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A side-story to Ordo ab Chao: A young inventor takes drastic measures to ensure that the government of the Union sees his machine for the genius it is.
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After the total loss of the federal forces at Ghastly Gorge, the threat of the rebellion has suddenly become very real. The gears of the machine of the Union are now spinning solely for the purpose of a civil war—a war that they are now not entirely certain they will be able to win decisively.

Crystal Miner, a young unicorn with a strange iron band around his horn, has spent the last five years of his life working on a machine that he thinks will allow the Union Army to crush the rebellion once and for all; and, on July the second, he casually strolls into the Department of Magic and Defense, eager to show them his work of art.

Of course the Department will buy it; it's genius. Why would they reject genius? If they say no—no, he can't let that happen. He won't allow his gift to the world to be glanced over by ignorant bureaucrats as long as he is still alive. He, and it, needs—deserves to be remembered. They will buy his invention whether they like it or not—even if it means he has to march straight up to the Horseshoe Office with a fully-loaded rifle and confront the president of the Union himself.

This is a side-story to Ordo ab Chao and takes place near the end of the events of Chapter X.

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28,298 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 54 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

4 Chapters:

  1. Part I [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Dec 28th, 2012
    2,260
  2. Part II [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 2nd, 2013
    14,266
  3. Part III [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 2nd, 2013
    7,061
  4. Part IV [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Apr 2nd, 2013
    4,711
Published Dec 28th, 2012
Last Update Jan 2nd, 2013

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