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Book I. A unicorn, alone and friendless, has drifted on through life, unnoticed by all. He thinks little of himself, sees himself as nothing and hides a special power. Can the Mane Six change the way he sees things?
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Book I

Meet Dusk Noir, a unicorn stallion from Canterlot. He attends Princess Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns, has a liking to learning and reading and has a unique magical talent. He seems like he would be happy, but there's just one problem: he doesn't have any friends. It's not that he doesn't want them, but he just feels that he wouldn't be worth the time of anypony. He sees himself as unremarkable, a waste of space and not much to bother with. There's only one pony he'd even consider being good enough as a friend for and he doesn't even know how to say the first word to her. It seems like he will always be alone.

Until one night, when he discovered by the Princess of the Sun and is sent to Ponyville to meet her at last. Can he achieve the goal of earning her friendship and much more besides or will he be simply left alone?

This is a story that I began as a sort of creativity outlet when I discovered how much of a fan I was of the series. From there, it just kind of grew and I enjoyed continuing it. Doubtless, you probably know what it's going to be about before you even read it and would even be tempted to point it out. I won't try and change what you think, all I ask is that you give it a chance.

There are two more stories following this, both of which along with the fuller version of this one, can be found on my fanfiction account. Just search my username and you'll find them, if you really want to read more that is. I'll try posting on as regular a basis as I can. That is, if it's received well.

This first one isn't my best, I'll admit that much, but I certainly did try my best with this one and what I had planned for it. I hope you enjoy it.

The cover was by Quillin Words and he did a fantastic job, thanks dude!

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65,354 words: Estimated 4 Hours, 22 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

16 Chapters:

  1. Humble Beginnings [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 20th, 2013
    1,305
  2. Discovered [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Mar 30th, 2014
    3,054
  3. Welcome to Ponyville [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 22nd, 2013
    3,612
  4. Starting Off [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 23rd, 2013
    4,688
  5. My Mistake [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 5th, 2014
    4,638
  6. Getting Sense Talked Into You [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 11th, 2015
    3,432
  7. Apologies and Tea [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 26th, 2013
    4,388
  8. Getting To Know You [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 3rd, 2014
    3,175
  9. Running the Leaves [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 3rd, 2014
    6,153
  10. Hush Now, Quiet Now [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 11th, 2015
    4,124
  11. Too Good To Be True [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 30th, 2013
    3,613
  12. What Must Be Done [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 31st, 2013
    4,028
  13. The Light... [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 1st, 2013
    5,772
  14. ...That Shines In The Dark [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 2nd, 2013
    4,867
  15. Where Credit Is Due [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 3rd, 2013
    3,815
  16. One Last Surprise [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Feb 4th, 2013
    4,653
Published Jan 20th, 2013
Last Update Feb 3rd, 2013

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