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Breaking Point

by ultrasponge

Chapter 1: New tides

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Hellfire sleeps dreamless in his bed, exhausted from the night before. The suns light crept over his eyes slowly burning them open. The pitch black unicorn groaned in discomfort. He slowly opened his eyes returning to the waking world. He scanned his room, through blurrly eyes we could make various expensive objects and tinkrets. He looked over to his clock.

2:30

He mubled under his breath before rising for under his sheets and heading down stairs. He slowly walked to his kitchen where his servants had had prepeared his lunch. He had always been grateful of his servant's and their hard work as he knew how much of a trainwreck his life would be with out them. As he sat down at his table his head servant Shiny Shoes, a blue earth pony wearing a white overcoat unfiorm walked in. Most ponys desiped Hellfire's very existance but not Shiny Shoes, he had worked under his master for a long time and saw past the lie that the press had drowned his life in.

"Today's paper Sir"

"Oh yes, I might as well see what they have wrote about me, not that it will be anything good"

The paper contain a rather negative article concerning Hellfire's actions including a statement that he had punched Prince Blueblood in the Jaw and sent him to the Emergancy room.

"Master hellfire may I-"
before he could finish hellfire interupted
"Please use my real name when adressing me directing me directly"

"Sorry master Ryan, I just wished to inform you that your mother sent you a letter today"

"Oh, did she now"

Ryan hated his family. He was born into the most high class family in equestria only transcended by the royal family. He had been chosen as the heir however as a filly realised that was not the life he wanted or would ever want. However there is one thing that he took with him; his name King in accient equestrian. To prove to himself that he could be who ever he wanted to be. Hellfire was just a stage name to accomidate his posstion as equestria's king of rock.

"No doubt the letter will just be expressing my mothers feeling's of disapointment and how she wished that I would rejoin the family?"

"yes sir"

"well maybe she's right?"

This came as a shock to shiny shoes his master had never doubted his own views due to his mothers.

"Calm your fears, I don't want anything to do with my family no, but maybe it is time to start again?"

Shiny shoes realised the theart to his job.
"But master you can't just go and start again, I mean your famous all across equestria"

"yes but only as Hellfire, look Shony Shoes I can understand your concern for your job but I cannot live life like this"

As much as Shiny Shoes wanted to disagree with his master, he knew his master was right not only that but his master was his friend and treated him with respect. It would be wrong to have him carry on his life.

"So what will you do Sir?"

"well i'm not the most organised of ponys however I think i'll goto some small town where no one will ever find me ever but first and foremost I think I will write a big cheque for my staff"

Shiny Shoes had to use all his professional training to stop himself bursting out into a laughing fit.

"Why thank you Sir i'll inform my college's"

The giddy pony hastly left the room to spread the good news leaving Ryan alone with his thoughts. Though he tried to think of what he would need to get done but inventably his mind wandered off trail into daydreams. Eventually he was interupted by Shiny Shoes returning to the room.

"Oh your back, was the news meet with... oh what shall I say mixed results"?

"actually no, They where all quite happy oh I forgot to mension would you like to prepear a statement to the press"

Ryan lifted his head up
"yes, tell them they can all go Buck themselfs, and can you throw my red contact lense's in the bin I would be needing them anymore"

"yes, but would ponys not recognise you anyway"?

Ryan's gave a glare as a answer

"Do you really think I have'nt thought that through"?

Editor notes:
Firstly I would like thank you for reading this and would also like to to assure you that later chapters will be longer and that chapter will contain some non-oc ponys.

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