Twilight sparkle's day just ended after defeating discord and saving Equestria from eternal chaos, when she and her freinds are visited by a allicorn and is promised a invitation to "endless wonder".

id like to know the flaws of each chapter so i can improve them, so be like vultures and pick this apart.

Also if you don't know what Warehouse 13 is here's a copy/paste link:

http://dvd.ign.com/articles/117/1177263p1.html

if you never watched it GO WATCH IT NOW.

DO IT.