Ok, listen, I know you're all wondering about some parts of the story. Yes they are sometimes out of the game, but they are foreshadowing.

Babs Seeds cutie Mark cutie mark will appear in the END. I will do something a little different with the ending, explaining why Isaac hates Feeders, and other parts to come.

And, i would also like to ask a favor of you all. Could you not put corrections in the comment's? I enjoy a little criticism, but on every chapter, I'm starting to feel annoyed and hurt. Every say, two chapters I can handle, but could you all not do it on every chapter? I'm doing my best here, so, give me a break.

And, I will also be referencing my first DS story later.

Now, I'm going to work on my Left 4 Dead crossover.