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A Fateful Flurry

by FIygon
Story has been removed from Fimfiction.net
Flurry Heart wishes on a star, hoping for a twin sister to make her mother happy. Unfortunately, she messed up in a few ways, and now I'm here.
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10-10-2023: I can't believe I've gotten 1000 likes! It means so much, thank you to every reader, I'm in disbelief!

Have you ever just been having a regular day, then suddenly, BAM, you're dead? Well, no, of course you haven't. But what do you expect to happen after you die? If the answer was getting shoved into an overly pink copy of a pony princess, you'd be lying. Worse yet, she made me an alicorn just like her, which causes a whole new set of problems.

Unfortunately, she was adamant that I stay and become her twin sister. I ditched her immediately in my bumbling confusion and fear, and who could blame me? The last thing on my mind was being here! Ponies, princesses, and twin sisters? What kind of fantasy story was that? I was on the run, hiding from guard patrols, and fighting for my next meal. However, my own hubris caught up to me in the end, and her super powerful mother, Cadance, found me and made me see how stupid I was being. And Cadance, is an absolutely crazy powerful pony, with an even more powerful maternal instinct. So when it came down to her word against mine, she was really hard to convince, and she wasn't taking no for an answer.

(AKA, Super wholesome, fluffy, found family. And me having fun tugging on heartstrings.)
(Cover image by: me)

Everyone
Incomplete
Comedy
Slice of Life
Drama

67,312 words: Estimated 4 Hours, 30 Minutes to read: [Cache]

13 Chapters:

  1. Prologue [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    2,887
  2. 1 - Meant to Live [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    4,542
  3. 2 - Kings and Clones [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    4,280
  4. 3 - How It Feels to Be Lost [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    4,177
  5. 4 - I am alone, and they are everyone [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    4,526
  6. 5 - Portrait of a Blank Slate [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    6,461
  7. 6 - The Kids Aren't Alright [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    5,247
  8. 7 - love, death, distraction [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    6,358
  9. 8 - It's Golden Hour Somewhere [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    5,241
  10. 9 - Thaumaturgy [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    6,669
  11. 10 - Normal People Things [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    5,292
  12. 11 - Solecism [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    5,364
  13. 12 - Everything Goes On [Cache] Jun 2nd, 2023
    6,268
Published Jun 2nd, 2023
Last Update Nov 18th, 2023

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