment and cherished it. The story was becoming and more powerful to me as I read, I felt really good when things started to pick up and things were going better for them.

Then the fatal part came, when someone came and knocked on the door as I read that sentence I thought, "no it can't be... It can't be Celestia." I was wrong. Celestia had shown up at the door and the rest of the mane 6 to take back Rainbow Dash, I felt the suspense as if I over saw the whole room at the moment. My heart was pumping and my muscles were even more tense before I was in that moment... I was scared. Then I saw where Rainbow asked if she had to leave and my heart skipped a beat, "It can't happen so soon," I thought. EVeryone began tearing up in the story then finally Twilight got her restoration spell and cast it on Rainbow Dash. POOF! Everyone except the man was gone. I felt terrible at that very moment, I felt like continuing and finished reading the denouement. I let out a sigh of relaxation in my bed and cover myself with my covers and set my iphone on the night stand.

I help my covers tight and shut my eyes. It was completely quiet now. My heart was still pumping from the fic... A tear ran down my cheek. I quickly curled up into a ball and went under the covers and I let out a silent sob. I couldn't bare it the story was so sad and worst of all it reminded me of me.. Tears were running down my cheeks now and I felt horrible I just let all my suppressed feelings out right then and their. I couldn't bare it any longer. I knew I was nothing, insignificant. I knew that no one really liked me and I was a third wheel to everyone... I felt abandoned left to survive on my own. I let out more silent sobs under the covers burying myself so I could be more alone. No one ever loved me or ever wanted to talk much to me. I continued for a bit thinking of how horrible my situation was. "I wish I could have my own little Dashie," I whispered to myself, "I wish I could feel the true love of someone..." The impossible doesn't happen twice. I knew it couldn't happen. "I wish I could live in Ponyville where everyone would at the least be friendly to me and accept my friendship and love," I wished and hoped. For the rest of the night I tossed and turned it was the worst sleep i've ever had since forever. And yet, there was still a test tomorrow.


I woke up the next morning tired than ever and proceded to school after the regular morning get up. Brush my teeth, change and eat breakfast. I wrote that test like no other test and I think I did fine on it and then I continued the rest of the day as usual. I still didn't feel good, after all I thought about I couldn't feel good ever. My friends were talking to me less and less and I stayed alone most of the time. It felt really icky to me. To top it off they said I was annoying. I felt really ticked off and spent the rest of the day drawing and reading. I felt heart break and depression starting to swoop in on me. "I'd do anything to go to Equestria even for a day," I thought to myself. It was loud in the hallways so I walked through the muffled halls to the front of the entrance beside the library. There was a big double door and a display case with the schools awards. I sat down next to the display on a cushy blue chair and stayed their doing my own stuff. I felt like going home and staying under my blanket so I could dream of a good life... My stomach began to ache and my nose began to get stuffed up. I wanted to go home.


Eventually the time came and I got home, I ran up the white carpet stairway up to my room. I love my room it's painted in a light blue. I threw my backpack beside my bed and pulled my laptop out of its case and opened up the web browser to commence my usual afternoon. Browsing my little things that still kept me a bit happy. What was really on my mind was My Little Dashie I felt so connected to the story and so hurt at the same time. It wouldn't leave my mind. I just would keep on remembering it. I did my studies and then got ready for bed as the time came. I held my iphone in my hand and watched an episode of MLP again it always brought a smile to my face, but not today. I didn't feel well and instead I just wished I could be there in Ponyville. I put the iphone on my night stand and then took all of my covers and bunched it up to a sort of cloud looking thing. There I lay feeling sorrow and melancholy flow through me I just wished to go to Ponyville a lot.


I felt tired now and it was late I fluffed up my pillow and pulled my covers over myself thinking, "oh great I can't wait to be hated again... Tomorrow." I closed my eyes still thinking about my wish. I was slowly drifting off to sleep letting myself relax for just those precious hours... Until I hear a large clatter in the kitchen. I dismissed the noise... "It's obviously just someone getting a drink or some shit." I didn't care I just wanted to sleep... There it was again a large clatter, "Nope," I whispered to myself, I ignored the noise. But the more I tried to filter it out there more it just came back to bite at my ear. I covered my ears with my pillow, It just kept on getting louder. I quickly sprung up from bed and proceded down stairs thumping my feet about to smack whoever was making the noise. To my surprise it wasn't coming from the kitchen, it was coming from the basement. I had a bad feeling about this... I kept the lights off and went down another set of stairs and started towards the home theater. I saw light wobbling around on the floor as if someone left something on. I went in to the room quietly but quickly. I jumped. It wasn't any TV or anything else that was on. It was a portal, yes, a portal opened right there in the wall of the theater. I gulped, "what could it mean," I thought. Curiosity got the best of me and I slowly stepped forward to the portal. As I neared the images became more and more vivid inside. I stopped a foot away from the portal and raised a finger and touched the portal... Right there I began feeling sick, the world began to spin around me and shrank to a big black blob. I fell to the ground and I was unconscious.


How long had it been? I have no clue. I finally started to come to. I slowly opened my eyes and shook my head I felt dizzy. I let in a deep breath... That wasn't the smell of my house. I opened my eyes. I saw a wonderful starry night sky and a crescent moon up above. The scent was of the prairie and I seemed to be in a wide open range. It felt refreshing, I was in a random world. I have never seen such a place where was I? I raised a hand to rub my eyes, I gasped! It was shocking before me what should have been my hand was a hoof it was blue! I turned my head and looked. I was a pony! Better yet a pegasus! My coat was a shade of blue and my tail a fiery red and orange. "Could this be true am I really in Equestria?" I asked myself. I awkwardly stood from the pasture. It was unbelievable my wish came true. I was in Equestria. A dirt path was before me. I had no other choice so I decided to the path hoping that it would lead to civilization... Pony style. I listened to the ambient crickets and the ocasional gust. It felt serene and much better than the real world. I loved it....

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