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Blaze Blue Fire mane

by HurricanePigeon

Chapter 14: Final Chapter

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Final Chapter

Final Chapter

Location: Pony-ville

Time 14:46

“Oh no, I'm too late...” said Blaze as looked at Twilight’s house.

“B-Blaze you got to save Twilight” cried out spike.

“Spike are you ok?” Blaze asked as he picked up spike.

“Blaze go to Canterlot castle now!” Spike pleaded.

“But what about you?” Blaze asked, cornered for Spike’s health.

“There’s no time the others will die if you don't leave now!” Spike demanded as he try to push Blaze.

Blaze nodded and headed out.

“Well boys, tonight we eat like kings. You know this never would of happened if you just burned Twilight” the boss smirked.

“Go to hell! You will lose today and I hope the princess has a cell with your name on it” Twilight snapped.

The boss slapped Twilight, “Talk to me like that again and cut your tongue out! In fact any of you talk again and I’ll cut every one of your tongues out! You got that!”

Fluttershy began to cry.

“Oh we have a cry baby do we...” the boss said as he walked up to Fluttershy. “...I’ll give something to cry about...”

The boss raised his knife.

“Boss wait... we’re here” commandos spoke.

“Luckily you...” the boss snapped.

“Halt who goes there!” a guard interrupted.

“Smasher, do your thing!” The boss commanded as the colts walked there way casually to the throne room. Many guards tried to stop them but all failed to smasher’s might. The doors flew open.

“What is the meaning of this?!” demanded Princess Celestia.

“Well your Majesty, lets just say, we have a trade these pony’s lives for the elements of harmony and no tricks” Celestia’s horn began to glow.

“Psy-Psy quickly...” the boss snapped.

“What did you do to me!” the Princess asked.

“Wouldn't you like to know?” the boss laughed. He continued, “So do we have a deal?”

Twilight spoke out, “Don't do it! The elements are too powerful! You cant give them up!”

The boss smacked Twilight, “What did I say about talking now open wide”

“Don't you even think about touching her you insane foul” demanded Blaze as he walked in to the room.

“Oh good, Blaze Blue, now the show can begin...”

Blaze glared at his former boss.

“You lost just surrender...”

The boss began to laugh “Oh no Blaze, I never wanted any treasure. That was only a bonus for me. What I want is revenge. Now smasher, kill the girl!” smasher raised is hoof and Fluttershy began to cry heavily.

*Smash*

Fluttershy’s chain fell apart.

“I'm sorry boss but I can’t kill her... I quit...”

Smasher picked up fluttershy and removed the rest of the chains and backed off. The boss began to worry when the sound of chains and locks being undone echo in his ears.

“What are you spineless cowards doing?”

Commandos spoke out, “Sorry sir but I joined to be a thieve, not a murderer. I'm out...”

“So too” said the twins.

“I'm out as well” said Psy-Psy.

“Fine then I'll do it myself...”

The boss giggled as he raised his knife. Then Blaze launched a fireball at the insane pony which knock him across the room and set his cloak a-light.

The boss tossed his cloak of reviling his flank which was blank!

“Look-y here, the great leader of the colts never got his cutie mark” giggled Blaze.

“You’ll pay for that!” the boss said as he charged at Blaze who prepared for the fight of his life.

The boss tried to attack Blaze with his hoof but Blaze jumped to the side, landing on his front two hooves and bucked the boss in the face. The boss got up and swung his front hoof at Blaze. Blaze stood up on his back hooves so he could use his front hoofs to defend himself. The boss threw his hoof at Blaze, Blaze dodged and tried to swing back. The boss just dodged his head to the side, bite down on Blazes leg and punched Blaze in the stomach with his hoof. Blaze became winded and stopped putting up a fight for a moment. The boss then beat Blaze down the kicked him hard across the room into a wall.

“Hmm... you fight just like your father” the boss smiled.

Blaze looked at him with a confused look, “What do you mean?”

The boss began to laugh, “Did no-pony tell you, I killed your parents. Oh and I will tell you this, there nothing more satisfying then seeing a fire mane’s flame go out”

The boss laughed louder. Blaze stared as if all the happiness had just been sucked from his soul. Blaze’s mane began to grow.

“I'll murder you” he muttered.

“What was that Blaze?” the boss chuckle.

“I’LL MURDER YOU!” screamed Blaze as massive wave of energy pulsed from him. The wave knocked everyone back, even the princess was surprised of the power. Blaze charged at the boss and hit him in the head with his hoof. Blaze swung again, the boss pulled back to dodge but Blaze countered the dodge by head-butting him in the chest, his mane burning him severely. The boss winced at the pain the burning caused and held his stomach. Blaze the smacked him in the head, swiped his legs the kicked him hard towards a wall as he fell. Blaze then ran up to him as he tried to recover and kicked him against the wall. He then punched against the wall and then pinned him to it as he began to chock him.

“Go on Blaze... Show the world your power...” the boss chuckled.

“Blaze stop it...” Twilight pleaded.

“He won’t stop now. His heart if full of rage and sadness” the princess stated.

“What do we do then?” Twilight asked.

The princess turned to Psy-Psy who nodded as her horn began to glow.

“Blaze stop this now” spoke Princess Luna as she entered the room and used her power to restrain Blaze.

“LET ME GO! HE HAS TO PAY!” Blaze screamed.

The boss giggled, “What’s the matter Blaze? Don't you what to revenge your family?”

Blaze began to break free from Luna's magic.

“Sister... He’s too strong...” Luna groaned.

“Enough Blaze!” Celestia commanded as she forced Blaze away with her magic.

“Guards! Take the lunatic away” Luna commanded.

As the guards shackled the boss he spoke out, “You’re a disgrace to your family blaze...”

Celestia put Blaze down. Blaze began to cry. Twilight approached Blaze and hugged him.

“I know you’re upset but revenge won’t remove the pain...”

Blaze looked at the group of ponies began to smile

“You’re right Twilight. Thank you all for what you have done form me. You have all been so nice to me and now I know that I still have a family”

Commandos looked at Celestia and asked, “Princess, I believe that I speak for all of us when I say we’re sorry for all that we have done...”

The princess smiled, “I know and I’d like to thank all of you but especially you Blaze Blue. Your loyalty to your friends has not only saved their lives but also stopped the greatest crime gang in all of equestrian history”

“Hay, I know what this call for! A party! Oh, oh, and we could bring all our friends!” Pinkie Pie shouted.

“You know that might not be such a bad idea” Blaze smiled.

“Are you sure blaze?” thunderous asked.

“Yeah, we’re not the most popular ponies right now” Tornadus stated.

“That's the point. Think about it, a public appearance with the Princess’s, presuming they like to come, may make some ponies change their mind about us” Blaze stated.

“You know he’s right” said  Twilight.

“Yeah come on you guys! It will be fun” said Rainbow enthusiastically.

“It will be the perfect time to make some friends” Psy-Psy pointed out.

The colts nodded and they all left, getting ready to party. As they did Blaze thought to himself, “This is definitely my new home...”

The End

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