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Immortal Coil

by The Grey Legionnaire
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The magics of the pony world are dying. First the Elements of Harmony began to decay, and now the Gate to the world of the dead lies closed. Twilight must leave her life behind to restore it, before the enemies of Canterlot can get there first...
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Twilight Sparkle's come a long way since Princess Celestia took her under her wing. But seven years after the return of Princess Luna, a research breakthrough turns into a nightmare as Twilight discovers that the world's core magics are breaking down - and foremost among them are the Elements of Harmony, Equestria's strongest line of defence against the universe's greater powers. And with Rainbow Dash and her pendant disappearing in a calamitous fire on a journey to discover the Elements' fate, the future looks bleaker than ever.

Three years later, however, the Princesses get word from Rainbow herself. She is alive. The Element of Loyalty is safe. But she's nowhere near her destination. She has discovered the Gate to the World of the Dead - and while it is closed, neither the living or those lost to them can rest easy, for the Gate holds unimaginable power, free for any to grasp.

So begins a desperate race against time. Twilight and her friends are chosen - willing or not - to travel across the Eastern Sea, to the continent of Celagia and its Great Forest beyond civilisation's edge. One of them must take hold of the Gate's incredible might before the enemies of Canterlot can - for if they do, they will surely wage war against the Princesses themselves. But power must come at a price - and the hardest thing for Twilight and her friends will not be the journey - but knowing that they cannot all come back.

This story was planned before season three. Any canon impacting on this story from season three or later is disregarded. I reserve the right to use themes from beyond season two, although will endeavour to justify these if I choose to do so.

Teen
Incomplete
Adventure
Gore

123,044 words: Estimated 8 Hours, 13 Minutes to read: [Cache]

15 Chapters:

  1. Prologue: Old Pitsburgh [Cache] Nov 1st, 2012
    4,470
  2. By the Light of the Moon [Cache] Jan 9th, 2013
    5,396
  3. The Regrettable Request [Cache] Nov 2nd, 2012
    6,867
  4. Keep the Customer Satisfied [Cache] Nov 2nd, 2012
    4,366
  5. The Gazelle and the Pinkie and Me [Cache] Nov 12th, 2012
    7,972
  6. Gifts [Cache] Dec 15th, 2012
    19,671
  7. Know Your Enemy [Cache] Jan 5th, 2013
    8,375
  8. Hockfall [Cache] Feb 19th, 2013
    11,282
  9. The Troubled Mind of Governor Pool [Cache] Mar 22nd, 2013
    5,026
  10. The Traitor's Way [Cache] Jun 17th, 2013
    9,597
  11. Under An Indifferent Sky [Cache] Jul 24th, 2013
    7,558
  12. To the Manor Borne [Cache] Sep 7th, 2013
    10,822
  13. The Shadow Game [Cache] Oct 1st, 2013
    8,689
  14. Pieces on the Board [Cache] Oct 26th, 2013
    4,921
  15. Blood and Ichor [Cache] Nov 8th, 2013
    8,032
Published Nov 2nd, 2012
Last Update Nov 8th, 2013

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