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When tragedy strikes, sometimes it's best to leave it unexplained. You never know what you'll find.
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A murder strikes one late winter evening, and nopony seems to be able to provide clues as to what happened. Anytime somepony gets close to revealing anything helpful, they too end up dead. Things get personal when someone close to a certain unicorn ends up a victim. She devotes herself to finding the culprit. What she finds is a ruthless pony, willing to do anything to cover his or her tracks.

Nopony is safe. Not anymore. This pony acts without regret. Without remorse. Without a single thought of consequence.

This was a one shot, I think. I didn't really feel like separating each break into separate chapters, so I'll just leave it as is. Unless someone really wants me to break it up. I might then. It's just tedious, that's all. I may or may not decide to write some sort of epilogue or prologue or something of the like. Depends on the day, honestly. Hope everypony likes it, because I'm rather proud of it. Hell, even if you don't, leave a comment. I love feedback. Kind of a lot. (More comments, please. Doooo iiit.)

Thanks for the 700 views and all, guys. Although, I really wish you would comment a little more. I can't improve if you don't tell me what's wrong.

Dubious
Complete
Tragedy
Sad
Dark
Gore

11,447 words: Estimated 46 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Chapter 1 [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 1st, 2011
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Published Oct 1st, 2011
Last Update Sep 17th, 2011

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