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Private Eye Riley Compton investigates crimes using ponies
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(Hiatus is over and I have begun working on this again)

(Picture is mostly unrelated until I can get a better one)

(I will also point out that, to me, the second chapter seems a little... I don't really know, just off. Constructive criticism would be nice.)

Riley Compton is a private investigator who is chosen by a scientist to test his SPES (Subconscious Projectal Examination System) which allows a user to examine a subject's subconscious directly through the form of projections.

There's a huge robbery at a local advertisement agency that Riley heads off to investigate. However, he soon realizes that robbery is the least of his concerns...

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4,907 words: Estimated 20 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

2 Chapters:

  1. A few good Ponies. [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Aug 24th, 2011
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  2. A culprit [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Oct 5th, 2011
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Published Aug 24th, 2011
Last Update Oct 5th, 2011

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