Hey guys.

For all the people this pisses off, the addition to the story but making it an Authors Note, i do apologize.

But I was really hoping to get some character development feedback.

I've kinda been neglecting Big Mac as an individual by the whole attempted shipping with Twilight, and Applejack, Ace and Rainbow Dash have also been kinda bland. (Don't worry, Rainbow will get her time to shine in Unitas)

But aside from that, What do you think of the characters and their personalities? Well developed or lacking? Confusing? Does it hold up to "Earning Freedom". and so on.

Call this attention seeking if you will. But I'm rather interested to hear what everyone has to say.

Thank you all for reading.