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yup a new fan fiction just to bring to the new year. (not counting the trixie fan fic earlier.)

so this fan fic will (of course focus on one of my favorite movies ever GHOSTBUSTERS!)

and may i mention this will just be ghostbusters retold like a my little pony related thing.

so lets not waste any more time lets dive in.

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Twilight was pacing outside of the university with rainbow dash after being recently

thrown out by the dean. "this is a major disgrace dash. forget about our future at

stampede now they would never touch us with a ten meter cattle rod." dash then got up

from her seat on one of the rails. "forget it twi', call it luck, call it karma.. we

should believe somethings like this happen for a reason." twilight looked confused.

"but on what purpose." dash then took a drink of her punch. "To go into business for

ourselves." twilight then took a sip from the same flask. "the containment unit

Fluttershy and I have in mind is going to need a load of brand recapitalizing. where

are we going to get the bits?" Dash then took another sip from the flask. "I have no idea

as of yet my friend. I have no idea."

the three ponies then left the national bank of manehatten with a concerned twilight.

" My parents left me that Cottage. I was born there." "relax Twi' your not going to

loose the cottage. everypony have like a dozen mortgages nowadays."

twilight got even more concerned though. "but at 17%? you didn't even bargain with the

colt!" Fluttershy then interrupted the ponies. "umm..twilight i hope you don't mind

me saying but..um.. the interest rate alone for the first 4 years

comes to around 95,000 bits and don't

even get me started on the gemstones." "but where are we going to

hold the headquarters?"

after searching around the real estate mare then found them a great building.

"so there's office space in the next room. and even a full kitchen on the top

floor left room." dash then

looked at Fluttershy. "well fluttershy? what do you think?" "um I..I don't know."

dash then looked annoyed. "come on you have to say something." fluttershy then tried

to hide herself in her mane. "well..um..the wiring is sort of substandard and dangerous

because of our power needs and the neighborhood looks demilitarized." dash then looked

confused. "demili-what?" "nevermind dash."twilight then called the two ponies from the

top floor. "HEY! DOES THIS ROPE STILL WORK!?" twilight then grabbed onto the rope and

swung down in a sort of Tarzan like fashion. Twilight was then jumpy with the others.

"wow! this buildings fun! when can we move in? you have to swing on this rope! I'm

gonna get my satchel." twilight then proceeded to walk up the stairs but stopped and

looked at the others. "Hey! we should sleep her! tonight! you know like a slumber

party! you know to try this place out and get used to it!" twilight then ran up

the stairs to get her things. dash then looked at the real estate mare. "I think

we'll take it." fluttershy then looked at dash. " are you sure it's a good idea?"

dash then looked at fluttershy. "well, of course it is. I mean if we miss out on this

place Twi' will never forgive us." "oh my.. i hope you know what your doing."

on the other side of the city a mare by the name of rarity was just getting

back from her music lessons and fashion designing to her apartment on

central park west. just as rarity was walking to her room her neighbors

door opened revealing derpy. "oh hi miss rarity!" rarity then looked in

disgust. "oh hi..um..derpy. yup it's me." "silly me. i thought you was the drug

shop." "oh are you sick." "nope! just ordered some vitamins that's all." rarity

then turned to her door and opened. "derpy be a dear and help me with these bags

please." derpy then took the bags. "okay. so how have you been." rarity then looked

at derpy again. "I've been good. you?" "not bad. oh before i go you really shouldn't

have your television on so loud, Trixie from 204 got's annoyed and called the

manager." "rarity then looked confused. "well that's strange i thought I turned it

off." "oh that's fine, you see I tried to disconnect the cable but your window was

locked so I turned my Television on real loud to so ponies would

think something was wrong with them." rarity then closed the

door not even paying attention to derpy after the window story. "alright

miss rarity, I guess I'll see you later. I'm going to have a bubble bath."

derpy then accidentally bumped in the door not even paying attention.

as rarity got into her apartment she had noticed 3 strange mares on the

television for an ad on ghost hunting. "are you troubled by strange noises

in the night or when your alone? do..um..you get feeling of dread in your

basement or attic? have you ever seen a spook, poltergeist, or ghost?

if the answer is yes then don't hesitate and call the pros. GHOSTBUSTERS!!!

our staff in on call 24 hours a day to help you with your preparation needs.

WERE READY TO HELP YOU!!!" rarity again not even paying attention turned off

the television and headed for the kitchen.

after rarity dropped the bags on the counter she had turned to the sink so she

could wash her hoofs since she was going to be making dinner soon.

after rarity was finished washing her hoofs she heard popping coming from

the counter, she turned around revealing eggs jumping out of the shells

and cooking on he counter. rarity then heard a strange noise coming from the

fridge she opened it up revealing what looked like a red background

with a sort of Myan temple looking thing. the door in

the middle opened up revealing a bright light and a huge disfigured

dog thing. the dog then jumped up and yelled. "MUUUUUUULLLLLLLLEEEEEEEE!"

rarity then screamed and slammed the door running out of the apartment.

at the Ghostbusters headquarters dash was looking at the 2 pegasi putting up a

large white banner on the building saying GHOSTBUSTERS. dash then looked

picky. "you don't think it looks to scuttle right? I mean I don't

want ponies come down and not see the sign." a large buggy then drove

up the the building sirens going off at the same time. dash seeing the buggy

jokingly walked up to the buggy and tried to pull a smart ass move.

"hey! you can't park that here!" twilight then stepped out of the buggy

relieved about the vehicle. "everypony can relax I found the buggy. it's

going to need some tuning up though. I needs some shocks, brake pads, lining box,

rear end.." dash then cut her off. "how much?" twilight then mentioned the price.

"well..about 4200 bits." dash then felt shocked about the price.

in the building fluttershy was setting up the new typewriters and computer

for there secretary applejack. "thanks FS! I'm glad your here to keep things in

working condition. "oh..no problem..no problem at all." fluttershy then walked off

to her office to set up her computer. rainbow dash then walked in from her

early run to the store. "so AJ any calls?" "nope." "any visitors?" "nope"

"anything?" AJ then looked up at dash with a sort of bored look. "no professor dash."

dash then looked at AJ. "good job. am i right?" AJ then gave Dash a faint smile.

"Okay come on type something were paying for this stuff. and don't stare at me

you got a sort of creepy smile." AJ then continued reading until dash called

again. "AJ. sorry bout' the creepy smile thing I'll be in my office."

End of part 1