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My Little Pony: Of Misadventures and Fantastic Machines

by Ex-Nihilos
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The misadventures of a far too helpful Work Horse and an Idiot Savant with a silver tongue.
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Two best friends, one a work horse with a streak of being too trusting and the other an idiot with strangely brilliant ideas, leave the steampunk-esque city of Bronze Galloptry to come to Ponyville hoping to escape the trouble that plagued them and find a new more peaceful life but find that they’ll have to lead their new friends from Ponyville back home to save the life of a sick little filly.

A tale of cultural shock and stupid adventures, tags and characters will be added as the story progresses. If anything this is practice for me for writing as well as satisfying a need to write. Feel free to give some constructive criticism on how awful my writing is or how great it is, honestly any feedback is good for me.

(I should probably put this in just for good measure- My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic and all its likeness belong to Hasbro and obviously not to me.)

Teen
Incomplete

19,056 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 17 Minutes to read: [Cache]

4 Chapters:

  1. Chapter 1: Steampunk Ponies [Cache] Jan 24th, 2012
    4,412
  2. Chapter 2: The New Lunar Year Celebration [Cache] Jan 25th, 2012
    3,164
  3. Chapter 3: A Trial and a Verdict [Cache] Jan 26th, 2012
    3,330
  4. Chapter 4: The Journey [Cache] Jan 29th, 2012
    8,150
Published Jan 29th, 2012

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