The Great Raceby rainbowdash_25
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The Great Race
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A: Andrew
D: Dakotah
RD: Rainbow Dash
SF: Spitfire
S: Soarin
TS: Twilight Sparkle
PP: Pinkie Pie
FS: Fluttershy
A: hey what’s up u guys
Spitfire: hey can’t wait to race u guys
Soarin: same here
Spitfire: hey well see u guys and your friend at the starting line were the opening act for this race.
*both of them fly up into the sky and join the rest of the wonderbolts and they put on a show for the crowd*
RD: oh my gosh I can’t believe there in the race too.
A: yep now where is Dakotah he’s supposed to be here my now
A: man that must be horrible
RD: yeah
PP: (speaking over the clouds) today there is going to be three races
A: three races I thought it was going to be just one
RD: yeah same here
PP: today our racers are Rainbow Dash.
A: go dash your up get out there.
RD: ok I’m going I’m going
*Dash flies out and the crowd roars with excitement*
PP: the second racer is Andrew.
*i dash out of the hall and flew into the sky as the crowd screams*
PP: our special guests spitfire and soarin.
*both spitfire and soarin flies from the group of wonderbolts and join me and Rainbow Dash*
PP: and last but not least Dakotah
D: Wait I didn’t hear my name *flies out there anyways*
PP; the first race is where each pony has to fly through each ring and make it back to the finish line:
(I'm going to skip the whole flying part and skip to who wins)
PP: ponies to the starting point
RD: I’m so going to win this one
A: u better try not to so a sonic rainboom here
RD: I’ll try not to but no promises;
PP: ready, set, go and their off
(Skipping now)
PP: their coming back and rainbow dash is in the lead no wait Dakotah no wait its Andrew wait and rainbow dash finished in first place followed by Dakotah and Andrew
A; all man
RD; I told u I will win
PP: well take a five min brake before the next race
D: Crap well ill beat u in the next oh by the way I saw the rainboom cone starting
Dash better not happen again lol
RD: I couldn’t help it
SF: I’m going to win this next one
A: yeah what ever
SR: we let u win that last one
RD: whatever I won fair and square
SF: (in a sexual voice) well see u at the next race rainbow dash
RD: (blushing) ok... Then
A: come on rainbow dash don’t let her get to u
PP: the next race is a tag team effort a race all the way to Canterlot castle
and back one person will race their and their partner race back
A: wait their only five of us
SF: yeah how are we going to have a tag team with only five ponies
RD: yeah we need one more pony
D: Guys u don’t understand while u 2 were training I was training Fluttershy
ALL: WHAT
RD: but Fluttershy, she’s she’s u know
A: yeah Fluttershy is afraid of flying up here
D: U wants to try me
FS: HEY THAT'S MEAN*says in a small voice* *takes off at a
abnormal speed for Fluttershy*
A: damn
RD: oh my gosh
PP: Get ready for the next race and pick ur partners
SF: well I got Soarin
SR: ill race back
SF: good with me
A: Dakotah who u going to pick
D: Well since I trained Fluttershy ill pick her if not I would’ve raced with u
Dash (so now u understand y I decided on this type of race)
A: well then I guess I have rainbow dash
RD: ill race back then
A: ok what r u doing Dakotah r u racing back
D: Most definitely ima beat her dis time
A: Okay then
PP: Ponies to your starting position
*Andrew, Fluttershy, and spitfire all line up while they wait for the others to get to their*
pp: ok it looks like everypony is ready on your mark get set go!
(SKIPPING A LITTLE)
PP: and Andrew is the first to make it to Dash followed by Fluttershy and spitfire:
(SKIPPING SOME MORE)
PP: and the winner is Dakotah followed by rainbow dash, and last Soarin
RD: gosh y me
D: Well Dash what to say what to say your more acrobatic for the rings I got more
str8t forward speed.
A: it wasn’t really a strait forward race we did had to go around in a huge circle
RD: I’ll get u next time
PP: the Next race is a drag race and all six ponies will compete in this race and the race will start soon
D: Wow I know drag racing in my world but how do we drag race while flying
A: oh I’ve been training for this one. It is a strait forward race, there is a road of clouds and u must stay on that road and basically who ever fastest wins
PP: the race starts at one end of Equestria and finish at the other end of Equestria, in history this is the longest race ever.
*all our jaws dropped*
A: man this is going to be wild
PP: remember you can’t go up or down you have to go straight no pushing so shoving ponies get to your starting position.
RD: come on u guys Twilight is going to transport us there now
A: wait how did she, oh wait I forgot she has the walk on clouds spell.
TS: are you guys ready:
ALL: yep
*transported to starting line*
D: Oh it is on I got the best endurance in the universe and best stamina. Oh
ha-ha dash I bet u can’t rainboom straight forward instead of down
RD: well see about that
PP: on your mark get set go!
*and their off with rainbow in the lead then Fluttershy takes over, then out of nowhere Andrew comes into the lead followed by Dakotah. About half way each one of the ponies are about to break the sound barrier like they were going into a sonic rainboom. And they did. Rainbow dash made a sonic rainboom, Andrew rainboom was with lightning, Fluttershy was just a stream of pink smoke, Soarins was a gray stream of smoke, Dakotah was a stream of blue smoke, and spitfires was like a sonic rainboom but instead of the colors of the rainbow it was fire. The crowd was shocked in silent. Then for some reason the stream of smoke and colors combine into one which created a supersonic rainboom that was vary smoke and colorful with lighting everywhere. it almost ripped a hole in Equestria.*
PP: oh my gosh and the winner is, I can’t tell wait it was a tie oh my gosh a six ways tie how did this happen;
* The crowd surrounded the six ponies that were passed out on a cloud of Cloudsdale. It took them 10 minutes before one of them woke up. the first one was Dakotah*
D: I woke up and looked around and said wo what a wicked race
~One week later Andrew is still past out with spitfire and all of us gather around me~
D: Guys we need to do something Twi can u do anything to help him
TS: (in a sad voice) no we just got to wait for them to wake up
*Dakotah gets so angry and takes off breaking the sound barrier again and went back
to Earth
*the sound of Dakotah leaving wakes up spitfire but still Andrew is asleep*
SF: What Happen?
They explain to spitfire about everything
SF: so I been out for a week now
*looks over at Andrew*
SF; what about Andrew
The truth and a mystery
~While spitfire is wondering what’s going on Rainbow Dash when after Dakotah~
*Dash caught up to me exactly when I went through the portal and she got caught
in the portal*
RD: Dakotah, wow, dude u got to come back now u need to be there to support your friend
Wow Dash your your human!!! And ya I know I need to be there I... I... just need some
time to think
RD: I know its wired but that’s not the point, what’s wrong what made u run like that.
*RD sits next to Dakotah and holds his hand*
RD: tell me what’s wrong
D: I just don’t want to lose my best friend.... :(
RD: don’t worry we are trying everything we can for him but we need to head back everypony is worrying about u.
D: Ok just let me get some sleep opening a portal twice in one day and breaking
the sound barrier twice gets to me. Um hey Dash I got something
to ask u
RD: yes what is it u can ask me anything
D: The main reason I left was because I couldn’t handle the thought of my friend
dying but the other is because I really like u and I couldn’t...
RD: U couldn’t what, tell me
D: I couldn’t handle tell her upfront how much I love u
*RD started to blush before she can say something*
RD: I have something to tell u too, I love u too, It just there wasn’t a time for me to tell u.
*after RD was finished they started to lean in into each other and before they knew it their lips touch and sparks where shared between them both*
D: Wow Dash *blushes* just saying that’s my first kiss ever. Well let’s get some sleep Dashie, u can sleep with me tonight.
RD: No one calls me Dashie but I’m fine with it coming from u.
*They go to the bedroom and turn out the lights*
RD: You know I felt something strange when I kissed u~
D: Ya me too
*Dash leans towards Dakotah and surprises him with a kiss*
D: What what are you doing Dash
RD: What can't a pony get a good night kiss
D: haha sure you can
*Dakotah leans in and gives Dash another kiss*
RD: Thanks now lets get to bed you got a busy day tomorrow.
~next morning~
D: Hey how did u sleep last night being in my world and not in Ponyville??? I
also got to let u know that when we get back that when we get back to Equestria that from the time we left it will be 3 months from that time when we return.
RD: what do u mean?
D: Well a day in your world is a year here and we’ve only been gone a few hours
so it’s been 3 months in Equestria.
RD: oh I see well then let’s get back, I just hope Andrew is okay by now.
D: me too, okay stand back.
*a portal opens right in front of them*
~After Dakotah and Dashie goes through the portal they notice they turned back into their pony forms~
RD: Oh ya I’m back. Hey Dakotah want to race me around Ponyville and try to find the others.
D: Is that a challenge I hear?
RD: Bring It
~As they race around Ponyville they notice Andrew in a field~
A: oof who the heck ran into me.
*gets up*
A: Ugh, Dakotah?
D: Wo man your alive
*Dash walks up behind me and andrew sees she’s closer to me than
usual*
A: yeah they let me out like two months ago; I just got to stay off the wings. I see you two did something.
D: what do you mean Andrew?
A: you know you and Rainbow, hint hint.
TS: yeah Rainbow did u two did something?
RD: what no we just talked.
D: ya that’s all
A: yeah whatever
*me and Twi looked at each other and laugh*
A: I’m just glad your back.
D: so ya we were only there for about 5 hours
A: cool hey me and Twi have something to tell u but only if u tell us what u and rainbow did.
TS: yeah what did u do?
RD: well when I finally realized that I was human which shocked me. I asked
what was wrong he said he was just scared of losing Andrew.
A: and anything else u want to tell us.
RD: we um me and Dakotah didn’t do anything we just confessed
that we both liked each other and then woke up ate and came back.
A: I thought so.
TS: hehe
A: well we need to tell u something.
TS: yes we do well tell him Andrew
A: well me and Twi, um well me and her are now going out.
D: we knew it that u 2 will get together.
RD: hehe
A: hey can I talk to u alone Dakotah let Dash and Twi talk
D: be right back Dashie ok *walks with u* what did u need.
RD: don’t be gone long Dakotah I still want some flight practice.
*walks for a min then I said something*
A: I need to tell you what happen at the end of the race.
D: What Happened?
A: well figure out the reason why I was stuck in the hospital and y I was kind of dying
D: I believe it was because u weren’t use to the atmosphere here in Equestria and
u was just exhausted
A: no that wasn’t it, you didn’t see it but I did.
D: What what did I not see
A: I don’t know, during that supersonic rainboom we all did something was coming straight for u,
I had no time to react, so I pushed u out of the way and I took most of the damage, spitfire was
There with me when it happen.
D: What would want me killed?? We shouldn’t tell the others and start investigating
A: I agree but while I was still healing I ask spitfire, she’s coming to see me in like two days, lets wait to see what she comes up with
D: Ok well until then let’s keep quiet on it and head back to our girls
A: hey want to go out u know with the girls sometime soon
D: sure ya let’s all go to Sugarcube corner
A: ok just try not to ask for cupcakes pinkie might challenge someone to a cupcake eating contest.
PP: did someone say a cupcake eating challenge
A: Celestia dam it where she came from, where you here the whole time Pinkie.
D: Haha pinkie don’t even start
PP: ok then maybe later
D: maybe right Andrew
A: yeah maybe
RD: hey what took you guys so long
A: oh hey rainbow dash
TS: yeah what took you so long, hey Pinkie?
PP: hi
A: um um Dakotah want to tell them what was taking so long *smiles at Dakotah*
D: U dirty little, Andrew!
A: what haha
D: haha so ya we just started talking about things back
on earth and then pinkie came and surprised us
*hits Andrew in the shoulder
A: ow gosh sorry, yeah we were just taking about what happen while he was gone.
D: So you guys want to go on a double date to Sugarcube corner??
TS: sure what time
A: I don’t know maybe tonight at 8, do u and rainbow have flight practice right now
RD: yeah we should go like now
TS: u should go with them Andrew u know because u haven’t seen Dakotah in a while besides I have some work I need to finish
A: thank u Twi I’ll pick you up at 8