Alright, just like promised here's The Sequel. If it isn't there than it might still be going through moderator approval so just give it a few minutes.

Anyway while I have your attention I just wanted to give some backdrop on the story. Originally I wasn't going to have Clare and Luna go on vacation and was going to have Hart, Clare's shadow guard friend, try and rape Luna during Hearts and Hooves day. Since it would've been Clare's day off he would've been chatting with Cloud Dasher in the mess hall and Dasher would've made the comment "Almost didn't recognize you without all your guns" and Clare would've quoted "Yeah it's my day off. It should be a quiet day". Then he'd remember he left something, his watch, in Luna's room from a conversation they had about time keeping. So he'd proceed upstairs to find Hart just about to rape Luna then pull out his S&W 500 and blow off Hart's foreleg. Hart would then say "You just fucked up my arm" and Clare would quote "You fucked up my day off" then shoot his friend for him trying to rape Luna. Luna would then ask if it was traumatizing to shoot his friend and Clare would've quoted "Nah, he fucked up my day off. The asshole deserved it".

After they fell in love and expressed their feelings for one another I was going to end the story but then something made me decide to keep going.

Another part I didn't have in the story was a threesome scene with Rarity on the beach. She would've drunkenly stumbled upon them then told Luna "That isn't how a lady acts during sex" and proceed to have a threesome. Though it kind of caught my attention and made me laugh I decided upon not putting it in.

And we all know that Derpy was originally going to die. I wasn't going to show he death and have Moon Crater and Clare rush to get the wounded only to find that every pony was dead. But luckily I had a particular dream while I was passed out at work that changed my descision.

I wasn't going to have Clare die in the end and rather have him and Luna get married and have a very romantic ending with them watching the sunset together on the beachfront of Los Pegasus but I guess somewhere along the way I decided to have Clare die saving Shining Armor.

Another note to mention is that I used two other author's OCs, upon their asking, in this story. Moon Crater is Naesthebrony's OC and he asked me if I could include him in my story so me, being very...kind?... I can't think of a good word to use right now, said yeah sure and put his OC in the story. The other OC is Angel Eyes who belongs to Spetsnaz Pinkie Pie and it was sort of the same thing. He asked if I would put his OC in the story and I said sure.

So there's a little bit of backdrop to the story just so you all see how much it changed from my original idea.