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Remorse

by ponyguy123

Chapter 1: The Fight

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Rainbow Dash and Applejack had gotten into a fight. Over the past week, it had become something much more serious...

Applejack was standing outside the town hall, threatening Rainbow Dash, who was flying higher above her.

"Get down here, you! I'll teach you to mess with me!" Yells Applejack.

The snow was piled up high so everyone was at home. There was no-one around to hear them.

"Oh yeah? Who's gonna make me?" Rainbow Dash yells back

"Ohhhh. I see how it is. You're just a big chicken!"

"Hey! I'm not a chicken!" Rainbow Dash screams back.

Applejack started to make chicken noises.

"I'm not a chi- Stop that! I'm not a chicken!"

"Oh yeah? Well why don't you come down here and prove it!" Yells Applejack.

Rainbow Dash couldn't resist. All of their anger for each other was being released. She flew down there and charged straight toward Applejack, head first. At the last second, Applejack stepped to the side and slipped out her back hoof, tripping Rainbow Dash. She fell face first into the snow. Applejack laughed so hard she nearly cried.

That was the last straw. Rainbow Dash had been laughed at too many times by that apple farmer. She quickly jumps back up and kicks Applejack in the chest.

Applejack flies backs and crashes into one of the wooden posts around town hall. Applejack gets back up and stares straight at Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash charges at Applejack again, but swings a punch at her at the last second. Applejack falls over in the snow, but gets back up, with blood dripping from her nose from the punch.

"Oh, it is on now!" Applejack says, full of rage.

Applejack runs at Rainbow Dash, then swings around and gives her a big kick with her back legs, right in her side. Rainbow Dash flies across town square and faceplants into a pole.

She screams with pain, but quickly gets over it, to continue her fight. She gets up and faces Applejack again, blood dripping down from her nose and pain in her side ribs.

"Is that all you got?" Applejack taunts.

"It's barely even begun!" Rainbow Dash replies back.

Rainbow Dash flies over to Applejack and picks her up by her tail. Applejack, unable to reach her enemy, is left dangling in the air. She tries as hard as she can, but she is powerless in this position. Rainbow Dash spits out her tail and Applejack falls onto the roof of town hall. She rolls of the roof and lands with a thud in the thick snow.

Rainbow Dash lands with an evil laugh and stares at Applejack.

Applejack rolls over to face the cold winter sky and then Rainbow Dash. Rainbow Dash flies up into the sky, watching Applejack lie there. She then darts down, straight toward AJ. Applejack sees Rainbow Dash getting closer. She then slides to the side a little and punches out her hoof and gets Rainbow Dash. Right in the wing.

Rainbow Dash lies opposite her, screaming in pain. Her wing was definitely broken.

"Hah! You can't fly now! That makes this fight a little more fair!" Gloats Applejack.

Applejack walks over to Rainbow Dash and steps on her tail, while she is still lying there in the snow with extreme agony.

"Aww. What's wrong? Did "Equestria's fastest pegasus" get beaten by an earth-pony?" Laughs Applejack

Rainbow Dash can't take it anymore. She jumps up and shoves Applejack against a pole. She then punches her in the stomach multiple times against the pole.

"Ha! How do YOU like it? HOW DO YOU LIKE IT?!?!" Screamed Rainbow Dash

Applejack was screaming with pain, which could just be heard over RD's screams of insanity. Rainbow Dash kept at it, until Applejack could take no more. She dropped to the ground, her blood soaking the fresh white snow.

Rainbow Dash jumped on Applejack and grabbed her throat, strangling her with her two front hooves.

"Rainbow... Stop... it..." Applejack manages to say.

"Never!!!" Screams Rainbow Dash, still fixed on winning the war.

Rainbow Dash laughed her evil laugh again, until she saw the look in AJ's eyes. Her eyes, filled with pain and torture and regret. Regret of ever starting that fight.

Rainbow Dash releases her hooves from Applejacks's throat and the earth pony lay there, blood coming out of the gashes on her torso and nose and staining the snow. Then, after that whole battle, Applejack finally passed out.

Rainbow Dash was left there alone, not sure what to do. All of her anger had vanished and was replaced by remorse. Suddenly, she realised what had happened. What was done. What SHE had done.

She stared down at her body. It was covered in gashes.

So many guilty questions filled her head at that moment.

What will happen to me?

Will Applejack be okay?

What will all of our friends say?

She didn't have time to think about it. She had to do something quickly. Applejack was losing blood! She would be dead soon!

Rainbow Dash runs over over to town hall and wipes the frost of the windows. She looks inside but no-one is there. She looks around the empty streets. Nopony was there. It was just those two.

Rainbow Dash takes another look at Applejack. Her body covered in gashes from her punches.

"I'm a monster!" She thinks to herself. "What have I done?!"

She then sees a public phone booth and runs over to it. She inserts two bits and dials the hospital.

"Hello, Ponyville Hospital. State your emergency." Said the voice on the other end.

"You have to come quickly! Somepony's really hurt!" Rainbow Dash was panicking.

"Calm down. It'll be alright. How are they hurt?"

"She's bleeding! Really badly!" Rainbow Dash was still panicking.

"Are they still conscious?"

"No."

"Alright. Where are you?"

"I'm outside town hall."

"Okay. An ambulance will be there soon."

Rainbow Dash sat there in the cold snow. Staring at Applejack. Regretting it all. She can hear the sirens approaching. The ambulance pulls up next to them and two stallions get out. They cringe at the sight of all the blood.

They load Applejack into the van and Rainbow Dash gets in too. After all, she did have a broken wing.

Author's Notes:

You know, I always wanted to make a fight scene for two of the mane ponies and those two just seemed right for the situation.

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