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The Scent: Lust of Mares

by Distorted Flare

Chapter 2: Recovering

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Author's Notes:

Well the original chapters are back in all their crappy glory. Jesus how did anyone like this crap?

Lachlan's POV

A weak moan escaped my lips as consciousness slowly returned. My sleep-encrusted eyes winced as strong rays of light coated my vision, causing me to groan in pain. I threw a hand to my head and hissed. I coughed harshly, as I had a dry and raspy throat. Sluggishly wiping the sleet from my eyes, I looked around to find myself in a hospital of some sort. Had it been a dream? Had that strange, purple thing been nothing more than a result of a concussion? I also saw that I was clad in a pair of pajamas bottoms and top, both a mint green with polka dots. Looking down, I nearly cried in relief when I realized that my legs were fine. They were working, but they ached, a feeling I was becoming familiar with. I shakily got to my legs and looked for a member of the Hospital staff.


A sharp gasp from behind me alerted me of someone’s presence. I spun round, my face contorted to horror, and then fear took hold of my body. There was a monster in the room, covering her mouth in shock.

"You're awake." The creature stated watching me with the slightest bit of hesitation as I sat frozen. "Please know that we are not going to hurt you. You have been in a coma for the last month." She continued slowly approaching me as I looked for an escape. "We are glad to say that your injuries have mostly healed but we would like to keep you here another few days. NO WAIT!" the mare lunged forward.

I throw myself out the bed. Unable to reach the door, I bolt towards the window. Without a second thought I frantically throw myself throw the thin layer of glass.

Shards of glass embedded themselves in my skin, as I landed heavily. Grunting I clambered to my feet, my body protesting. Dazed i looked around still half a sleep as i tried to figure out where I was. My head splitting as the glass dug into my skin painfully.

Stumbling every few steps I looked for a place I could hide.The fear of these creatures hurting me keeping my legs moving.

A voice cried out behind me, so I ran faster and faster. The sound of pursuing footsteps quickly became louder, and I soon realized they would easily catch me. I had to do something to change that, but, as I turned a corner, I found myself surrounded by the creatures.

While I halted my body, many of them were stunned by my sudden appearance. I slowly backed up and tried to think of another plan.

Before I could act, a pair of hands gently wrapped around me, pulling me off the ground. The figure held me tightly but, at the same time, very gently. Looking up, I saw that my captor’s pelt was pure white with some spiky blue hair, and a pair of purple shades covered her eyes. As she grinned at me, the cylindrical horn extruding from her head lit up.

“Woah there buddy! Where are you going in such a rush?” She boomed, holding me in place like a parent would a fussing toddler. I tried to get free, but my struggles proved to be useless.

“Hey now, squirt! No need to panic,” She chuckled.

“Please. don't hurt me." Barely a whisper, I lost the will to fight, going limp in her grip. I was too tired, I just wanted to go home.

"I... would never. I'm not going to hurt you." She spluttered. Pivoting my body around the equine crouched down so that she was level with me.

Slowly almost hesitantly the mare removed her glasses. Ruby eyes peering at me as I felt an unexplained calm wash over me. Despite the confusion, the fear I felt a calmness in her presence. Wetting my lips I asked her the one question that had been plaguing my mind.

"Where... where am I."


It had been a long day. Not just that but a stressful one to boot. The memories of my encounter with that monster still fresh and with naught but a nightgown. I was both self conscious and afraid. Luckily for me though, Vinyl Scratch had been more than happy to help. The mare had given me a quick run down of where I was and basic information like the different pony species. Another thing I had found interesting was the lack of males. Not wanting to bring it up in case it was a touchy subject I made a note to ask later when I was more acquainted with the customs and culture of this place.

The mare had forced me to return to the hospital.Though reluctant at first I had agreed to let Vinyl escort me there. We made small talk as we walked though the crowd the mare keeping me close as around us ponies stopped to stare. The height difference was unsettling as the mares towered above me making me fell like a child.

Nearing the hospital Vinyl had brought up a pony named Twilight Sparkle. She added that more than likely, Twilight want to speak with me once I was done with the hospital. She filled me in on the mare being the local know it all and also a personal protege to one of the rulers of this country. To my astonishment she was one of the ponies that had killed that bitch, Nightmare Moon. All ready the mare was in my good books. With her knowledge and connections. Getting home would surely be child's play to them.



Arriving at the hospital I was quickly taken into a room to be examined. The staff had not been amused with my stunt. Funnily enough they were more upset about the potential damage I could have caused to myself as appose to the window. Whilst they were courteous to me despite my fidgeting as they removed the glass and stitched up the deeper wounds. I could see the annoyance tucked away behind cheery smiles and polite questions.

The ponies thus far had been very polite and friendly. A strong contrast to my first encounter. They had given me a run down of what had happened to me. In a sense it was a miracle I had survived. Though what worried them the most was my psychological health. A pony called calming smiles had handed me a card with instructions to come back for therapy. The gesture made me smile but I doubted I would need it. Not like I would be staying long once I found this proclaimed genius and got her to zap my ass home.

Though the doctors had seemed determined to have me remain in the hospital for a few more days. Not happy about my state, they had in the end reluctantly agreed to let me leave. Not before they had taken blood samples as well as written down a few notes about me.


Though Ms Scratch was perfectly polite though like myself had a crude sense of humor. I felt uncomfortable around her. I was surprised actually more than anything. I had not curled up into a small ball and become a sobbing mess. And though I was cautions of these ponies. They were at least human enough in appearance that I did not feel as nervous.

One thing was for sure I had no intention of diving into that messy night. What happened, happened and truly I was just happy to be alive. Bury and suppress it would be the most healthy thing to do.

Vinyl scratch chattered away happily, working at a local nightclub as a DJ and plans to move in with her girlfriend a mare by the name of Octavia. It was Soothing, allowing me to just relax and listen and more importantly ignore the looks that were thrown in my direction by most of the town inhabitants.

I had thought the mare taking the piss when we reached the Library. Having thought she was joking when she said the mare lived in a library. And yet when we had entered, there the mare was. Darting about reorganizing shelf's and muttering furiously to herself. Her frizzled mane and untidy clothing gave her a crazed look. Though she wasn't half bad on the eyes.

The mare had been delighted to see me up and about and had wasted no time sitting me down and picking my brain. Finding out everything she could about my species. Vinyl had wisely left not wanting to be subjected to the mares endless questioning. The atmosphere had changed quickly when I had asked her the one question I had been desperate to ask.

"Can you get me home?"

Twilight had awkwardly coughed at that. Clenching her hands before finally plucking up the courage to answer me.

In short, no. I had sat numbly listening to her tell me the ins and outs of teleportation. Why it was still so dangerous. Even teleporting someone from one part of town to the other was risky. never mind from one world to another. And given the limitation in technology. The ponies did not even have access to the technology to properly map the stars. So for all I know they could be in the same solar system as Earth or the other side of the universe.

That revelation had been . Though Twilight had assured me that she would find me a way home. It did not though stop me from feeling drained. Offering me a room to stay in the mare had tried her best to accommodate me. But it did not stop me from breaking down once alone. I was stuck in a magical land of talking anthropomorphic horses. And as of right now had no way of getting back home.


It had been a month since I had taken up residence in Twilight's library. I had no idea what it was about these equines but something about their optimism and joy of life had immensely helped with my recovery. I still had small instances where I became uncomfortable. But they had thus far been very understanding.

Thus far Twilight had made little progress with finding me a way home. but I was choosing to stay optimistic.

I had become friends with Twilight and her friends, each one of them possessing a unique trait that made them fun to be around. Pinkie Pie, one of Twilight's friends, had insisted on throwing a welcoming party for me. Luckily however, Twilight had convinced her that we should just have a small slumber party at the library. Because apparently we were all 12 years old.

I had to admit though, I was touched that they had considered me a friend so quickly, I was even looking forward to that night. Sadly, the Princess had been delayed; problems with the Gryphon Kingdom had prevented her from seeing me this week. But she sent me her regards and said that her sister would be visiting in her place in three days’ time.

The days had quickly went by, Twilight, leaving briefly to get snacks and supplies, left me with Spike, her assistant, who was, shockingly, a baby dragon. We made small talk as we waited for Twilight to return, telling me that he was staying at a friend’s house for the night, someone named ‘Snails’ or something. I warmed up to Spike quickly, his laid-back attitude and surprising maturity made him interesting to talk to, and we had soon found ourselves in a captivating debate about zombies and the likelihood of an apocalypse.

Twilight had walked in on us debating the best way to get rid of a zombie. She rolled her eyes in exasperation as we ignored her laughing at us, as we tried to think of the most ridiculous way to kill a zombie.

Twilight disappeared into the kitchen dumping that night’s items on the table, as she got dinner started. Spike’s eyes widened when Twilight tried to start the cooker, comically waving his hands about, he threw a ridiculous pink apron over his head and dashed into the kitchen, which resulted in a disgruntled unicorn getting punted out. She sat next to me sighed.

“So are you looking forward to tonight.” she quizzically asked, her ears perking up as I turned to smile at her.

“Yeah, it will be great.” I grinned, looking forward to the party as we set everything up. Spike called us through a fancy spread on display as we wired in. There was of course one setback to living in Equestria, no meat. The fact that the ponies being strictly herbivores meant that they didn’t eat or sell meat products. I missing the taste of steak and dreaded the days ahead as I sullenly ate my dinner. Twilight chatted with me about her day as we finished, telling me about the adventures her and her friends had among other things. I found myself fascinated by them, apparently these girls had only been friends for about a month and they had already accomplished so much.

Twilight told me about the running of the leaves, how a famous fashion designer named Hoity Toity had come to see Rarity’s dresses, and that Fluttershy had even started down a cockatrice a vicious monster with powers similar to a gorgon.

The day started to darken and soon the stars were visible, Twilight went to change, nearly causing a nosebleed when she came out in shorts and a tight t-shirt that showed an unusual amount of cleavage. I reddened, looking away as Twilight gently tilted her head to the side, oblivious as to why I was so flustered. The first people- ponies to arrive were Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash, the two greeted Twilight as they entered the library. Rainbow Dash’s attire was similar to Twilight’s; she was wearing a pair of spandex shorts and a shirt that exposed her stomach. Her body, unlike the other two’s, was lean and seemed to possess almost no traces of fat, her wings fidgeted slightly as they moved themselves into a more comfortable position, her eyes narrowed slightly as she made eye contact with me.

From day one Rainbow Dash had made her dislike for my apparent. I didn't know what I had done, but whenever we were around each other, she would send me glares and would even shove or trip me. Whenever she tried to intimidate me, her size and strength would make the task easy. I usually ignored her or hung out with Fluttershy who, unlike her brash friend, was very kind and gentle. Fluttershy unlike Rainbow Dash, was slightly more developed, her curves sticking out more as well as her bust being almost unnaturally large. She had more than once nearly smothered me when she went to hug me, my face being perfectly levelled with her breasts. Unlike most ponies, she was far more relaxed around me, probably because of my size and not me being a different species. Fluttershy was incredibly friendly and we had become friends quickly.

After the greetings were out the way with, Fluttershy went to change whilst Twilight and Rainbow Dash idly chatted. Fluttershy soon returned, her pajamas obviously a size too small for her as the clothing made certain parts of her body bulge out as the clothing itself clung to her well-endowed frame.

Soon after, the others started to show up, Applejack and Pinkie Pie arrived next, and each had their arms full of various snacks and even booze. Pinkie Pie vanished only to materialize behind me, her arms wrapped around me as she rested her chin on my head, her breast squeezed against me as she giggled.

“Hey Lachlan, how are you? Are you looking forward to tonight? Because I know I am, well obviously a slumber party is a party after all and I love parties, well obviously I do, I am the party pony and mhmp-” Pinkies incisive rambling was cut off when Applejack showed clemency and covered her mouth. She gave me a wink and dragged Pinkie Pie over to the snack table to drop their items off. Pinkie’s ability to pop out of nowhere had more than once resulted in a near heart attack. Pinkie Pie, in the moments I had looked away, had somehow managed to change and was now seated next to me, her childish choice of nightwear brought a smile to my lips as she laughed and joked with cyan Pegasus.

Rarity to my horror, was not wearing normal nightwear or shorts when she arrived, instead she wore something that you would see in an adult shop. The small red nightie low cut nearly exposed her nipples and the end only just covered up her rear. I found myself aroused and was forced to discreetly hide my discomfort, as the hospital clothing offered little subtlety. We spent the first hour simply talking, sharing jokes and talking about our days. I mostly kept quiet, I preferred to observe rather than run my mouth, because Pinkie was more than capable of doing by herself.

Soon after that, the games started, while pretty juvenile by my standards, they did provide great deal of entertainment. Games like pin the tail on the donkey and twister, which sadly, had me, more than once, in erotic positions with one or more of the mares. In one particular instance, I found myself sandwiched between Applejack and Fluttershy, my head trapped between their busts, as their bodies rubbed against my skin sending tingles through my body. Pinkie Pie, forever the party animal, wanted to take the game experience up one level by playing a game I feared would come up, truth or dare.

“No.” I grimaced as the girls pleaded; their faces were pouting as I tried to resist their diabolical scheme. They tried everything from bribes to some minor threats, most of which from Rainbow Dash, Pinkie even went as far as to whimper, her eyes watered as my fate was sealed.

I had reluctantly given in, sat myself down beside Fluttershy and Rarity as Twilight fetched a bottle. I huffed indignantly when Fluttershy ran her hand across my skin, a habit she had picked up after she had noted how smooth and alien it felt.


“Okay girls we all know the rules. There are no rules; anything goes no backing out, deal?” Rainbow dash shouted, she was met by a chorus of ‘deal’s as I prepared myself for the game. Twilight gave the bottle a hard spin, the bottle’s shape distorted as it became a circular blur, its target unknown. We waited with bated breath. The bottle quickly slowed, its head pointed towards the target, we laughed.

The bottle had landed on Rarity and she looked less than pleased.

“Okay Rarity, truth or dare?” Twilight questioned, her ears flicked up in anticipation.

“Hmmm truth.” she answered as she rubbed her neck nervously.

“What is your most embarrassing nickname?” Twilight watched as Rarity’s face seemed to pale, an impressive accomplishment considering that her fur was white.

She squeaked, barely audible, we asked her to repeat it. Bracing herself, Rarity closed her eyes

“Princess Pumpkin Cheeks.” she hid her face in shame as Applejack and Rainbow Dash lost the plot.

“BWAHAHAHA OH DEAR CELESTIA! PRINCESS PUMPKIN CHEEKS!!!” Rainbow dash howled with laughter, tears streamed down her face as she held her side in an attempt to control her laughter. Applejack was faring no better, her laughs resounding around the room as her hat fell off her head.

The rest of the group giggled and snorted as Rarity glared at us, her face was red as a tomato. The game only got more interesting as the dares and truths got cheekier. Rarity then dared Rainbow Dash put on makeup, which looked good despite her cries of bloody murder. I had a heavy heart when I saw the bottle landed on me, a look of malicious crossed Rainbow Dash’s face. She looked from me to Fluttershy, who had resumed her stroking of my head, as I tried to look meek.

“I dare Lachlan to stay in Twilight’s closet for twenty minutes.” I sighed in relief at the relatively harmless dare, but sadly she wasn't finished.

“With Fluttershy!” this caused an uproar as several protested, Pinkie Pie laughed agreeing with Rainbow Dash as she tried to egg us on. Fluttershy hid behind her hair, trying to hide her embarrassment as we waited for the judges to make their decision.

“Sadly rules are rules. Fluttershy, I hope you don’t mind and Lachlan, sorry about her.” Twilight said, her ears dropped as Fluttershy nodded, her kind smile never left her face as Dash led us to the assigned cupboard. Luckily we had all had a good couple drinks in us so it wasn't as awkward as it could have been. Fluttershy after a few drinks was far more talkative and far less shy. I was similar to Fluttershy, as in I was far more confident but when I had a few drinks I became more… rowdy.

I had soon found myself stuck in a cramped space, Fluttershy had to bend so she could fit, which resulted in her rear being rubbed up against me as I realized the seriousness of the situation.

‘Fuck’ I mentally cursed; her constant shifting and fidgeting was having an effect on my body. With a bit of hassle Fluttershy turned so her body was facing me, her legs on either side of me. I desperately tried to stop myself from thinking about the mare in here with me.

“It is very cramped in here.” she said, her legs were shaking slightly; the bending had started to hurt her legs. Enough light was filtered into the cupboard so we could see each other. The girls had gone back downstairs continuing the game whilst they waited for the twenty minutes to be up.

Fluttershy’s legs suddenly buckled, this caused her to grind against me, hard, as her breasts engulfed my head. Out of instinct my arms had flailed out and landed on the worst locations. I heard her gasp as I tried to figure out where my hands were. To my horror, one had landed on her flank whilst the other hand was clasped on her left breast. Fluttershy moaned as I gently removed my hands, I pushed my head back to free myself of my fleshy prison.

“Ahm-Lachlan uhh-ahh,” She went silent instead and pointed down, my eyes followed her indication.

‘Ah fuck’ I mentally winced as I realized what she was talking about. My member rubbed against her crotch as we both tried to avoid eye contact, humiliation welling up inside me. My mouth went dry as she turned to face me; her face was no longer red. Instead she wore a strange look as I averted my gaze.

I nearly jumped out of my skin when her hand gently grabbed my chin and turned me towards her as she leaned forward, her mouth-watering slightly as her lips brushed against mine. I shivered as cold darting up my back as her lips gently suckled at mine.

Unlike Nightmare Moon, her kiss was gentle and inviting, her lips gently prodded as she requested, rather than demanded, admission. Hesitantly, I allowed her access; a moan escaped my mouth as her tongue entered, she played with my tongue while gently grinding against me.

Slowly I felt myself get into the kiss I even attempted to wrestle Fluttershy’s tongue for dominance, quickly resulting in my defeat. My hands darted under her small t-shirt to cradle her soft breasts. I squeezed and fondled gaining small squeals of joy from her as I teased e her sensitive nipples. At first awkward, the kiss had quickly relaxed as we grew more confident with our hands, we explored and straddled each other as we tried to please the other.

We had eventually pulled apart, panting. I slowly lowered my body so that I was sitting on the ground; her large frame quickly straddled me as we took it a step farther. My hand snaked down her waist disappearing as it was covered by her pajama bottoms.

Fluttershy whined in pleasure as my hand slowly rubbed her marehood, my fingers partially entering her. She undid the buttons on her shirt revealing her bountiful breasts to me. I gently latched onto one of her nipples, surprise ran through me when I felt liquid splash into my mouth. My taste buds were assaulted by the evident taste of milk, she was lactating.

"Oh Celestia yes! Please go faster." she pleaded. Her moans only spurring me on as she started to undo my belt. Her hand had a firm grip on my member.

“Oh God.” I gasped when she started to slowly pump her hand. Sadly, our intimate moment was disturbed by the sound of voices.

“It’s been twenty minutes now, Dash. we have to let them out,” A muffled voice stated from down stairs causing our eyes to widen in horror.

“Yeah, but come on, it's funny, and imagine how freaked out they’ll be.” Rainbow Dash said. Her laughter got louder as she climbed the stairs. I quickly pulled my fingers out, shifting my position as Fluttershy started redoing the buttons on her shirt, in a clear panic. We barely made ourselves presentable before the door was flung open, causing us to cover our eyes as the light blinds us.

"Come on you two time’s up," Rainbow Dash shouted. Her obnoxious voice causing me slight irritation as Fluttershy blushed heavily, avoiding all eye contact as we descended the stairs. From there the games continued, Fluttershy and I were playing our own little game, secretly rubbing against one another when the others were distracted. This little game continued between us, we both became bolder as we consumed more alcohol. Truth and dare continued on, all of us enjoying ourselves, the bottle landed on me.

"Truth or dare?" Pinkie Pie cooed. Her eyes filled with mirth as she snickered.

"Dare!" I said, my eyes dilating as she smirked.

"I dare you to make out with Fluttershy in front of us, for fifteen seconds." She said, causing gasps and cries of protest as everyone’s expressions changed to horror.

"I accept!" I leaned forward and aggressively slammed my lips against Fluttershy’s, gaining gasps of shock from the rest. An eerie silence filled the large room, as the sound of our tongues fighting was all that could be heard. I focused solely on the mare in front of me.

"WOO!! ON YOU GO LACHLAN!!" Pinkie shouted. Hiccupping drunkenly as she made kissing noises.

My hands, once again found themselves travelling across her body as we forgot about the other inhabitants. The moment seemed to last an eternity before we slowly we allowed our lips to part, a small string of saliva, attached to our lower lips as we separated, suspended momentarily before dripping onto our chins. Fluttershy smiled as she sat back, wiping her mouth as she removed all evidence of the kiss, ignoring the stunned stares of the mares in the room.

"Whut in tarnation was all that about?" Apple Jack snapped. Her eyes wide as she looked back between us; we blushed, laughing at their incredulous looks.

"Come on it was just a little kiss, nothing more than a silly dare." I laughed as their eyebrows simultaneously rose in disbelief.

"Not to contradict you, but that looked a little too passionate to be just a kiss." Twilight said. Her eyes narrowed slightly in suspicion.

“Come on Twilight, it was just for show, and to see Pinkie's reaction.” I said. Laughing as Twilight nodded her head, she soon began laughing again as we resumed the game. For some reason, every time I went for a drink Twilight would tut or shake her head. I ignored her knowing that she still viewed me as vulnerable given my smaller size and strength.

Soon, we started to turn in, Rarity and Pinkie Pie claimed the second bedroom as Dash and Apple Jack fought over Twilights couch, which was located in living room. This left me and Fluttershy the basement, which luckily, had two slightly corroded mattresses as we settled down.

I quickly found that one of the mattresses was royally shagged, springs extruding from all sides as I grimaced at the sorry sight. Being courteous, I inevitably offered the comfy mattress to Fluttershy, still feeling slightly awkward about the cupboard incident.

I sighed as I tried to get into a comfy position, my back killing me as the springs stabbed at me mercilessly. Growling, I rolled over in annoyance my eyes meeting the cold grey wall as I tried to take my mind off the bed. My thoughts kept skimming back to the closet, the kiss that Fluttershy and I had shared and what had brought it on. It would be a lie if I said that I didn't enjoy it, in fact, I had wanted it to go further. Something about her attracted me; all the girls had qualities about them that I found lovable. My musing was cut off as I felt someone pick me up, my limbs dangled helplessly as I squirmed.

Turning in shock I noticed that it was Fluttershy, eyeing me as she affectionately held me in her arms returning to her bed, she placed me down next to her. Fluttershy’s angelic smile accompanied her stunning eyes as she brought me close, her hands manipulating the muscles in my back, soothing them as I gently stroked her gorgeous wings.

Fluttershy made the first move, she nervously positioning herself so that she was over my member, her eyes locked with mine as she precariously lowered herself, whimpering gently as I penetrated. Her walls tightened, making Nightmare Moon feel loose in comparison.

My face took on an unhealthy red hue as a guttural groan escaped my lips. I tried to calm her in the hopes that she would loosen her death grip on me as I caressed her grandiose wings. I felt my body freeze as she sat atop me, fully hilted as she quivered, something running down my leg, I stopped in confusion.

Looking down, I gasped as blood slowly trickled from Fluttershy, her eyes tearing up as I instinctively held her close, my hands stroking her hair as I gave her time to adjust. I waited for her to get used to the feeling and go at her pace, her pleasure taking priority over mine.

I was shocked that she was a virgin and that she allowed me to take it. I felt like it was kind of rushed, considering that we had only been friends for about a week but I pushed this away, too late to do anything now.

“Ah, please be gentle.” She whispered, her face flushed as her walls slowly loosened, I started to lightly thrust, rubbing her breasts gently as she started to move in rhythm with me. We tried to keep our noise to a minimum considering that there were two ponies right above us. Sadly, this notion was soon forgotten as lust and pleasure overpowered reasoning.

Soon Fluttershy was slamming down onto me as I grunted, I hoped that she wouldn't get too aggressive.

Deciding to take charge, I lifted her left leg over my head causing her to collapse on her side. I pounded into her as she submitted nuzzling me as our lips meet in rapid succession becoming increasingly more passionate with each meeting. Her leg was surprisingly heavy causing me to slightly strain as I tried to keep it in the air using it as a support, my hands gripping fistfuls of her pelt as the padded fur kept my unshielded body warm from the cold of night.

“Ah harder, please harder I’m so close.” She whined, grabbing the back of my head as she forced me to go faster, her eyes half closed as her tongue lolled to one side in

Pressure started to build up as my thrusts strengthened, Fluttershy clenched tightly as she finally hit her peak, her body tensing slightly before going limp, her gasps filling the small room as I swiftly followed suit. Releasing my load inside of her, I collapsed inelegantly into her warm embrace. Smiling awkwardly at each other, sweat running down my body as she tenderly nuzzled me; her fur was damp as her wings tenderly wrapped around me.

“Fluttershy, I'm sorry. You should have lost your virginity to someone special, not to someone like me. Especially not someone like me, please forgive me.” I said, guilt gripping at my conscious as I turned my head away in shame. I winced as her hand grabbed my head forcing me to look into her eyes

“Now you listen here mister, I willingly had sex with you. Do you regret sleeping with me? Don’t you find me attractive?” She asked whimpering as my eyes widened in horror.

“Flutters, you are beautiful, I want to know what you could possibly see in me.” I stated honestly, looking into her stunning eyes as her arm snaked around my waist bringing me closer to her as she giggled at her new pet name.

“Lachlan, you are without a doubt one of the kindest ponies I have ever met and your scent drives me crazy,” she said causing me to pause as I remembered Nightmare Moon saying something similar.

“Your scent, it reminded me off the cookies my mother use to make when I was a filly, but also had a hint of roses. It’s enticing and made me crazy whenever I was around you.” She said. Leaving me to my thoughts as she settled down, her eyes closing as her breathing softened. Soon her gentle snoring was all that filled the room as I reflected on her words.

“My scent, Nightmare Moon said something similar, what can that mean?” I pondered, my eyes starting to strain as Fluttershy’s fur acting as an effective makeshift blanket. I sighed as the rising and falling off her chest slowly rocked me of too sleep.

Next morning

“Fluttershy, Lachlan time for breakfa-AAHHHHHHH!!!” The piercing shriek of Twilight was by far least pleasant way to wake up; we exploded out of bed landing in a heap as we looked at Twilight who face was green with revulsion.

“WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR PRO-” my words died in my throat as I realized the state that Fluttershy and I were in, our bodies completely stark naked, our eyes shifted over to the bed where several moist stains could be seen on the mattress.

“Whut in tarnation is goin' on down ther- WHAT THE HAY!?” I winced as Applejack appeared, her face blanching at the sight of us, we nervously chuckled, looking at each other as the thundering off hoofs could be heard above.

Rarity, forever the drama queen, promptly fainted as we hastily tried to cover ourselves; Rainbow Dash barged in her eyes becoming pin pricks, she snorted in rage turning towards me as Fluttershy protectively stepped in the way.

“Fluttershy, what have you done?” Twilight demanded as Fluttershy winced at the harshness in her voice.

“Twilight, I um-can um-explain this.” she said meekly squeaking as Twilight growled at her.

“I can’t believe you would do this!” She hissed causing me to growl as I stepped forward, my look of rage caused Twilight to step back.

“How dare you?! How dare you try, and blame your friend! I'm equally guilty and singling her out is a complete betrayal of friendship!” I snarled. Venom dripping from my voice as Twilight mentally winced with each word.

“B-but you are only a colt.” she tried to defend.

“What the fuck are you talking about? I’m an adult?” I snapped, watching as her face change to one of confusion.

“What? But you’re only nineteen, the same age as the Sweetie Bell and Apple Bloom.” She responded, confusion on both ends.

“What?! Seriously this is what it’s about? You think she had sex with someone under age, in my world humans can legally have sex at sixteen.” I countered, leaving an awkward silence as we waited for someone to break the tension.

“HELLO SUBJECTS, THOU PRINCESS HAS ARRIVED TO SPEAK TO THE CREATURE!” A voice roared. Causing everyone in the room to jump as the noise nearly deafened us. I watched in dismay as a blue Alicorn appeared in the room, standing a head above everyone. Her color and mane were different but her facial features instantly recognizable as I quivered in fear

“Nightmare Moon…” I gasped.

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