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by redkeoredkira

Chapter 1


Chapter 1

STORY


Board, sitting on a wooden fold out chair, in an cluttered room starring at a computer screen, on the screen is a bright blank white canvas with the word ‘story’ at the top of it at the bottom, the letter ‘h’ is being repeatedly entered , lying on the keyboard of the computer a sleeping half awake stallion, “nothing to do, nothing to be” he wollod in the darkness of his room with the only light from the computer, “why should I be the only one” he questiod him self as he turns his head over to look outside to a cold empty street nothing was there, his eyes were hopeful for somepony to come up and knock on the window, but it didn’t seem so, after a long painful sigh, he lifted his head, got out his chair and looked around his room.

???’s room*

he looked to one side and stared down at all the warhammer 50k statues he had been painting, looking to his right he could see out the window, but his eyes focused on his hidden leaf head band on the window seal, he trotted over picked it up and put it on, “might as well, its not like anypony is going to see me” he said looking over to the left of the window, on the floor next to an empty book shelf was a bag, he picked it up and put it on, he took one last glance around the room to look for anything, after deciding there was only one more thing he needed he left with it, a stick with a bit of lather on the bottom on it marking were it is to be held, on the part just above it were the words ‘ dragon katana’ in Japanese a little above from that was ‘wind leaf flow’ also in Japanese and farther up nearing the top of the stick was ‘sharp cut death’ again, in Japanese.

Leaving the room he enterd a hall way, he looked down the way he needed to go to leave, along the wall was three paintings, all of which didn’t make much sense they once had other ponys in them but now there was nothing but a blank lonely looking landscape of rocks and tree’s.

After leaving the house he went down the left side of the street, it was empty, the only things that were left were dropped bags of shopping from ponys that had went to the shop, he stopped and looked at a window to see his reflection, brown fur and an auburn mane, he looked at his head, on his head poking thro his mane just slightly was a broken horn, he turned slightly to look at his body, a nice fine looking pair of wings, he fluttered them to flex and get the feeling back, a sharp pain filled his left wing, “oh yeah, broken” he mutterd, he continued to trot down the empty street, the loneliness reminded of a game he would play, he was hoping that it was just going to stay a game and not become his realtiy, although he would never kill himself, he would proberly start thinking of ways to do so, he stopped as his hoof stepped on a poster, he looked down at it, on the poster was a picture of a light blue unicorn with a silver mane, written to the mare’s left were the words ‘come one come all and see the great and powerful trixie perform her great magic that is only able to be done by her’ a tear dripped down his face and onto the poster, he lent down rolled it up and put it in his bag.

“I hope you didn’t leave me” he talks to himself in sorrow crying ever so lightly

chapter one, the sinking feeling

streets*

trotting down an empty road street filled with shops and stores he was thinking to himself’ if she is gone, I’m..i’m..’ he shook his head and trotted into a shop that said ‘white smith’ on the top of it, he looked around what could only be describe has a black smith, the place he once worked, he went into a door and over to a cupboard in and empty room, opening it he found a rack of three swords, all of which were different types, a katana, a double sided and a great sword, he took the katana and double sided and attached them to himself on ether side, he left the great sword.

He continued down the road heading to were the great and powerful trixie’s show was ment to be, maybe he could find her trailer.

Grass park*

As he entered the park he saw the band stand and next to it was a wooden trailer big another to be used as a mobile house, “that must be it” he said to him self with some confidence as he started jogging to the trailer, reaching the trailer he stopped out side and took a few breaths before trying the door, it opened, he looked inside as he was going in, the room was to dark to see if there was anypony in, he looked around in the darkness, he could faintly see a candle, he troted over to it and used what magic his horn could muster to make a spark and light it, after a few attempts he did it, the room was soon lit up, around the door was pictures of trixie with her hoof around an invisible pony, like somepony was there but isn’t now, and also drawings made for her by little fillys and colts, they were cute, he turned to look to his left to see a bed, sadly it was an empty bed he pushed the door closed as he went over to look at it, the bed sheets were light blue and had a pattern on them, the patter was a star wand waveing up making a moon with stars in it, a creaking came from behind then a gasp then a pang sound, the back of his head started to hurt as he fell to the side knocked out.

Chapter two, hope at last

His eyes fluttered open, the bag and swords had been removed from him, he could feel there weight was no longer on him, he sat up, a blurry image was in front of him, he rubbed his eyes and the blurry image turned into a light blue unicorn with a silver mane, “are you okay?” a nice soft voice from the mare asked him, “yeah I’m” he stopped as soon as he got a look at the mare in front of him, it was trixie, a smile filled his face as he hugged her, “I’m not alone!” he craired out hugging her crying tears of joy, trixie rapped her hoofs around him, “such a poor stallion, it must have come to a shock to know find out that every pony had vanished, but theres no need to worry now, trixie’s here for you” she said patting his back softly, after a few minutes of hugging he let go of her and sat back down, “I remember you now” she said looking him over, “your that stallion who bought all those tickets to my show, the whole left bottom row, just to watch trixie perform” she said blushing a little, he nodded, “well, I did want to watch the great and powerful trixie perform with out some pony next to me talking on his phone or something, I would have bought out all the seats if I had the bits” he said to her smiling, she lent in and kissed him on the cheek, “you’re a very cute stallion, em…I don’t think you told me your name” she move closer to him, “I’m keo” he said blushing from the kiss she gave him, “well keo” she got closer and put her head on his shoulder, “are you seeing anypony” she said, his blush went from red to black, ”n..no, I’m not, I’ve never been lucky anothe to find anypony” ,he said looking down, watching trixie’s hoof slowly go up his leg then stopping once it had reached near to his crouch, “well, I know that stallions have some” she paused to search for a word “needs, and I’m sure you know that mares, also, have those needs to” she started to kiss his neck, he would do something, but he was to overcome to move, “I hope you don’t mind trixie, but my needs are, shall we say, getting out of hoof, and I’m sure a big strough stallion like your self could help” her hoof started to unzip his trousers, “whats wrong, you havn’t said anything* she said looking up at him, he looked at her back blushing uncontrollably, “nothings wrong its just” he stopped when he felt trixie’s hoof on him, a smile lit up her face, “well, aren’t you the big boy” she said, blushing, “now, you just lie back and let trixie play with you, trixie will show you how good a real mare feels” she said after kissing him on the lips.

After about three hours both trixie and keo were lieing exusted on the bed, sweat dripping from there foreheads, trixie was lieing atop of keo, his wings spread, his left wing was hurting like mad, but he didn’t care, he just slepted with the mare of his dreams and now she was sleeping on top of hm, soon he also fell asleep.

After a few hours of sleeping keo awoke to find that trixie was gone, he shot up out the bed and looked around and saw trixie wasn’t there, he sighed and got out of the bed, “where did she go” he said scanning the room once more “HUZZAH!!!” said trixie falling from the roof and landing on him making a loud bang as he fell, “oh, there you are” he said with a pain shooting through his wing, she lay down on top of his back and put her head next to his “come on you big stallion you, we should go out and see if we can find some food, its not like you can eat trixie forever, if you know what trixies means” she said finishing with a giggle as she got off him, he got up and rubbed the back of his neck “okay then, although that might be a good alternative” he said smiling, trixie tapped the bottem of his chin softly, if you can find trixie some twinkies then you can bet you little plot that you’ll get more” she said blushing a little, keo saluted like a soldier “yes ma’am” he picked up one of the swords and attached it onto himself, along with the headband that was neatly folded next to it “I’ll be back before you know it, there’s a gun in my bag, its only a BB gun but it looks just like the real thing, you could use it to scare of anything that trys to get you, that’s if there is anything” he said with a sigh as he left the door waving good bye to trixie.

Super market*

Keo was running for his life, down one isle and then the next jumping carts and sliding under stacks of things that had been glued for effect, he jumped fell and grabbed a rat that had a twinkie, still in its rapper, in its mouth, he snatched it from the rat and luckily, it had only bitten the edge so the twinkie was intact, he let go of the rat and it ran away, he put the twinie in a small box so it woulded get crushed, he put it in a bag he had picked up, “damn it, I was atleast hoping for atleast another so I could eat one, no matter” he began to trot down the isle and looked around “I’ll just have to eat some chocolate” as he looked around he could see that the shelfs where packed with different sweets and other treats, his eye twitched when he noticed the boxes of twinkies, he had ran past the isle twice before getting the rat, angerly he picked up to boxes and put them into the bag, after leaveing the shop with some milk and juice and of course, the twinkies, he went back to trixies trailor.

Trixie was out side putting her washed sheets on a cloths line, along with other clothes she had dressed in when they…played, keo gave a shout and waved, her head turned and she waved back.

As keo arrived they went inside, keo sat the bag down, and sat another bag down that he had used to carrie the things that would have crushed the twinkies, keo petted one of the bags, “you’ll be happy to know, I found a lot of twinkies, luckyaly they had a fresh stoke, these things have got like ten years one they’re clock” he said smiling at trixie, she jumped at him and give him a big kiss then sat back down, “oohhh, thank you for finding them, how many did you get?” she asked him, “keo pushed the bag over and opened it, the bag was stuffed with boxes of twinkies, “anothe I think, or atleast anothe to make you happy” he said, still smiling at her, her cheecks went red, “and they are all for you trixie, you sexy thing you” her cheecks went redder as he said that, “do” she looked at him “do you love tri…love me?” she said blushing, he smiled “I guess you could say I do” he smile, a little worried, trixie sat next to him and put her head on his shoulder, “well I have to tell you something” she said not looking at him, “whats that” keo said sounding worried, “I love you back” she looked up at him nudging his nuzzle with her own, keo kissed her, she held onto his head as he slipped his tongue in and started to play with hers, trixie fell back on the floor while they were still kissing practically eating each others mouths, saliva running down from they’re mouths, keo slowly broke the kiss bringing his tongue along her lip has he did so and then looked into her eyes, “did I ever tell you, you look better close up” he snuggled into her kissing her neck they then, fell asleep again.

???*

alone, alone in a world made of sand as far as the eye can see, “beautiful ain’t it” a voice that seemed to come from every direction called out at keo, “of course it is beautiful, its your own persinol world, where all your interesting things happen” as the voice said interesting a small gust of wind blow past keo, filling him with emptiness reminding him that this world is ment to be gone, it was what he’d hope to gain and lose to keep both of them separate yet together with anything he wanted, he didn’t really like sand, that is why it was never sand, but ash, one, giant ever still, land of ashes, nothing but ash and for some reason when he first came here, there was a mountain, but it seemed to disappeared when the voice in the back of his head came into life, “well its about time you woke up anyway” the voice said sounding like it was behind him, then a sharp slap in the back of the head, he shot up awake looking at a shocked trixie that was holding onto him for dear life.

“you okay” she asked as he rubbed the back of his head, “I swear something hit me” he replied

“then let me check, if something hit you then there must be a mark left” she said after letting go of him, he nodded and trixie went behind him and moved his mane up out of the way to see if there was anything, to her surprise there was something there, a small redish bump, it look as if something had hit him, yeah, a strait jab to the head, that’s exactly what it looked like, “oh there is something there” she looked at the floor, “but there isn’t anything to have cause it” maybe you” she paused, she was about to say that he might have did it him self, but he woke up holding her before rubbing the back of his head.

Keo shook his head “ah, it doesn’t matter anyway, it’s just a bump, I proberly hit it of the floor board if it was sticking up, can’t really see any other way to put it” he turned around to face her, the room had went dark he turned around, the other side had also went dark, something had taken him, it had taken him away from her, what ever this something was it was going to get a hoof up its arse, nothing will stop him from being with her.

He stood up and looked around in the darkness that was slowly starting to bring small figures into focus with the help of keo’s sharp eyes he had inherited from his grand father, soon he could see he was in the traler, trixie was also there with him, but it looked like she had been frozen in a black ice shard that had spiked up from the floor, a light came from the door way of the traler, a white earth pony was there, as soon as his eye’s locked on to this pony he or she dashed away leaving a small white line in the darkness, keo, filled with curiosity, followed after the pony into the darkened world, he didn’t pay attention to anything but the white pony.

After chasing the pony for some time there was a white flashed that faded into purple then the view of a brick wall came into view, keo turned around, what ever he was chasing was fake, he had been canceld out from the world and then was tricked into coming here, keo slammed his hoof down.

Chapter 3 – trap

Loud muffeld steps started coming from outside the prison keo was in, soon a large blue figure stood at the door of the prison cage, a diamond dog, of course, if all the pony’s disappeared then the diamond dogs would be left, it opened its mouth and began to speak with a snivelling crackled voice “well it seems you fell for the bait” he put his hands together and rubbed them menacingly “looks like we’ll be eating good to night, hehahehaheee” he walked away, keo was angry, but also worried, if he was here trixie was alone and he couldn’t stand the mare of his dreams being alone, he grunted and went to the far wall from the door of the prison cage, h gave another grunt and charged, he slammed into the cage door, a buzzing sound came from everywhere, keo’s vision started to fade as he fell back, something had shocked him, proberly a mage or the bars were enchanted, keo’s eyes soon closed and he was left unconscious on the floor.

He awoke, once again in the desert of ash, this time the pony that talked to him was in front of him standing on his hind legs with his back to him, he had a fine golden coat and sunny orange mane, he was wearing a red cape that was flowing to the right side, but there wasn’t any wind, “keo, that’s you name isn’t it?” said the red caped pony has he turned around, he was wearing black glasses the seemd to be on black fire flowing from the top.

“ you know what you need to do keo, why don’t you do it, if she’s the one you want prove to her that it is true, brake the cage, electricite is just something your mind has made up, punch the cage, bend the cage, destroy it, do something show her that you want and need her!” the golden pony gave a small grin while shouting this at him.

“think about it keo! If you don’t save her those basterds are going to kill her, that what they did to the others,DO SOMETHING BEFORE THEY KILL HER YOU STUPID IDIOT!!” the words echod in his head, keo woke up roaring at the top of his lungs and charged at the cage once more slamming into the cage he wasn’t shoked back like before, he didn’t notice or care, he burst thro the cage and was flung forword along with a few of the bars of the cage, he grabd one and stood on his hind legs and looked down one of the corridors and then bolted down it, he got into a charging position readt to slam into and brake the wall.

BAM, he slammed into the wall, brickes and stone flew as did he, right out of the wall of where ever he was and into the ground, slowly he came to while still in the air, he looked down, he had just broke out from a wall that was suspended in the air from a mountain, keo throw the cage bar at the ground like a spear and unbandged his wing, his wings the sprung out and he took flight and race across the town, he had a clear view, he could see trixie’s traler he flew the rest of the way, and landed next to it and ran in, his face went dark, the inside looked like a fight had taken place, claw marks were along the walls and small burnt marks were scatterd around also.

Keo stood there for an hour, they had taken her, he was to late, those damn dogs had stolen his one and only, he turned and looked out the door and exited, he had to find out where they had taken her and what they were going to do, he wonderd following nothing but his heart, this was it, the start of the search for his love, he could tell that it would be long and hard, he cryed a little but wiped away the tears, and looked forword down the street to the exit of the town…







“if love is something that I want, I’m going to have to look, fight and cry for it”
-keo kira




end~

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