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Twilight's Treatment Volume 1

by Zehntacles

Chapter 5: The Slap

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This is a non-profit fanfiction created for entertainment purposes only. My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic is owned by Hasbro and Lauren Faust. This story contains content of an adult nature and is an Alternate Reality take of the characters Twilight Sparkle and Spike as humans (both characters I do not own). Please support the official release.


Twilight's Treatment - Chapter 5 - The Slap

"These things are a lot heavier than they look." Spike grumbled under several large rolls of fabric he was moving into a storage closet for Rarity. "How the heck does she move them on her own?" Spike was probably over doing it having so many in his arms at once but for the sake of impressing Rarity and getting the task finished as fast as possible he was taking very large armfuls.

Dropping the load and setting it against the walls one by one he made sure to line them up in a neat and organized way. Spike wondered if all women who used magic were so particular about keeping things in a specific order. Between assisting Rarity and assisting Twilight it seemed like these girls would never get anything done without Spike around to help them. Propping up the last roll he exited the closet and let out a breath of relief. "Glad that's done and over with. Guess I should check what Rarity wants next."

It wasn't uncommon to see Spike at the Carousel Boutique giving the lovely woman a hand, not surprising considering his crush on her. Still even if it seemed like Spike was being used as labor it wasn't without appreciation. He knew Rarity was thankful for his help and she was nice enough to express that appreciation and even give him gifts from time to time. The young man may have been in love with her, but he wouldn't go through all of this if he didn't think she deserved it.

Spike walked into the main show room searching for the purple haired woman of his affection but found it pretty empty. Rarity didn't have a large amount of customers at any one time, and usually when she did they came and went only placing the orders as they needed to and then picking them up. This gave Rarity a lot of space and solitude to work without being disturbed. "Rarity? I finished with the fabric rolls liked you asked."

"Spike, there you are." She suddenly poked out from one of the rooms adjacent to the main show room. "Would you mind taking a look at something for me? I could use a man's opinion on this before I'm done."

"Of course!" Spike came to the room quickly at being needed by the beautiful woman and being referred to as a man. Sure she was just expressing she wanted an opinion from him but don't steal the boy's thunder. "What did you want me to see?" Rarity smiled upon the young man, she was wearing a black dress skirt with stockings and white button up blouse today, complete with a lovely gold necklace that held a red, heart shaped gem in the middle. A gift from Spike himself to his first love.

"It was this dress here for Sweetie Belle. Do you think the ribbons are a bit too much?" Rarity didn't really have to express that the dress had been for her little sister as Sweetie Belle was in the room wearing it in front of him. "I think it came out looking rather smashing if I say so myself, I just don't want to over do it."

"Um... yeah." Spike blinked seeing the pretty girl in the fancy dress before him, the same girl that had baked him delicious treats and flirted with alluring eyes just days ago. Sweetie Belle seemed to catch on to the idea that Spike liked the way she look and immediately tried to put on the charm.

"Hey Spike, do you like my dress?" Sweetie smiled and tried to do a little pose before him but was stopped by her big sister.

"Now Sweetie don't move around like that until I'm finished. I haven't sewn down everything yet, assuming I should keep everything. Spike, do you think I should keep everything or is it too much?" Spike blinked himself back to reality trying to focus on the dress instead of the attractive sisters before him. Good thing he took his medicine this morning knowing he'd be coming over here today otherwise the room would be covered in green flames right about now.

"Uh, it's um..." Words Spike, use words. You can do this. "A dress." Not the right words.

"Yes, that much I had down Spike. But what about the ribbons?" Spike made himself focus and looked at the red ribbons along Sweetie's violet dress.

"They're lovely Rarity, just like everything you make." He naturally complimented her work as was his automatic response. "Even if Red doesn't really match violet that well." Rarity looked on at Sweetie Belle in her dress for some time and then snapped her fingers.

"Ideaaaaa! Wait right here dear little sister, Rarity has just the thing to fix you up." Rarity smiled and walked out of the room to another part of the boutique, most likely looking to collect what ever piece of fabric would turn her sister's dress from fashionable to fantastic. Spike watched the lovely woman leave the room and then looked to Sweetie who was stretching her back out now that Rarity was gone.

"Thank goodness. It's such a pain having to stand still for so long while Sis fixes up every little thing. Why can't she just use a dress dummy instead of me?" Spike laughed a little at the comment, the relationship between the two was pretty cute with the differences and similarities they had. "Do you really like my dress Spike?"

"Oh, um, yeah! I mean it looks really good on you. Rarity clearly had you in mind when she made it." Sweetie giggled in a very cute way at the compliment.

"Thank you! Hopefully I'll have an opportunity to wear it out some time with someone to admire it." Spike made sure to avert his eyes before she caught him with the batting eyelashes and the flirtatious gaze she seemed to have down to an art. "You wouldn't know of anyone that might enjoy that company would you?"

"Oh I'm sure lots of people would. I mean you and Applebloom and Scootaloo hang out all the time and have fun."

"I was thinking more of a boy." It sounded like she was losing patience with her hint-dropping but Spike just continued to play dumb.

"Well Snips and Snails are usually free to hang out." Sweetie let out a frustrated sigh and rolled her eyes.

"Good grief! Fine then." She walked over to the desk Rarity had been working at and Spike kept his eyes at the door awaiting the elder sister's return. Suddenly Sweetie let out a cry. "Oh no!"

"What!? What, what happened!?" Spike flipped around quickly to witness the cause of her distress; Sweetie had managed to spill Rarity's cup of cocoa onto her dress. "Oh that's not good."

"Not good? Not good!?" Sweetie ran up to Spike and grabbed him by the shirt. "Do you have any idea how much time and effort Rarity put into this dress!? She's going to kill me! Say good bye to Sweetie Belle because I'm going to get buried at the edge of the Everfree Forest by the time she's done with me." Sweetie's gaze was one of pure intensity that Spike had only seen before in Twilight when she was going frantic over some out of place thing or another with her obsessive nature. Here it seemed pretty legitimate.

"S-so what do we do!?" Spike stammered and the girl let him go finally, Spike falling onto his butt after the death grip was released.

"Think think think! Ideaaaa!" Sweetie Bell suddenly sang out which was strikingly similar to Rarity but Spike didn't have time to admire it. "My mom isn't very good at magic but she can clean nearly anything with the spells she has." Sweetie pointed at Spike. "I need you to run this dress over to my house as fast as you can and have her clean it, I'll make up something to keep Rarity busy and she'll never know!" Spike looked up at the girl in disbelief.

"Is that really going to work? I mean if we just think of some logical way to tell her..."

"This isn't any time for logic! Now undress me!" Spike felt his heart leap up in his chest at the sudden command from Sweetie Belle and he was very thankful he'd taken his medicine this morning because he would have been able to burn the building down with the fire burst connected to that command.

"I uh... I don't know about..."

"Spike we don't have a lot of time, unzip me." Sweetie turned her back on him to show the zipper on her dress and Spike got to his feet, blushing red that a girl was actually instructing him to undress her. He unzipped her dress carefully trying to be sure not to touch any skin. "Good, now pull." Sweetie raised her hands straight into the air and Spike did as he was told, pulling the dress off of her. She slid out of the dress without any resistance and stood now in just her white bra and panties.

Spike stared a bit dumbfounded at the girl, seeing for the first time not only a girl in her underwear but also one his own age in such clothes. His gaze was locked onto her until she turned to face him and Spike went out of his way to not be caught looking at her. The best solution being pointing his eyes directly up at the ceiling to avoid any peeks. "Good, now that we have it off you get going and I'll figure out a plan to keep her busy."

"O-okay!" Spike stumbled away from Sweetie Belle but kept looking straight up in his flustered state, colliding into one of the dress dummies. "Sorry!" He bounced the other way kicking over a sewing basket and the spools of thread inside. "Sorry! Sorry!" Spike was clearly having trouble finding the exit like this and Sweetie wasn't feeling patient any longer.

"Spike just get going already!" Sweetie walked up and started to push him towards the door. Her hands on him didn't help his situation any and he still couldn't bring himself to look her direction in her state of undress. "We have to hurry or..."

"Sweetie Belle!" Rarity's voice shouted out and that got Spike to finally look forward.

"Uh oh." Sweetie said looking at her sister while Spike still held the dress in his arms with its fresh stain. The two looked at each other and panic started to set in. "Rarity, listen! I can explain!" Rarity didn't listen, instead marching her way into the room towards the two. Spike watched on helplessly as Rarity separated them and he tried to come to the girl's defense.

"Rarity I..." Spike's words were cut short however as the most unexpected thing happened; Rarity slapped him across the face.

"Spike! How... how could you? I trusted you." Spike and Sweetie Belle stood in disbelief as to what exactly could be going on in this moment. "To think you'd do such a thing, you've always been such a gentleman before but... but to think you'd take advantage of a woman!? My own sister!"

"What!?" Sweetie shouted in shock. "Rarity, it's not what you think."

"Don't!" She shouted at her sister looking over her shoulder. "Do not defend him, Sweetie Belle." Rarity turned her gaze back to Spike and it was unlike anything he'd seen in the purple haired woman before. The kind of look that Spike would have received as a young boy from Celestia or Twilight if he'd misbehaved. That gaze of a parent reprimanding their child. Spike suddenly felt very small seeing such a look from Rarity mixed with anger and disappointment. It was like a cold knife in his chest. "Spike, go up to my room. I'll speak with you shortly."

Rarity... I didn't..."

"Go." Rarity commanded and Spike felt the protest shrink and die out within him. He couldn't argue with those eyes. Dropping the dress to the floor Spike trudged his way out of the room slowly, feeling like every step was the heaviest he'd ever taken. As he exited the room Spike looked back to see Sweetie Belle watching him with worry and Rarity's stern gaze. She shut the door on him and Spike sighed continuing up the stairs to Rarity's bed room.

Walking in he took a seat at the end of her bed, looking around the room and its well decorated interior. Like everything in her life Rarity went to no small expense to ensure her surroundings matched her taste. "Well Spike, get used to the view while you can. Looks like you wont be seeing it ever again."


"See, it was all just a misunderstanding. I'm sorry sister, please don't be mad." Sweetie Belle pleaded to her Rarity as she looked over the stain on the dress. Sweetie had done a good job of getting it splashed right on the fabric. Rarity had worked so hard on it too. She sighed and looked to her wide eyed sibling.

"It's okay Sweetie Belle, perhaps I did jump to conclusions." Thinking Spike was some kind of predator looking to take advantage of her sweet little sister was pretty far fetched. Rarity had just jumped on the first thought that had crossed her mind, not that many may blame her for such a thing. Sweetie Belle had finally put her other dress back on but catching a young man in the room with her sister who was stripped down to her undergarments was a fright to shave a year off of Rarity's life. "I may have been out of line when it came to poor Spike, I'll have to go apologize to him right away. Still there is the matter of how you chose to handle this." Sweetie Belle looked down at the floor feeling ashamed.

"I'm sorry I tried to lie to you, that was wrong." She twiddled her thumbs and Rarity knelt down by where Sweetie was sitting. "I was just worried you'd be disappointed in me."

"I forgive you Sweetie." Rarity gave her sister a hug. "But... that's not exactly everything we need to discuss." Sweetie broke away from the hug and looked at Rarity confused. "I think we should discuss the fact that you chose to... undress in front of Spike."

"What? You mean when I took my dress off? What's so bad about that? I was wearing my underwear." Rarity took a breath as she attempted to approach this subject as an adult.

"Yes well, you see when a young lady your age... how do I put this?" Rarity was trying to figure out the best way to phrase the birds and the bees to Sweetie Belle. Her own conversation with her mother had been extremely awkward when she was Sweetie's age. She didn't want a repeat of that odd little speech that lead to Rarity just finding a book and looking it up. "Sweetie Belle you're old enough now that boys are going to start to notice you."

"Well yeah, I'm right here." Sweetie smiled at Rarity innocently and that wasn't helping the woman at all. "Why wouldn't they notice me?"

"That's not exactly what I mean. Um... you see Sweetie you're becoming a woman now and when a woman begins to become more mature, men will... well they start to find them attractive. Like how a girl may admire a dress or a new hat."

"So boys want to wear me?" Not exactly, though we're getting onto the right track.

"Well um... goodness this is more difficult than I thought." Rarity was trying to think on how to just get the point across without being crudely blunt with the subject. "A girl's body is something a man will find very desirable. For that reason you shouldn't expose it too much in front of them."

"But it was just my underwear, I'd have looked the same if I was wearing a swimsuit." Sweetie seemed to have a talent for debating the logic of what to do and what not to do.

"Yes but you see; a swim suit is something you wear to go swimming at the beach or the pool and usually covers a bit more of yourself. Your undergarments are meant to be hidden and only people who are... very close to you should ever see them. Like a husband and wife."

"Or a boyfriend and girlfriend?" Sweetie's smile seemed to turn a bit more devious and Rarity thought she recognized that look, although she couldn't say where from.

"Yes... only after they're in a committed relationship though! Otherwise it may be inappropriate for a young lady to allow a man to see that. It's for two people that love each other." Rarity had some flash backs in her mind of a few things she'd done with other adults in the past that had less to do with a committed, loving relationship and a lot more to do with the heat of the moment. She didn't regret any of them but it was best to be sure to give Sweetie a strong moral compass to make her own decisions. "Do you understand?"

"I do sister." Sweetie Belle nodded and Rarity felt relieved. "After seeing me half naked Spike clearly wants to date me now. I'm not surprised with how sexy I am." Rarity had been nodding her head but stopped suddenly.

"Pardon?"

"Seeing as we're boyfriend and girlfriend now I'll need to wear better underwear than this. Rarity do you have any lingerie that would fit me? I want to look my best for him." Rarity's mouth dropped open as if she was witnessing events that could not be comprehended by man or woman. "Or maybe I just shouldn't wear any at all?" That snapped her older sister back the reality.

"Absolutely not!" Rarity suddenly declared in a more motherly tone than she herself thought she could do, making Sweetie Belle burst into laughter.

"Oh Sis, I'm just teasing." She giggled and got to her feet, hugging Rarity. "The look on your face was amazing! I didn't think you'd actually fall for it." She held Rarity tight in a hug. "Don't worry, I know how to be a lady because I've watched you all this time." Rarity's sudden burst of protective anger for her sister washed away in the hug and the kind words she received from her darling, if mischievous little sister.

"Well, I should hope so. I wouldn't want my darling little sister to get the wrong idea about how to handle herself around a boy." She gave Sweetie a kiss on the forehead and the girl smiled happily.

"But he probably thought I was pretty, huh? His cheeks were red and everything." Sweetie Belle did a cute little pose and Rarity was starting to remember her own flirtatious habits when she was younger. Not to mention Sweetie was already showing signs of growing into an attractive woman. Maybe they would need another talk in the future after all.

"You leave Spike to me, after all you still have a job to take care of yourself." Rarity used her magic to float the dress over to Sweetie Belle's arms, her smile dropping remembering what caused all of this in the first place. "Get that home to mother and see if she can't save it before that stain sets in."

"Okay Rarity." The girls walked out of the work room into the main area of Rarity's boutique and Sweetie stopped. "Don't be too hard on Spike okay? I'm sorry I made everything so difficult." Rarity patted Sweetie on the head.

"Now now you already apologized. We'll both work on fixing things, I'll see you later okay?"

"Okay Sis!" Sweetie Belle felt further assured by her sister not being angry and left the boutique to get the dress back home as fast as she could. Rarity watched her go off and then looked to the stairs to her bedroom.

"Well, this is the hard part isn't it? You have a serious apology to give." Rarity climbed the stairs as she was letting how awful she'd been sink in. Poor Spike had been slapped and reprimanded for something he hadn't even done, her quick assumptions probably making him feel awful. Still she had a responsibility to make amends and she intended to do just that. Maybe if she got him some of those sapphire cookies Sweetie had made him that one time?

Rarity opened the door to her room to find Spike sitting at the edge of her bed looking at the floor. His shoulders were slumped and he looked over all in a depressed state. Rarity felt just awful seeing what she'd done to him and entered the room, closing the door behind herself. "Spike?" She called out gently but he didn't look up at her. "Listen, we need to talk."

"It's okay, I know what you're going to say." He stated dejectedly like a man that had accepted his fate.

"No, I don't think you do." Rarity walked closer to him but Spike didn't look up at her.

"I don't blame you at all, really I don't. I mean just look at me; I'm a monster." He held up one hand showing off the sharper, pointed claw like nails on his fingers. "I should know what to expect."

"Spike look at me." Rarity took his hand and held it, trying to get him to meet her eyes. "Spike you are not a monster."

"I am Rarity! I've known I was different for a long time. Not just the ears, or my hair or even my eyes but... even with how much I love you guys I know I'm not the same as you. I can't ever be the same." His voice was cracking a little as he was clearly fighting back some tears. Rarity gripped his hand in a small panic, she had no idea he'd been harboring emotions like this and her slap was what caused the flood gates to open. "I don't want to hurt anyone."

"Spike, you listen closely to me okay?" Rarity sat on the bed next to him and put an arm around his shoulders. "It doesn't matter what you look like, deep down inside you're the same as all of us. We love you." They held each other's hands tightly as Spike was dealing with this sudden onset of emotions. "You wouldn't hurt any of us."

"I don't want to but... but with the things I keep doing lately without even wanting to. Twilight having to make sure I don't suddenly do something to hurt you guys and Zecora giving me medicine to control myself and just... I just don't even know what I am anymore!" He grit his teeth and Rarity felt bad that she couldn't help but notice the pointed fangs he had. "Why did Celestia even let me come here if she knew this would happen? Why send a monster where it can hurt someone."

"Spike that's enough!" Rarity suddenly yelled and that made his head snap upward to look at her. "I will not have anyone in my home speaking badly about you, even if it's yourself. Spike I was clearly wrong in assuming you'd ever do anything to hurt Sweetie Belle or act as anything but a gentleman." She hugged him against her with one arm and Spike leaned into it, enjoying the comfort. "I can't apologize enough for what I did back there, it was wrong and I'm so sorry I ever hit you."

"It's okay... it didn't even really hurt me." Spike confessed being thicker skinned than most people, that didn't matter to Rarity though.

"I don't care if it hurt you or not, the very act alone was shameful on my part. To think I'd ever hit my Spiky-Wikey." The pet name got a blush out of his cheeks and Rarity smiled that it seemed to bring him around out of his depressed state. "Now then lets talk about this nonsense of you being a monster. Why would you ever think such a thing? Everyone here has always been delighted by your company." Spike looked away again feeling awkward at the question.

"It's kind of... embarrassing." He admitted and Rarity stayed by his side.

"Well then you're lucky you have someone here that wont judge or share your secrets." Rarity reassured him and Spike relaxed a little bit as she warmed him up while they sat next to each other.

"Okay then... but promise not to laugh?" Rarity nodded to his question and Spike let out a breath as he prepared himself. "Well it started a while ago. I guess it's normal for people like me but um... whenever I... when I see a... when there's a girl who..."

"Catches your eye?" Rarity tried to fill in the blanks with the most proper words she could think of.

"Yeah, that will work. When a girl 'catches my eye' I kind of... shoot fire. Uncontrollably." Rarity's mind immediately sprang to jokes about men who fire off too early when they get excited and she squashed everyone one of them as they came to mind, not about to let a chuckle escape herself in front of him. It took a bit of effort. "And it's summer so there's a lot of girls that... 'catch my eye' so to speak."

"I think I understand." Rarity tried to follow along, sure Spike was technically a different type of creature than herself but this just sounded like the same old thing any other boy would have to go through his age. She really hoped she didn't have to have a talk with him like she did with Sweetie Belle. "But this is a natural thing isn't it Spike? Everyone goes through it. Even I got a little excited every now and then when I was just a girl and someone caught my attention."

"But did you spew out fire every time you saw one?" That was indeed a unique problem.

"Well... no I didn't."

"Did you need special medicine to keep you from getting worse or doing something else?"

"No, I didn't need anything like that. But... what else would you do?"

"I have no idea!" Spike confessed a little over-dramatically. "I didn't even know this would start happening but Zecora and Twilight have been trying to keep it from getting worse and I'm almost positive there's something Twilight isn't telling me because she acts more and more worried these days. Then with things like the girls giving me cookies or kisses on the cheek, Rainbow Dash and Applejack wearing those skimpy shorts, Pinkie's boob crushing hugs, Sweetie Belle just now and you just... well being you!" He motioned to Rarity as if to say all of this was hard enough to resist as it was. "I feel like I'm going out of my mind. I can't tell what's normal and what isn't anymore." Rarity gave Spike another hug and he returned it to her, looking emotionally drained.

"It sounds like it's been a rough time for you, Spiky-Wikey." Maybe the situation didn't call for it but she wasn't going to let her beloved pet name for him go. He seemed so distraught and Rarity didn't really understand what it was Zecora and Twilight were doing to keep him under check but if it involved direct action by both of them then Rarity worried it could really be serious. "I wish I could help you."

"Just... thank you Rarity. For being my friend." Spike spoke softly as they kept their embrace a while longer. "I just wish I knew what was wrong. Or at least how to stop feeling the way I do all the time."

A thought crossed Rarity's mind that felt like a light switch went off in her head. Although she didn't know if she should even be considering this. Spike was suffering and while she didn't understand all of it the problem was clearly related to his hormones. Every pretty girl he encountered was creating a bad reaction in his body and from the sounds of it he was just going to get worse as time went on. Who knows if maybe he would do something the next time it got out of hand? If she could solve that problem didn't she owe it not just to him but everyone else?

Rarity thought hard on this subject before deciding that if she could help she should. No matter what that might entail. Separating from the hug she looked down at Spike and took a breath. "Spike, darling, listen I think that maybe I can help." Spike looked back at her pretty eyes with doubt in his own unique green ones. They were actually very nice, like sparkling emeralds.

"Well it seems like everyone has already tried to fix what's wrong with me but... if you think you can do something." He put his trust in her and that made her heart swell after having done something as awful as striking him across the face earlier.

"I do. It's clear to me what the source of your stress is and I think if we remove that then you'll be much better." Spike listened to her words but didn't really follow what she had in mind.

"Well... yeah I guess so. I don't know how you're going to make me less focused on..." His sentence was cut short as Rarity leaned in and kissed him. It wasn't like the past kisses on the cheek or playful, friendly pecks. She put her lips to his and the contact silenced and relaxed the boy immediately.

Surprisingly it felt kind of nice. She'd expected it to be forced or awkward but Spike was actually fairly calm and relaxed as they met each other in the kiss. Even as she continued her mind began to consider the logic of what she was doing. Sure she'd known Spike had a crush on her since he'd first moved to Ponyville. Certainly he was a dear friend and she cared for him too, but she never thought to take things to such a level. Now after crossing this line with him would things still be okay?

Spike's arms move up to hug around Rarity's shoulders and his mouth parted, his tongue creeping out to meet her own. Rarity hadn't expected things to move this quickly with him but her own body responded in kind as she kissed him back. His tongue was different, not like a persons. It was slightly longer and thinner than what she'd thought it would be and thankfully despite the difference didn't make her shudder from the strange interaction. His body and breath were so warm. Yes, she could do this with him. There was nothing wrong with it.

Rarity broke from the unexpectedly passionate kiss and smiled at Spike. "I'd almost think you've done this before Spike." He looked away from her eyes and that made her curious. Who would he have kissed before her? Despite the question Rarity stood up from the bed and looked to her soon to be lover. "Spike, I'm going to give you something I've only given to few before. Please... appreciate it." The words were more genuine than she'd thought they would be. Suddenly she was afraid of being disappointing after being held on a pedestal by him for so long. With a breath she began to unbutton her white blouse, Spike watching on wide eyed.

Rarity cast aside her blouse, unzipped her skirt and let it fall to the ground. Now she stood before him in her lace bra, panties and stockings, wondering what he was thinking after having seen both her and Sweetie Belle like this today. Somewhere in her heart she was hoping she was the one he'd grown more excited to see. Around her neck the red heart shaped jewel on the gold chain rested, she didn't want to take it off. "Do you enjoy what you see?"

"Rarity..." Spike stared at a loss for words, realizing he was just gawking at her he blushed and got himself back together. Earning a smile from Rarity in the process. "You... you were already the most beautiful person I've ever seen in my life. That has never changed."

"Awww!" He was treated with a hug from the woman, her cleavage pressing to him as she swooned from the sweet words. "That's why your my Spiky-Wikey." She kissed his cheek and got a little jump out of him. The reaction amused Rarity and she kissed his ear this time on it's tip, then whispered. "Now, your turn." Reaching down she took Spike's shirt from him, pulling it off and casting it aside. "Oh. Oh my. Spike I never realized how... fit you were." She stroked a finger over his chest legitimately surprised at how much he'd grown into his masculine shape.

"Well I do a lot of work for Twilight, you and the Princess when she asks me. Not to mention everyone else whenever they need the help. I guess I have to be." He was so cute when he was humble.

"Just like a strong gentleman. Now, off with these." Rarity got a devious grin very similar to Sweetie Belle's earlier as she took Spike's pants from him, revealing a very ready erection pressing against his boxers underneath. Spike gulped now being nearly exposed before the woman of his dreams. Rarity kept him sitting on the bed as she watched his eyes and slowly took his boxers from him. "Well I can see you really do approve of me, Spiky-Wikey." Gently she touched his cock with her fingers and Spike took in a breath of air, watching Rarity explore his body.

It was odd but Rarity felt excited just being in this position with him. It felt somehow taboo but also like it was right. Like she'd been waiting for this moment to occur for a long time. She wrapped her fingers around him and began to stroke slowly, getting a response from Spike right away. "Rarity... your hands are so soft."

"Do you like them?" She smiled seductively as she stroked him faster, Spike groaning as his hips stirred with each movement she performed on him. "I can do better." She leaned forward and kissed the tip of his cock, looking up at him to see his reaction. When he seemed pleased Rarity continued by licking around the head of his cock with her tongue and then slipping her mouth down around him.

Spike moaned her name and Rarity felt her own body get excited in turn. His whole body gave off so much heat, like her own private, cozy heater. She just wanted to wrap herself around him and go to bed with that comforting warmth. As she fantasized about romantic settings of cozy cuddling her mouth began to work faster on his body, making Spike groan louder in response. "Rarity... I'm close..." Rarity's pulled her lips away slowly and seductively, coming off of his cock with a small "pop" noise that made Spike jump.

"Good boy Spike." Rarity spoke in a deep sensual voice that made him shudder. "It's always polite to tell a lady. My little gentleman. Because of that I'm going to give you a special treat." Rarity leaned back and reached behind herself, unclasping her bra to reveal her large breasts to him. His eyes widened at the sight and Rarity purposefully stretched her back to push them forward. No matter how many girls "caught his eye" they'd at least never be able to beat Rarity for looks and figure... well everyone except possibly Fluttershy. "Now for your treat."

Rarity leaned forward and set her breasts onto Spike's lap which made him give a surprised yelp that Rarity couldn't help but giggle at. Bringing her hands around her luscious curves she squeezed Spike's cock between her cleavage. The boy groaned almost immediately in appreciation. "Now, just let Rarity make you feel better." Using her hands and body she rubbed her breasts up and down the length of Spike's member, dragging her soft skin along his cock. Spike was breathing a lot harder now and she could see it wouldn't be long. "It's okay Spiky, you can whenever you're ready." Rarity began to move her breasts as quickly as her back would allow her, stroking Spike until he let out a choked moan and came in her cleavage.

Rarity watched as Spike climaxed onto her breasts, keeping her breasts squeezed around his member until he finished. His cum collecting on her skin in small white pools. Spike was breathing hard after having his orgasm and Rarity gave into her temptation, taking a small bit onto her finger and licking it. Spike watched surprised and she smiled. "Well, you certainly taste like a man to me. Be a darling and hand me my handkerchief, would you Spike?"

"Y-yeah." Spike nodded as Rarity released him from the love grip of her breasts. She was pleased to see he still had the energy to crawl over and retrieve it for her without any appearance of being tired. Spike came back and offered her the cloth but Rarity just sat on the edge of the bed. Spike waited for a while before holding it up. "May I?"

"Please do." Rarity smiled as Spike carefully cleaned her skin of the mess they had made, being careful to clean up every bit of it and leave her looking as pristine as he'd found her. "Thank you very much Spike."

"It was my pleasurmmff!" She suddenly hugged him against her chest and he looked up at her purple eyes, seeing the love there and also the desire. Rarity didn't intend to let things end there. After a moment Spike took the initiative and put his hands onto her breasts, his fingers feeling them but not squeezing due to his claws. They felt strong and a little dangerous, which got Rarity more turned on unexpectedly. This was quickly turning from a favor to Spike into an act of passion on her part.

Now with the silent permission of his exploration Spike leaned in and his lips found Rarity's nipple, sucking at it gently. Rarity cooed with approval and her hand stroked his stiff green, spiky hair. The sound just encouraged him more as his lips locked around her skin and sucked hard. Rarity winced a little feeling his teeth brush at her skin but he was mindful of them, never using his mouth hard enough to bite her. In fact it turned her on just that much more feeling the slight risk involved with their love making.

As his tongue flicked against her nipple Rarity rubbed her thighs together, breathing harder. He was getting her worked up, his other hand gripping at her breast with his gentle claws. When his lips finally did pull away Rarity took a deep breath, only to moan out feeling his mouth latch to her other breast. "Sp-Spike... you're doing a very OH! You're doing a very good job but I need you. I need you somewhere else." Spike pulled his mouth away from her now wet and stiff nipple, Rarity quickly lifting her hips and removing her panties onto the floor. Her pussy was already hot and wet with anticipation and she couldn't wait another moment for him.

Rarity had expected him to throw her to the bed and secretly she was hoping for it, however he surprised her when his head dipped down below her bust line and to between her legs where she had been awaiting him. He spread her thighs apart with his hands and took in her scent, making Rarity blushed. Did he like it? Was seeing her like this going to be too much for him? Why was he taking so long to do anything down there? He didn't like it! He didn't like her! Oh no oh no she had moved too fast! She'd ruined every... "Oh my!"

Rarity sucked in a breath of air feeling Spike's tongue rub against her most private of locations, tasting her wet pussy that had been waiting for him so eagerly. His tongue lapped against the folds of her pussy slowly, applying pressure with it's length and making Rarity shudder. "Oh my... oh Spike... " Her breath began to increase quickly from finally receiving the pleasure her body had been asking for. "Oh Spike! Oh don't stop!" His tongue slid against her, brushing her clit with each lick and causing her hips to push forward to him every time. With each moan Spike became braver and braver until finally, mercifully he pressed his way inside of her folds.

Rarity was moaning very loudly now, feeling the long tongue slither around inside of her pussy and touch her sensitive areas. It wasn't like anything she'd felt in the past and if she'd known he could do this sooner she might have invited him to her chambers earlier than today. Her fingers gripped the bed and she actually began to squeal in delight. "Spike you're doing so very good for your Rarity! Don't stop!" She continued to shout in her high pitched moans until finally her hips shuddered and her pussy squeezed tight around his tongue, her body gaining the climax it so desperately wanted.

Rarity gasped for air as her thighs squeezed around Spike's head tightly, she felt so good! As her chest heaved and her lungs sucked in much needed breaths she felt a tapping at her thigh and looked down to see the green haired head trapped between her legs. "Oopsie, sorry Spike." Rarity giggled and let his head go, Spike shaking it around as he was gaining his own breaths back and licking his lips clean.

"Rarity, I love you so much." Spike confessed and Rarity felt her heart soar at the words.

"I love you too Spike. Please don't stop now, come to me." She held her arms open for him and Spike climbed onto the bed in her embrace, the two lovers kissing deeply. She could taste herself on his lips still but she didn't mind, it was just a reminder to the incredible climax he'd provided her. With Spike over her now she spread her legs apart, wrapping one around him to pull his hips closer to hers. Spike didn't need much more encouragement and pushed himself into her.

Rarity felt herself invaded and it was as sweet as she expected. Spike pressed himself into her as deep as his body would allow, moaning as Rarity took his virginity from him. The two met each others gaze and Rarity felt tears form at the edge of her eyes. Spike looked on worried. "Rarity, I'm sorry, I didn't mean to..." Rarity put a finger to his lips to shush him.

"It's okay Spike. It's okay I'm... I'm happy. I'm so happy." Rarity hugged Spike tightly in her arms and he did the same, feeling a few sobs escape her. She didn't want to upset him but she was just so over come with emotion. Something about this bond they had felt precious to her. She didn't want to let it go and it was too much to deal with rationally. "I'm okay, I am." She assured Spike and kissed his lips. "Please keep going."

Spike nodded to her and despite the scare she had given him continued to press into her, now thrusting himself inside slowly. Rarity took in sharp breaths as she felt herself penetrated and was loving every delicious moment of it. She was still coming back down from her previous orgasm and the rush of emotions and now she was losing control to this passion. Spike was apparently the same as his thrusting was increasing in speed quickly and she couldn't get enough of it.

Letting out a cry Rarity arched her back and gripped onto the bed sheets, her toes curling from the pressure her lover was providing. She needed him, and she needed him to need her. If it kept going Spike would cum again and then their passion would end. She wasn't done with him yet. "Spike! Spike let me be on top!" Spike stopped possibly out of curiousity and confusion reminding Rarity this was his first time. She'd make it a memorable one. When he finally ceased pounding into her Rarity rolled the two of them so he was on his back and readjusted her legs over top of him. "Good boy my Spiky-Wikey." Her voice was filled with lust but she didn't care, she enjoyed letting herself go with him. "Now let Rarity do the work for you." She kissed his nose sweetly and began to move her hips on his lap.

It didn't take her long to build up a rhythm and the sound of her hips slapping against his filled the room along with their combined labored breathing. Rarity could feel him pushing into her that much more deeply and she gripped his shoulders with the intensity it provided. Her urges were becoming less lady like and more primal but she wanted to enjoy herself to the fullest. "Spike... you can spank me."

"...what?" Even in his lust filled haze the words were surprising and she should have expected as much. But she wanted just this little pleasure, they'd already broken so many taboos together.

"I slapped you, and I'm so so sorry for it. Please, spank me for what I did. I deserve it." Spike was still hesitant about the request but did as she asked, leaning his body forward a little to get enough room to slap her ass. Rarity let out a surprised but pleasured gasp. "Yes... I deserve it. Keep going." Since she requested Spike acknowledge, his hand spanking the right side of her ass with a pleasurable pain. Rarity couldn't take it anymore.

She let out another squeal as she climaxed hard, leaning forward and biting Spike's shoulder with her teeth. This had the benefit of finally bringing Spike to his own second climax and Rarity felt Spike cum inside of her. She gasped hard with each thrust he pushed into her, filling her with his hot semen. Her whole body shook as she recovered from the feelings her body endured. "Oh Celestia... Spike just... lay with me for a moment. Please." Spike nodded and Rarity cuddled up against him, their bodies still joined at the hip. Slowly together their heart beats and breathing slowed down, coming off the high of ecstasy that they had shared. Oh Celestia indeed, she hadn't enjoyed making love like that in a long time.

When the strength finally came back to her Rarity pulled herself off of Spike's member, the two moaning with the separation. Collapsing onto her side she cuddled against him and felt warm and cozy, just like she had fantasized about. The smile was plastered across her face and she was sure her hair was a mess after all of that but she didn't care right now. This was too good. "Rarity, I..."

"Shhh, Spike. In a moment. Just give me this for a while longer." Spike quieted as they stayed in each other's embrace, enjoying the company it provided. Rarity let the warmth of his skin on hers sink into her, let her be taken to a comforting place where this love was all there was and all they needed. But reality crept its way back to her, and she finally consented. "Spike, did you enjoy this?"

"It's like everything I ever dreamed of." He admitted to her in a quiet voice, snuggling into her embrace. "But Rarity, I have to ask; why? Why now after all of this time?" She hadn't expected that question, even though it was justified. But even she wasn't sure of all the reasons anymore.

"You said you were suffering, you said the presence of all the girls around you gave you stress and pain. I wanted to take that away from you. To show you what you'd been missing. I thought if maybe you knew, if you had experienced it before you wouldn't feel those desires as intensely as you do now." She looked into his emerald eyes. "Was I wrong?" Spike was quiet for a moment as he thought about what she said, thinking on her words carefully.

"Was that the only reason?" He wasn't making it easy for her. Maybe she didn't deserve to have it easy anyway.

"It was, at first. But as we continued I felt more confident. More certain this was..." Careful what you say Rarity. Don't say anything out of turn. "I felt as if this was something that you needed. This was something I needed to do for you, and that if anyone was going to do it that it had to be me." It was the safest way she could express her feelings without actually expressing outright what she wanted. Because if she did she'd make him hers in an instant and she was scared of how easy that would be. Spike didn't say anything for the longest time and Rarity felt her heart nearly hold still in anticipation to his reaction.

"Do you regret what we did?" He finally asked.

"No, never. I could never regret it." She hugged him against herself and thankfully he didn't pull away. "However we shouldn't do this again, for a while. Until I'm sure of some things. Would that be okay Spike?" She stroked his hair with her fingers and the idea of letting him go wasn't just sad it was scary. She was falling into love with this emotion far too fast.

"I was willing to wait for you before Rarity, I'll wait as long as it takes." Rarity held him tight in her embrace.

"Thank you Spike. Thank you so much." She kissed his cheek and cuddled him for a while before finally releasing him from the hug. "Well we've stolen time from the rest of the world for ourselves, I'm not sure how much more we'll get. We should return to everyone while we still can." Spike nodded to her, getting out of bed and putting his clothes back on. Rarity sat up but stayed naked, watching Spike as he got dressed and was ready to leave. It was difficult for her.

"Do you want me to stay away for a while?" Spike asked her hesitantly and Rarity shook her head, the idea of him actively avoiding her was awful. "Okay then. I'll see you around Rarity."

"Yeah, I'll see you around Spike." Spike came forward and took Rarity's hand in his, leaning down to kiss it. It earned him a blush and a smile from the lovely woman before he hugged her one last time and left her room. Leaving Rarity alone with her thoughts and the room that smelled of their recent sexual adventure. She gripped the sheets in her hands as she considered what had happened and what she had to do.

"Okay Rarity... lets not have a fit or get melodramatic or anything. You've just had sex with Spike. Wonderful, very pleasing sex with Spike that may have been the best you've had in longer than you can recall but it happened. Now then; what do you do?" She ran a finger over the jeweled necklace she wore and having it on her made her feel more confident in the decision to make love to Spike. As if they'd been preparing for this for a long time. "No day dreaming Rarity, focus. Lets break down what we have to do." She started to make her mental check lists over her actions.

"Pro: You've had sex with Spike and possibly relieved him of his mysterious problem, there by protecting not only yourself and other young women but also your innocent little sister." If Spike was getting any more out of control like he'd insinuated and Sweetie really was becoming interested in boys she couldn't stop that meeting soon enough. "Con: You are... possibly falling in love with a younger man that you shouldn't necessarily be involved with." Even admitting that out loud was difficult and it was a very big con to her situation she was in now.

"Pro: If this solution worked no one else will have to provide themselves to Spike and you'll have saved everyone some effort in treating him. Con: You now have to let Twilight Sparkle know what you've done." Rarity felt the gravity of that thought on her shoulders like a weight. "Oh dear Rarity, you have quite a problem indeed don't you?" Rising to her feet Rarity walked into the bathroom, she would need to get cleaned up before anything else while she thought of the best method to handle such a conversation with her fellow magical friend.


Needle and thread flew like the wind as it stitched the dress up before the two girls. Flying on the power of magic Twilight and Rarity pieced the dress together in no time at all, fabric coming together to form a very lovely work of art. Rarity wished she could have admired it as much as she wanted to. The additional help had been useful from her friend but the real reason for their get together today burned at the back of her mind.

"Well looks like it's all done, right Rarity?" Twilight asked with a pleasant smile looking over their work.

"Yes indeed darling, it came out just smashing. You really helped me get this piece together in a very short time."

"Oh it was nothing Rarity. I don't really do much other than provide an extra needle and thread to get it all together. And that book of course you asked for on eastern styles of dresses." Rarity had to come up with some excuse to get Twilight over today for sure. The combined request of a new book along with help for a project was a sure fire way to get the woman's attention. "Honestly I think you probably could have finished this pretty fast even without my help." Rarity twiddled her fingers together as she held a fake smile on her face. It seemed there wasn't much reason to keep the charade up any longer.

"Well Twilight it's interesting you'd say that. You see the dress wasn't the real reason I asked you over today." Twilight looked surprised at the confession.

"Really? Rarity you know if you needed my attention you only had to ask."

"You're right, I'm sorry for the subterfuge but well I had to be sure I had your full attention. Would you like to sit down for some tea?" Rarity offered walking to the small table in the work room where this had all started when she'd slapped Spike across the face. The two girls sat down across from each other and Rarity poured them both tea to drink while she prepared herself to talk to Twilight about this. "Oh where to begin?"

"Well why not at the beginning? That's usually the best place to start for me." Twilight smiled cheerfully and Rarity felt guilty thinking that smile would be leaving soon. Though she shouldn't jump to conclusions so quickly. Twilight was a very intelligent girl, if anyone could view something logically and rationally it was her.

"Very well then. You see Spike was over here yesterday helping me move some supplies around the store. While he was doing so I was working on a dress for Sweetie Belle." Twilight was listening intently and Rarity was still bracing herself as she approached the first shock. "I called Spike in to have him give me an opinion on the dress, and after that I left the two of them alone for a bit. In the process Sweetie Belle managed to spill some hot chocolate I was drinking all over herself."

"That sounds awful, I'm sure you weren't very pleased with her after that." Twilight interjected showing she was paying attention to her story.

"Well I wouldn't have been had I had the chance to notice. You see Sweetie Belle decided the best plan was to take the dress to my mother's house to get it cleaned before I would have the chance to find out. To do this she took off her dress right away, in front of Spike, to have him take it over for her." Twilight's eyes got wide with surprise at that.

"She undressed in front of Spike? That's amazingly bold of her." Twilight spoke but she didn't seem very upset by it. That was a good sign.

"Yes well I cam in right at that part of her little plan, and I misinterpreted what was happening. So under the impression Spike had taken off her dress by force while she was trying to push him out the door I got between them and I... I slapped Spike across the face." Rarity dropped her eyes away from Twilight's feeling the shame rush up inside her. "I didn't know at the time..." She felt a hand fall on hers and saw Twilight looking at her across the table sympathetically.

"Rarity, I can see this is eating you up inside. And while I'm not too pleased with your over reaction I can understand." Twilight comforted Rarity and she took it happily. "Did you apologize when you found out the truth?"

"Yes I did... actually that's what I wanted to talk to you about."

"Phew. Well I'm sure at least Spike accepted your apology since he didn't mention any of this to me last night. What else happened other than that though? I imagine he was pretty upset." Twilight picked up her tea cup and began to taste it.

"Well yes he was but not about what I was expecting. He wasn't as upset about me slapping him as he was about what I'd thought he'd done. He said he'd been going through some difficult changes for some time now. To the point you and Zecora were treating him quietly for them." Twilight's tea cup suddenly came clinking down onto her plate as she looked across the table at Rarity with very serious eyes. It was a lot more concerned appearance than Rarity had expected. "Twilight?"

"He mentioned my treatments?" Twilight said hesitantly, there was an apparent view of worry and Rarity was scared she'd spoken out of turn.

"Yes, he said you were doing something to help him with his problem and Zecora had given him a sort of medicine. He didn't go into detail..." Twilight's body became visibly more relaxed when she mentioned Spike hadn't given a description on her treatments. "...but he said his problem had to do with his attraction to women. Also that he was afraid it may get worse."

"Oh that, well at the moment he's just been spewing fire at random intervals when ever he gets aroused. I'm not sure about it getting much farther than that as he's only recently shown these symptoms but it looks like everything is under control now." Twilight spoke confidently but that didn't relieve Rarity's stress any as she approached the big part of her story.

"Well I hope that is certainly true. Spike did seem very distraught when he told me all of this, like he was afraid something was going to happen. Naturally seeing Spike suffering I wanted to do something to help. I couldn't just let him sit there upset like he was." Rarity was stretching her story out now to avoid having to get to the confession. But Twilight's eyes were directly upon her and she knew she had to say something. "So I thought that if Spike wasn't focused on the cause of his problem any longer that he wouldn't have to worry about his problem getting out of hand."

"Well that does sound like a solution but how exactly could we do that? I mean getting a young man to avoid looking and being aroused by women isn't very likely." Twilight mentioned it jokingly and Rarity swallowed a lump in her throat.

"That is true, how do you prevent that? Well I figured if Spike knew what it was that he was craving all of this time that it might help him ignore it. So I decided to... give it to him." Twilight just stared at Rarity for a while as if she had no idea what she was saying.

"So you gave him... a way to ignore girls? I don't really understand, like a chastity belt?"

"No Twilight I... I slept with Spike." She let the answer hang in the air for a moment as it started to sink in. "We... we had sex together. In my room." Twilight just stared at Rarity as her words sunk in, her expression changing from confusion to realization and then something else. Something Rarity couldn't really define. It was as if she was both hurt and unable to understand what was happening. "Twilight I'm sorry, it might not have been the best idea but he was suffering so much and I had to do something and it seemed like a good idea at the time." Twilight looked away from Rarity at a loss for words, standing up from the table and heading for the door. "Twilight please! I know you're disappointed with me but if we can just talk about this..."

Rarity stopped cold as Twilight's hand came up and slapped her across the face. The strike was hard and deliberate and Rarity shuddered after being hit. She looked back at Twilight's eyes and saw the feeling of betrayal in them. She didn't understand why. Rarity opened her mouth to speak but Twilight didn't give her the opportunity, walking out of the room and closing the door behind her, leaving Rarity alone.

Rarity felt tears building at the edges of her eyes and she held them back, sniffing a little and rubbing her face where she'd been hit. "Well Rarity you deserved that, didn't you? Going behind your friend's back and sleeping with someone that's like her family. Just an awful person is what you are." Rarity went to gather the tea set and take it to the kitchen, her grip loosening on Twilight's cup and it fell to the floor. "Oh... clumsy me." Rarity grabbed a rag and knelt down by the stain, looking to clean it out before it set in. She felt liquid hitting the top of her hand and realized she was crying and she couldn't stop it any longer. Her sobs coming freely and uncontrollably.

"Oh Celestia... I've lost my friend, I've lost Spike. I've lost them both and it's all my fault!"

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