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D.I.D Pony Troubles

D.I.D Pony Troubles

by IronicSolutions


Chapters


  • Chapter 1
  • Prologue
  • Chapter 1

    After causing some sparks of anger to flare up, it seemed everything will go into plan. They started a small scale riot in the square and everything was going along swimmingly. Until people in uniform, came in and sorted out his ruckus before it can rally anymore of the populous.

    Well, those things will definitely be a problem, I would have to get rid of them if I even want start what I had in mind

    His prey had long gone into his apartment and started writing in one of those devices again. Although it was definitively larger than the rest. However he had no time to patiently wait just so he can mess with this thing's conscience. Luckily enough 'someone' decided to just knock him out with a frying pan.

    "Well now that you are finally unconscious, I can get to working with your memories. Sweet dreams."

    Discord had decided to start from the beginning but that would be impossible in the way his memories were arranged. See everybody has a different way of remembering events, and the inner mind represents the way they are arranged. If someone had short term memory loss and very emotional, there mind would contain dumpsters with different color schemes, but if someone else were to have photographic memory, it would just be one loooong hallway of paintings,photos, or sketches; depending on the person. Evidently our little soon to be test subject contained a large library with differently colored bookcases representing the feeling behind the memory, but other than that it was just a hopeless mess of books.

    In the midst between the staggering bookcases was a blackened wooden table with a similar version of Aden himself slouched over.

    Well that's a small relief. I did not want to face his sub conscience again.

    Hm. he thought while looking up. His mind acknowledges me here and seems to give me a bit of pizzazz. If he wasn't part of my plan I would of had fun messing with him.

    Discord stealthily moved away from the sleeping form ant looked up at the meek bookcases that somehow were carrying what looks like, thousands of books.

    "Let's see here; blue probably means depression, yellow... possibly happiness. Ah red!"

    He walked along the books, scanning the names of events, people, items, Discord, food... wait back up a minute. He looked around for the book once more searching for it among hundreds of others just like it save the name.

    That's impossible. I simply misread. I bet it was something like...

    And there it was. It looked rather new with hardly any dust compared to the others. As well as the golden print on the book's spine hasn't faded away either. Discord glared at it expecting to change any moment, but the book just lay there against the covers of "Spray Tans" and "Supremacists". Reluctantly but none the less nervous, Discord snatched the book and opened the covers, when he was immediately thrown into it by force. What transpired inside can be summarized as S2 Ep 1-2.

    After finding himself on the floor, Discord flopped over onto his back and stared into the black obsidian that represents his captor's mind. Although now Discord was not sure who was really the powerful one here anymore. This human had knowledge that he didn't expect anyone in this world to have, and if he had hoped to rally him up to join him, it was most likely not going to end well. What really troubles him was that this human knows of almost all of Equestria, and yet the princesses of the land and yours truly had never even seen or confronted one of these mammals. It was unnerving to say the least.

    "Wait, if he knows about me and my mistakes, then he must know about the elements."

    After getting up from the hard floor, he flew this time to the center of the library once again. He was headed into the yellow bookcases, information about the elements likely to be in there.

    Erghh

    No! How did the human wake up so fast?!

    He quickly jumped up and flew above the table high enough so the human's subconscious would't notice him. However it seemed to have other plans as it just got up and walked towards some white bookcases covered in paintings depicting the elements of harmony.

    Now how in the world did I miss that?!

    Stealthily he followed the awoken thing into the bright bookcases. These bookcases were just tall enough for the human to reach all the books except for the last top row. No doubt that's what he wishes what could be unseen or heard. With time to plenty of time to think right then, Discord began recalling today's events.

    No doubt this human is different from the rest. He noticed my presence earlier today when the rest hardly paid mind. However I still have no idea how he had even known my name. Hold on, these books are all dedicated to the bearers of the elements and the rest of Equestria. And my book was thrown away into the abyss of angry red covers.What did he do in order to get thrown into red, form what he had seen, the human was all for a bit chaos now and then. And what about these ponies, some of these are just common populace and they get their own book. Heck some of them are even bigger than mine!

    Discord was furious at this human. It had no right to say who was more important the Discord. Even Spike, Twilight's lowly assistant, has half a bookcase with his name on it. The nerve of this guy, it doesn't even know I'm here.

    Well, I'll have to fix that.

    Discord approached the human head on, not even caring if he was seen, and quickly knocked out his opponent with one hit to the side of his head. He leaned over his body and spat in his face, disgusted and angry at this human. He was about to dispose the subconscious of the human, killing the human almost instantly, when a new idea went across his mind. YES this'll show him who's the powerful one here. He'll go insane just trying to control them in his mind.

    He snatched the unconscious body and threw it on the table, and with his anger, pulled with all his might on the elements minds using the human as receiver. Soon a portal started to slowly manifest itself, clashing with colors and bright as the sun, but Discord was having none of it. He will prevail, and he will not let this insignificant being ridicule him.

    With one final pull, Discord jerked against the magical force and gratefully heard the sound of six new bodies hitting against the floor like rag dolls. Quickly he closed the ever growing portal before any outside magic can stop him.

    "Well now that that's taken care of, let's finish .. this...?"

    Discord came face to face with 6 sleeping ponies that inconceivably huddled around the body of the human, the likes of which was now smiling as if he were taunting Discord even more so.

    Ughh, really? Even while their sleeping they try to make friends with something they have no knowledge of.He thought trying to resist a face palm.

    "You know what? It's great that all of you aren't awake to see this. It makes oh so much easier." He said with a malevolent grin."And for a show of thanks, I'm going to leave you with a few more presents. Firstly," Discord quickly opened his mind again and stepped outside,"I'm going to make sure these ponies can not escape from your crazy head." Snapping his talons, a small, but bright, green glow enveloped his hand and Aden. Suddenly a explosively loud sound of a rusty gate closing and locking echoed inside the entire building. What sounded like dozens of dogs also started barking at the intrusion of their sleep, barking loudly and continually at whatever they see.

    "I always hate that part" said Discord, rubbing the side of his temples. "The second gift should surprise you, as such, I won't ruin it for you." Discord paused for a second. "Ah, it seems with the elements stuck in this world, I'm finally allowed back into Equestria, and fully powered too." He paused again, relishing these final moments. "It saddens me that, of what little you saw, you haven't even began to notice my full power." Shaking his head, already feeling the after affects of the spell. He may be an immortal god, but it still took it's toll on him, especially since most of it was fueled with rage anyhow.

    "Well tally ho! I shan't bother you anymore. Have fun with your new 'Friends'" And with another snap of his claws, he disappeared to the Canterlot gardens, in his currently petrified form.

    Not For Long







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    Side note: Sorry for the long delay :(, stupid hand injuries. Anyhow, there won't be that long of a delay anymore, due to the fact that I had plenty of time to think and basically thought out the entire story. Also too fast? Too slow? Not enough detail?
    Expand Vocabulary? Basically I'm asking for criticism. Well that's it for now anyways, also I can't help but fell I kinda smudged up Discord's personality and his choice of words.



    Prologue

    AU Note: Contains many switches of point of view, no not 1st 2nd 3rd, just switching between two people between linebreaks

    XWXWXW


    In the sweltering temperatures of this heatwave many people chose to seek shelter in their air-conditioned homes, while others took advantage of the heat to travel to beaches and whatnot. The city of Mareier (I made it up,... horrible name isn't it?) wasn't all to eventful and wasn't a very great tourist attraction because of the fact. However this suited Aden quite fine as he always enjoyed silence and peace over the countless partying in his old college. His roommates were always trying to get him drunk, to a bar, or set him up with some blind date. He didn't hate them for this, he just preferred if they leave him be. He finally graduated with a bachelor degree under his belt and decided enough is enough and left the town. Coming to Mareier, he had hoped to at least try to start his dream of having some type of impact on society.

    To call Mareier a small city would be a an overstatement, it's roughly the size of about 7city blocks. It's also pretty far away from any major civilizations; about 30 miles away from any in fact. Despite its relativly small size, the village seems to have everything a person needs, from a hardware shop to fashion boutiques, and of course it will have one of the largest supermarket's Aden has ever seen. The nearby farm also helps the village self manage, and the nearby forest ain't to shabby neither. All this keeps the village alive. Although it did strike Aden quite odd that few actually moved into the neighborhood. It's rather peaceful and there's no worry that someone might mug you in one of the many dark alleyways since everybody knows everybody, so if one did commit a crime, it be hard to cover it up.

    As Aden aproached his new apartment, he felt the hairs on the back of his neck rise. He quickly turned around, but no one was around as it was already late in the night.

    I swear something is watching me

    When Aden entered the lobby he quickly found the receptionist and asked for a room preferably one away from the streets. Entering the room on the second floor he shivered despite none of the windows being open.

    Relax Aden, it's not like this place is haunted

    He unloaded his necessities first and quickly spotted the restroom. Deciding showering can wait until tomorrow he starts to set up his laptop on an empty desk, or rather just plugging in the charger. After a few minutes unloading his luggage, he placed the large suitcase under the bed when he noticed how dark it was in his new room. He face palmed.

    I'm so stupid I didn't even turn on the godforsaken lights!

    After tripping over some wires and clothes he left strewn over the floor, and feeling the wall for anything different then the wallpaper, he finally came upon the light switch. Only to reveal that there wasn't any light bulb in the socket in the first place.

    REALLY! Why would anyone take a light bulb from an apartment

    After swearing mentally to punch whoever it was who took the only source of light in the apartment, he turned to his desk.

    If I'm not feeling sleepy, then I might as well try to see if there's any WiFi around here

    As if the Gods answered his prayer there was a signal, and no password as well. Although he has internet, Aden decides just to countinue writing his work of art.

    Okay "art" might just be taking it a bit far but it's gotton quite good. He already thought up the story line from the begginings, spikes of drama, the inevitable climax, to the finishing end. Now if can only right the damn filler chapters leading up to the event.

    Confound these bronies, they distract me too easily with music, art ,etc.

    XWXW

    Oh well that's just great, not only was he stuck in this new world, it happened to be right in the middle of summer. As he seeked shelter under on of the great pine trees of what appears to be a small forest.

    Oh the things i would do to have my powers back

    Truth is he never lost his powers, but it's so weak to what it normally should be it would be that it would cause shame to his former glory. Weakly he summoned a glass of choclate milk, not even bothering to try in his way. As soon as he filled up his glass, he thirstily drank it like never before, only to spit out most of on the grassy mud.

    "Blegh. Great now I can't even enjoy my own choclate milk!"

    In hopes of a lake or stream to get rid of the aftertaste, he stood up off his scaly behind and leaped into the air, to fall flat on his face.

    Right. No magic. I actually have to flap my wings now.

    Reluctantly he started flapping and rose a few feet above the trees hoping to spot a body of water. However he came upon something more interesting.

    "Ohhh civilization, why I never thought they would actually give me something to occupy my time here." He said to 'no one' in particular.

    Hidden in the shadows of the alleyways, he started observing the population of this new found civilization. He found theme to be almost the same to those wretched ponies, but with some obvious differences. First of all they were bipedal and seemed to have very few color differences. He noticed that while they lack the color spectrum, they make up for in hair, skin tone, clothing, and many other small differences. They also seemed to have no magic, but move around in things called 'bicycles' and 'cars'.

    Ohhhh if only I had my full power, I could of had some fun with this place

    But his idea for thought fueled engines and rubber cars would have to wait. Currently it seems they are far more advanced than Equestria, he had some fun however when he replace the metallic device in one of the being's ear and replaced it with honey. It seems some of the inventions allowed for music to be played directly in your ear without anyone else being able to hear it.

    "Very smart, but it's no fun. I can't fathom how I'll be able to have some relaxation in this place. With my powers weakened to only teleportation, disguise, and conjurment of small objects, the only thing I can think of really is drowning this place with banana peels. I won't even be able to relish the sound of minds snapping into insanity. Oh how I miss that sound."

    "Oh get it together Discord. You haven't even been banished for a day and you're already sounding like a pansy. Granted the first world I was banished to I kept all my powers, but that doesn't mean you can't corrupt the minds here."

    He spotted a newcomer with a suitcase and a backpack walk by, and judging from the stares, he isn't accepted into the herd or whatever these things call it.

    These things are quick to judge.Hm this will make it so much more fun. But first if I want to mess with his conscience, I need to research these things if I want to...

    Who am I trying to impress? I'm Discord for crying out loud. The Spirit of Chaos and Disharmony. I don't need to do things by the book. What fun is there when making sense?

    With that, he took off into the ever darkening sky and flew above his prey waiting for him to go into a secluded area. With the possibility of a long wait he started to pry into his head. Most of what he found was just memories of his school days, and-

    Ooo hatred? I've seen annoyance in other ponies' minds but that is usually as far as it goes.

    Intrigued, Discord started to pry slightly more into other peoples' memories while still keeping his eye on his target. However he was further surprised as practically everyone he looked into had a hint of hatred inside them.

    Well well well, this is going to be much greater than i thought.

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