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Cheerilee's Garden (Alternate Ending)

by G4M3R_P0N3

Chapter 1


Chapter 1

A unicorn stallion with a bright blue coat, and a even darker mane. Climbed up the Ponyville Theater, after checking for any witnesses.

When the unicorn reached the roof, he took a few moments to pack out his equipment, including a scoped dartgun, a pair of enchanted darts and a large bundle of robes. "Gotta take that physco down, before she can pursue her plans!" the unicorn said to himself.

He slowly removed a bit of the old roof, in the corner of the hall. The unicorn laid down to stabilize the gun, and looked through the scope with his pure red eyes.

Cheerilee was preparing the audience for the show, when a sleep enchanted dart made contact with her flank.

“And now without further ado I am proud to introduce, performed in Ponyville for the first time ever: RegiOUCH! What the bu... *thud"

"Sleep tight, your crazed bitch!" The stallion yelled out loud as the crowd noticed him. He glided down a newly deployed rope of his, and tied the legs of his victim together.

The Element of Honesty, Applejack, was the first one to take action.

"What in tarnation do y'all think yer doing, knockin mah lil sister's teacher out?! She said right after punching the unicorn into the wooden floor. The rest of the Elements of Harmony stepped up besides Applejack, to get a closer view at the fool.

"Saving your sister" the stallion said as he stood up.

"What ya mean?" Said the bright orange mare as she prepared another punch.

"That monster you call a teacher, planned to kill the entire class. Just because she thinks they, are the bad weed that strangles the other flowers, in her garden."

While the orange earth pony processed what was just said, the Element of Magic spoke up.

"Who are you, and how could you possibly know?" The lavender unicorn mare asked.

"I am Gamer Pone, and i have spied on Cheerilee. At first it was only because i had a crush on her, but when i saw her plans for this show. My attraction towards her, transformed into anger and rage."

A pink earth pony with ballons on her flank, asked a very common question from her side.

"How come i haven't seen you before in Ponyville? I know everypony there!"

"I've been living anonymously in Ponyville for about 2 months, i lived in Manehatten before."

One of the group's Pegasi, with a rainbow colored mane and tail, asked:

"Why didn't you just go to the authorities, and make em bust her?"

"They would not believe me, and eventually jail me for stalking."

In the meantime, Cheerilee was beginning to glow, brighter and brighter, behind them. The yellow pegasus with the pink mane, tried to turn the other's attention against the purple teacher. But the others were all arguing whether or not to beat this newcomer, for being a creep that ruins their sister's show.

When the teacher bathed half of the stage in brightness, the yellow pegasus began yelling at the others. Until the white unicorn, with diamonds on her flank responded.

"WHAT?!"

The rest of the group including the stallion, turned their attention against Cheerilee. Which accompanied by the blinding light, started to change her own shape.

The pink party pony, broke the silence.

"Hey Gamer, what did you put in that dart? Cupcakes sure would be a lot more interresting with THAT ingredient!"

There was no response from the blue unicorn, instead, Twilight shielded her group and the audience from what possible could come from the teacher.

After what seemed like an eternity, the purple earth pony slowly began to fade in brightness, even through she didn't resemble a pony anymore!

The former pony resembled a rather large spider, with it's 8 legs, where each and one of them looked like a pair of knifes. The familiar face of a female pony was replaced by a pair of thousands eyes, all with a little black dot working as the pupil. And the mouth was covered by scissor-like teeth.

The only part that could remind one of the teacher, was the purple coat covering the torso and rump.

The audience that had been quiet for the time being, watched as if whatever was happening on the stage was part of the play. Some of the foals peeked through the curtains, to see whatever was delaying their play.

When the transformation was fully completed, the spider simply snapped those relative weak robes tying it's legs, stood up, and began revealling it's identity and plan.

"I am Lord Arachnomorpha! And i was planning to kill those foals of yours, for the purpose of harvesting and feed on their's terrorized bodies! I need at least 10 young bodies, to give me the power to defeat Celestia. But now when you have spoiled my plan, you all shall die!

The farmer pony said in a bit mocking tone.

"Maybe y'all should have brough somethin heavier than a dartgun."

The stallion got a little bit sick, to think that he once had a crush on this thing. He then shaked it off, and responded.

"Lost something? Cause it sure sounds like you dropped your brain! Now when the Elements have been informed about your damn plan, they are gonna kick your fucking spider-ass!"

Twilight Sparkle was way ahead, and had already teleported the Elements of Harmony unto their necks.

They charged the powerful punch of friendship, while the enormous spider could only watch in fear.

The pure power of friendship, showered the spider in rainbow colored rays, and encased him in stone.

"You would make a nice fountain!" The blue unicorn yelled, mocking the statue.

The snow-white fashionista turned to the stallion, and showed him her appreciation.

"Thank you! If it wasn't for you revealing that monster, he would have killed them that stand dearest to us!"

The tomboyish pegasus interrupted.

"Not to mention everypony being under his control, if he overthrew Celestia."

"No, i thank you! If any of you weren't here, everypony in this theater would have been toast." The stallion admitted.

"I should totally throw you a velcome party!" Said the party pony out loud.


The End

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