Flutter x Mac not Dash x Mac as the name suggests. =P
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Rainbow Dash's signature move doesn't work so well when she tries it amongst the Apple Family's orchard and hurts herself badly, with Applejack and Applebloom away in Appleoosa and the town Nurse away at a convention who will Big Mac turn to to help him care for the wounded pegasus?
Ah am looking for anyone with experience to review this and point out any obvious flaws with the spelling. grammar or story! So help me if y'all can!
Cover pic was graciously provided by the wonderful 0r0ch1, who can be found on his furaffinity site here:http://www.furaffinity.net/user/shin0r0z/
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Chap 1: The Crash [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Sep 25th, 2011
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Unnamed [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 12th, 2011
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Chapter 3 (Yeah I know I forgot the name for the last one... so sue me) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 16th, 2011
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Chapter 4 (Nothing funny to say this time I'm afraid) [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 20th, 2011
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Chapter 5: Revive [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Nov 29th, 2011
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The Start of Something New [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]
Dec 24th, 2011
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