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The Giant Pony

by Stepper321

First published

Theres a giant pony in equestria, who is ready to destroy everything on her way.

There is a big giant pony in equestria, who is on the way to destroy everything on her path, she is going to destroy other ponies.
Twilight and Applejack are ready trieng to save anyone, but this is not going without problems

(Chapter 1 does not include gore and is short)

Sweet Apple Acres

It was a wonderfull day in Ponyville, Twilight Sparkle was walking to Sweet Apple Acres to see Applejack, but there was no-one there.
She was looking trough the window and she saw nopony. She was wondering what was going on, she opened the door and got pulled inside by a pink hoof.
She saw Pinkie Pie. Twilight Said: "Pinkie Pie! Not again!" She saw Applejack. "Applejack? What is going in here?" Applejack and Pinkie Pie walked to a window, Twilight Sparkle Followed.
She asked once again: "What is going on in here?" Applejack and Pinkie Pie where frozen of scareness. Twilight Screamed: "I am not gonna ask once again, what is going on here?!"
Applejack said: "Calm down, look in the window." Twilight Sparkle Wandered to the window and she saw a giant pegasus. Twilight was stunned, "What? A Giant Pony, what is this?"
The Pony turned to the window, she had red eyes, and her wings were Red to with fire-like paint, she had a unicorn and her mane was Red with Yellow. She was mad, oh so mad.
The giant pony looked straight at Pinkie Pie, she was so scared that she fell like stone. The window broke and hit the ground with a splash. Bursting in came spike screaming with a scar around his eye.
Spike was crying, Twilight saw the scar and immediatly said: "What happend to you?!" Spike answered with a scared and painfull look: "That pony threw glass at me." The giant pony walked away.
She walked straight to Fluttershy's house. Pinkie Pie stood up, looked trough the window and said: "Oh no! That thing is going to Fluttershy's house." Applejack said: "I dont think so, how can we warn
Fluttershy that she is going to be crushed?" Twilight answered: "SPIKE! Spike can do it, spike, do you have any paper?" Spike said with a weird look: "No, why should i bring that to me." Twilight:
"You're right, what was i thinking." Twilight was thinking hard when Pinkie Pie loud said: "Can't we pick it at your house! Fluttershy is in DANGER!!" Applejack was gone. "Applejack? APPLEJACK?!"
Applejack was gone, poof. Her hat was still there tough, lying on the ground. Everypony was in panic, Spike was gone to. Twilight noticed it and said: "Spike? Applejack? Where are you?"
Twilight looked trough the window and saw Spike, Sitting on Applejack. They were heading to Twilight's house. Pinkie Pie asked: "Should we go after them?" Twilight was gone, after Applejack and Spike.
Pinkie Pie sighed, and layed down and slep. She was safe here, she couldn't notice anything.

"SPIKE! APPLEJACK! WAIT UP, ITS DANGEROUS!" Applejack looked to her back and saw Twilight. "Sorry i was gone! But we need to warn Fluttershy quickly." Twilight ran to Applejack. "I know! But..."
"Bla Bla its dangoures, i know that! But do you want Fluttershy to die? Getting Squashed? Eating. Wings on her?" "No, but how are we going to warn them?" Applejack sighed "Did you just forget?
We are gonna send a letter to her, we need to go quickly!" They arrived at Twilights house. "Ok spike, write down that Fluttershy is in danger. Tell her that she needs to go out of her house...
Save all the animals she can... And run away. Twilight, how many time does she got?" Twilight was thinking, and using her magic to predict the future of the time when its happening. "20 minutes"
Spike wrote it all down, used his Fire Breath to send it to Fluttershy. Twilight knew it was arrived at Fluttershy who was stiff of scareness. "Good job, Spike. I hope she is gonna be alright."

Derpy Hooves

Derpy Hooves was sitting on the ground, playing with her Yo-Yo, when suddenly a letter appeared in front of her nose.
"What is this?" Derpy Hooves picked up the letter, she couldn't read it. "I can't read it! Its too blurry!" She threw away the letter, in her furnace, it burned.

The Giant Pony arrived at Fluttershy's house. Just in front of Fluttershy's house it stopped. He ducked, and looked trough the window, there was Fluttershy, sitting backwards of the Giant Pony, the Giant Pony looked mad, really mad, like she didn't belong here, it destroyed the window with a part of the wall, the wall fell on Fluttershy's her hoof, she cried and then in slow-motion for her she got pulled out, her hoof was missing, blood was spilling over the floor.

It smelled Fluttershy, blood was still spilling out of her hoof, she passed out. It threw Fluttershy away, on the ground, she was bleeding heavily. She could die if she bleeded for more.

In Twilight's house Applejack asked "Lets go see if Fluttershy is ok." Twilight agreed and together with spike they ran to her house, as fast as they can. It was not so long from there, she saw Fluttershy Lying on the floor.
Twilight shocked and tripped, she fell on top of Spike, his leg broke. He fainted. Fluttershy was awake now and Applejack was shouting with tears in her eyes "Are you ok!?" Fluttershy lay in a pool of Purple, blood and tears, red and blue. She was crying,

Derpy Hooves came by with her Yo-Yo in her mouth, she saw Twilight Sparkle lying on the ground, Derpy Hooves came to her slowly, she was still laying on top of Spike who was with pain in his mouth not trying to cry, Derpy pulled Spike out. Twilight fell on her head and woke up of shock, she ran for a short while then crashed into a table and then stood up, "Oh my, what happened."

She did not know anything about the Giant Pony and Fluttershy anymore. Derpy answered "I saw you lying on Spike, i think you broke some if his bones, its not ve..." Twilight interrupted her "Spike?! Oh no! You poor... Hey, i learned a magic trick to heal bones for a month, its very hard, and i dont know if it works. But trying always learns." She used her magic a little, it was a little weak, she tried some harder.

Suddenly Spike flew up a little, hes leg was miss-formed and suddenly his leg was right, he fell on the ground, tried to stood up, and it worked. Derpy hooves continued with a happy face "But you have send me a letter right? It appeared right on front of me, you know i cannot read! I have to concentrate for it too read, its cause of my eyes."
Twilight remembered everything again, she was looking shockingly and very mad to Spike "Spike! You have send the letter to the WRONG PLACE?!" Spike was looking a bit worried "Yeah, i had to do it fast! Derpy Hooves does not live that far from her! How could i know that it was the wrong place?! You did not even give m..." Twilight interrupted him "NO! We are here in danger of Fluttershy and your whining about a LETTER?! Lets get to Fluttershy fast!" She ran to her together with Spike and Derpy Hooves.

Applejack was crying, she died. "You're too late Twilight, i couldn't stop the bleeding." Twilight saw Toilet Paper wrapped over her half hoof. "I tried everything" Applejack looked full of tears to Twilight "But i couldn't save her... I-- I--" She sniffed "Rest in Peace Fluttershy, Rest... in Peace."

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