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Creatures of Old Equestria (Draft)

by MrMusicalPony
Story has been removed from Fimfiction.net
When the Pony Empire takes over Kyris' homeland and eradicates his species, he sets out for safety
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It has been two years since the Pony Empire has destroyed Kyris' homeland and species. Only a small amount of humans now live in the world. Kyris is among the last few, and when his plans to gather a following against the Pony Empire, he must search for a new way to bring peace and prosperity to his people.

Reason why this is called 'Draft' is because the first chapter isn't finished yet. I've hit a wall in terms of how to make it better, but I know it needs improvement. That's why I'm uploading it here. Maybe I can get some advice? It'd be greatly appreciated.

Watch as no one reads this because there's no MLP characters.

Teen
Incomplete

4,023 words: Estimated 17 Minutes to read: [Cache]

1 Chapter:

  1. Chapter 1: Remembering [Cache] Jan 10th, 2012
    4,023
Published Jan 10th, 2012

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