On her deathbed Princess Celestia tells Twilight Sparkle a forgotten piece of history
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On her deathbed Princess Celestia tells Twilight Sparkle the story of the country that came before Equestria, Athelta, the land of the Alicorns
Author note: Okay, so i missed the deadline for NaPoWriMonth, but i'm still going to finish the story. To the couple of people who care, don't worry, it'll get done.
Chapter One has been edited for both Grammer problems, and a couple story points that i didnt like and thought needed changing.
Edits are done on Chapter Three, i feel much better about it now.
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Adventure
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