Login
Just your average, garden-variety talking snake. In an apple tree. What could go wrong?
8 Dislikes, 2,335 Views

Applejack, while surveying the border between Sweet Apple Acres and the Everfree forest, stumbles across a perfectly ordinary, garden-variety talking snake. In an apple tree. The mane six, of course, decide to be neighborly.

What's the worst that could happen?

A story with religious themes, funny and thoughtful in equal turns, and without any super-depressing grim-dark or blatant preaching. It was conceived, written and edited in just three days, and won first place in the "Deal with the Devil" Writeoff competition. You can find the original (unedited) version, along with plenty of other great entries, right here. It's been awhile, but be sure to check them out if you haven't already!

Teen
Complete
Comedy
Slice of Life

18,225 words: Estimated 1 Hour, 13 Minutes to read: [Fimfiction.net] [Cache]

7 Chapters:

  1. Introduction: No time to be trespassin’ [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 1st, 2015
    1,007
  2. We’ll have to call in a professional [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 1st, 2015
    2,541
  3. Some serious intellectual discourse [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 1st, 2015
    3,667
  4. Oh don’t be so literal minded [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 1st, 2015
    2,714
  5. I’ve seen the world that’s waiting for you [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 1st, 2015
    2,660
  6. The wisest fool I’ve ever met [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 1st, 2015
    2,603
  7. The devil would lie [Fimfiction.net] [Cache] Jan 1st, 2015
    3,046
Published Mar 10th, 2013

Login

Facebook
Login with
Facebook:
FiMFetch