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by Loyal

Chapter 17: Takedown

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Blossomforth, Flitter, Cloudchaser, Carrot Top and Colgate team up on Rarity

Thanks to FlimFlamBros. for the request!

This chapter will contain non-human pony clop.

Categories: Group, Random, Orgy, Gangbang

Warnings: Moderate foodplay (With giant carrots) and group elements. Should be okay.

Quick note: The original request came with these specific quirks: Blossomforth was SUPER flexible, Flitter and Cloudchaser are twins with the hots for eachother, Carrot Top used carrots as strapons to bang others, and Colgate has a HUGE horn fetish. I cannot remember if Colgate is male or female (Seems kind of androgynous, you know?) so for the sake of keeping this an all-lesbian orgy, I’m writing (It/him/her/them) as a female. I just know that (His/her/their) canon name is “Minuette.” Seems feminine to me… Also: Dat tail. I have an odd thing for ponies with really well-styled manes and tails. That’s why Roseluck is my favorite. Also: Blossomforth is apparently a pegasus clone of Twilight… Same mane and tail style. I am not okay with this >.>

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“Takedown”

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“Good morning, Rarity.” The voice accompanied the jingling of the bell above the door, making the white unicorn look up from her work. She blinked in the bright light for a moment before making out the pony in the doorway.

“Oh, Carrot Top! Is it time for the delivery already?” She flustered for a moment, drawing the curtain around her workstation. Her current item was of a sensitive nature… “I had nearly forgotten that it was Friday.”

“Yup. Where would you like me to put them?” Carrot Top grinned as she hoisted a large basket of produce through the door.

“In the kitchen, darling… If you don’t mind.” Rarity hummed happily as she held the door open for the burdened earth pony. Carrot Top smiled at her, shuffling through the door with her load.

“How’ve you been doing, Rarity? Been a while since we’ve been able to chat.” Carrot Top slipped through the store, wobbling with the basket upon her back, but thankfully not spilling her load at all. Rarity followed, her magic ready to catch the large basket should it tip over.

“Fine…” She said absently, only giving a full answer once they had deposited the delivery in her kitchen. “Aah. Business is good,” She muttered, smiling with relief that her displays hadn’t been ruined by an avalanche of produce. Was it just her, or was this month’s delivery larger than usual? She shrugged it off to chat with Carrot Top for a few. “I’ve got quite a bit to stay on top of with fall coming up… Honestly, I can hardly find the time to even go to market anymore. I’m so glad you’ve started making deliveries.”

“Aah, no issues… You’re just up the road from the market. It’s no problem bringing a basket or two up every month.” Carrot Top excused herself to sit on the ground for a moment. Rarity realized Carrot Top was lathered in sweat and dust.

“Darling… Did you walk that basket all the way here from market?” Rarity asked, stepping closer.

“Hmm? Oh, yeah. I did.” She answered absently, waving a hoof. Rarity blinked, a little stunned. The market was six blocks away, and that massive basket of produce had to have weighed well over a hundred pounds. Even with her magic, Rarity would have struggled carrying that much. She blushed a little, noting that Carrot Top was breathing a little heavier, too…

“Darling, you look positively flustered. If you’d like, you’re welcome to shower here, catch your breath?” Carrot Top looked at her for a few moments, her expression blank. After a short pause, though, she smiled.

“That would be amazing, Rarity. Thank you.”

“No problem at all, darling! I can’t let you back onto the road when you’re that tired. Come, I’ll show you the bathroom.” She led Carrot Top upstairs, out of her boutique and into her home proper. “The bathroom is in there, spare towels and toiletries are in the cupboard. If you need anything else, darling, don’t hesitate to ask.”

“I should be fine, thank you.” Carrot Top beamed happily before slipping into the bathroom. Rarity let her be, feeling happy that she was still living up to the element of generosity. Nevertheless, she had a commission to complete. Re-entering her work area, she had just barely picked up a needle and thread before the doorbell jingled once more. With a soft sigh, she set her work down and went to go see who it was.

“Oh. Blossomforth, good to see you.” Rarity smiled at the white-coated pegasus that had just stepped into her door. “What brings you to Carousel Boutique?”

“I had a question, honestly…” Blossomforth smiled as she stepped forward. “I, uh, heard about the work that you do for Flitter and Cloudchaser…”

“Oh… Oh! Darling, regular business hours are hardly the time to discuss such sensitive things…”

“Oh really? I… I’m sorry, Flitter told me any time was okay…” She appeared crestfallen. Rarity whimpered softly at the hurt expression before giving a soft sigh.

“Hang on one moment… I’ll just go close shop for a few minutes.” She smiled warmly at the colorful pegasus before slipping to the front door and flipping the sign around. It read ‘be back in ten minutes’ as Rarity pulled the blinds on the store. Before closing the last one, however. She spotted two ponies that she needed to have a discussion with. Rarity’s eyes narrowed slightly as she opened the door for a moment.

“Psst. You two.” Flitter and Cloudchaser perked up and looked around for a moment. Flitter noticed first, tapping her sister on the shoulder and pointing.

“Oh! Hey Rares, what’s up?”

“I need to speak with you two. Come in for a moment.” She gestured.

“Uuh… Okay…?” Cloudchaser mumbled slightly, she and her twin sharing a quick look before they slipped inside Rarity’s boutique. “Oh! Blossomforth! Good to see you.”

“Hey guys.”

“Now then.” Rarity cleared her throat, cutting the three pegasi off before they could launch into a discussion. “Blossomforth here just said she had heard about my… Ah… Private services from you two.”

“That’s right! We told her about your little side deal, and what you’ve been doing for us-“

“Right. Pardon the interruption, darling, but I can’t just have everypony knowing what I make in my free time! I have a reputation to uphold! If word got out that I was making… Those things… Why, I’d be ruined! Ostracized! I’d be just another sick pony with a fetish that-“

“But… You are a sick pony with a fetish.”

“A fetish that must never be made public. Now, you must promise me that you will not share this with anypony else.” Rarity blinked for a moment before narrowing her eyes at the twin peagasi. “You haven’t shared this with anypony else, have you?”

“Eer…”

“Cloudchaser…” Rarity growled.

“There was one other… Aside from Blossomforth…” She muttered, blushing a little.

“Tell me now.”

“Colgate…?”

“The dentist? Really?”

“Mmhmm…” Rarity sighed softly, covering her face with her hoof.

“Blossomforth, darling… Please go and fetch Colgate for me, would you? It seems I need to have a conversation about discretion… Honestly! Try and indulge in one passion or another, and suddenly you’re chased out of town…”

“S-sure, Rarity.”

“And you two.” She turned on Flitter and Cloudchaser. “I’m going to have to ask for an additional fee with you latest commission.”

“That’s fine.” The two shrugged indifferently. “We didn’t know it was an issue… Paying a little more for your trouble is fine.”

“Good.” Blossomforth excused herself silently, flapping off to go fetch the blue unicorn. “Now, why would you tell Colgate? What association do you two even have with her?”

“She’s… Well, she’s really good at preening. We went in for an annual checkup, but things got out-of-hoof, and… Well…”

“Aah. Say no more. What my customers DO with my purchases shall firmly remain in the realm of anonymity.” Rarity turned away, now impatiently pacing through her boutique. Flitter and Cloudchaser shrugged before chatting about one thing or another… Surprisingly enough, it didn’t take Blossomforth longer than two minutes to return with Colgate. Rarity peeked out of the blinds, reassuring herself that nopony was suspicious of Carousel Boutique closing at the odd hour, nor the group of ponies gathered within.

“You know, I was planning on visiting tomorrow,” Colgate muttered shyly, glancing at the group of ponies. Rarity gave the dentist unicorn a reassuring smile before addressing them all.

“I just want to make one thing absolutely clear here…” She raised her head, looking down her muzzle at all of them. “What services I offer were offered in confidence. Should the public be made aware of my other skills, I fear for the reputation of my business. Therefore, I would kindly request that any more talk about… Ahem…”

“Lingerie.”

“Well, yes… About lingerie remain amongst us here. I am, first and foremost, a dress maker. A tailor. A seamstress and an artist… I’m not an… An underwear manufacturer. Nor shall I be labeled as such.”

“But… You’re good at it-“

“Darling, I’m good at everything I do… But that doesn’t mean making scanty panties for ponies won’t get me chased out of ton. Goodness, have you seen how conservative the simpletons are around here? Such a progressive thought as exotic sexual wear would be shunned immediately.” Rarity shuddered.

“You know, she has a point.” Flitter muttered.

“Yeah… We honestly weren’t thinking, Rarity. I guess pegasi are just more… Open minded than your average pony.”

“It’s fine, dears.” Rarity waved a hoof. “Just… Promise you won’t spread it around more? I’ll gladly work on pieces for the four of you, just… You know… Let me tell other ponies myself.”

“I understand.”

“Sure.”

“No problem.”

“I’m okay with that.”

“Very well.” Rarity smiled at them, thankful they had reached an agreement. “As long as I have the four of you here, do you have any questions for me?”

“Ooh! I do!” Cloudchaser perked up. She bumped Flitter with her rump, grinning slightly. “Can we see what you have made so far?”

“Eer…” Rarity blushed a little. “I normally don’t show my work until it’s finished… It loses the mystique at that point-“

“Aww, come on.” Flitter pouted at her. Rarity’s mouth opened and closed a little, trying to find a reason to deny the curious pegasus.

“I’d like to see exactly what it is you do, anyways…”

“Yeah, I’m pretty curious myself…”

“See? We all wanna know what it looks like.”

“Urgh. Fine. Come on,” Rarity sighed and led the cheerful group of ponies into the other room. Using her magic, Rarity unceremoniously pulled the curtain on her workstation aside. “Mind you, this isn’t nearly finished… I still have some hemming and embroidery to handle. But I’m sure you can see the overall outline rather we-“

“By Celestia, that’s so bucking hot.” Cloudchaser cut her off, the pegasus’ mouth hanging open as she looked over the joined pieces of scanty clothing. They were, more or less, modified crotch-less panties that would fit a pegasus. “I mean… I knew what we were asking for when we told you what we wanted, but… By the heavens…”

“Oh. Well… Thank you?” Rarity glanced over her shoulder at the twins. Cloudchaser’s expression was blank, though her cheeks were flushed bright red. “Darling? Are you okay?” She looked around for a moment. “Where’s Flitter?”

“Oh… Uh, she’s…” Blossomforth’s head was craned sideways, as was Colgate’s. Rarity narrowed her eyes, trying to see what it was they were looking at… Slowly, Cloudchaser’s wings tucked back against her body, and Rarity saw exactly what her twin sister was up to.

“Oh… Oh, uh… Darling…? You… You shouldn’t be doing that here…” She muttered, feeling rather embarrassed at the sight. Judging by the position and the wet noises emanating from Cloudchaser’s backside, Flitter was engaged in cunnilingus. A rather loud and sloppy variety, it seemed… In front of four other ponies, Rarity wondered how Flitter could just abandon all sense of decency and get right down to it in the middle of the store.

“I don’t think she’s listening…”

“I don’t think she can hear you! Listen to that!” Colgate leaned in, even as Cloudchaser began to moan. Even from this distance, Rarity could hear the wet, smacking noise of oral sex. The way Flitter’s head bobbed up and down, she was really going at it! Rarity’s thighs squirmed slightly as she tried to look anywhere but at the pegasus and her sister. Colgate’s voice drew her attention back, though. “Woah! Blossomforth, how can you bend like that?!”

“Huh?” Rarity’s head swung to the side, only to spot Blossomforth, or what she would suspect was Blossomforth… The tangle of wings, limbs and neck seemed unintelligible. The pegasus was shamelessly spread apart, her forelegs holding her hind legs open while her head arched at an impossible angle… Rarity could clearly see the way the pegasus’ pink tongue pushed out, running over her crotch, spreading thin, clear wetness all over.

“Oh for heaven’s sake…” Rarity moaned, rolling her eyes. “Let’s just forget decorum and devolve into some helpless orgy!” Her breath huffed as she looked between the other four ponies… Who were all very pointedly staring at her. Flitter’s chin dripped with arousal, and Blossomforth’s eyes were wide, her tongue still caught mid-lick. Rarity realized what she had just said. “Oh, uh-“

“I think she meant it.”

“She totally meant it.”

“We’re really going to do this, aren’t we?”

“Heck yes we are! C’mere!” Colgate lurched forward suddenly. Rarity hardly had a moment to react, her head dipping low.

Big mistake.

“Haah-omph!” With a hot breath, Colgate’s mouth wrapped around Rarity’s horn, enveloping it all the way to the base in a slippery, delightful inferno.

“C-colgate?!” Rarity whimpered, shuddering as the other unicorn’s tongue began to slide over her horn… She teased every last ridge, rubbing the very tip of her tongue into each crevice and contour. For unicorns, a horn was every bit an extension of their brain as it was a tool to direct their magic. In short, it was extremely sensitive… And the way Colgate was sucking and licking, Rarity was rendered helpless. “Haah… D-don’t stop…” She whimpered. She wasn’t sure what it was about the blue unicorn’s mouth around her horn, but she was shuddering and aroused in an instant. Not that Flitter’s brash action or Blossomforth’s display of flexibility hadn’t done that already.

“Hmm…”

“Aah!” Rarity gasped as Colgate hummed into her horn, sending the vibrations down her flanks suddenly. Helplessly, Rarity began to drool.

“Oh wow. Look at that…” Blossomforth’s voice came from behind Rarity, making her try to turn around, to see where the flexible pegasus was. Colgate didn’t give her an inch. With a firm suck and just a little pressure from her teeth, Colgate kept Rarity rooted in place. “Are unicorn horns really that sensitive? I mean, you’re just sucking on her horn, and she’s already wet…” Rarity felt her tail gingerly lifted off and to the side, exposing her rear end. She whimpered helplessly, trying to close her legs, but Blossomforth had already leaned in.

“Haahn!” Rarity gave a breathy gasp as she felt Blossomforth’s tongue slide into her, spreading her aching walls apart smoothly. The pegasus was relentless and smooth, no amount of flexing or whining complaints from Rarity dissuading her. Meanwhile, Colgate continued to lick and tease, which really wasn’t helping how wet Rarity was getting.

“Oh wow, you guys…” Flitter panted. “You’re really going at her! Mind if we jump in?” Blossomforth pulled away from Rarity’s marehood, her hot breath pulsing against the sensitive flesh with each word.

“Come on in. She’s REALLY wet back here…”

“Ooh, is she? Lemme see, lemme see!” Rarity couldn’t do a thing against Colgate’s gentle ministrations, but she saw Flitter and Cloudchaser circled around her to either side. Her tail was lifted up and out of the way, and two of the three ponies spread her hind legs apart even more. She flexed and whimpered, trying to close her legs, to cover herself, but she was completely spread apart. Nothing she could do…

Nothing she wanted to do. Three sets of hot, panting breath washed over her haunches as the three ponies behind her leaned in, sniffing slightly.

“Oh my goodness… She smells so good…”

“I wanna taste it.”

“Together?”

“Always.”

“Hnn-aahhh!” Rarity gasped as she felt two tongues press against her sensitive marehood. She was shuddering hard then, whimpering as the twins set in on her eagerly. They licked and kissed, moaned and groaned, whimpered and touched everywhere back there. Rarity felt it all dull over into this wonderful mist of sexual indulgence… If only she had been wearing some panties when they first started… “Ooohhh…” Still drooling, Rarity felt her undeniable release approach rapidly. It welled up within her, coiling around her insides like some pulsing, living thing… Her twitching center dribbled onto the floor. She thought she could hear it dripping onto the tile, but it didn’t sound so… Solid. Glancing down, Rarity was just barely able to see Blossomforth, yet again twisted at an impossible angle, with her mouth open right where Rarity’s juices were dropping. She was alternating between licking herself and catching the mixtures of arousal and saliva dripping from Rarity’s marehood.

“Hmm-“

“HNN!” Another moan from Colgate pushed her over the edge. Panting heavily, Rarity loosed her muscles, her walls twitching spasmodically as she came. Flitter and Cloudchaser noisily lapped at her crotch, and whatever they missed fell into Blossomforth’s open mouth. Colgate moaned again, making Rarity twitch and pant all the more. She came long and hard, dribbling wetness like she couldn’t possibly control herself. Eventually, the twins pulled away, making out with one another. Rarity felt her tail let loose, falling to cover her shameful arousal yet again. Colgate pulled away from her horn, his mouth trailing sloppy strings of saliva. In the absence, Rarity could feel the cool air inside her boutique washing over her horn, making her shudder all the more.

“How was that, missy?” Blossomforth untangled herself and stood up, grinning at Rarity. Flitter and Cloudchaser had devolved into a moaning, whimpering pile of pegasus flesh. Rarity could only see them licking and kissing, panting and gasping. If she hadn’t just reached climax, she might have found it arousing. But as it stood, she just wanted to shower and go to sleep.

… The shower.

With a horrified expression, she looked over at the doorway.

“Welp.” Carrot Top grinned, leaning against the door frame with a devious look on her face. “Looks like miss priss has a dirty side.” Rarity’s heart was hammering in her ears. She had been found out! What’s worse, by a market pony! The market was a hub of gossip and secrets, lies and deceit… Every farmpony for miles around would come and chat while they shopped. If Carrot Top told even a single soul about Rarity’s pastime, she would be ruined!

“This… Isn’t what it looks like.”

“Oh?” Carrot Top glanced at Blossomforth, who had managed to bend and twist herself in among Flitter and Cloudchaser. “Looks like a good old-fashioned orgy to me.”

“B-but…”

“But nothin’, Rarity. C’mere. I got something for you.” Carrot Top beckoned Rarity forward, a wide smile on her lips. Reluctantly, Rarity followed, with Colgate close on her tail. Carrot Top nodded towards the workstation. “Might wanna grab a pair of those to come with… Somethin’ sturdy.”

“B… Beg pardon?” Rarity asked, her eyes wide.

“I said, grab some panties, and make them sturdy.”

“I… I… Uh, okay…” Rarity blushed deeper, going to fetch the garment Carrot Top requested. A pair of sturdy display underwear, meant to act as a baseline for other designs, floated onwards as she and Blossomforth joined Carrot Top in the kitchen. “Darling, I just want to explain-“

“Nothin’ to explain, Rarity.” Carrot top cut her off, nosing through the basket of produce. “Put them on me.”

“The wha-“

“Put the panties on me.” Carrot Top gestured with a flick of her hail, her muzzle still sifting through the assorted vegetables. Rarity and Blossomforth shared a look before Rarity hovered the panties forward.

“L-lift your leg, darling. One at a time. There we go…” She flushed deeply, pulling the fabric up Carrot Top’s legs. The residual horn job was making her magic act oddly, as if she couldn’t quite control it. Nevertheless, she managed to raise the panties up around Carrot Top’s rump, firmly covering the earth pony’s center. She could hardly help getting aroused once more… Rarity REALLY enjoyed dressing other ponies… Or, more specifically, undressing… By the time the panties had been centered around Carrot Top’s full rear, Rarity was panting again.

“You see, Rarity…” Carrot Top turned around, holding a rather large carrot in her hoof. “I’ve actually been looking for a pony that could fulfill some… Needs of mine. Now that I know the local seamstress can help me out… Well, your secret’s safe with me. That much is for certain.” Carrot Top smiled as she rose up onto her hind legs, maneuvering the carrot down her front. “On one condition.”

“A-anything, darling!” Rarity flustered, her eyes glancing between Carrot Top’s face and the destination of the carrot. The earth pony mare lifted the hem of the panties, sliding the base of the carrot into them. Rarity thought she very well would begin masturbating with the carrot, but once it was centered half-in and half-out of her panties, Carrot Top released it. The carrot jutted out, and thanks to it’s size, looked incredibly suggestive. Rarity flushed both upstairs and down.

“You need to let me fuck you with this.”

“W-with a carrot?!” Rarity’s jaw dropped at the incredulous statement.

“With a carrot.”

“Oh my Celestia… Do it, Rarity. I gotta see this.”

“What’s going on in here?”

“Is Carrot Top in on this, too?”

“Why’s she wearing the carrot like that?”

“Oh fuck, are you gonna do Rarity with that?!”

“Sweet Luna, I hope not-“

“Oh I am. Trust me.” Carrot Top smiled as she ran a hoof up and down the carrot’s underside, nudging and moving it just a little. Rarity swallowed hard. Despite the disgusting notion of being penetrated with produce, she was rather aroused… In fact, her twisted little mind was beginning to fashion a design for panties with a faux stallionhood attached… Why, she could make a killing in sales to same-sex couples! Flitter and Cloudchaser would certainly benefit from a sexual device attached to a sturdy pair of panties. She would call it a strap-on.

“Very well. For my reputation, I’ll endure this.” She slowly turned around, flicking her tail to the side. “Go on and do it, Carrot Top darling.” She whimpered.

“Here, I’ll get her loosened up for you.” Colgate strode forth, boldly wrapping his mouth around her horn once more. Rarity shuddered in the sudden pulse of pleasure, her vision blurring slightly. Colgate was REALLY good at sucking her horn… As her thoughts began to dull and run together into a pleasured mess, she opened her legs more, exposing her pink and damp center to Carrot Top.

“Huhn. She really likes that, doesn’t she?”

“Mmhmm-“

“AAHN!” The vibrating moan was borderline painful. Rarity whimpered, gushing a little bit more of arousal. Carrot Top ran her tongue over Rarity’s wet core once before rising up onto her back legs. Her fore hooves rested on Rarity’s lower back, and she could feel the very tip of the carrot press against her…

“Put it in.”

“Do it, Carrot Top…”

“Flitter, c’mere-“

“Here goes.” Carrot Top’s hips pushed forward, and Rarity came instantly.

“Hnn-GUH!”

“Fuck, already?”

“Don’t stop.”

“Wasn’t planning on it. I hope you’re ready, Rarity…” She most certainly was… Despite the mess they were all undoubtedly making, Rarity let loose all her pent-up desires, and tried to forget that it was a carrot inside of her… The rough texture faded away as the vegetable was soon coated in her arousal, sliding in and out smooth and easy. Whimpering, Rarity came twice before it was all over.

“Haah… Done…” Carrot Top muttered. “Help me get these off, Colgate. I don’t think Rarity can do a damn thing…” True enough, the white unicorn had collapsed, lying in a heap of saliva and feminine ejaculate on the kitchen floor. Alongside her were Blossomforth, Flitter, and Cloudchaser, the four of them all stretched out next to one another. The last thought Rarity had before she lost consciousness was just one word…

’Fabulous…’

----- Note from the Author -----

That was… Intriguing. I asked for a challenge, and I most certainly received one. Heh. Hope you enjoyed. Sorry to FlimFlamBros. for the delay. Between taking a weekend break and PC upgrades taking a while, this chapter took some time to get uploaded. I finished it Monday night at work, but I didn’t get my PC back until Wednesday, today... So I couldn’t upload it. Inbetween Monday and today, though, I worked a little bit on Archmage and the Silver Spoon fic. As it stands, we have three chapters on Archmage that need review before upload. Iroh will be free again this Friday, and I hope we can hash them out over the weekend. Keep your eyes peeled, folks!

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